Tidus [Seatide]

[Tyrannus]

Tidus Appearance Race: Svefra Gender: Male Age: Twenty-five Birthday: 489, Summer, Day 54 Birthplace: A medium-sized hut that was a couple of feet away from the Suvan Sea. Made out of ragged cloth, mud, and stick. Appearance: Character Concept Caucasian, six feet tall, weighing one-hundred and seventy pounds [muscle]. His hair is a dirty blonde, his oculars round and colored like the sea of Laviku and outside, green hints like his seaweed green facial hair. Character History As a boy he grew up inside of his pod -- Seatide. It was full with many people, naturally, it hosted more woman than men. Raised by his father who was a trader within Black Rock, usually gone for months, leaving his family behind so he could make the currency to support his family. His brother, Axon Seatide, was thus responsible for his family, taking care of them. They mostly ate fish. He was taught to swim by him, and how to fish and survival in the wilderness. His mother dissaproved of this, but he had also gained a rapier from him, which is still shining till this day. Once Axon had gone out into the Suvan Sea, he had come across pirates within the vicinity near the east side of the wonderous beauties of Laviku. The word from the many passengers upon his ship witnessing this was that he had attempted to stop them -- They had seemed to be pouring oil in the ship. Axon had no fighting experience or capability, but by Laviku and to honor him he still went to them. He was almost immediately slayed by them, dropped into the sea. Soon after absorbed into its Mediterranean-blue depths in a blink of an eye. These men were cursed, and every time they attempted to come across the sea to trade, they were sent into a terrible problem across the sea. A storm, that only pointed in their direction. After this, Tidus began to train with his rapier, now twenty year old, he realized he needed more training. So he went off, abandoning his pod in the night and wandering off until he was found by a new pod -- His mother being the only one knowing where and when he had went, for they had spoken in the night. Language Fluent Language: Fratava Basic Language: Common. Poor Language: N/A Practiced Languages: Fratava Skills Skill EXP Total Proficiency Wilderness Survival 10 Novice Sailing 10 Novice Swimming 10 Novice Fishing 10 Competent Weaponry 20 Novice Lores Helpful Lores: Lore of fishing with a net, Lore of Religion. Possessions 1 Set of Clothing -Simple Shirt -Simple Pants -Simple Undergarments -Simple Cloak or Coat -Simple Boots 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: -Comb (Wood) -Brush (Wood) -Soap -Razor -Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth) -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel -Rapier 100 Gold Mizas Heirloom: Rapier Housing Location: Large tent on outter regions of Riverfall on shore -- Inside of four person tent. House: One simple bed, supplies in backpack laying upon the side. It is strong, and obsidian black. Or his small Casinor. Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 Gold Mizas 100 Gold Mizas Fishing net 4 Gold Mizas 97 Gold Mizas Grappling Hook 1 Gold Mizas 96 Gold Mizas Backpack 2 Gold Mizas 94 Gold Mizas Animal Snare [Small] 5 Gold Mizas 89 Gold Mizas Tent [Four Person] 10 Gold Mizas 79 Gold Mizas Thread List Link your current & past threads here!

[Crosspatch]

Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

• Because Summer 514AV has yet to come round your PC would still be 24 years old.
• Are you sure you do not want a poor language option?
• It is required that you clearly state which skills are Starter Package (SP) skills and which are Racial Bonus (RB).
• As a note, Novice skills are 1 to 25, Competent skills are 26 to 50.
• Due to being Novice in Wilderness Survival can you please clearly state somewhere the single environment type your PC is familiar with? (Example types include: Desert, Forest, Hills, Marsh, Mountains, Plains, Sea or Underground).
• Weaponry is not a valid skill. Weapon skills specific to what is being used, and are labelled as "Weapon: Weapon name” - for example to use a rapier it would be "Weapon: Rapier".
• Your lore "Lore of Religion" is too broad as there are multiple deities within Mizahar. A lore is some form of general knowledge that the character has gained over their lifetime. Such as knowledge on a particular deity or knowing the layout of a particular city.
• Please choose a cloak or coat. You cannot have both.

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


Crosspatch