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A city floating in the center of a lake, Ravok is a place of dark beauty, romance and culture. Behind it all though is the presence of Rhysol, God of Evil and Betrayal. The city is controlled by The Black Sun, a religious organization devoted to Rhysol. [Lore]

[Yae Varone studio] An equation for suspicion

Postby Caridan on May 7th, 2014, 8:47 am

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It was just as he expected. As his hears listened to the polite beckoning for his to stay he knew that an impending victory was at hand. A victory small perhaps and oh-so-insignificant in the wider scheme of things, however he could not help his glimmer of a smile to betray the joy with which he relaxed back into his seat. Se sweet were her words to his ears.

"My opinion tells me Caridan," she spoke. "No time was wasted when you have given a color to my interests. I would rather say, you opened yourself an opportunity just from patronizing the phrasing of what your skills are."

An opportunity eh? He thought to himself as he patiently listened to Andariel Lazarin's small speech. She did talk a lot in fact, but he didn't mind. The more she did the more her mind was likely to affirm in her convictions upon his subject, thus the less talking he would have to do and that was simply a conservation of effort which could well be spent on other things. He had a basic understanding of the human mind, revelling in the uncommon science - which it was in his eyes - of psychology; written about by only the most radical of authors. And with this knowledge he leaned back in his chair, cocking his head to the side slightly, twiddling his fingers.

Caridan watched her slide off on a tangent within her speech, though somehow sensing that such was the prerequisite to a very fortunate outcome. The longer he had spent in her presence the more predictable she had become somewhat oddly. Perhaps he'd be quick to judge the entirety of the upper class by her standards - all who clearly pass no opportunity to assimilate anyone with talent into their circle of influence. After all influence in Ravok meant power.

"But when people work for others who are filled with success and prestige, those things might be inherited to them. They will receive status, recognition, appreciation or anything which is more than just three silver coins." she added, looking to him as he did to her.

But people of prestige in this city are born into it. There is no success in such prestige when the role befitting you in this world had been simply given to you. Is this worthy satisfaction? pondered Caridan as he calculated her words within the depths of his mind. But rightly it seems he chose not to give voice to his thoughts. Instead he deemed the dilemma insignificant. It mattered not whom he worked for as long as there was food on his table and plenty of coin spare for the indulgent delights of art, poetry and theatre. And of course there must be enough coin for some of his more malevolent hobbies.

"This opportunity I'm conversing about is a way to work alongside with me. It wouldn't be for me but for us...for all of us. I still do not know what your true skills are, whether you are telling me lies or not but I can see you have some potential for a normal citizen."

At these words he angled his brow a little, wondering just how many people resided in her head for her to use the words "...all of us." It was quite the entertaining thought which sent glimmer of glee though his eyes.

"Herbal medicine is my speciality." he spoke alas after a prolonged pause which, besides the cacophonous jitter of a servant who had clumsily knocked something over in the hassle of their work, was otherwise filled with stares. Then he added."I'd never lie to you. What purpose would that serve?"

Caridan crossed one leg over the other in a manner of slight self confidence, hoping that his relaxed demeanour would inspire at least some relaxation within the Lazarin woman who clearly lacked the abundance of such. But his lips spoke business now. "What exactly would such an offer entail, of I may ask?" Though his mind was already made - He would accept it and perhaps charm her whilst at it - it was foolish to accept something without knowing it's nature. His words however had another intent. For Caridan it was essential to hold all the cards, always having the upper hand. Though any man who lacked the kind of arrogance he possessed would be on his knees by now, kissing the lady's feet in thankfulness; Caridan himself wouldn't stoop to such things. He'd make her work for having the likes of his in her employ purely to see whether she in fact was worthy.


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[Yae Varone studio] An equation for suspicion

Postby Andariel on May 7th, 2014, 2:09 pm

Her gaze shifted again, but this time it was turned towards her Inarta servant. San had been standing the entire time, or so to say, it was the only thing she could possibly do before affirming Andariel's questions or responding to her requests/commands. Andariel on the other hand, started to be rather impatient. Caridan's response wasn't something she wanted to hear though she did expect something which wouldn't meet her standards. She didn't want to delve into deeper specifications after how much effort she placed in her endeavoring 'speech'. As a matter of fact, a simple nod or a word of 'yes' would be the only possible response she could ever think of, others would mean downright disrespect towards her. But of course, her knowledge about people's logic wasn't broad enough. There would still be time to understand people without assumptions and quick judgement. Andariel would accept if ever Caridan declines her offer however, her impatience might lead her into doing drastic measures or worse.

Andariel had no intentions on being specific about her motives. It might cause her some problems about suspicions and the sanity of her mind might aware to those whom she had encountered. "What I am offering is an opportunity for you to attain a much more convenient standard of living here in Ravok. Work alongside with me for the future of this city. Only a few people are blessed with skills such as...."Andariel wasn't yet sure of what Caridan had spoken about his skills, her memory was sometimes too narrow even for definite and less vague statements. "Herbalism was it? Mostly hooligans with skilled delusions are only dousing themselves into barbarism. Such of an example is creating weapons and armor which opens a path only welcomed for many wars to occur. And we don't need wars, do we? " Strangely her mind had told her to commit such lie in order to hide her true desire for chaos. Only a fool would think peace is an option, at least, it was what her ideals confront.

"Oh my, and I'm forgetting my manners again. I am conversing about the most uninteresting topics which aren't of any concern to you and to what I am offering." Perhaps she thought that she was apologizing a bit too much. Normally it wouldn't be in this case if she had no interest on the particular person. "I assume you haven't heard much about me and my beloved parents?" Her voice was then regaining it's friendly tone as she continued speaking her words. "There are people who worked along with me in the past and I can honestly tell you that they've been living a different life from what they had before. Of course, the lives they're living now are of great success." Andariel turned back to the man, assuming he was somehow lending his ears and his whole attention to another one of her slightly uninteresting stories. "They were people blessed with skills other than those barbarians I've mentioned recently. They have ambitions of businesses and a great vision to make this city a much more better place for it's deity. And they were fortunate enough to find me and give them my offers. I have my father to willingly aid them on the start of their businesses but of course, they must consider on establishing a connection with him because obviously he was the one who has the greatest potential to contribute in their progress. In the end, not all of them were successful but only a small percent of them. People won't always succeed if hard work isn't present, don't you agree?"

Finishing her words, she glanced at San once again. Andariel gave a nod which meant a somehow universal command to most of her servants. The girl took a few steps towards her, her expression was seemingly pale and her eyes were set into an empty space. The Inarta was like a puppet being controlled, not like all slaves are, but she seemed a bit more lifeless than the others as if she was a reanimated corpse serving it's master. As the servant neared Andariel, she managed to strike a smile towards her and then turning her sights again to Caridan. "This lovely girl was once a child of the streets. Homeless, always hungry and mostly living her life as someone half-dead. But everything changed when I saw her and took her in my manor." She would assume Caridan didn't know about the girl's position in her domain whether she is a slave or just a child who was merely brought to life by Andariel's mercy. "I hope you pictured the gist of my statements."

She was about to let everything fall under one decision. A decision in which she wanted to hear, otherwise her breath was for nothing than to squirm into the hollow winds. "What do you say....Caridan Redding? Are you willing to hone your skills and make fortune? Herbalism is quite a demand" Andariel unfolded her delicate arm, pointing against Caridan with her palms open, reaching for her expected answer.
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[Yae Varone studio] An equation for suspicion

Postby Caridan on May 9th, 2014, 9:55 am

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He listened to her intently as it soon became clear she wasn't quite happy to reveal the precise nature of her goals. Though it seemed strange to him for what kind of employ would it be if he knew not what was expected of him? The story of the Inarta girl would be touching, if he had the capacity to relate to it, but he was not poverty stricken. He had cloth on his back and food in his belly and a little flat to return to every night which he was quite fond of. Not was he willing to be ordered around like a slave, tending to the mistress's even utmost ridiculous demands. Ha had far too much pride for that.

But she did appeal to his greed. The prospect of wealth and money was too good an offer to pass up so easily. And Caridan was indeed a greedy man. The eye of his mind looked upon a great garden embellished with statuettes to Rhysol and wooden structures out of some romantic novel.... and a lock. A marble sundial right in the centre with fountains all around it and rays of early morning sun peeking though the canopy of the taller plants. Somehow in his fantasies it was always early morning when the light looked it's most beautiful.

He indulged in fantasies of being able to walk into the Verone at will, never having to worry about money. Perhaps he'd buy the book store bellow his apartment if only he had the money. Perhaps he'd travel to Zeltiva and enrol at the university for a few years. Truth it was that Caridan did not lack ambition.

"What do you say....Caridan Redding? Are you willing to hone your skills and make fortune? Herbalism is quite a demand"

"It's truly a kind of you to propose me with such an offer," he replied, pausing for a moment before phrasing the rest of his statement. A pause which amplified the suspense in the air. "and I'd be a fool to refuse. My skills are at your command lady Lazarin."

He'd forsaken the notion of gaining any more detail out of this stubborn woman. Though it did seem odd that she didn't trust him with the type of work he'd be doing. Then again he hadn't trusted her with the detail of his area of expertise for it was not just medicine he practised. It was botany and the sciences within it... and the art of poison crafting. But if she was trustworthy then she'd find this out in due time else she might think him too a savage wielding but a slightly different type of weapon.


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[Yae Varone studio] An equation for suspicion

Postby Andariel on May 9th, 2014, 2:04 pm

There it was, the sweet victory of allegiance. Of course, it wasn't the first time where Andariel's terms were accepted, but it was simply the ambiance of another ally which brought her into an excited mood. However, as excited as she was, there might be an insignificant element of distrust growing inside her suspicion. Caridan was a man she only knew on this day and was still unsure of his affiliations hidden in secrecy. But for now, Andariel would believe that he has none and gaining allies are probable for her ascension to power. Besides, there were empty rooms ready to be occupied for people who'll help raise her ambition's progress and thus, there would hard work of persuasion towards the masses of whom she will encounter in the future.

Convincing Caridan was almost an easy task for her to be exact. Andariel found it a bit grueling to wonder about how she did it so easily. Perhaps it was her ramblings about inherited success? her false idealization for peace and order? or was it San's current 'influence'. It was uncertain, but she would have believed the one which might have convinced Caridan was her promise of fortune. Andariel lost herself for a moment as she laughed hysterically in her thoughts. Her promise alone envisioned her future deeds to the masses if ever she claims her ambitious position in Ravok. It wasn't easy to deceive, or rather, it might be perilous to enter a world marred by corruption. Whatever it may be, Andariel thought it would be best to keep her promise and avoid forging foes as of now, when power is still out of her reach.

Andariel neared the man, taking some few steps towards him knowing that conversing at a distance would've made her look absurd and awkward. San followed her of course, but it was odd to see the teen much likely to be stringed to her mistress' motions. Lifeless as she was, San managed to bring her eyes at the sight of Caridan. "Caridan...Redding," Andariel paused, still finding herself unsure of the name's pronunciation. "If there is anything you need, find my father-- Zelkov Lazarin's mansion. It is where I reside and where I work. Fortune would always be there waiting for you, so long as your skills are used diligently. And I must say, you've made a very wise decision." Andariel turned herself away from Caridan, facing her gaze at the door leading outside of the studio. She then brought her feet to a pace as she felt the sore yielded by discomforted shoes.

As her distance covered a close gap towards the door, she tilted her head over her shoulder, glancing at Caridan once again. "Remember, Ravok's future is resting in our hands.". She then turned back to the door as San stood beside to shove it open.

There might be times where Andariel's offers would be disrespectfully declined but for those who did, they might as well forget the day when they've met a Lazarin.

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[Yae Varone studio] An equation for suspicion

Postby Abstract on May 23rd, 2014, 12:08 am


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Andariel


Skills

~ Observation - 2
~ Intimidation - 1
~ Rhetoric - 1
~ Socialization - 2
~ Philosophy - 1

Lores

~ Caridan Redding: Irritating and Nosy
~ Caridan: In the Medical Business
~ Caridan: Helpful Associate

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Caridan


Skills

~ Observation - 3
~ Socialization - 2
~ Deduction - 1
~ Rhetoric - 1

Lores

~ The Uses of Raspberry Leaves
~ Andariel Lazarin: Snobbish but Intelligent
~ Andariel: Ally and Sort-Of Employer

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Andariel, be careful to watch your tenses... you slipped into present tense on a number of occasions.

Otherwise, it was a nice, simple thread! Good job!


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