Completed Frosthawk Arrives [Abelu Aviary]

Lavira is dead and Unas Frosthawk Arrives

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Frosthawk Arrives [Abelu Aviary]

Postby Una Tanta on April 6th, 2014, 3:38 am

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Spring 25th 514AV

Una was frowning as she walked into the marketplace once again. The Frosthawk was due over 10 days ago but with the rain and storms it was no surprise they were delayed. She had been looking through the market place everyday since the trader had told her they would arrive. It had been a year since she had vowed to repay Lavira with a Frosthawk and had been delighted to finally make good on the debt. The Marketplace was a cacophony to every sense and her skin shivered. The air was warm at the high elevation leaving a permanently parched sensation in her mouth, this was easily dulled by the marketplace.

Every other day she had skipped into the ring-like arrangement, excited to see the Frosthawk who had caused her so much trouble in Avanthal. Today she walked slowly, staring at her feet. She had been looking for Lavira since arriving but the mountainous city was difficult to navigate and learn and she hadn't tracked the Falconer down. Frustrated she had asked several citizens before finding someone with enough common to bumble through a conversation. Though it wasn't eloquent nor detailed she gathered that Lavira was dead.

Una approached the marketplace this day with dread. She wasn't experienced with birds and had barely managed to feed the beast without having her fingers bitten off, how was she to manage it here? Perhaps she could sell it she wondered. They were pests in Avanthal but certainly such a large and ill-sought bird rarely made it to Wind Reach. She would have no trouble finding a buyer she reasoned. However, as realistic as it sounded she was hesitant to part with the last piece of Avanthal she had been allowed to bring with her. Having left the city under the conditions she had she couldn't imagine ever being allowed to return.

Glancing up she was so caught up in her own troubles she almost tripped over several shoppers and didn't notice the lush goods set out on each of the stalls. At least, not until she heard the familiar Ho of the trader. "Ho! Young lady of the sea!" Turning, forcing her lips to curve upwards at the corners she beamed at the trader. She was genuinely glad to see the man, if not deal with the creature he carried for her. "Ho!" She copied, "How was your travels." "Oh you know, you know." He waved his hands dismissively though Una knew his travels were much harder than he was letting on. Travels always were.

"Hows Veek?" Una queried peeking into the caravan. "Quite a noisy troublemaker miss!" The man chortled, "Had to sleep miles away from the bird to get a wink." Una didn't understand everything he said but laughed politely anyway. "Well, I should get Veek off to the aeries to be cared for after such a rough trip but I would be delighted to help you set up your shop when I'm finished and here about your travels." "Oh yes Miss! As I would like to hear about yours." Una couldn't help but grin. Round and perpetually smiling one couldn't help but be put in a good mood near the old man. Even his helpers were joking in the background, as easily as all Vantha were. Feeling a pang at the thought Una turned her attention back to the beast.

Nearly the size of her Una wondered how she would get the creature to the Aviary without any trouble. After Lavira's demise she had hunted and found it after much effort, but it wasn't an easy place to get to even without the heavy beast in her arms. Disrupted from her thoughts by the whistling trader Una glanced from the bird to the young man approaching. Broad shouldered, and towering over her she instantly recognized the red haired Inartan who had accompanied the trading party in Avanthal. "Help the young lady with the...Veek?..." He glanced at Una and she nodded assuring him he had named him correctly, "Wherever she wishes to go." Easily lifting the bird from the caravan Una released a sigh of relief. "Thanks." She said through a genuine grin having forgotten just how helpful the Vantha were already. Handing over the hundred gold Miza Una nodded to the Inartan and let him follow her as they walked through the heavy marketplace crowd.

Una struggled not to turn back as the climbed the narrow path the Inartan grunting and panting behind her. Long, steep and narrow it was a struggle to carry the weight alone but the wide crate made it impossible to get an easy grip. The end of the crate hung dangerously over the edge of the pathway making Una repeatedly and anxiously warn the man to, "Be careful, be careful.". More to assay her own fears as it had no real impact, the man was being as careful as he could. "Shyke! Will you stop twittering!" The man scolded. In Nari, Una couldn't understand what the man had said but the annoyance in his voice was unmistakable.

Biting back several other comments as they continued up the path Una began to feel dizzy from the height. Her chest laboured to get oxygen from the high elevation. Wondering if they should stop and rest soon Una quickly decided it was a bad idea. There was nowhere for the man to set the cage while they rested nor anywhere to sit without dangling ones legs over the edge which made Unas stomach swim with fear.

Just when Una was sure she was going to be sick they found the platform with the low railing. Several falcons and ravens turned to peer at them but quickly resumed their sunbathing or napping positions. None of them ate fish so though Unas smell doubtlessly intrigued them it certainly didn't remind them of food which was fortunate for Una.

The white floor made Una smile to herself. Everything else in Wind Reach was grey or brown and the familiar luxurious colour eased the blossoming anxiety in her chest. How much was this going to cost? Would they take such an unusual bird? Could they get enough fish to feed him?

Entering the large cave Una wrinkled her nose. The smell of ammonia was rank in the heat. Taking a few steps back, and almost bumping into the Inartan, she jostled him as he set down the cage. Grumbling at her he quickly moved away to sit down and rest for the long trip down with the travelling cage.

Massive, with several birds of various sizes there was none present as large as the Dire hawk within the cage. Two feet tall, it could only have come from Taldera and would be an enormous burden to the aeries she realized.
A man approached almost immediately, not hiding his interest he grinned widely at Una obviously recognizing her species since no confusion dizzied his eyes.

"Una Tanta." She offered her name and her arm. Clasping her forearm in a shake he nodded, "Opolo," He offered in return not taking his eyes off her even as he nodded to the crate, "What have you brought me?" Una couldn't help but blush at his attention, it wasn't very often someone stared with such obvious lust that even she would notice. "O-oh uhm, a Frosthawk." Wrinkling his brow he finally looked away from her to crouch down and peer through the bars "Oh my!" He exclaimed, "She's massive..." "She?!" "Oh yes...she is a she." Una grinned, "Well Veek is a silly name then."

"She is a dire hawk." Una explained, "U-uhm...she eats fish mainly, how much would it be to keep her here?" She asked quietly. "Well...she must eat a massive amount at that size. We can provide her with what we have at 1 gold miza a day but only if you supply her with the other half of her diet." Una nodded trying to keep the horror from her face. She was glad they were willing to keep Veek, but the price was debilitating. She couldn't afford to keep the creature here for long and would certainly have to sell the beast, much to her dismay.

"Alright." She had a hood and jess with Sizzles silver bells sewn into the edges to keep her calm during her travels but it had obviously been removed every once in a while to give her a chance to look around. "I have a hood and jess for hi-her. I'd like to keep her here for a week or two." She suggested offering the man seven gold miza.

Raising his eyebrows Opolo nodded slowly, "Sssssure. We can get her set up, I think the largest of our stands should hold her. Is she relatively tame?" "Not when I last handled her..." Una warned. "We don't normally allow potentially dangerous birds to stay here, especially ones as large as her." The gleam in his eye made her take an involuntary step back. The sun at this height made her white body glow attracting more attention than she wished from others moving about the area.

"I can train her for you...for something in exchange." He offered. Una frowned in response, "I'll teach you and her to work together if you take me for swimming lessons. Deal?" He offered a hand, the smell of the brine wafting into Unas nostrils. Relaxing Una offered her own hand agreeing easily. He may very well be getting twice the benefit, getting to work with a bird like Veek as well as getting swimming lessons but Una didn't dare argue for fear he would revoke the offer. Handling Veek would be integral to selling her or even keeping her if she could be convinced to catch her own food and still return to Una.

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Postby Claire on April 6th, 2014, 5:13 am

Claire had finally begun to grab some shut-eye in her frosthawk form by the time Una had found the merchant and begun to talk to him. The brief exchange was nothing more than a dull throb to Claire as she perched within the cage, her head tucked down beside her wing. It wasn't until the jostle of the cage being lifted by the helpers that Claire's body begun to move, her head lifting up and turning so that she could look around. Through the bars she could see the workers, the plump merchant and an inartan. She couldn't spy her owner anywhere nearby, though.

"Of all the people to be indebted to..." She thought sourly, her head turning to pay attention to the workers as she was carried, "At least I am safe... but I could have easily flown across Taldera to this place." She sighed internally, her beaked head careening downwards in an exaggerated state of exhaustion, "Then again... it is nice. She has taken such wonderful, loving care of me. Even during the time where I did not know her well... and now a whole season has passed. Why must I have such human feelings?" She was snapped out of her thoughts as the cage was sat down abruptly, in the aerie that apparently would become her home.

Her eyes narrowed in disgust. She knew exactly what this would mean for her. Hooded and jessied again, all because Una still didn't trust her. "It's her fault that I'm not friendly." She thought in disdain, "She's the one who keeps putting that hood on my head day in and day out. She won't even let me fly at all because she thinks I'll run off... puh." She thought with a mental burst of air from her proverbial lips, a sure sign that she held some form of anger towards Una. "To be encaged like this... disgraceful."

Una finally came into view, accompanied with a man who appeared to be the local falconer. Claire teetered forward, careening her head to the side to get a better view of the pair as they shook hands. "He seems rather enticed with Una." Claire thought to herself. Her thoughts were cut short when the man got close to the cage, exclaiming about her size. "Is he calling me FAT?!" She wondered, appalled.

Thankfully, though, he was simply remarking of her size, and not implying anything of her weight. Not only was the falconer surprised, Una seemed to be a bit shocked that Claire was a female. Heck, even Claire was a bit surprised when the falconer knew she was female just by a quick glance. It was a bit remarkable.

Una and the falconer, who was apparently called Opolo, began to talk about how she would be kept and how much it would cost her. Claire frowned internally, only managing a slight slant in her hawk eyes for Una to see her displeasement. "A miza a day? That's a bit outrageous! I can fend for myself, I'll have you know!" If she had lips and arms, she would be scowling and crossing her arms over her feathery chest. Then Una brought out the jessies and hood. "The petch I'll be restrained like that!" She thought, broadening out her wings and cawing in protest.

After the exchange was acquitted between Una and Opolo, the man drew a pair of gloves from his belt, slipping the leather over his hands as he approached the cage. Claire's head turned towards him, her eyes sparkling a bit intelligently. "If I am to evade captivity from those two, then this will be my only chance." She thought as she watched the falconer unlatch the cage door and open it slowly.

A surge of adrenaline kicked in as Claire began to realize how dangerous this might be for herself and the man. She didn't have any intent on hurting him, but if he impeeded her release, she would have no choice. Her heart began to beat rapidly as Claire manifested her Djed, controlling the flow into the general areas of her wings. She would get a short, swift chance of escape before the Flux wore off. Pray to Syna that she didn't run into anything. Then the door opened and the man reached inside, but Claire was ready. She had leaned forward with her haunches poised to push off, her wings already spread.

What happened next seemed to occur in slow motion. Claire brought her wings down and back, her legs pushing herself off of the stand in the center of the cage. Opolo's eyes widened when he realized that Claire was taking off. The surge of Flux magics concentrated into her wings helped with the sudden push-off from the stand, propelling Claire's body forward. She rocketed out of the door, shifting upwards as she exited the cage, narrowly missing the falconer's face before he could react to the flurry of feathers, wind and dust that barraged his face.

Claire was air-born into the aerie, which luckily had a slightly higher roof than the average building, allowing Claire to even out her Djed flow mid-air and straighten herself so she was hovering in the air, her keen eyes shifting along with her head as she went and got a better view of the room. She could see the several dozen stands, each meant for a different size of falcon. There were only a few that were empty and not stained with the smell of ammonia. Claire could only assume that they were unused, and so she flapped her way over to one of them, settling down on the stand and partially folding her wings inwards.

"Thank Syna I didn't hit the roof..." She thought to herself as her keen eyes turned towards Una and Opolo, who was still recovering from being thrown back onto his hands and feet in a crab-like position. "Let's hope they get the message not to use those petching contraptions." Claire's eyes narrowed slightly at the pair as she raised her wings in an intimidating way, leaning forward and stretching out her head to caw at the both of them warningly.
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Postby Una Tanta on April 6th, 2014, 6:48 pm

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Una tensed as he leaned down to unlatch the cage remembering Veeks viciousness in Avanthal. However, no falconer had handled her in Avanthal. Perhaps he would have a method that would work. Una could see Veek poised to lunge at the man, wings outstretched. Though Opolo didn't hesitate, even from this distance Una was intimidated and moved away slowly. The white shot that bolted from the cage sent both Una and Opolo falling backward in a plume of dust.

When Una looked up at Opolo his pretty sun kissed skin was decorated with rubble and his dirty red hair was even dirtier. Letting herself fall back onto her back Una laughed boisterously. "Y-you look so funny!" Looking up at him through eyes teary with laughter he relaxed from the shock and burst into laughter, "You don't look so prim yourself!"

Glancing at the white bird, the only one of the three still relatively clean, Una collapsed in a fit of giggles again. Puffing out her chest and screaming at them indignantly the expression on the birds face was so serious Una couldn't help but find it humorous. It had been so long since she had laughed the laughter was more explosive than she had anticipated and left her holding her aching stomach.

"Well...I don't think she wants anything to do with us!" Opolo replied from his place in the dirt. Both rising and dusting off their clothes Una chuckled, "That's an understatement." "Well...I'll grab her some food and see if we can lure her into the hood and jesses." "I don't think that's a good idea..." Una replied tentatively, "She's been stuck in one since we left Avanthal halfway through the winter. Maybe having a little fresh air and freedom will do her some good." "She might fly away and cause a lot of havoc..." Opolo replied warily, "If we feed her enough here she'll have no reason to roam right?" Una queried as they discussed the birds future.

"I suppose...I'll go grab some fish." He replied jogging off, eyeing the white bird warily. Unas expression had the same wariness as she approached. "You are pretty dirty from your travels little one, would you care for a bath?" It was the one thing they had bonded over in Avanthal, the only thing the bird had let her do with no arguments and Una would happily spend hours bathing the bird.

Gently laying a hand on the arm of a passing worker Una smiled, struggling not to scare the individual with her sharp teeth or the massive bird behind her. "Is there a place I can bathe her?" She asked awkwardly in Common hoping the man would understand. Shaking his head, "Here too high, use buckets and oil." He replied shrugging her off quickly and skittering away, eyeing the intimidating bird over his shoulder.

"I'll be right back." She murmured to Veek trotting off to find oil to care for the birds delicate feathers. She had quickly gotten used to chattering to the bird in Char after Sizzle had passed away and it came out naturally as she looked around. Fortunately, she found Opolo before any other Dek and explained her problem. Una wrinkled her nose when she approached him the smell of raw fish more pungent than the raw meat fed to every other bird in the aeries. He didn't look like he believed that she could get close enough to the bird to paint the oil on it but nodded, "I'll grab you some," and handed off the meat and water bowls.

Approaching Veek, Una hooked the bowls to the metal extensions. They were the only thing attached to the long stand that brought the bird to eye level with Una. "Food time!" She announced hoping the unusual fish would be received well by the hawk. The fish and water would certainly taste different coming from beneath the sulfurous underground of the mountains. Una herself had struggled to stomach the water for several days, but in this heat it was important that the hawk receive it well.

When Opolo came back, still dusty from their fall, he handed Una a small tin. It was round and half an inch deep. Taking the top off Una brought the thick oil to her nose inhaling deeply. The luscious scent of lavender made Una grin, "It smells nice but will it help clean her?" "It wont clean her on its own, she will have to preen but the oil will make it easier for her to preen all the little rocks and dust off. Oil also helps with water proofing, flexibility and is important for general wing maintenance." Unas mouth made a small o shape in surprise. "Then how do they manage in the wild?" "They have their own oil, but ours is manufactured and is used on birds with trouble producing oil or exceptionally dirty birds. Besides, it smells much better." He winked at Una making her blush.

"How much?" "2 silvers and a date." Caught up in the purchase Una was shocked by the reply and could only nod dumbly as they exchanged money and product. "We can set up the details when you next visit Veek." Opolo replied grinning at her. Still startled she continued nodding, "S-sure." Staring at his back as he moved on to his other duties Una almost walked into Veek as she moved to return to her.

What had made him want a date with her? No one had ever asked her for one before, what did one do on a date? Perplexed Unas mind was split as she spoke to Veek, "No water little darling, but this oil smells lovely and will get that travel grit from your wings much better than your own oil." Normally, Una would reach out very carefully ready to snatch her hand back should the bird lunge at her. This time she dipped the end of the fine brush in the oil and reached out to gently paint each feather without hesitation, her mind rerunning the events, analyzing man. She had never put oil on the Frosthawk before but had seen plenty Inartans in her childhood pampering their birds with it before.
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Postby Claire on April 6th, 2014, 8:21 pm

"What gall these two have!" Claire thought with a displeased mental frown, her eyes narrowing as she reclined her wings back onto her body. The charoda and the inarta were both laughing at her fearsome display. She could feel a twinge of anger boiling up her breast. "How dare they laugh at me." She turned her head away indignantly, not wanting to pay any more attention to the pair. They had a sickeningly sad way of moseying about what they wanted from each other. Claire could easily tell that the Inartan was interested in Una, and she could equally tell that the vice-versa of that was true for Una, for she was too tentative to be interested in him. Or she was just shy.

Either way, when Una suggested keeping her out of the hood and jessies, Claire felt the anger wash away into relief. She really did hate the musty smell that the hood had, and the taught clasp of the jessies about her feet. They would make it impossible for her to turn into her human form if she ever so needed to. And if there was one thing that the proud bird liked, it was her freedom.

When Una approached with the familiar fear that she seemed to radiate when dealing with Claire and spoke of bathing, Claire's defensive posture settled down and her head tilted to the side. Food, water and a nice soapy bath! "She might not be so bad after all..." Claire thought approvingly, wishing that her beak could smile to show her appreciation. But since it couldn't, Claire settled for a simple dip of her head, a sharp nod that could have been anything from a sharp tick-like motion or a 'yes'. Una had a loving way to how she gave Claire a bath, a motherly feeling to how she caressed her feathers with soap and water. Not even Claire was so dignified in how she washed herself without Una's help. Maybe that's one of the reasons why she tended to become so dirty after a while.

Cawing gently when the falconer returned with the fish and water, Claire watched Una slide the bowls into place. Claire's wings spread outward to their full extent as she leaned down and nibbled on the fish, lifting up a shred of meat to taste as it slid back into her beak and down her throat. It was a bit salty, a tad slimy but all-around it was similar to the fish she was used to. At least it was salt-water fish and not the soft, grimy fresh-water knockoff that she loathed.

Next, Claire dipped her beak into the bowl of water, submerging the boney structure into the liquid up to the nostril-notches that served as her nasal passage, leaving them open for her to breathe out of as her tongue lapped at the surface of the water, taking small splashed of liquid into her throat. The water was sulfury, and a bit tinged with various other minerals. She could taste an irony tinge to the water which concerned her, but all in all, she had little to protest about as she began to gulp down the water furiously.

When she finished, she looked up to see the falconer handing off a small tin of bathing oil. The exchange between them was one that made Claire roll her eyes, literally, at how sappy the two of them were. "Jeez, just kiss and get it over with... She thought to herself, cawing at them as if to urge them on, but when Una turned around and nearly walked into her stand, Claire reflexively took to the air, floating away from the incoming Charoda. When Una stepped back enough for Claire to land again, she fluttered back to her post and folded her wings into her body again.

Claire looked intently at Una when she spoke, cawing softly and reverberating a dull sound from her throat like a purr of sort when she spoke of the oil. She seemed to appreciate the thought of getting the grit out of her wings, her head bobbing in satisfactory response. Claire even extended her wing outward to the Charoda so that she could paint her wings with the oil.

Claire watched Una for a while, tilting her head off to the side curiously as she realized the charoda was deep in thought. "I wonder what she's thinking..." Claire pondered, watching the finned creature as she worked, "What are the chances of her falling in love with a human? Does she even know that they cannot mate?" Claire had quite a few questions that she really wanted to ask Una, yet she was still too timid in revealing that she was a kelvic to her owner. She didn't know how Una would react. So instead, Claire settled for keeping her wings extended and leaning down to devour the fish with only the slightest bit of hesitation.
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Postby Una Tanta on April 6th, 2014, 9:20 pm

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Gently running the paint brush over the birds shoulders she painted each feather individually, letting the oil gently drip down the wing. Forgetting about Opolo Una focused on the duty, carefully and gently plucking loose feathers that wiggled like loose teeth when she ran the oil over them. It was more difficult than she had anticipated since there were several layers of feathers. Leaning in closer she gently pushed apart certain feathers painting each layer carefully. The feathers, brittle from the heat and lack of water absorbed the oil quickly. Anxious, Una applied more until the wing was heavy with oil, each feather saturated.

Moving to Claires other wing she copied the pattern. Starting at the shoulder so the oil would trickle down the wing and not go to waste. Carefully parting the feathers and plucking any that appeared too loose. Smiling to herself as she worked Una gazed meekly at the bird as she nibbled on the fish flesh. Sizzle had always allowed Una near him and she had taken his presence for granted. These winged creatures not only represented a world she couldn't possibly penetrate, they made you earn their respect and love and somehow...that made it so much more precious.

The heavy oil would keep her from fly until it had dried but Una hoped, once it did it would have all the promising effects Opolo had promised. Thinking of his name instantly made her blush. Perhaps it was that he smelled of the ocean, in a place completely removed from her home but his warmth and willingness to help was more than could be said for many others she had met thus far in Wind Reach. It reminded her of Avanthal, the thought of which sent a pang of homesickness through her stomach.

She was grateful to be back with her family, childhood friends and amongst the birds she had so long admired. Free of Cy and in the warm arms of her new faith in Dira whose realm followed her ashore where Laviku couldn't tread she should have been delighted. But as free as she had felt when she left Avanthal was matched by how guilty she felt in the way she had left.

Stepping in front of the Frosthawk Una began painting her fluffy breast feathers frowning as they sank against Veeks breast. The air that made them fluff wasn't able to hold up the dampened feathers and Una stifled a giggle. She hardly looked magnificent when she looked half drowned. Many of the breast feathers were loose and shed away from the white body as soon as her fingers touched them. Gently kneading her breast Una massaged the bird as if she were giving her a bath.

The broken wing had healed better than imagined and though a small calcareous lump had formed near the joint it hadn't appeared to impede the birds flight so far if a few minutes ago were any indication. Moving to the birds back Una began working on the back and tail feathers. The bird was enormous and by the time she was done working through the feathers on her entire body the sun was threatening to set and Unas skin was beginning to parch from the high atmosphere and low moisture.

Her wings had dried by the time she had finished the birds back and tail feathers. Torn and rumpled, the long tail feathers were in the worst condition from standing in the travel cage and had absorbed the oil relentlessly. She already looked and smelled much better after one oil treatment and as Una stepped back to gaze at the beautiful bird she shook her head internally. There was no way she could sell something so beautiful, she'd simply have to find a way to afford her keep here.
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Postby Claire on April 8th, 2014, 12:09 am

The attention that Una gave to her wings was a bit too tentative and time consuming for Claire to sit through without a few movements. She shifted her feet upon the post a bit hesitantly, tilting her head every so often as stray feathers were plucked from her wings. The oil left her wings numbed with added weight, the oil seeping into each thread of her feathers. Claire recognized the weight from when she once fell into the sea while fishing. She could already tell that she would not be flying anytime soon. Even after Una finished with her wings and began to kneed her breast, Claire felt the heavy weight of the oil making her feel drowsy.

Her eyes lulled about in her head, the lids closing ever so slightly before they snapped open, Claire's determination to stay awake evident in her stern, hawk-like expression. "No way am I falling asleep..." She yawned mentally, not allowing her body to reflexively open her mouth to yawn as well.

"Bu-kaw!" She cried through her beak, spreading her wings slowly to wave them up and down as if to try to dry them off quicker. "Stop playing with my chest, Una!" She thought, batting her wings forward to tell Una to stop with the bath already. Claire's breast was clean of the loose feathers and she was rank with the sweet smell of lavender, but the massage was too much for her. She did not wish to fall asleep.

Leaning forward, she slipped between Una's hands to snatch up a whole fish, leaning back and lifting her head so her beak, and the fish, were facing skyward. Her beak opened only slighly to allow the fish to slide down into her mouth, through her throat and then into her stomach with a satisfying gulp. "You're messing up my lunch, Una." She thought to herself, turning her head to the side to stare at Una with one large, beady blue eye.

"What are you looking at?"
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Postby Una Tanta on April 11th, 2014, 8:21 am

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Una gazed back at the Frosthawk as she turned to leave and work her way back down the long staircase. The walk was long and the air dry and Una could feel her skin beginning to tighten as water leaked from her pores. She would have to slip into the baths soon and lounge, it was the only place she could escape the dry air if not the inexplicable heat.

Glancing at Opolos back as he began weighing birds and preparing their food Una smiled to herself as she approached him, gently and awkwardly on the back. "Tomorrow?" She found herself murmuring. Usually quite brave with others she found herself uncontrollably meek when she spoke to him. Jack and Cy had both been a part of worlds she desperately wanted to be a part of, but never could be. This wild haired red head smelled of brine and home and for once she was happy to spend her time with someone of a realm she knew so well.

"Sure," He grinned. Nodding politely Una turned to leave feeling the strength of his gaze on her back and delightfully aware what he was watching as she strode away, unconsciously adding an extra little swagger into her hips.
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Frosthawk Arrives [Abelu Aviary]

Postby Raien Ironarm Pitrius on July 20th, 2014, 9:13 pm

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Una Tanta :
Name: Una Tanta

XP Award:
Land Navigation +1
Observation +3
Socialization +3
Falconry +2
Negotiation +1
Flirting +2
Seduction +1

Lore Award:
Asking for Directions
Lavira: Fulfilling a Promise
Ordering a Frosthawk
Wind Reach: The Aeries
Wind Reach: Elevation makes Walking a Chore
Worrying over a Frosthawk's Care
The Aeries: Housing a Hawk
Opolo: A Swathe Negotiator
Agreeing to a Surprising Offer
Veek: A Surprisingly Spirited Bird
Falconry: The Many Uses of Oil
Opolo: Why would he want a Date?
Falconry: Oiling a Bird
Falconry: There are Many Layers of Feathers
Guild and Relief: A Potent Albeit Odd Combination
Falconry: To love a Hawk

Ledger/Items:
- 107.2 Gold Miza's

Grader Comments:
I love Wind Reach, Falconry, and just shopping threads in general. And thus, this was a real pleasure to read. That being said, I think you might benefit from reading the dialogue section of Gillar's Guide to Posting. It really helped me sort some things out with my writing, so I'm sure it'd help you to. Other than that, a fun read Una, keep it up!

Claire :
Name: Claire

Grader Comments:
Grade withheld due to inactivity, please refer to your inbox for more details. Thank you for your understanding. :)


Additional Comments :
Overall, I loved this thread. Especially how Una had no idea Claire is a Kelvic. Keep up the good work guys!
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