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Brunhild thanks for asking about expectations. In truth, your first post in the quest was close to what I think is acceptable for the site. I personally would have like one more paragraph and I think I would have approved it for general playing. So that’s usually the bar I set for all players. Now for anything above that it depends on the player and the mod. I usually allow a little self modding in my threads. For example, you can describe you are looking at a painting or an NPC, which sparks interdialog or inspiration for some kind action. Since we are in the kitchens, I expect people can describe the table, maybe someone carved something into it, or the bench isn’t very comfortable. I ask my players to keep the descriptions general and not power playing. I also expect people not to conflict visions with one another.
As for grading threads, the better description about an action or your thoughts and feelings that you put into it the more xp I give. For me it’s just a better read and I think the player should have some control, because it’s their story. Also, the more you describe something the more likely I accept it without any kind of failure or harshness. Think Luke Skywalker firing on the death star, sometimes some things are just too cool and even a beginning character should do something sweet once in a while. So as long as the player playing Luke Skywalker gave an awesome description… BOOM no more death star. However, if you only give me two paragraphs. Well you hit the target, but perhaps the shoot goes off early. Another reason why I like more description and knowing what the character is thinking, is because I can customize the story to them. If you only give me what you said and not what you think or what you want to accomplish in the long run I don’t throw extras your way. For example, if one of you wants to learn the sword, perhaps I can have one of the clues involve you taking a sword class. My suggestion is look at some of the great characters out there, some of their posts are close to two pages long. However, I don’t expect that either, find what’s right with you and the way you feel, but I recommend keeping to the minimum of four paragraphs, that way the character doesn’t get boring for anyone reading the thread. In Summation: The more you write; the more I let you succeed, give out xp, customized the thread to some of your desires, and allow you to help create the story. I do this because we all are creating a story and it should be a good one. ~Brunhild & Rhian~ OOCI assume Brunhild meant the first thank you to Sham not Val. Rhian I don’t have problem with the two guys you ordered… but who the hell were they? You don’t have anything in your background about them? Val looked at Rhian and coughed softly at her. He felt it was in poor taste to eavesdrop on others. Still he kept silent, she was volunteering knowledge and she didn’t seem angry which was an improvement over Tam and Tor. Val then looked at Brunhild and wondered why the girl hadn’t introduced herself as she sat down. As his eyes flicked over to Sham, the muscled lad looked a bit taken by the woman, but for now Val decided to refocus everyone’s attention. “Right, well let’s first introduce ourselves and what we offer each other.” “I am the gatekeeper, let’s say that I bring experience and focus to us. Now besides the general announcement, I also know that everyone who has come through the gate to trade doesn’t have a pimples worth of magic between them. So even though Tor suggested it had to be them, it has to be the longest waiting game I have ever seen because the last outsider reimancer to visit Wind Reach was when I still had a red moustache.” Val used his fingered to comb his grey facial hair. Val seemed like a kindly old man, but the power and presence sent ripples through every one. Though Val hadn’t stood up when he delivered his little speech, a dirty girl stood up, “I am Leesa, I am a Dek. Ummmmm…” She looked to Val for guidance, and he nodded. “Well last night I was thrown from one of my hiding places and I heard a song echoing from the warrens. It was sweet like chimes in the wind but more like glass then metal. I didn’t think much of it, until this morning when I woke to see a dead girl in front of me, crying that she was thirsty.” Leesa, a girl of eighteen, seemed almost shaken to the core from what she saw. She took a deep breath and released it. “I screamed and started running through the warrens. The ghost chased me asking me for water and the youthmaster. I remember her crying that she was afraid and that she shouldn’t have run away from the classroom. She kept saying that she always followed the music, but she couldn’t find her way out. I rushed into an old room fill with dust and cobwebs. I curled up in an old rag pile, while she kept crying to me. It wasn’t till Whisper found me and the ghost that the girl seemed to calm down. Whisper told me it was alright to leave now and that I should get some breakfast.” The girl seemed to shake, and as people looked they saw why Leesa had become a Dek. Her left hand looked like it beyond to a girl of five. Leesa would never have the ability to fully operate any craftsmen’s tools, and perhaps because of her gentle or abused nature she needed someone to tell her what to do. Sham stood up next and looked around, “Well I am Sham, I usually work the forges making buckles or fasteners for saddles. I was returning from mixing duties at the forge for the night, and found a bunch of smiths grabbing chisels. They grabbed me and I have been working on restoring the tunnels to their previous turns. I also overheard some Reimancers saying that the Djed needed to create such massive deposit of stone would be huge, more than any one person could possess. I have to admit that I broke four chisels just trying to get a chunk out. When I checked the stamp of the chisels I realized that they made from one of our best smiths. I am use to working with mineral laced rock, as well as, metal.” Sham paused for a moment and then scooped up some of the dust about his clothes. Sham pinched the dust and almost like he was using it as seasoning he sprinkled it on to the floor. “It perhaps the most unusual mix I have ever seen. If I didn’t know better it’s like minerals interlace into a clay rock mixture. I could dent the stone easily, but I couldn’t get a decent crack started to wedge chisels in. The stone seems to like one solid piece grown like a plant. I mean even metal doesn’t have that, When you create a knife it has line grains in it. Like long tubes in a plant or rock, but this stuff is like glass. There just doesn’t seem like there’s a crack or break anywhere in the tunnel. Also, the Reimancers said that the tunnel sang. I wonder if the hummed the song, would Leesa be able to recognize it?” Sham sat down and looked at Val. He shrugged and simply said, “I will see if I can get a reimancer to hum it for Leesa while they work.” Val then looked at Rhian and Brunhild, waiting for one of them to introduce themselves. ~Fenilen~ Whisper went over to a pad of leather skins and sat down. She moved a bowl of water in front of her and slowly began cleaning her hands. Water dripped down her white hands and as they fell an almost gray residue came off with each drop. Each movement seemed filled with purpose and respect. Fenilen saw a ghost slowly walk before the shrine. He seemed near his sixties and broken, his left leg had a bone sticking out while skin looked to be ashen and mummified. Whisper held up a hand briefly and the ghost seemed to sigh as he slowly backed away. Whisper then took the silver comb she had been using to brush the little girls hair and began washing it. “Thank you… Sorry I don’t know you name, but thank you for acknowledgment of what I do. Very few people seem to understand that the dead need just as much tending to as the living. Also, when a ghost is ready to finally leave this world, he or she sometimes needs some to listen to them. It hard sometimes to hear the confessions of those long dead, many carry pain that has tortured them for hundreds of years.” “Though there have been a few others seeking my knowledge, I am afraid that I will be tending to the dead full time for another twelve days. However, if you promise to tell the next group of seekers the information I give you, then I will let you ask all your questions before I go to my private chambers and tend to them.” Whisper waited for Fenilen’s response and then moved on. “Well, first thing is that ghosts aren’t fully capable of using their skills like normal people. They need to take a body to use their knowledge. So we are talking possession, which is possible for powerful Ghosts. Next, what I know of reimancy is that even if you are highly skilled the Djed needed to create change something is very costly.” Konti began sorting other bits and pieces of toys, combs, pipes, and other knick knacks. “After talking with several ghosts, there might be three possible people who could have done this. Shasla was the last great reimancer Wind Reach produce about two hundred years ago. She created the gates to Wind Reach and the Hydroponics gardens. It was said that she moved stone like it was clay. Her grand work gloves are somewhere in the shrine. Many reimancers say that those that wear them can easily sculpt stone. However, reimancers have reproduce several pair and none of them, even the originals, created the new stone found. It was said that she went insane and went on the long walk, no one found her body in the deep warrens.” Whisper scratch her head briefly and then brought out a comb that kept her hair tied back. Her white hair fell about her face and she began to wet it and then dry it with a towel. “Kalfa, was the first reimancer to work the deep warrens. It was said that he the horn that could leech the very minerals from the stone. He channeled his djed into the horn focusing on the minerals that he wanted and called them like a pet. Dek would follow the Avora around and pick up the metals on the ground. One day Kalfa blew the horn and moved enough iron to have the forges work for ten seasons. However, the next day he went down to work the tunnel collapsed as he blew his horn and 25 men died with him, that was 200 hundred years ago and no one has found his body or the horn since.” “Lastly, there was Shiz the first reimancer to sculpt stone. She was born when the Inarta were young and she used the gifts of the gods to build the first warrens. She taught every reimancer the very basics of stone crafting, but no matter how are she tried, no one understood a tenth of her knowledge. One day she disappeared and the warrens grew so deep that the first people began to become lost down there. It was rumored that her last words that she spoke to a student was. ‘Nay, tomorrow I will be going on a long walk.’ The reason why I include her on the list of people is that it was rumored that she sang while casting.” Konti slowly got up and stretched for a little bit. Slowly she began to eat cheese, while packing her equipment, “I must admit though, I don’t know if it’s a ghost. It’s certainly possible, but I have heard from two of the lost, and as they recounted their deaths they spoke of the song and crystals growing. I almost wonder how a ghost was using Djed down in the deep warrens without someone there?” |