Lorelei

[Lorelei Letruce]

Lorelei Letruce Appearance Race: Kelvic Gender: Female Age: 4 Birthday: 55, summer, 510. Birthplace: Kenash Appearance: Lorelei is a beautiful young woman. She has fair skin, jet black hair, and beautifully mystical gold eyes with a diamond shaped pupil. In her human form she wears very dark clothes anything dark green, brown or black. Her typical outfit can consist of a black trench coat, dark brown cargo pants, a black shirt, and combat boots. In her animal form she is a great black panther. In both forms she is about 5'6” and in her animal form her tail is 36”. Character Concept Lorelei is a very solitaire person by nature. She doesn't like talking very much because she can be very awkward in social conversation with a human. Lorelei though will say what is on her mind if someone tries to make a fool of her or she knows they are making a fool of themselves. However, when happy she will be very pleasant and treat people with the utmost respect she thinks they deserve. She always tries to remember her manners but like most she doesn't always use them. She can also be a bit mischievous if in a humorous/celebratory mood. Lorelei’s ethics are simple really. She cannot let injustice go unpunished. She takes it upon herself to find the truth behind everything. Likes – When alone she likes to read a good romantic novel, or she will just sit in a dark corner of a room and just people watch for most of the day if she doesn't find anything more important to do that she deems important. Dislikes – She dislikes fire, the heat, the burning, the awful smoke it makes. She also dislikes slavers. Character History As a young girl growing up Lorelei has always been mischievous. She would get into so many things that her mother and father had to keep an extra close eye on her so she wouldn't accidentally eat something that would suffocate her or hurt her in any way. Her mother was a mouse Kelvic who just happened to mate with another Kelvic. Her father then left. Her mother had no idea what animal Lorelei would be until the day that she shifted. When she found out she was a panther her mother was so nervous to be around her and anxious about everything that she would do from then on that she kept her isolated at home in Kenash. Doing this though meant that she would have trouble making a bond with anyone later in her life. As she grew up she did learn many different things. Mostly from the books she liked to read for fun as a young girl. At two she was starting to mature and this actually worried her mother a bit as Lorelei is her first and only child. At three she was mostly done maturing but still at home with her mother not really knowing the world and what it had out there for her, but she also knew from her mothers stories that the world can be a cruel and unjust place. On the night of Lorelei's 4th birthday her mother decided it was time to let her daughter do what she wanted and followed her every step of the way into the bogy marshes. She wanted to let her daughter know that she could have freedom every once in a while and that the reason she was so overbearing was to show how she loved her. However, when it was really dark outside they were just heading down until her mother had stopped and pushed her into the brush in the swampy wetness. As she did she turned to the noises of men shouting and the hooves of horses. The men stopped at the sight of her and within minutes they tried to surround her but in a bright light and she transformed into her mouse and ran off to distract the men with chasing after her. A couple hours later Lorelei squeezed herself out of the crevice and she called out for her mother. When there was no answer she decided to go and look through the fences of the fancy homes her mother loved to look at. She hadn't seen anyone that looked like her or her animal form. So she decided to be on her way. With what little money she had at the time she packed some basic things she would need bought a tent package and went on her way to find her mother, making sure to grab her mothers locket before completely leaving. Language Fluent Language: Pavi Basic Language: Tukant Poor Language: Zithinese Skills Skill EXP Total Proficiency Skill 1 # Bow and Fletching 5 Novice Skill 2 # Wilderness Survival 10 Novice Skill 3 # Hunting, # Tracking 25 + 10 Competent Lorelei always sneaked away from her home to explore the marshes. Weapon Long Bow Lores Helpful Lores: Lore of Riverfall Layout Lore of Akalak Culture Lore of History of Riverfall Lore of Konti Culture Possessions 1 Set of Clothing (Colorful) -Simple Shirt -Simple Pants -Simple Undergarments -Simple Coat -Simple Boots 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: -Comb (Bone) -Brush (Bone) -Soap -Razor -Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth) -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel 100 Gold Mizas Heirloom: Mothers locket Housing Location: Riverfall House: Tent Package Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 GM 100 GM

[Crosspatch]

Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

• Please remove the "_" and replace it for a space in your account name.
• Please link your CS to your profile. This can be done through the user control panel.
• As a note, Denval was destroyed in the Spring 512 AV Djed storm and thus is not open to play during or after that season.
• Denvali is a dialect of Common. Those who know Common should be able to understand Denvali, for the most part.
• As a Kelvic you can speak the 'language' of your base animal naturally and fluently whilst in your animal form (of course, there will be some barriers between that of a house cat and a large cat).
• You appear to be missing your racial bonus. As a Kelvic your RB is +10 in Hunting or Foraging or Unarmed combat.
• As a note, Novice skills are 1 to 25, Competent skills are 26 to 50.
• Due to being Novice in Wilderness Survival can you please clearly state somewhere the one environment type your PC is familiar with? (Example types include: Desert, Forest, Hills, Marsh, Mountains, Plains, Sea or Underground).
• Please label your weapon skill as “Weapon: Weapon name.” For example to use a long bow it would be labelled as “Weapon: Long bow“.
• You appear to not have stated your chosen starter housing package. At creation you are only allowed only one of the starting housing options, which are either trading in the housing for an additional 500gm, have the starting apartment, having the boat starter package (in the case of Svefra) or have the tent package.

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


Crosspatch

[Lorelei Letruce]

I will work on that right away. Thank you for the review.