[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 4.0

(This is a thread from Mizahar's fantasy role play forums. Why don't you register today? This message is not shown when you are logged in. Come roleplay with us, it's fun!)

In this forum, all the character sheets are kept for player characters. Feel free to come on in, browse the forum, look at what sort of characters others have created, and then begin your very own!

Moderator: Liaisons

[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 4.0

Postby Maro on September 11th, 2014, 5:00 am

Here is my character sheet for Maro. I look forward to hearing back from you about it. Thanks in advance for all your help.
Maro
Player
 
Posts: 176
Words: 179660
Joined roleplay: August 11th, 2014, 1:56 pm
Race: Kelvic
Character sheet
Storyteller secrets
Medals: 2
Donor (1) Power Fork (1)

[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 4.0

Postby Orxan Stormsinger on September 11th, 2014, 7:08 am

For review, please. :)
User avatar
Orxan Stormsinger
Oh gods... Di is going to kill me.
 
Posts: 5
Words: 2097
Joined roleplay: September 10th, 2014, 4:46 am
Location: Endrykas
Race: Human, Drykas
Character sheet
Scrapbook

[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 4.0

Postby Aminah on September 12th, 2014, 3:44 pm

----
Last edited by Aminah on September 14th, 2014, 7:48 pm, edited 3 times in total.
User avatar
Aminah
Yahal guide me.
 
Posts: 7
Words: 1978
Joined roleplay: September 10th, 2014, 2:44 am
Race: Human, Benshira
Character sheet

[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 4.0

Postby Cassidee Junipher on September 12th, 2014, 6:30 pm

I just finished my character sheet, so here it is for review.
In an attempt to improve writing speed, I am limiting myself to 30 minutes a post and 15 minutes of editing. Please forgive me for any drops in quality and feel free to pm me about any errors.
Cassidee Junipher
Player
 
Posts: 31
Words: 32160
Joined roleplay: September 3rd, 2014, 1:39 pm
Race: Symenestra
Character sheet
Storyteller secrets

[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 4.0

Postby Jasper Bonvalet on September 13th, 2014, 12:36 am

Character Sheet for Jasper Bonvalet

Link: http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic52908.html
User avatar
Jasper Bonvalet
Jasper The Unremarkable
 
Posts: 5
Words: 1703
Joined roleplay: September 11th, 2014, 4:14 pm
Blog: View Blog (4)
Race: Human

[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 4.0

Postby Si'Kara Zulaca on September 13th, 2014, 8:27 pm

http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic52828.html For Si'Kara Zulaca. I'm still working on the history, but I'm taking my time! Love you Crosspatch.
User avatar
Si'Kara Zulaca
Reborn in Death
 
Posts: 19
Words: 12680
Joined roleplay: September 10th, 2014, 3:18 pm
Race: Nuit
Character sheet

[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 4.0

Postby Izuyanai on September 14th, 2014, 1:34 pm

Izuyanai Kokuryu


Appearance

Race: Kelvic (Peregrine Falcon)
Gender: Female
Age: 7 months
Birthday: 8, April, 514 AV.
Birthplace: Lhavit

Appearance: In her human form, Izuyanai appears to be a young woman with long, straight black hair and dark blue eyes. She stands rather small at 5'5 but her regal posture and precise movements makes the fact go unnoticed. It can be seen that her body is built for speed though it possesses adequate power. Most of her locks are held back with a simple cord but a few strands escape to frame her face. A pendant of a blue gem rests at her throat. Much of the time, Izuyanai wears a guarded and alert expression that borders on cold. Her sharp eyes are always closely following everything around her.
Izuyanai appears as a fierce falcon in her other form. Glossy black feathers feathers cover her back emitting a blue sheen. Her deadly black beak is dusted with light gold and strong legs end in curved talons. The feathers around her neck and chest are white, while the underside of the wings are decorated with thin bands of black. The falcon is sometimes known to keep the pendant with her.

Character Concept

Personality: Izuyanai is often misunderstood to be a very harsh individual, but she is as friendly as birds of prey come. She will be pleased to lend a helping hand and is fiercely loyal and protective of those she calls her friends. Around familiar people, Izuyanai can be a lively and reliable companion. However, she will not tolerate insults to her or her companions and can be quick to anger.

Ethics: The most prominent code for Izuyanai is that she will fiercely protect anyone she deems worthy. She does not waste her time committing petty crimes or have any taste for cruelty. However, she does not believe in many of the rules of honourable combat. Whatever one is capable of doing to defeat the opponent goes.

Likes: What this Kelvic enjoys more than anything is cheerful laughter. Good jokes and quick wit impress Izuyanai the most. A clever complement can never go wrong with this proud creature.

Dislikes: Huge crowds and too much noise will have her scowling and in a foul mood.

Character History

Izuyanai had a rather peaceful childhood, as the city suggests. She spent much of her time observing the society and grew to admire the Shinya. She asked her mother to teach her the art of swordsmanship and practiced devotedly. She sometimes went hunting with her mother and learned how to use her natural skills and gifts. She often visited the libraries and schools in the city but could never finish a single book. However, she became fascinated with a particular form of magic. Izuyanai confided to her father who knew some thing of the subject and he agreed to teach her shielding as well as asking professional teachers to look after his daughter. Most of her time was spent flying among the peaks gazing toward distant lands trying to find something she could not see.

Language

Fluent Language: Common

Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Swordsmanship 20 SP 20 Novice
Shielding 10 SP 10 Novice
Dancing 5 SP 5 Novice
Auristics 5 SP 5 Novice
Unarmed Combat 10 RB 10 Novice
Hunting 10 RB, 10 SP 20 Novice


Lores

Helpful Lores:
Lore of Lhavitian Culture
Lore of Religion: Syna

Possessions

-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Skyglass)
-Brush (Skyglass)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
600 Kina

Heirloom: An elegant pendant of a cerulean gem, cut and polished into an oval shape. A black draconic shape, made of a type metal is formed around the gem to hold it in place. A think leather cord is attached to it so it can be worn.

Housing

Location: Lhavit

House:

Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +600 Kina 600 Kina


Thread List

Threads
User avatar
Izuyanai
I'm back!
 
Posts: 274
Words: 165305
Joined roleplay: September 14th, 2014, 8:14 am
Location: Syka
Race: Kelvic
Character sheet
Storyteller secrets
Journal
Plotnotes
Medals: 1
Overlored (1)

[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 4.0

Postby Kiunae Ackina on September 15th, 2014, 10:26 pm

User avatar
Kiunae Ackina
Player
 
Posts: 10
Words: 3149
Joined roleplay: September 13th, 2014, 9:14 am
Location: Kenash
Race: Human, Vantha
Character sheet
Storyteller secrets

[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 4.0

Postby Aminah on September 15th, 2014, 10:49 pm

I think Aminah is ready at last.
User avatar
Aminah
Yahal guide me.
 
Posts: 7
Words: 1978
Joined roleplay: September 10th, 2014, 2:44 am
Race: Human, Benshira
Character sheet

[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 4.0

Postby Dinah on September 15th, 2014, 11:45 pm

http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic52959.html

Think I'm ready! (Though gods know I'm probably forgetting something blatantly important. lol)
User avatar
Dinah
Player
 
Posts: 55
Words: 41926
Joined roleplay: September 12th, 2014, 9:51 pm
Location: Endrykas/Sea of Grass
Race: Human, Drykas
Character sheet
Storyteller secrets
Scrapbook

PreviousNext

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 3 guests