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Alyra's love for learning is tested when she meets her new sparring partner, Hirem.

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Built into the cliffs overlooking the Suvan Sea, Riverfall resides on the edge of grasslands of Cyphrus where the Bluevein River plunges off the plain and cascades down to the inland sea below. Home of the Akalak, Riverfall is a self-supporting city populated by devoted warriors. [Riverfall Codex]

Tests in Faith (Hirem)

Postby Alyra on July 5th, 2014, 9:24 pm

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Alyra laughed. Unfortunately, that laugh sounded more like a wheeze than anything else. That, in turn, only made her want to laugh more. It was a vicious circle. Alyra would laugh, she'd wheeze, then she'd wheeze and laugh again.

"I'm fine," Alyra said when she was done laughing at herself. "Don't worry about it." That idea apparently didn't settle well with Hirem.

He hobbled over, struggling to lift her up. Alyra swatted at the air between them in a weak protest. Though she knew she needed help, she could see that Hirem wasn't in the best shape either. Alyra didn't want to be a burden on the already struggling man.
"It's not your fault." Alyra began to protest as she sat up, pulling her bag around her shoulders as Hirem acted as a crutch. She initially planned on asking to walk on her own, but she dropped the idea as she was lifted off of her feet; Alyra was admittedly a selfish creature, and being carried felt far too good in her current state. "I've never really done this before, and I should've warned you bout that."

Alyra shrugged in response to his question. Initially, combat training was just a means to an end. Once the Eth became a Kuvan, then she would happily keep her distance from combat. Hirem did, however, bring up a good point. If Syna's will brought her to Riverfall, then it would probably go without saying that Syna foresaw combat in Alyra's future.

"I want to earn my place inside the city, and learning how to fight is the only obstacle in my way." Alyra shrugged as she added: "Well, that and my unemployment."

"Syna has brought me to Riverfall, the city of warriors and hard-workers. That must mean she is either trying to get me to become some kind of fighter, or she is commenting on my work ethic. I'd like to think it's the first one," Alyra chuckled briefly. "But you never know..."

Alyra turned her head, searching for Nash. When she found him dawdling a few feet behind them, she clicked her tongue loudly. It was a sound that Alyra had heard others use to call their dogs or speed up their horses, so she figured Nash would get the message. It wasn't done in vain, though the call didn't have the desired effect: Nash looked up excitedly, but he didn't catch up. Alyra rolled her eyes, and draped her arm over Hirem's. After Alyra playfully flicked her wrist, Nash began to bound towards her. He jumped up, grabbing ahold of her sleeve. The cat did what cats do best and scaled her arm. With Nash now resting in her arms, Alyra felt at ease.

"What sort of journey do you have planned?"
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Postby Hirem on July 7th, 2014, 7:57 pm

Hirem ignored Alyra's protests for a very simple reason: he felt duty-bound to escort her to the Gilia, and he would not settle for simply placing a hand on her shoulder as they walked. Their fight, while not involving any significant injury, had nonetheless been brutal for the untrained Alyra to experience. He knew that if he had gone up against an opponent that had treated him as he had treated the Ethaefal, he would be hurting for weeks as a result. Looking at the poor girl laying down on the ground, the strength beat out of her weak form, filled him with guilt, and he could not easily brush this aside as a matter she would have to deal with her own. I knocked her to the ground... it is only fitting that I am the one to pick her back up.

He listened to the Ethaefal speak as he marched down the road, ignoring the odd passerby that gave the pair a curious look. "I want to earn my place inside the city, and learning how to fight is the only obstacle in my way." That was a sentiment that the Benshira could understand wholeheartedly. Riverfall was a tough city to feel welcomed in - the native Rivarians were invariably strong, disciplined, and more than willing to display their prowess in ever-increasing competitions of ambition - but at the same time visitors sought to become citizens because it signified an achievement. Becoming Rivarian was more than just owning property in the city... it meant passing a test of character and becoming recognized by the demanding society of the Akalaks. Hirem anticipated filing for Kuvan status within the next season, and he could only hope that Alyra would join him in that respect.

"Syna has brought me to Riverfall, the city of warriors and hard-workers. That must mean she is either trying to get me to become some kind of fighter, or she is commenting on my work ethic." Again, Hirem understood what she spoke of, the determination to adhere to divine will in spite of all difficulties. Just as Syna was Alyra's guardian, Yahal served as Hirem's master, and the path that the Ethaefal spoke of was very familiar to the pious Benshira. He had thought that Yahal must have intended for Riverfall to be his first destination, on a journey with a meaning he had yet to truly comprehend, because Riverfall was an ideal location to train. Here, skills could be prepared and reflexes could be honed for the arduous obstacles that would surely lay ahead in his future. It gave him some peace of mind to know that he was not the only pilgrim sent here for such a purpose, that at least Alyra could understand why he was living so far away from home.

After the woman retrieved her cat, she asked him: "What sort of journey do you have planned?" Reflecting quietly on the question, Hirem pursed his lips as he continued to carry Alyra down the city street towards the Gilia. Finally, when he was ready to speak, the Benshira shifted his gaze down to meet Alyra's blue eyes. "It is not a journey that I have planned... but a journey I know I am embarking on. It is hard to explain." He hefted the Ethaefal further into his grasp to prevent her from slipping away, taking a deep breath. "You know that Syna has sent you to Riverfall, but you know not why? You know that you must accomplish something in the city, because she has brought you to its walls, but she had not told you what she expects? I feel the same, but I also know that my god - Yahal, the lord of faith and purity - intends for me to leave this city at one point. My purpose lies elsewhere."

"I journey to fulfill Yahal's will, and so I train in order to better meet his demands. For the enemies of my master are many and great in power, and they must all be combated if his good work is to be spread throughout Mizahar." He nodded slowly, his voice filled with stern belief despite the soreness of his body. As I am now, I am only a pitifully weak servant of my god... that is the whole point of training, that I will become more useful to him. "For now, Kuvan status is enough of a goal for me to accomplish." As the Gilia building began to emerge from the nearby domes that surrounded it, Hirem glanced back down to Alyra. "You said that Syna has brought you here to become a - a fighter, of some kind. If I can help you accomplish this task, I will, and spar with you sometime again in the future. We are both kindred in our faith, and I cannot let a fellow wanderer fail their duties to a god."

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Postby Alyra on July 18th, 2014, 1:14 pm

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Alyra listened as Hirem explained his motivations. It appeared that Hirem wasn't that different from her after all. Both were on journeys of faith, and both knew little about their deity's actual wishes. Either way, both pressed on without this knowledge. They travelled great distances, left their comfort zones, and got pummeled by new acquaintances, and all of it was for the sake of their divinities.

Their meeting was serendipitous, she thought. Alyra couldn't have asked for a better person to spar with. Hirem wasn't cruel, and he didn't seem to particularly like watching her lose. He was strong, both in body and in will. Though she knew he was no expert, she knew that he would teach her all he knew anyway. Whether that was just the basics of fighting or the complex moves that made for a great fighter, Alyra didn't care. Hirem was a man who understood her purpose, and, thus, would understand what she needed to learn.

"I hope that point is very far away, Hirem." Alyra smiled to her new friend as they reached the Gilia. She dropped out of Hirem's arms, tucking Nash into her bag as she tried to regain her balance. She had momentarily forgotten that she was injured. Her arm was quick to remind her, though. Alyra winced as the pain returned, dropping her left arm to her side.

"Hopefully I'll be better prepared next time we spar." Alyra chuckled lightly. "Not that I didn't enjoy getting beaten up, but I'd rather not do this again." The eth motioned towards the Gilia before turning to face it. She took a test step, then tried to hide the limp as much as she could. The last thing she wanted was for Hirem to think he had to carry her all the way to the front desk; she didn't want to be that big of an inconvenience.

As she hobbled away, Alyra waved her right arm over her shoulder at Hirem.
"Until next time, Hirem." She would be happy to see Hirem again. Perhaps he could teach her more than just combat skills. He could teach her about this "Yahal", or the "tents of Alachi", or who Rapa is. Hirem had mentioned many new things when they first talked, and, now that Alyra had time to think about them, they piqued her interest.

The woman at the desk raised her eyebrow as Alyra approached. Alyra shrugged, offering up a simple explanation:
"It was a lesson in faith."
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Tests in Faith (Hirem)

Postby Ragdoll on September 23rd, 2014, 3:38 pm

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Purrfectly Done!
Alyra :
Skills
Skill Points
Observation 2
Socialization 2
Rhetoric 1
Deduction 1
Planning 1
Unarmed Combat 4


Lores

  • Want: Hold a Plant Taste-Testing
  • Being a Chew Toy, Literally and Figuratively
  • Hirem, of the tents of Malachi, of the sons of Rapa
  • How to Brace During Combat
  • Sneak Attacks on the Enemy
  • A Lesson in Faith

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Alyra is a delight and Nash is adorable. Hopefully he wasn't too traumatized.


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Skill Points
Observation 2
Socialization 2
Teaching 2
Planning 1
Unarmed Combat 4
Intimidation 1


Lores

  • Pretty Colors!
  • Alyra: Curious Ethaefal
  • Ethaefal Deserve Respect
  • Humility is a Virtue
  • The Importance of Thinking on One's Feet
  • Controlling the Tide of Battle
  • Alyra: Wants to Earn Her Place
  • A Lesson in Faith

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As always, your thread made me question the meaning of life-that's a compliment! I can't wait to read more of Hirem's shenanigans.


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