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A city floating in the center of a lake, Ravok is a place of dark beauty, romance and culture. Behind it all though is the presence of Rhysol, God of Evil and Betrayal. The city is controlled by The Black Sun, a religious organization devoted to Rhysol. [Lore]

[The Pit] Bloodbath (Valerius)

Postby Anona on March 24th, 2014, 7:42 pm

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Bloodbath
10th of Spring, 514 AV
Afternoon, Just Before the Second Match of the Day



While being in public was always difficult for Anona, with panic waiting like some bird of prey to fall from its perch and pluck at his skin until his ribs and guts spilled like ribbons, the days that James took him to the Pit were infinitely worse, as well as infinitely better. It was cathartic to watch the bloodshed, and sometimes it allowed him to escape so much that he could forget the jeering spectators all around him, could sometimes even forget James's form pressed to his side possessively.

Today, the sky was clear. The day prior had brought along a cold uncharacteristic for Spring, even so early in the season, and Anona had fought as much as he could to wear his cloak, but James had insisted that he go without it.

"What's the point of having a beautiful girl on my arm if she covers everything up, Annie?"

Now, he was grateful for James's insistence; Ravok was once more the mild-weathered city that it usually was, but the heat of the men and women surrounding them made Anona's skin shine with a fine layer of sweat. He'd braided his hair when it became apparent that warmer weather was upon them all, but since then quite a few locks had pulled loose, clinging to his cheeks and his neck. When he shifted, he could feel his dress sticking to his back and his chest.

James turned to him, and Anona stopped fidgeting. James smiled, but it didn't quite reach his eyes. He placed his hand over Anona's where it rested on the bench between them, and leaned in until his breath, as warm as it was, tickled and cooled the heated skin on Anona's neck.

"Is everything alright, Annie?" He murmured. His hands tightened painfully on his wrist, and Anona had to stifle a shocked cry at the unexpected pain. After only a tick, he managed to muster up a smile for the other man.

"I'm feeling a bit warm, is all," he confessed. An angry shout burst from the spectator closest to him, and he jolted in his seat. He licked his lips and looked pleadingly at James, who now looked like cold fury personified. He needed to get a hold of himself. They'd been in public plenty of times before without Anona making such a scene, without so much as giving a disingenuous smile to any of James's acquaintances.

James studied him for a tick, and then something in his expression softened. He pulled out his coin purse and plucked a silver-rimmed miza from it. "Here," he said, pressing it into Anona's sweaty palm. "The ale isn't anything you couldn't find on the Docks," and this he said with distaste, as though even mentioning the outer ring of Ravok was beneath him, "but perhaps it will help to cool you down."

Anona took the offer quickly, excusing himself from the bleachers as quickly as he could carry himself. Once he was out of the throng of spectators, he immediately felt the relief of cooler air. He took a brief pause to unbraid and rebraid his hair, a difficult task without the aid of a mirror made even more difficult by the coin he still held in his hand. Still, he was practiced enough in keeping up his own appearance, and managed to do it to his satisfaction in hardly a chime.

Nestled snugly under the spectators' seating were rows upon rows of cages. The cages were kept relatively clean, partially due to the Pit's location in the Noble District, and in part, Anona speculated, because there was something riveting about watching a clean fighter devolve into the dirt-smeared, sliced up, bloody, howling slave that they were.

"Girlie," came from the cage, and Anona stiffened with disgust when he turned to face the speaker. The slave short and with shocking red hair made dull by dirt clinging to it, and smiling lewdly at him. His green eyes darted over Anona's body and he turned on his heel, moving away before the slave could say another word. The slave's harsh laughter followed him, and Anona couldn't help but feel equal parts relieved and disgusted when he distantly heard the slave accost someone else.

Filthy, disgusting things, he thought to himself. He didn't have anything against slaves in general-- he'd seen them all his life. He knew that, although they certainly weren't worth as much as any real person, that wasn't necessarily their fault. He'd never seen fit to judge them as some of the other Ravokians did (how even James did), but the slaves that spoke out, the ones that disobeyed their masters, who went so far as to assault Ravokians, they disgusted him.

Anona shook off his thoughts of the slave, remembering why he'd come down from the stands in the first place. It didn't take him long to find the stand selling concessions, and as the fight was less than half a bell from taking place, there were six or seven other Ravokians waiting for their turn. Anona stepped behind the last person in the line and waited, turning the silver miza over in his hand thoughtfully as he tried to occupy his mind with anything besides the red-haired slave.
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[The Pit] Bloodbath (Valerius)

Postby Valerius Nitrozian on March 27th, 2014, 7:00 pm

Valerius Nitrozian visited the Pit about three times per forthnight. He visited it to show them all that his family still mattered. No matter who owned the Pit now, his grandfather Sitanos Nitrozian was still one of the most powerful men in the city, and he would follow in his footsteps one day. He visited the Pit to see and be seen. He also visited because there was something about the fights that fascinated him. The fighters were often ugly and dirty – traits that he normally disliked – but there was something about all the violence that made his heart beat faster, something infectious about the excitement of his fellow spectators.

His slave Tuuli did not share his sentiments though. They had takern a family-owned ravosala to the park – walking was for commoners – and were just on their way to the pit in its center, when the young, dark skinned woman suddenly stopped. Valerius immediately turned around and narrowed his eyes. „I don’t want to go“, she whispered desperately. All the blood made her sick. She’d watched too many of her fellow slaves being whipped bloody to find the fights enjoyable.

Valerius was of half a mind to force her come with him. In his opinion her statement that she didn’t want to go was a sign of weakness, and weaknesses needed to be conquered, but then again her moping had the potential to ruin the day for him and distract him from his goals. Besides, he couldn’t expect one of his possessions to have the same strength of character as him.

„You may stay in the ravosala“, he told her. „But you will not leave it until I come back. If you are hungry or thirsty, you will have to wait until we get back to the Nitrozian Estate.“ The girl nodded. She’d rather spent a bell or two in a boat without food or drink, enduring the company of the ravosalaman who only spoke broken Common, than be forced to watch people that didn’t have a choice beat each other to a bloody pulp.

As soon as Tuuli walked back to the boat, Valerius turned around and made his way to the Pit. He didn’t look back at her once. It was a little warm for the season, but he didn’t take his jacket off. For Valerius nothing was more important than making the right impression. He always wore the most elegant clothes, expensive, but not over the top and still tasteful, his boats had been polished until they shone, and his hair was perfect. Walking around in just pants and a shirt, with his sleeves rolled up was not acceptable. He wanted to make a good impression, not be comfortable.

Since he had sent his slave away – a decision that he already regretted – he had to do the things that he usually used a slave for, such as buying a drink or making a bet by himself. He didn’t like waiting in line – as if he were just like everybody else – but there was little that could be done about it. Anything but waiting for his turn would be a sign of bad behaviour, and that was even less tolerable than wasting a few chimes. Of course he didn’t show his annoyance, but had a somewhat cool smile on his face as he stepped behind Anona and joined the line.

As he noticed how tall the young woman in front of him was – as tall as him or maybe even slightly taller – he arched an eyebrow. There was something about her pale hair and the way she held herself that reminded him of Melenna, the Konti, his favourite slave, one of the few he had shared his secrets with, Melenna who was long gone. „I didn’t expect to see somebody like you at the Pit“, he remarked softly as he waited for her to turn around, to see if she really was one of Melenna’s kin.
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[The Pit] Bloodbath (Valerius)

Postby Anona on March 28th, 2014, 3:09 am

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"I didn't expect to see somebody like you at the Pit."

It was said softly, quietly enough that Anona almost missed it in the buzz of chatter all around him, and besides that, he was certain that he'd never heard the voice before. Nonetheless, in that way that one could somehow determine when a distant shout was aimed at them, he felt that the speaker was addressing him.

It was one thing to pass as a woman in a busy street with his cloak wrapped around his chest, and another to shed his cloak and linger in the park for bells at a time and still pass, but it was another game entirely to speak to another Ravokian one-on-one when he had naught but his gown and his own acting to convincingly play the part, all while being acutely aware of James's immediate presence. He'd learned early on that the key to selling his femininity was to keep everything as natural as possible: keeping his voice a little softer and making sure that his waist was cinched to give the illusion of curves went much farther than an over-exaggerated stereotype. He tugged at the simple belt around his waist, ensuring that it was tied tightly before he turned to address the speaker.

When he turned on the spot and got a good look at them, he was relieved at his foresight in quickly checking his appearance in that way. The man was about as tall as Anona was himself, with sharp features and copper hair that shone in a way that suggested the utmost care was given to it. Even to Anona's untrained eye, it was obvious that his clothing was expensive and well-tailored.

Anona's heart pounded. There was no telling who this man was, or, more importantly, who his family was, but the potential damage if he was discovered now-- to James's reputation, to his own occupation, to his physical body-- scared him.

He smiled, and could only pray that it looked natural. If there was one thing he felt comfortable thinking of all wealthy Ravokians, it was that they were like the beasts below the fishermen liked to spin tales of: they could smell fear like blood in the water, and they exploited it.

"Somebody like me?" It was only after the words had left his mouth that he really processed the man's statement; could he tell? Had he taken one look at Anona and known what was hidden beneath his skirts-- or was he an acquaintance of James's, maybe, who was surprised to find him here because of his occupation? His smile wavered for a moment. It was too late to pitch his voice even higher without arousing suspicion. He made a conscious effort not to let it dip any lower than it already had when he spoke. "Somebody like... what?"
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[The Pit] Bloodbath (Valerius)

Postby Valerius Nitrozian on March 29th, 2014, 3:48 pm

As the woman turned around and he heard her confused question, a hint of disappointment was visible on his face. She was not a Konti. There were no scales anywhere on her body, nothing about her face that reminded him of his Melenna. At first he considered apologizing and looking away. That was what most people would do. That was the thing that he who would normally do. Despite being a member of Ravok’s elite, despite the fact that he wanted people to notice him, he didn’t enjoy social interaction itself particularly. But there was something about her, something he hadn’t seen in any other woman in a long time, something that attracted his attention.

He didn’t know what it was though, whether it was her voice that was slightly deep or the fact that she was so tall and nevertheless held herself straight. He certainly didn’t suspect her to be a man beneath those skirts, at least he was not conciously aware of it. He chose his words with care as he didn’t want to offend her. He decided not to tell her that he thought she had looked like a Konti from behind – without a doubt she would find it silly - but spoke instead, „Somebody as beautiful and graceful as you. Take a look around …“

He gestured towards the spectators that were impatiently waiting for the first fight to begin. While there were a few lone women in the crowd, most of them were in the company of men. Most of them looked average. They didn’t have her height, her features, her unusual pale hair. „They are nothing like you. They are interchangeable.“

He considered asking her if she was at the Pit alone, but decided not to. This place was not entirely safe for somebody like her – there was something about the violence that awoke something in the spectators – but he doubted that she would appreciated the warning. It was the kind of question a man who found himself interested in a woman would ask, an uncreative pick up line, and he had no interested in that, in appearing uncreative, at least not normally. He was nothing like that.

„I hope you simply take my words for what they are – an observation and a compliment“, he added after a short pause.
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[The Pit] Bloodbath (Valerius)

Postby Anona on March 31st, 2014, 7:42 pm

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The compliment, entirely the opposite of what Anona had supposed would leave the man's lips, was so unexpected that it shocked a small, breathy laugh from him. He could feel heat creeping up the back of his neck, and he didn't doubt that twin unsightly pink blotches had appeared on his cheeks. Despite how he hated how easily he blushed, he'd so far never been successful in repressing it in the heat of the moment.

He looked around the area when the man indicated for him to, observing the other spectators. It always interested him that so many of the wealthy came out to the Pit to watch the bloodsport, but in a way he understood it. He doubted that many of them felt the cathartic release that he did when one slave's dirt-crusted fingernails dug into another's flesh until blood pooled in their muddy palms, but there was something in it for them, after all. As he looked around, he saw that most of the spectators still lingering under the stands were huddled in small groups, exchanging money from hand to hand, eyes bright and mouth chattering excitedly. None of them looked quite so wealthy as the man standing beside him, but he couldn't picture any of them roaming the rickety docks, except maybe for the comfort found in a brothel.

It wasn't until the man's next observation came that Anona realized he'd been meant to look at the women exclusively. Quickly, as though to make up for what he'd missed, his eyes bounced from woman to woman. He supposed there was something to be had in the man's declaration, at least from his perspective.

Interchangeable, he thought. Maybe to you, but I don't think that woman's husband would be pleased if you changed her for another. And if James could find another who looked like me, you would find I'm much more expendable than you apparently expect.

When he looked back to the man beside him, who was still looking out into the spectators, he surprised himself with the sudden thought that the stranger was actually quite handsome. Then he turned, and spoke again, and his blue eyes reminded Anona fiercely of James, still waiting for him to return. He looked away, stepping further in the line as it progressed, and touched his fingers lightly to his wrist, where he could feel the phantom ache from James's grip.

"You are very kind," he said at last, "to offer your observations freely, and without attachments. Most men are not as gracious." He glanced at the man's face again, hoping that the attraction had been fleeting, or a trick of the light, but he was not so fortunate. "I hope you'll understand that I'm not in a position to return the kindness."

The line moved forward once more, and Anona with it, until there was now only one other patron between him and the end.

A sudden curiosity gripped him. Whoever the man was, he was obviously at least marginally wealthy. He had only the vaguest idea of how learning his name could help him, but he thought that in some way it might make James... happier. Perhaps he could introduce them. He turned 'round again, and asked softly, "May I have your name?" As soon as he spoke, he realized how odd it could sound. In all polite conversation he'd been a part of, it was customary to offer one's own name before demanding another-- but he didn't think he could do that without sounding a right fool anymore. "I could- I swear I recognize you?" He added weakly.
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Postby Valerius Nitrozian on April 15th, 2014, 12:06 pm

As he heard Anona’s laughter, Valerius arched an eyebrow and wondered what the meaning of it was, whether she had liked what he had said or was merely amused for some strange reason. He noticed that she was blushing while he showed no such reaction. Valerius Nitrozian was almost always in control of himself. Any emotions that he showed were subtle, a slight change in the tone of his voice, a gaze that would linger the fraction of a second longer, a barely noticeable shift in his posture.

He let his gaze sweep over the people around him a few seconds longer before it settled on her again. „I am not kind“, he disagreed and made a step forward as the line progressed. „I merely said what needed to be said.“ His voice was a hint softer a she spoke those words. As she informed him that she was in no position to return the kindness, he simply inclined his head, a sign that he accepted it. What else was he supposed to do?

He moved forward once more. As she asked him if she might have his name, he replied, deciding to overlook the slight breach of etiquette considering the place they were in, „Of course you may. My name is Valerius Nitrozian. But I don’t think we have met before. I would have remembered somebody like you. Perhaps you have met one of my relatives. My family is quite well known in the city.“

That was of course a bit of an understatement. The Nitrozians were one of the richest and most influential families in the city, but Valerius had come to the decision that he didn’t want to seem too arrogant at the moment. He made another step forward, noticing with some displeasure that they had almost reached the end of the line. There was not much time for him to find out what it was that was different about her, but it wouldn’t do to seem impatient.

„May I have your name as well?“ he asked.
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Postby Anona on April 19th, 2014, 11:06 pm

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He knew that name. He knew it. He was certain that he did. He could admit privately that while he tried his best to please James and remember his allies and enemies, he was absolutely horrible at remembering the names, save, of course, the Lark family members. Nitrozian, though. He knew that one. Somehow. Perhaps they owned land? Or one of this Valerius's relatives visited James often? He'd have to ask him when he eventually return to his seat.

He couldn't quite stifle a small smile, half amusement and half flattery. I would have remembered someone like you-- honestly. He'd heard no different directed at women in the taverns on a rare visit, and on rarer occasions when he couldn't quite keep himself under the radar, even directed at him, slurred and sleazy and almost always accompanied by a few more raunchier offers. Hearing it said by someone so obviously put-together, in a place like this, was as off-putting as it was charming. It certainly helped that Valerius didn't look like he meant it as a quick way to get into a strange girl's skirts either: he had a sense about him of honesty.

Not quite honesty, he thought. Not from someone so wealthy. Straight, maybe. Direct.

"Anona, no last name to speak of. I'm afraid I haven't any family to give me one of those, and even when I had, they weren't anything special."

The line moved once more and he was finally at the front, and as much as he found himself surprisingly enjoying speaking with Valerius, James was, as always, the highest priority. He traded the coin for two mugs of ale, and took an embarrassing amount of time trying to figure out how he was to carry both mugs as well as the two copper mizas in change. Eventually he gave up, not willing to risk spilling any of James's liquor, and let the man behind the bar keep his leftovers. He'd have to repay James later, is all. Even with his limited budget, he could spare a few copper to spare himself the potential humiliation that would undoubtedly ensue if and when he spilled the drinks.

He was reluctant to leave Valerius's company even after so short an interaction. He moved to the side and turned back around, lingering beside the counter a bit awkwardly.

"So, do you have money on this fight?"
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[The Pit] Bloodbath (Valerius)

Postby Nemesis on September 24th, 2014, 6:21 pm

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