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Postby Oriah on March 14th, 2014, 7:50 pm

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Spring, Day 30, 514AV

Oriah's eyes snapped open as she woke with a start. She had been expecting the feel of hard earth beneath her and sounds of tweeting birds in the budding canopies above, having forgotten once again she was back within the city proper and not out with Mora in the woods on another one of their peculiar lessons.

Blinking slowly, the squire realized she was in a bed. A cramped one, and sharing a room with five other girls who were already up and about, stuffing their feet into boots and yawning sheepish greetings at one another.

"Oy, time to get up, Ori," one of them prompted before tugging on her simple tunic. "Don't want to be running laps on your first day here!"

"Ah, yes," Oriah responded with an embarrassed grin, extracting herself from course blankets as she reached for her clothes. "Thank you for the warning. I do not like running."

"Better hurry then!" the other girls chorused in unison as they marched out in to the mess hall for breakfast. One of them--Adi, the kindest of the five who had taken time to grant Oriah a nickname--peered at the Benshira's scrambling form with a sigh of envy before she closed the door. Adi was only fourteen, still coltish and awkward in her pubescent years. It was no wonder she chafed a little at her own, slow growth in the presence of the former dancer.

In fact, most of the other female squires were very much the same, since many had begun as pages. Oriah felt more than a little self conscious amidst all the budding youths. With the girls more so than the boys, because at least boys were transparent in their interest. The girls whispered amongst each other when they thought she wasn't listening and feigned politeness when they were caught sharing rumors.

One way or another, it had been let slip that the Benshira had formerly been a dancer, but was recruited as a squire barely a season ago. She was visiting temporarily at the dormitory due to the nature of Sera Mora's work and would be training with them indefinitely until her patron returned. For the most part, Oriah shrugged it off and accepted it as yet another one of Mora's tests. The Chaktawe was eccentric at the best of times, and a downright mystery at the worst.

Whatever it was that Mora wanted her to learn, she would learn it, Or face even more cryptic, trying tests upon her return.

****Twenty Chimes Later, After a Hearty Breakfast****

She squinted up at Syna's rising form, then back down at the line of targets. Two groups of squires, one male and one female, had joined together for archery lessons that morning. Amongst the rowdy teens, Oriah stood much taller than the rest, though she noted several of the boys surpassed her in their spurts of sudden growth.

"Silence, eyes up front!" their teacher, Sera Freya snapped. "If you lot handle your bows like you do your tongues, we'll all be making a trip to the infirmary by the end of the day. Think that's funny, Arin? Two laps around the field. Go."

A blond haired, gangly boy grimaced as he detached himself from his group and broke out into a brisk jog. His peers sniggered at his retreating back, though not loud enough to catch their teacher's further wrath.

Sera Freya scanned the collection of squires with narrowed eyes. She stopped at some point, then barked out, "You, boy!"

All eyes swiveled to fall on a well built teen with fire red hair and a nervous look about him. The Benshira wondered briefly what the boy's crime at been. Daydreaming? An untucked edge in his shirt? The suspension was palpable.

"What is your name, rookie?" the knight inquired as she stared him down, despite being several heads shorter than him.


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Postby Olaf on March 14th, 2014, 9:11 pm

Olaf was fiddling with his heavy crossbow, trying to recall the few words his patron had given him about how it worked, it gave him something else to do then dwell on the fact he was surrounded by complete strangers, complete strangers that luckily were to busy wagging their tongues at each other then to give him more then a surprised glance at his fiery red hair, but strangers still. He really wished his patron had allowed him to keep his set of armor for the day, but strangely he had said to leave it off, he really wanted to hide behind the visor and shield himself away from the world with a nice layer of steel at the moment. He let out a small chuckle to himself at the thought, how he had hanged in a short time, the fact he wanted to don the armor and hide behind it while at first he found every moment in the heavy suit cumbersome and heavy. Granted it still was heavy, but at least he was used to the heavyness, it even had something comforting too it.

He pulled his attention away from his crossbow and towards the knight that would be overseeing their archery training for today when she called out for their attention. Letting the single person who didn't give it to her run two laps around the training ground. He didn't get why the others where laughing really, it wasn't even a that big a punishment. His patron let him do that while wearing plate armor to warm himself up. He fidgeted underneath the gaze of the woman as she inspected the squires in front of her. Only for her gaze to suddenly fall on him, which suddenly made him feel really really small. Even if he was taller then her. His mind was racing as to figure out why the woman's attention suddenly fell on him, had she heard him laugh before she asked for their attention? Had she seen him fiddle with his crossbow. Or did she just dislike red haired people? He honestly didn't know and the fact he didn't know just made him more nervous. Then almost every other squire there looked at him and his nerves became even more rattled.

“Errr.. Olaf. My name is Olaf.” he timidly answered. Wishing that the woman could at least stop acting as if he was a criminal she needed to interrogate. “What you need?”
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Postby Oriah on March 16th, 2014, 12:28 am

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Both groups broke out in half-stifled giggles at the boy's answer. One fierce glare from Sera Freya, however, silenced most of their bubbling mirth.

Caught somewhere in between, Oriah found herself wearing a small smile at the bluntness of the redheaded teen's answer. He hadn't seemed to intend any rudeness on his part; it simply was the way he spoke. This new observation led her to believe he was different from the others, who had been bred and raised to be knights since they were old enough to be pages. They had learned to show a certain amount of deference and act with specific decorum to their superiors. But the boy named Olaf was different. An outsider, just like her.

"What I need?" the knight mused, raising one eyebrow. "For you to learn how to use the thing you're holding, eventually." She turned without warning, now facing the group of girls, and her brown eyes burrowed into the Benshira's asure ones.

"You there! What's your name?"

The girl gulped once before replying as firmly as she could manage. "Oriah, Sera. Oriah Azari, squire of The Green Company, fourth regiment."

Freya pursed her lips, though she did not look wholly displeased. "Very well, Squire Azari. Seeing as how you are visiting our ranks for a time, and that you have a bit more experience with the duties of squirehood, I think it would be good practice and sense to leave our newest brother in your care. Any objections?"

Oriah blinked in surprise. "No, sera."

"Good. Now, as for the rest of you, I am throwing you in pairs as well," the knight announced, scanning the rest of the youths with a stern expression. "You are to find someone who is not using the same weapon as you. Which, I hope will not be hard, assuming you all have a functioning set of eyes. You have thirty ticks to make this happen. Go."

A storm of motion and chatter broke out as the young squires scrambled to find themselves a partner. Oriah had to balk several times in her attempts to reach Olaf, until she finally decided to just dive into the fray, collisions or no collisions. She emerged a handful of ticks later and halted to a stop before the flame haired teen.

"Hello!" the Benshira beamed, holding out a hand in greeting. "Pleased to meet you, Olaf."

"Time's up!" Freya barked, cutting off the noise and commotion with one swift glare. "Form a row at the first mark, rookies. You know the drill. Take turns on your targets, note the differences in your partner's weapon of choice, and please, try not to poke each other's eyes out."

With a sigh and shrug, Oriah led her new partner to the closest mark to their straw targets. There were ten marks in total. Beginners usually started at the first and sometimes moved to the second or third by the end of the day. It was said that the best archers within the order didn't even bother with marks; they just shot from where ever they pleased. The former dancer pulled an arrow from her quiver and nocked it against her shortbow. She took a slow breath and drew back the string, struggling to keep her arms straight. One day, Oriah thought to herself, she hoped to be good enough to surpass all ten marks, but that day was a long time coming.

Especially after her arrow plunked into the ground some three feet away from the target, protruding upwards like an embarrassing marker of ineptitude for all to see. "Watch your stance, Squire Azari," Sera Freya instructed, tapping a long stick against the sides of the girl's calves. "Feet parallel, pull straight."

Oriah nodded and adjusted her stance. Then she pulled another arrow and loaded it against her bow, making sure to watch where her elbow ended up. After a few more quick, terse corrections from the knight, she let the arrow fly and watched with relief as it embedded itself into the outermost ring of the target.

"A little better, keep working at it," the knight nodded. "Squire Olaf, you're up next."


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Postby Olaf on March 25th, 2014, 4:46 pm

Olaf honestly didn't get why everybody burst out in giggles at his response Did he break some unspoken social rule, was there something funny about his answer that he didn't get. Olaf flushed as red as his hair, he didn't know what was going on, but he really wanted his helmet back now. If only to hide his embarrassment at the moment. Before he could ask them why they were laughing the teacher glared at them and they shut up quickly and the words died on his lips as he didn't want to pull the attention of the teacher back to him. Luckely for him she put her attention towards one of the female squires. He just watched as she repeated the question and tried to figure out what was so funny about his own answer and not figuring it out on his own. The entire idea of formal responses just flying straight of the redhead's head.

Seemed like she was going to be his partner for a while though, he could just ask her later. He started to walk over towards her, but then the teacher yelled to them to pair themselves up in thirty ticks and the entire group exploded in a flurry of activity. Still with a lot of luck and some ellbowing he managed to get to his partner. At least that didn't really faze him anymore after the training he underwent with his own patron. He shook the squire's outstretched hand and gave her an awkward smile.
“Same here. Nice meeting you...Oriah it was right?” He questioned. Any response on her part would have to wait for a while as the teacher barked for them to go get on their marks and start shooting. Unlike him she was using a regular bow instead of a crossbow. The teacher told him to take note of the differences between the techniques.. But all he knew of the crossbow was how to load it and how to fire it. Was there more to it then just pointing and pulling the trigger? Olaf felt completely clueless at the moment. But he guessed that wouldn't be out of place for stonewall's teaching, his patron did really have a sink or swim approach to teaching.

Olaf watched and waited as oriah got corrected after her shot and then walked up to the mark himself. He loaded the crossbow put it up to his shoulder, pointed it at the target and fired. The bolt didn't land anywhere close to the target, hitting the ground a few paces behind and to the left of it.

“Olaf, have you ever used a crossbow before?” The teacher barked out as she stepped closer. A few of the braver squires let out a chuckle at the newcomer, but a stern glare of the teacher cut that off quickly. Olaf couldn't help but chuckle in embarrasment though. He really was wishing for his helmet now. Just so he could hide from her piercing stare somewhere. “Ehm, not really. My patron just told me how to use it before focusing on other skills.” He admitted, looking at his own boots.

The teacher let out a sigh, though Olaf didn't know if it was because he said something wrong again or if it was because he didn't know a thing of how to use a crossbow.
“You knowing how to load it correctly is at least a good thing already. But Squire Oriah. Teach our new brother how to address the others in the knighthood will you?” Seemed like he failed her on both accounts, not good.

“Now go stand like you think you would stand if you wanted to fire a crossbow.” She commanded olaf. Who quickly did as she told. She then began prodding him with her stick, forcing him to get into another stance. “now this is a more stable stance to fire. Now load and shoot again!” She barked out.

Olaf didn't answer, he just loaded his crossbow, got back into the stance the teacher had corrected him into aimed at the target and pulled the trigger. Again he missed the target, but at least it hit the ground closer by it.

“An improvement at least. Now switch again!” she barked out again as she went on towards the other squires.
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Postby Oriah on March 29th, 2014, 5:07 am

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Oriah winced a little as their instructor berated the boy with all the tact and grace of the local smith. Then the thought, oddly enough, brought an image unbidden to her mind. An image of not just Olaf, but all of the squires as rough metals being beaten into fine weapons by the Order. And though their teachers were neither cruel nor unfair, as superiors often times could be, their training was no walk in the park. If they expected mercy and kindness from their enemies in the midst of battle, then they'd best find their occupations elsewhere.

Or, at least, that was what the Benshira had sometimes heard. From other patrons. Sera Mora was never quite so direct with her, much to her constant frustration.

At Freya's terse command, Oriah snapped back to attention and nodded her head before she had even processed what exactly the command had been. Once she did, however, she felt her spirits sink a little. Teach her brother how to address those within the Order? Not exactly the best way to garner some form of friendship with the younger squires. But, then again, they weren't here for something so simple and singular as camaraderie.

The knight continued to correct Olaf's posture and technique until he shot again, this time showing signs of improvement. Sera Freya seemed satisfied and shouted for another switch as she marched to chastise a different pair.

"Well done," Oriah smiled at her partner, nocking a fresh arrow to her bow. "And don't worry about proper names. It's quite simple, even I managed to learn it with my so-so Common."

The girl gave him an encourage nod as she raised her bow once more. Her accent was subtle, but evident. It had taken years and years to get as far as she did; the road had taught her many things, but mostly only the things that would help her survive. The Benshira had little capacity for things like poetry or extensive reading in Common, though she spoke it well enough. Still, it had taken her a few mistakes before learning how to address other members of varying rank in the Order properly, so she felt sympathy for the boy.

Oriah adjusted her aim, making sure to check her stance as well after Freya's most recent comments, and took a slow breath. She reminded herself to lock her left arm to steady the bow and avoid the string hitting her arm, but to not grip the bow too tight so as to let the whole thing kick to the side once she released.

Ahh, you're thinking too much, she scolded herself. Breathe, focus, shoot!

And she did, but the strain of her muscles after holding back the string so long caused the arrow to fly several rings off the mark. The squire loosed a huff of temporary dismay and rolled her shoulder to ease the tension. "Basically, you address a knight as Ser if he is a man, and Sera if she is a woman. Us squires don't get anything, except maybe brother or sister, and same goes for pages. I haven't met the higher ranks, so that's all I know."

Oriah offered a small shrug in apology, but it was as good as she could do with what little she knew. "Your turn!"


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Postby Archailist on August 15th, 2014, 4:18 pm

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Oriah :
Skills:
  • +1 Weapon: Short Bow
  • +1 Socialization
  • +1 Observation

Lores:
  • Olaf: The New Boy
  • Short Bow: Basic Stance
  • Short Bow: Don't Think Too Hard

+1 for Training
= +1 Shield Point

Olaf :
Skills:
  • +1 Weapon: Crossbow
  • +1 Socialization

Lores:
  • How To Address A Knight
  • Oriah: The More Experienced Squire
  • Crossbow: Stoic Stance

1 for Training
= +1 Shield Point

Notes :
Good thread, shame it was abandoned before it got down into the actual training!


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