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Taloba, home to the Myrians, is the thriving core of Falyndar. Inhabited by a fierce and savage tribe where blood sacrifices are normal and a way of life, they are untamed and proud of it. Warlike, and with their numbers growing, the Myrians are set on reclaiming what is rightfully theirs. [Lore]

Quiet Darkness

Postby Oryani on June 26th, 2014, 12:35 am

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Summer 60th, 514 AV


Darkness filled the air, only the dim light of the moon creating shimmering accents on edges. Unless one looked at the perfect angle, it was hard to tell if something was there or not. Darkness also created a kind of… atmosphere for itself. Quiet, sometimes calm, though everything to be heard and smelt and touched was pinpoint clear, with the lack of sight. A cricket to be heard in the distance, a twitter from a bird or monkey, the sharp constant smell that always seemed to fill the jungle. They were all painfully obvious, replacing the usual observations one made with their eyes.

Oryani, however, had another sense. It was native to her race, though not quite as exact as anything else. She could feel things, movements, in her nearby radius. A lot of the time it went ignored, a constant buzz that she generally drained out. It was part of the reason she hated places with lots of fast moving people, crowds. When she wanted quiet, no strain on her senses, she went to be alone, somewhere where there was no one, nothing, nearby.

She was doing that now, laying on her back and staring up at a small patch of sky that was visible between the canopy. It was strange in Taloba, almost never able to see the sky without being in a specifically open area. Most places had something covering it, hiding it from view. In the Sea of Grass, her home… the only time the sky was covered was when you were inside, in a tent to hide from the elements. Wind and rain came with the sky, with the stars and sun and moon. A protection from the sky also meant a protection from those… which could be both good and bad.

She liked all the things that resided in the sky, each represented by its own deity. Syna, for the sun, Leth, for the moon. Sadly, and almost in a humiliating way, she couldn’t remember the goddess of the stars. But there was one. She knew it. What she didn’t like… was the rain. Such constant rain, dripping onto her hair and face and giving her a headache from the motion. Though her extra sense could be invaluable in some situations, saving her from things stalking nearby, finding water, among other things… it had its downsides as well. Too much could give her headaches, migranes, and for some reason sometimes she simply couldn’t drown it out. Like rain.

She lay there, contemplating life, watching the twinkling lights above her head in the pure black backdrop of night, doing… nothing. That was, until someone walked into her cozy place. She’d hidden behind the Den of Exiles, nearly a hundred feet behind the furthest building, where she was sure she wouldn’t be interrupted. She’d discovered a comfortable bed of moss and leaves, a place where she could see the stars and nothing else. It had only been ten or so days ago, but she’d started frequenting it, going every night or every other night just to… relax. Pretend she was lying on far away soil, surrounded by tall grasses rather than trees, and imaging that Khal was right around the corner.

There was only one other person who knew this spot, one who’d been around a lot more, and had been growing steadily closer to the Chatakwe. Poma. They didn’t talk too much, the occasional words, but things like pasts and histories went unsaid. Oryani had no qualms about her own, but she knew the Myrian was particularly strict with her own… so never liked to pry. On top of that was a dense language barrier, both challenged in the Common language, and often it was too much effort to try and hold a full conversation. Still, the friendship had happened, mostly based off of Poma’s insistence on teaching the Drykas the ways of the jungle, and the ways of Taloba.

Knowing who was nearby, Oryani didn’t move, though her eyes flicked to the side for a moment in a vague attempt to actually see something. That, of course, was not going to happen, as there was no light to see by. Instead she stayed relaxed, still, until the vague outline of a face appeared above her own. ”Hello,” she said, in a quiet, amused tone. She still didn’t bother to move, feeling incredibly comfortable with no true motive to change her position.

To her surprise, Poma said a word in Myrian, that brought a frown to the Chatakwe’s features. ”Hello,” was the odd response, before the word in Myrian was repeated again. Oryani’s frown deepened, brow furrowing and eyes closing slightly. Was Poma teaching her Myrian? In a vague attempt, she repeated the word, her pronunciation surprisingly accurate. It was a simple word, though. The Myrian nodded and grinned, saying the word herself, before offering a hand to help the Drykas up. She took it, and found herself standing in a heartbeat, a little bit dazed. She always forgot how strong the woman was. How strong all Myrians were.

”Thank you,” she said friendlily, and was answered with another Myrian word. She frowned, before coming up with the possibility that it was ‘thank you’ in Myrian. So, in a vague attempt to learn the language, she repeated it. ”Thank you. Hello?” This was all in the few new words she’d learned, and earned a nod from her tutor. Hello and thank you. She now knew the most basic and polite words in any language, parroting this large warrior. ”Hello, thank you, hello, thank you,” she muttered to herself, tossing the words back and forth and getting used to the feeling on her tongue. In all technicality, she already knew some Myrian words… but those were ones she had no other name for in Common. Things like ‘monkey’, ‘ashta’, and ‘lychee’. Two animals and a kind of drink.

There were no other words said, except one, coming from Poma’s mouth. ”Come,” was the quiet request, before the Myrian set off deeper into the jungle, blackness enveloping her body in ticks.

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Quiet Darkness

Postby Oryani on June 27th, 2014, 12:28 am

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The Myrian woman was hard to follow, steps quiet on the jungle undergrowth. They weren’t truly in the jungle, not quite, but rather in one of the spaces in the city, especially near the edge, that was treed and relatively empty. Oryani followed, trying to be equally quiet, but unable to keep track of the things underneath her bare feet that would make noise when stepped on. When she truly tried, feeling the ground and space beneath each step before putting her weight on it, she ended up falling behind Poma and having to dash to catch up. That made more noise than anything else, and was too embarrassing to make up for the few moments of silence that she did have. Instead she just tried her best, wincing occasionally when the sound was louder than she’d wanted.

Finally the woman stopped, and Oryani only managed to not run into the Myrian after noticing the lack of motion ahead of her and stopping. She paused, frowning at the taller female’s face through the gloom, though knew her expression was probably impossible to see. She could only see the woman’s outline, but in the calm silence she could hear… breathing. Poma’s, as well as her own. The woman wasn’t even breathing heavily, so it was interesting to be able to hear something so… quiet. It also possibly had something to do with the woman standing a little closer than necessary, though that was also the Chatakwe’s fault for stopping to late.

She felt, rather than saw, the woman crouch, though the area of darkness before her eyes looked a little different. Less… dense, without a person in the way. She tilted her head down, and waited as the Myrian seemed to fiddle with grasses and moss, before straightening again with an invisible frown on her face. ”Hmm?” Oryani muttered in question, wondering what the purpose of that motion had been. Still, she followed the woman, heading to a tree that, even in the dim light, looked remarkably climbable. The Drykas rested a hand on the trunk, and was surprised she’d touched not a trunk, but a vine, one that curled from the ground up to the top of the tree. She felt down and up, and was able to keep track of the main stem wrapping around the tree’s trunk.

”Up,” Poma said, startling Oryani with the words. ”Orange plant. Fruit. Summer, eat. Name ‘scaly pinecone’.” The name of the fruit was said in Myrian, and once again Oryani doubted that it even had a name in Common. ”But climb,” Poma finally said, before beginning to slowly scale the tree. This was aided by having a number of short branches, or nubs of branches, coming off from the trunk, which was rather thin for a tree in Falyndar. Probably a young tree, then. While she waited, the Chatakwe continued to follow the vine’s path, realizing that it had covered quite a bit of the trunk. She didn’t know what it was like up high, though.

”Oryani,” she heard from above, Poma calling from a high up branch. She glanced straight above her, frowning at the darkness, before hearing one word that made her stomach drop. ”Catch!” was the call, before whatever the Myrian had found plummeted from high in the tree. The Drykas swore, feeling above her for when the item would come within her range. After that, she wouldn’t have much time to move. A tick later she felt it, dropping only a foot to her left, and stepped out that way, positioning her arms so the large bundle of sticky fruit toppled into her outstretched arms. She winced as she felt some of them squish from the impact, and tried in vain to get a good look at the thing. She wished, for a moment, that her black eyes came with night vision.

The Myrian soon returned, slipping down the tree to face Oryani. ”Back… light,” the woman said with a simple explanation, leaving the Drykas to follow again and carry the fruit at the same time. It was awkward carrying such a thing, mostly because she could feel sticky juices dripping down her arms that would take ages to wash off. She had a feeling the next thing she touched would attach itself to her fingers, and not come off for a good chime. From what she could feel, at least, it was oddly shaped, with deep grooves and contours all over it. She had no idea what they were, though was happy to find some place with lighting where she could get a good look at it.

She and Poma arrived rather quickly at the back of the Den of Exiles, where the soft glow of light emenated from all around. As well as lit inside, the exterior of the buildings had torches, to light up the surrounding area… so instead of going inside they sat on a patch of grass against one wall, leaning up against it. Oryani took the moment to stare at the mostly orange fruit, realizing that the contours had actually been bushels containing individual fruitlets, a mango-like orange on the outside, and red oval shaped fruits on the inside. ”Eat what?” she asked, assuming it was just the red part, but thinking that the old covering looked particularly delicious anyways. The Myrian raised an eyebrow, before stating ”All,” was the response, earning a nod from the archer. She pulled at a red fruitlet experimentally, and was able to separate it from the bushel. She glanced at Poma, got a nod of acceptance, and popped it into her mouth.

”Mm!” she said, surprised by the taste. She’d expected the intense sweetness you could find in other fruits here, but there was a lot of sour in it too. She had to remember that these were edible… though for only a quarter of the year, apparently. While she was chewing the Myrian reached out a hand and snagged a section of both orange and red fruit bits, picking it apart and eating it in small pieces. ”We should have added this to dinner…” Oryani muttered to herself in Pavi, grabbing part of the orange bit and trying that as well. Considering all of the residents of the Den of Exiles pitched in for meals and cleaning, it meant that they could have easily stuck in something like this as a snack, or desert to share around.

Thinking about it, she had vague memories of seeing fruits like this, though in smaller sections, in the market place. She had to walk through it on her way to work, as the Hooves n’ Horns was on the far side compared to the Den, and her home. Other than that, actually, she rarely went around, occasionally eating somewhere else or exploring the city a little more, but mostly hiding where she knew she was safe and comfortable. It was widely different from when she’d first come to the city, where she’d explored to her hearts content, but she’d almost run out of places. She’d also had a collection of bad run ins with Myrians that made her a little scared to go out too much. It was cowardly, she knew, but they were so much bigger and stronger, just naturally, than herself.

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Quiet Darkness

Postby Oryani on June 27th, 2014, 11:52 am

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The two quietly snacked on the fruit, eating it bit by bit. It wasn’t really one fruit, but many, and eventually they both stopped, unable to take any more. Oryani decided that this would make a wonderful breakfast the next day, if it lasted. The thing had lasted open and fresh in the forest for quite some time, though… so it would probably do alright, unattached to its creeping vine, for a night. She hoped so, at least. It wouldn’t be nice to face a squishy and browning fruit when she woke up. She didn’t even know if most of the fruits in Taloba browned… the apples and pears and things she was used to always did, even if you left them cut open for several bells. She’d never seen it happen to a Taloban fruit, though… so it would be an interesting test.

After several chimes, when it was clear neither of them would eat anymore, Poma spoke, voice almost startling through the silence. Everyone else in the Den of Exiles seemed to be sleeping, or at least were quiet, so the silence was equal to what it had been in the forested area, with the exception of the light cracking of the torch above their heads. ”I taught… teach… you Myrian,” was the simple plan, said in flat words that made Oryani nod. Alright. She liked the idea, actually, and though her knowledge for quite some time would be limited… hopefully if she stayed and used it long enough, she’d be able to work in Taloba a little better.

”Okay,” she replied when it seemed an answer was expected, and was given a Myrian word in response. This time, the third time, she picked it up quickly, remembering that Poma was repeating the word she’d said in her native language. ”Ookaay,” she mimicked, finding this one a little more strange to pronounce than the other two words. ”Okay, hello, thank you,” she muttered to herself, repeating the trio of useful words she’d learnt… with the exception of the spiny pinecone thing. It sounded almost like a sentence, though she still had yet to truly put meaning to the words in her brain. There was little connection to Pavi words, which made it harder… but that was the way with most languages. Pavi and Common might have had one or two similarities, but this simply sounded so different and foreign that it couldn’t have had anything in common.

Realizing now that Poma would simply tell her any word she wished in Myrian, she slowly picked out a few she knew were important and rather basic to sound like… you actually knew something. Often when people spoke unfamiliar languages, she found, they missed those words, piecing together nouns, like she had just done a tick ago. However, simply joining words were often easy as well, and made conversations a little easier for the speaker and listener.

”And? The? Is, am?” she asked in slow succession, gaining the answers. She was quickly picking up a few too many words for her to keep track of them all, so after she’d picked up the first two, she asked for a repeat on the last. ”I, you,” she said, rather startled, realizing she’d also forgotten two other important ones. There were other ‘person related’ words she could ask for, like him, her, we, you (a plural you), and they… but she didn’t care for them at the moment. She already had enough to deal with in her brain, and slowly listed the words out on a mental list. ”Yes and no?” she finally asked, completing a very, very basic vocabulary list.

”I… is? No, am. I am… okay. Thank you, the spiny pineapple. And… er…” She didn’t know the word for ‘teaching’ in Myrian, and that was far too complicated at this point, so she just blurted it out in common instead. She’d managed to piece together a half-sensible sentence, though she could have, and wanted, to say more… but she was missing the right words. In the second part she’d been forced to omit ‘for’, considering she didn’t know that word either… but she forgave herself. Considering she was a foreigner and probably had a terrible accent, most people would be able to pass on words like that. The basic adjoining words were important at the moment, but now she needed to know… verbs? Probably verbs. Verbs like teaching. She’d already gotten ‘I am, you are,’ but a few basic sentences like her name would be nice.

She paused in mid thought and let out a little chuckle, something dawning on her for a moment. She was teaching herself, and Poma was simply supplying the vocabulary. She had to admit, she probably knew more than the Myrian about languages, speaking a grand total of three (well, four, if she could count Myrian), whereas the older woman could only speak two. She was mostly basing this off her memory of learning Tawna, where her mother had given very concise and clear lessons when she was actually old enough to remember how they went. She also had gotten plenty of practice, since, after most of the basic lessons were given, she was then forced to speak to the Chatakwe only in Tawna, much to the irritation of the rest of their pavilion. She giggled again, imagining Poma giving such an order. It was rather possible, in truth, just… a funny thought.

She attempted another sentence, working off other words she knew, before pausing half-way. ”I no… ugh.” She was trying to say ‘have’, but realized she’d forgotten that important verb as well. ”I have? You have?” she asked, hoping there wasn’t a verb difference like there was with ‘am’. Poma quickly responded, using the two words she already knew, and luckily saying the same for the two verbs. ”Good,” she muttered herself, oddly choosing Common to do it, and to her surprise the Myrian answered. Right… she was still doing vocabulary, apparently. She smiled, filed away the word, and vaguely hoped she could remember this all in the morning.

After partially forgetting her fullness, she popped one of the red fruits in her mouth and chewed while piecing together the sentence she’d been trying to do earlier. When she finished, she started, using the same two words. ”I no have Ashta. I no have good Ashta.” She grinned at the silly sentence, though was pleased with herself at putting it together. She thought about Ashta, linked them to horses, and frowned a little, a sad expression coming onto her face. ”I had a good horse, though. A Strider… my Strider…” she muttered to herself, using Pavi for simplicity. She wasn’t entirely sure if she wanted to tell Poma that, about that sad portion in her life. They had a nice agreement not to talk about those things, and she was unsure if she would start crying if she truly talked about Khal. That wound had yet to heal. She was also unsure if Poma would even understand the incredibly important bond between a Drykas and their Strider. How would she explain it… a family bond? A Myrian warrior and their tiger would work too, though she was unsure on how that kind of bond would work. Was it like normal person and normal animal? As she knew that wasn’t quite what happened with Striders. There certainly was no web involvement here. At all. It was odd… she felt like the only person who knew webbing.

The Web. That was a possibility. If she put in the effort, it was possible she could store all this information on Myrian in an origin, and access it when she needed it. It would probably seem odd, however, to be creating a little stone thing, and it could almost be seen as cheating… cheating the learning process. People would also probably not approve if she closed her eyes in the middle of the conversation and reached out for it to find the words she was looking for. No… she’d have to rely on Poma to be a dictionary, and she could do what she’d done up until now. Use Common, with those who spoke it, or hand signals with those who didn’t. Using the Web would be a little bit of overkill, and she wasn’t even sure if what she did would be possible. Still, it would be amusing if she started laying her own lines of webbing across this empty city, to connect places, to not get lost. It brought up a thought… she could probably mark the Den, and her room, as one point, so if she ever wanted to come back… but she’d also have to stretch lines all over the place, so that would have to wait.

She sighed, rubbing her forehead and shrugging her shoulders. Myrian, right, she needed to focus on Myrian. Learning the language. She knew tossing it all on her brain in one night wouldn’t work, however… she’d have to do this regularly, slowly build up on her skills until she had memorized all the words she had today innately, and if she wanted to piece together a simple sentence like ‘I am good’, she could do it. Actually, she could do it now. ”I… is. No, ergh. I. am. Good.” She gave an awkward smile, know that she wasn’t truly ‘good’. In fact, she was more tired than good. Sleepy. She had no idea what time it was. Was learning something like this at midnight or something even a good idea? She’d heard once that it was better to learn in the morning, when you were awake. Except… it was quite possibly the morning. She wasn’t sure if it was tomorrow or not, and was hopeless with the moon and stars, so she couldn’t tell.

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Quiet Darkness

Postby Oryani on June 30th, 2014, 1:46 am

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After ten more chimes of sitting in still silence, the two said their goodbyes and went their separate ways, heading off to find their beds. Oryani crashed into hers, suddenly feeling a wave of exhaustion. Barely ticks after she closed her eyes she was asleep, new Myrian words swimming around her head before darkness truly took over.

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The next evening, at a much earlier time, the two met again in the same comfortable, quiet, spot. There were crickets chirping in the air, and though it wasn’t quite late enough for the moon to be truly visible, there were the ghosts of stars in the sky, if one looked hard enough. Oryani didn’t, however, for once… she was more focused on her lessons, which Poma seemed content to continue. Instead of heading back to the Den they settled in the mossy place, both facing the same direction, looking out into the jungle.

Immediately Oryani began picking out words, trying to see what she remembered. ”Hella? Hallo. Hello. Thank you. I am, you are… gloob. Glood?” She paused, desperately trying to remember the right word for ‘good’. She probably sounded absolutely hilarious, at the moment. Poma tossed her the right word and she repeated it several times, to truly get the right wording. ”I am good,” she said, accent thick, but glad she could make a full sentence. Now… what were the other words? ‘I have’ was one. She couldn’t remember any others. She wasn’t sure if there were any others. She paused, frowning at the floor, until the Myrian sparked her memory. ‘Yes’ and ‘No’… of course. ”Yes!” she exclaimed, quickly changing to Myrian instead of using Common for the practice. ”Yes no yes no yes no,” she repeated rapidly trying to ingrain them into her memory.

Now was the time for learning complete, simple sentences, she thought. Or was she missing a step? More verbs would be helpful too, like want and such. Here and there were important too. There were so many words, and it would take so long until they were instinctive. She groaned quietly to herself, resting her forehead in her hands at the enormity of it all. So many words, so much grammar, so much practice…. It would take her seasons, no, years. But that was a language for you. She was too old to learn it easily, after all… blunt force and work would get her to the end, and that was about it. She lifted her head up to see Poma watching her carefully and gave a weak smile, before rubbing her scalp slightly and straightening.

”Here, there?” she asked, using their general indicators for a translation. She was given one and nodded in thanks, picking together sentences. ”I am here, and you are there,” she said slowly, after much thought. She actually had gotten ‘I am’ and ‘You are’ rather quickly, simple things that seemed to have stuck after her night’s sleep. ”I am… am…eh?” She paused, realizing she’d forgotten a stupidly simple word. ”A,” she said simply, looking at Poma. She could always skip it, of course… but why? It was such a simple and common word, after all. She knew in one of the languages she spoke, it was the same as ‘one’, which would also create a base for counting and that area. She’d also have to ask for the numbers, which would be a whole new list of memorization. It had been so long since she’d had to truly memorize something… she could barely remember how she did it.

Once an answer was given, she continued with her sentence, starting from the beginning. ”I am a Chatakwe, you are a Myrian. Yes? I am no a Myrian, you are no a Chatakwe,” she gave a goofy grin, knowing she was simply flipping around words, but… that was language, wasn’t it? The combination and mixing of a vocabulary, plus some grammar. She wasn’t really too fussed about grammar, though. She didn’t know where the ‘no’ went in the sentence, and she knew in Pavi it would actually be ‘not’, but she didn’t care. She was a foreigner, people would forgive her for simply things like that.

Poma mimicked the sound, saying something in rapid Myrian that sounded familiar to Oryani, but was too fast for her to truly catch. She frowned, and the older woman repeated it at a much, much slower pace. ”A Myrian here, a Chatakwe there,” the Myrian said, combining the two sentences that Oryani had put together earlier. They both nodded and laughed again, finding a kind of amusement in the simple, babyish sentences. It seemed like, with complete things like that, Oryani could speak it fluently… but that was far from the truth. She worked on one bit at a time, learning maybe one or two words at a time before pausing and completing another sentence. That was how the pattern went. She was simply teaching herself, going slowly so that she could memorize all of the vocabulary she picked up. She hoped she didn’t forget everything the next day. She also knew she’d have to keep going at a constant pace, if she wanted to get this quickly. Every evening, a lesson, and sleep on the words she’d learned. She hoped, eventually, that the basic sentences would come easily. Hopefully it wouldn’t take too long.

”Hello… I am Oryani,” she muttered, putting together a simple introductory sentence. One that she should be able to say in any language, without hesitation. She needed to stop talking to Myrians in Common, and start talking to them in Myrian. She barely said much anyways, with a limited Common vocabulary. Actually… that was a point. How far would Poma’s Common vocabulary get them? They were both lacking in that language. Hopefully at that point the teaching could be done in slow Myrian, with simple explanations to propose words, and correct grammatical sentences given. That was too far in the future to truly think hard about, however. Oryani rubbed her eyes and lay back in the grass and moss, preparing herself for more memorization.

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Quiet Darkness

Postby Oryani on July 1st, 2014, 1:00 am

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”Eat? I eat, you eat?” she asked, picking out a simple verb that she needed to know. Right, and that other one she’d needed earlier. ”Want, I want, you want.” She had two verbs already in her list, and adding two more would be a good decision. ”Go!” she threw out as a last decision. Five was better than four, wasn’t it? Poma gave her quick and rapid answers, where luckily all the ‘I’ and ‘You’ conjugations were the same… less things to remember. The only one with a difference at the moment was ‘am’ and ‘are’, which she already had down pat.

”I am, I have, I wans? I eats. I go?” She frowned, trying to remember the correct pronunciation.

”I am, I have, I want, I eat, I go,” the Myrian corrected softly, putting stress on the two verbs that Oryani had forgotten. The Drykas nodded, repeating the pair for herself to get them ingrained. ”I want, I eat. I want, I eat” She frowned, knowing it was now time to pick sentences. With more verbs, she could see a whole lot more options coming her way, for simple quick things to piece together. Some she was putting away for future use, repeating them mentally until she was sure she remembered them. They were the simple ones, like ‘Hello, I am…’ and such. The rest were just practice to stretch her brain and get used to the words.

” I no have spiny pineapple. I want spiny pineapple. I eat spiny pineapple.” She’d managed to stick three verbs into the same sentence (well mostly), using the same noun. It was simple and basic, but it worked. She looked up at Poma to see the Myrian nod, then cock her head.

”Oh?” the woman asked, confusing the Drykas for a moment. Then she realized… the Myrian probably thought her sentences had something to do with the truth. That she actually wanted another spiny pineapple, like the night before. Oryani shook her head, though it was tempting… she wanted to focus more on this and not go off on another journey to find another of the giant fruits. She was already full from the dinner they’d made, a collection of grilled okapi meat someone had brought in and maize flatbread. Like usual, she’d done the washing up, before heading out into the receding light. She was kind of useless at gathering food, due to her lack of knowledge of Falyndaran food sources. She could possibly get some of the spiny pineapples, now that she knew how to get it… except she wasn’t much of a climber. The biggest thing she’d climbed before coming to the jungle was a horse.

”No,” Oryani said, putting it in Myrian, as she’d become pretty used to using the word as a negative in sentences. She saw Poma nod again, before both of them gazed away into the darkness of the jungle once again. The Chatakwe adjusted her position, so her head rested on a pillow of moss instead of a rock… the pointy thing had been digging into her scalp and making it hard to think. And she really needed to think, at the moment.

”I want a horse… no want a Ashta,” she said, let a tinge of sadness into her voice as she thought about Khal. This, compared to her last sentence, was very much the truth. She did want a horse, she wanted Khal… but she would also be happy with a replacement, if only to ride more often. She did it occasionally with Reylil’s horses, but that was a rare occasion… mostly she stood below the horses, not on top of them. You didn’t need to sit on a horse to groom it, after all. It would probably be incredibly awkward anyways. She honestly couldn’t imagine doing the task at all, especially properly. You wouldn’t be able to get at the hooves, most of the body, and you’d fall off trying. She chuckled to herself at that, before realizing she was getting intensely off topic.

”Turtle…” she muttered, the word popping into her mind. The Svefra had talked a lot about the shelled thingies, but she hadn’t heard of them before that. The Myrians ate a few too, though. Poma simply made a confused sound, until Oryani turned her head. The two took a moment to look rather bewildered, before the Drykas remembered how the words she said would be translated into Myrian. ”No,” she said with an awkward smile, shaking her head a little. Topic… she had to stay on topic. Right.

”How are you? Good? Bad?” she asked, half intending it as a real question, and half asking it for the actual translation. It was a basic question, and the two answers could be used in many other situations. She heard Poma reply, though it obviously wasn’t a translation. ”I am…” then a blank, unknown word. It was either good or bad, though Oryani hoped it was the former. Then the older woman shook her head and fixed her statement. ”Good. Good,” she explained, switching from Common to Myrian. ”How are you? Bad.”

”How are you?” Oryani repeated, mimicking the Myrian sentence. ”Okay. How are you? I am good. I am bad. Good and bad. Good, no bad. Myrian good, Dhani bad.” The sentences were more or less gibberish, used to help her get used to the words. Slowly, very slowly, she was adding to her vocabulary. She was actually quite impressed with herself. In two days of learning she could say simple, and limited sentences. She was trying to say it with a Taloban accent as well, but she wasn’t quite sure how it was going. Only someone who knew and spoke the language –and wasn’t herself- could truly tell. She could try at least, and see how it turned out.

”Eat good. Eat spiny pineapple good. No have spiny pineapple bad. Mm. Horse good, Ashta good. Good, bad. Want good, no want bad. Ugh.” The last was to express her general irritation. Her sentences weren’t just simple, they were incredibly, incredibly basic. She was just playing around with words. At this point, that wasn’t just what she needed. She needed practice, experience… more than what she was getting at the moment. She groaned, rubbing her eyes and sitting up. ”No,” she said, finding herself oddly stuck in Myrian. ”Eh. Done. Tired.” This time she changed to Common, before pushing herself up from the ground. ”Thank you,” she said, nodding at her tutor, before heading back to the Den of Exiles. She hadn’t lasted as long as last night, sadly.

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Postby Catastrophe on July 11th, 2014, 7:13 pm

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Oryani :
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  • Socialisation: 3 XP
  • Observation: 1 XP

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  • Reminiscing Under the Open Sky
  • The Myrian Tongue: Challenging, but Practicable
  • Expanding Myrian Vocabulary
  • Myrian: Direct Pronouns
  • Practice Makes Perfect
  • Myrian: Basic Conjuctions

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Notes :
Near the beginning of the thread I thought it would have been so funny if it wasn't Poma she was following but a complete and total stranger instead.

This was a very well written thread about learning a new language! It astonished me how you were able to take something so boring and make it fun. I like Poma's teaching technique and the way Oryani smiles like a little girl after getting a word right. Keep up the stunning work you two! :P

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