Melos Nakar (Work in Progress)

[Melos Nakar]

Melos Nakar Race: Human Gender: Male Age: 18+ Birthday: 31st day of Winter, 496 AV. Birthplace: Syliras Appearance: Young Mr. Nakar is a very fit man. Although in most cases, fit men and women became that way through hard, physical labor, his was partly due to his blood. His father and his mother were both gifted on all things physical. Suffice to say, he is handsome and statuesque... Character Concept Ambition is the passion of a great character... said a great man a long time ago. And such was what was instilled in the heart of Melos. For although now in his bare adulthood, a simple farmer he is, he dreams of becoming more. Yet he is humble, as all great men should be. Perhaps too humble to the point of self-deprication... Character History It started out when a young woman gave birth to a baby boy. "He will be strong, like the two of us," she told her husband. "He is quite large, and his frame is thick. Built for farming. And maybe even a warrior." "You are right," said the boy's father. "I'll name him Melos. And he will inherit our passions." Melos grew up under a loving mother and a stern father. He was taught, early in life, the value of hard work. He was taught agriculture and husbandry, and became quite the capable farmer. It showed, early on, that he had a gift for physicality, and could withstand long periods of hard work. In his thirteenth birthday, his father gifted him a set of weightlifting equipments. "Use these," he said, "to further your strength." And he did as his father told him, strengthening and sculpting his body to perfection, giving him the physique he has now... Language Fluent Language: Common Skills Skill EXP Total Proficiency Bodybuilding 15 SP, 15 RB 30 Competent Agriculture 10 SP 10 Novice Farming 10 SP 10 Novice Lores Lore of Body Building: Hard work does the body good Lore of Agriculture: Some crops are better raised in certain seasons Possessions 1 Set of Clothing -Simple Shirt -Simple Pants -Simple Undergarments -Simple Cloak -Simple Boots 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: -Comb (Wood) -Brush (Wood) -Soap -Razor -Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth) -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel -Longbow -Longbow arrows (100) 20 Gold Mizas Heirloom: Greatsword Housing Location: Mithryn Outpost, Syliras, Sylira House: An average sized, single room apartment with a bed, table, a couple chairs, wardrobe, and complimentary chamber pot. Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 GM 100 GM Longbow -75 GM 25 GM Longbow arrows (100) -5 GM 20 GM Thread List None so far.

[Crosspatch]

Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

• The Character Sheet title must contain your Character’s name and nothing else. Please remove the "(Work in Progress)".
• At creation you have 50 skill points (SP) from the starter package to spend on skills. You have spent 35SP, please spend an additional 15 SP points on skills.
• Please expand upon your character description, for example incorporating things such as hair and eye colouring.

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


Crosspatch