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Tracking Trouble (Bor, Faolan)

Postby Inoadar on December 15th, 2014, 4:42 am

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Inoadar reached the shore and huffed his hundredth angry grunt. As he retrieved his horse, an impure Bloodbane he'd named "Handy", He muttered to himself about the current outrage. The Nitrozian-Moletta Sanitary Station had been broken into just a couple of days earlier, and for all the effort the Ebonstryfe investigators were going to, he might as well be conducting the search himself.

Naturally, his first inclination was to blame Clyde Sullins. The man was an Ebonstryfer himself, and no doubt had some pull with the men doing the actual work, not that they were doing a great deal OF it. The man was also the single most relentlessly intrusive and vindictive annoyance the poisoner had had to deal with since working things out with his previous nemesis, Norvis Barton, the smuggler.

But the more he thought about it, the more he began to think it might be the Nitrozians themselves. He'd started the NMSS with Valerius, a young aristocrat from that same family, and a woman who'd added the Moletta name. Inoadar had been perfectly content to leave his name out of the picture then. He'd been intent on reestablishing his 'Ino Vations' enterprise. Valerius had always been aloof in temperament. But both he and the Moletta woman had distanced themselves for some time and left Inoadar in charge.

Valerius had come back recently to step back into the role of administrator. And though Inoadar did not really care about the change of the guard, he thought it mighty presumptuous of the young fop to treat his role with such an air of entitlement. Inoadar had put as much money and effort into getting the NMSS up and running as any of the three. And while the Nitrozian socialite had been gone, Inoadar had still managed to get backing to set his new shop back up. But it had not been Nitrozian money that had enabled it. So Inoadar owed the fellow nothing.

He wondered now if the Nitrozians resented him going to the Valdinox faction instead of them. The timing was right. The attitude fit. The fact that it was mostly his gear at the facility that had been ruined or stolen followed the pattern as well. Naturally, he could never prove such a thing, and, Validnox backing or not, the Nitrozians were no one to trifle with.

The whole episode was infuriating to Inoadar. He could just imagine both the stuffy Nitrozian and the insufferable Sullins sitting at some richly decorated table, sipping wine and toasting their malicious conniving against their mutual target. 'If only I could have left them a little surprise in that bottle of wine, then we'd see who'd be laughing.' he sneered to himself as he crested a hill.

Another setback from the break-in was the necessity of recouping his stock of Kelvic blood. It was a major component of 'Wildleash' poison. This was a very lucrative compound with so many Kelvics enslaved in the Ravokian culture. It enabled easy capture of all members of the shape-shifting race.

Inoadar was not truly an advocate of slavery, feeling it only served to weaken the owner, as they became ever more dependent on slaves to do their work for them. But he was definitely an advocate of making mizas. And Wildleash was at the TOP of that list. He had a decent stock of the toxin in reserve at his own shop. But it was always a part of his seasonal regimen to go on an excursion or two to collect more of the blood. All he needed to do was find a Kelvic, hit him with a dart of the toxin, and wait for it to render the target unconscious. This would be followed by an inflicted docility that was nearly as good.

And there were always Kelvics about. Even as he crested the hill, he saw one. He'd been glad he'd spent some time with that hunter, Ghahinder Telemnar. The man had showed him the benefit of keeping upwind of your target, even if it necessitated a roundabout path of attack.

This Kelvic was a wolf. Inoadar saw no indication of a pack, or of any hurry on the part of this loner to meet up with one. And while this was not conclusive, it had given the poisoner reason to keep an eye on him. But it was the approach to the treeline, and the flash of light accompanying the shift back to human form that was the real giveaway. Inoadar made for the trees on horseback now, keeping the hills as cover.

He knew from past encounters with Kelvics that they'd have their human things stashed in some niche. Whoever this was, he was most likely going to spend some time gathering his things and getting dressed. Inoadar tied his horse to a tree, and slipped through the brush as he loaded his blowgun with Wildleash. He had his leather loop bracer on, with his usual complement of toxins as well.

He got closer to his target, and was just about to strike when it struck him that there was something familiar about this one. He slowed his approach, as he squinted, the blowgun prepped but no longer held at the ready. There was time, this guy was afoot. And now that he was dressed, he'd not be able to shift so quickly. Also, now that he was human, his senses would not be so sharp.

Inoadar crept patiently behind him, waiting for an opportunity to see his face, there was something familiar about his hair, that much he knew.

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Tracking Trouble (Bor, Faolan)

Postby Faolan Lundgren on December 15th, 2014, 7:49 pm

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That itch had come back, the need to run in the forest. It had nagged and tugged at the back of his mind for days before he had finally broken down and decided to take a trip out of the city. He had just recently taken a hunting trip so another one wasn't in order. This trip would simply be to get rid of that nagging urge that was gnawing at his insides. Taking the ferry out of the city only seemed to intensify the need and he paced the deck restlessly. He didn't care that he was annoying some of the other passengers. The moment the ferry stopped he leapt off and headed for the trees. He of course wasn't going to shift right there where everyone could see him, but instead headed to a more secluded area where it would be a little safer.

Once he found a spot to hide his clothes he gladly peeled them off and stuffed into a hollowed out section of a tree. Shifting into his wolf form he trotted off into the woods happily enough. After wandering aimlessly for a few bells he came upon the smell of a groundhog. Unable to pass up the opportunity of a fresh kill he stalked his prey carefully. His mind was completely focused on this kill. When he spotted the furry little creature he waited until it was far enough away from its den that he could grab it up before it could dive back in and be out of his reach.

Unfortunately he didn't realize there was another hole for it to disappear in to nearby. When he charged forward to seal his kill he found himself without one. Growling in frustration he moved on; knowing that the animal wouldn't reemerge for a while now. Having botched that kill he put his nose to the ground and began searching for another viable option. Tracking a rabbit's scent trail through the trees he managed to jump on it before it could run from him. Killing the squealing animal quickly he made fast work of his meal.

Once he was full he found his way to a stream where he got a long drink of water and washed the blood from his fur. Looking up at the sky to try and judge the time he glanced around and realized that he had strayed farther out than he had intended to. Turning around and trotting at a steady pace back towards where his clothes were hidden he enjoyed the sound of his paws padding on the ground and the fresh air ruffling his fur. Content with his little trip he eventually came to the tree he had hidden his clothes in.

Shifting back into his human form he stood up and began pulling his clothes back on. Tying his cloak around his throat he ran a hand back through his shaggy black hair and sighed faintly. He didn't particularly want to go back to the city just yet, and he still had a bell or two before the ferry returned to the dock. Thinking over what he wanted to do he turned towards the lake and began to wander down that way. He figured he'd at least go watch the water splash ashore or something. It may not be all that entertaining, but it was better than going and sitting on the docks hoping to not be noticed by the others.

Leaving the hood of his cloak down he began idly making his way back towards the lake, humming softly to himself. Something was nagging at him again though, he couldn't quite place it though. It felt almost like he was being watched but he couldn't hear or smell anyone nearby. Deciding he was just being paranoid because of thoughts of returning to the city he ignored that little voice in the back of his head that told he was in danger. Glancing around just in case he frowned to himself and let out a faint sigh, being so paranoid about someone finding out he wasn't a citizen was starting to translate over into the time he was supposed to spend relaxing it seemed.
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Postby Bor on December 16th, 2014, 4:11 pm

''M-mo-monster!'' Bor heard someone scream as he carried a large rock in his hands. He ignored, like he had always ignored the horrified screams people made when they first saw him. He kept walking as few guards stopped him, these ones were new Bor realised. ''St-stop right there you beast!'' one of them shouted looking like the leader of the trio. Bor sighed and dropped the boulder, making loud thump. He reached for a piece of parchment in his loincloth and showed it to the guards. ''I'm slave of Nitrozian, doing my job'' he said in deep voice. The leader took the note and read it quickly. In it it said that Bor did belong to the Nitrozian family and that he was carrying a task for the Nitrozian family. The guard looked suspiciously at Bor before handing the piece of paper back to him. ''Let him pass'' he said to the others. Bor took the parchment and place it back where he had took it before picking up the rock without much of an effort. That small piece of paper had saved his life multiple times. Most members of Ebonstryfe already recognized him, but there were always some that saw him as nothing more than a wild beast. With that parchment he could prove that he wasn't a threat to other people.

As he reached to the docks he found that the ferry wouldn't leave any time soon. Since he didn't want to cause another scene with other guards that didn't recognize him, Bor decided to leave the rock near the docks. Even though it was valuable thing for his new mistress Celia, it wasn't valuable to others, nor did any thief had the strength to move the massive rock. He started heading towards the woods near docks. There nobody wouldn't see him or attack him. At least that was what he hoped for.

While walking in the woods he felt more relaxed than he had been in years. The untouched nature reminded him of his goddess, Caihya. He gave a faint smile and looked around, marveling the beauty of the woods. A small tought rised to his mind to stay forever in the woods, but it left as soon as it had come. He wasn't free, he didn't choose where he lived, his master did. And now his master was the Nitrozian family. Bor's thoughts were interrupted when he noticed a black haired man walking in the woods. He stopped in his tracks to watch the man. Bor naturally started shifting his fur color to match the vegetation around him to hide himself from the man before he could notice him. He knew what kind of reaction it would cause if he was seen.
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Postby Inoadar on December 19th, 2014, 6:36 am

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Inoadar sneered inwardly, 'Well, this is convenient. He's going the very way I'm planning to go after I take a sample. I don't want to get too far from 'Handy' though.' he said to himself, referring to his horse. He'd wait until he was just about even with the latitude of where Handy was tethered, then dart him.

He was closing the distance to his target as they came closer to that point. Something nagged at him as he garnered more details of his target's appearance. Something about that shaggy hair. He'd seen it somewhere before. And it bothered him that it seemed as if it was in connection to someone that had done him a great service. 'What was it?' he puzzled silently.

He decided quickly though, that he would not be doing any lasting damage to the fellow. So it wasn't like he was really doing something that bad to him. And it was certainly nothing new to have Kelvics that disliked him. He continued this reasoning as he raised the blowgun to his lips.

But his rationalizing died the moment the Kelvic turned for some reason and he saw his face. He still had time to make the shot. The distance was actually perfect. He could hardly miss, but was far enough away that the kid couldn't reach him to deflect it. But he couldn't draw the breath to shoot, against the sudden pit in his stomach.

It was...what was it? Falen something...Lugrid, or some name like that. He'd gotten the name at the time of the incident in front of the Temple, but couldn't remember it right now. The name didn't matter though. It was the fact that this was the kid that had safeguarded Vera when the bounty hunters had come to use her as a hostage to force his cooperation.

The intent to dart this Kelvic sputtered and died in a surge of shame. This kid had risked death at the hands of the bounty hunter's cohorts, as well as enslavement by the Ebonstryfe for his involvement in the disturbance. Yet he'd remained, keeping watch over little Vera, Inoadar's feisty little apprentice.

He tried to enforce his fatalistic philosophies to justify himself. Normally he'd say it was just 'Falin' - what's-his-name's destiny to have been in Ravok at that time, made available by fate to be of service. But it was Vera! He couldn't just write that off. He tried to tell himself he owed this Kelvic nothing, but the thought just wouldn't settle without seeming like mockery. There was actually the thought of 'What would he say to Vera, if she found out?'

Falin just kept looking at him, like he was daring him to do it. Letting him go ahead and wrestle with his sense of justice and honor '...Or was he?...' Inoadar suddenly had the sense that the Kelvic's eyes were looking past him. He knew it might be a ploy by the Kelvic, but he spun nonetheless, to see if someone was coming up behind him.

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Postby Faolan Lundgren on December 19th, 2014, 5:44 pm

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A sudden shift in the breeze carried two new scents to his nose and he turned his head in the direction they had come to him from. One he recognized as Vera's guardian, N-something. He could never remember the man's name even though he had been introduced after the whole temple debacle. He hadn't seen Vera or the rest of her group since then so it was easy to forget their names. The moment that the man who had been stalking him turned around to see what he was looking at his gaze latched on to the man who had something in his hand. Blue eyes narrowing at the man's intentions for following him around the woods with a strange object in his hand he watched the man suspiciously.

His gaze shifted though to something further off in the trees. He didn't recognize the scent, but it was that of some sort of animal. Or animal-like being. His nostrils flared as he sought out the source of the smell. His eyes eventually settled on a shape that attempted to blend in with the surroundings, but was still out of place. He had spent a good portion of his life in the woods and so there was something off about the large camouflaged figure. This figure didn't appear to want to harm him though so his attention returned to Vera's guardian. There had to be a reason that the man was following him around the woods with some thing in his hand, and there was no way it was a good reason.

Turning to fully face the man his eyes narrowed as he watched the man carefully. "What are you doing?" he asked in a sharp tone. He knew that he was probably in some sort of danger, but confronting the man may at least give him enough time to disappear into the woods. Especially if the big being lurking in the background decided to make a move. It would take too long to shift so he would have to flee on foot and disappear quickly. This would make getting back into the city more difficult too. How would he be able to avoid this man if they ended up on the same ferry back to Ravok? A faint growl managed to pull itself from his lips as he thought over how complicated his life was going to become if this man intended to harm him.
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Postby Bor on December 19th, 2014, 8:07 pm

Bor had trusted on his camouflage to hide him from the man, but now it seemed like he was looking at his direction. Had he been seen? No, that wasn't possible, it was just a normal human, he couldn't possibly see him. He decided to stay put, otherwise his camouflage would fade and give him away to the man. A sudden movement caught his eye.

There was another man! How had he missed him? He was holding something in his hands but Bor couldn't say what it was. The man also seemed to look in his general direction. Bor was getting nervous. If these men thought he was lurking them, they might attack him. Bor somewhat knew how to defend himself but he didn't like the use of violence. Maybe the two hadn't noticed him and were just aimessly staring at his direction. That was at least what he hoped for.

The man that was farther away shifted his gaze to the other man and asked a question. Now Bor was almost sure that they hadn't noticed him. His muscles were tense because of his nervousness but Bor didn't notice it. He kept still and watched what the two men would do next.
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Postby Inoadar on December 21st, 2014, 4:00 am

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Inoadar's feelings were greatly mixed at the sight of the approaching ape. He was both shocked and relieved. He'd never seen such a creature before. The oddly snubbed snout and overly long arms defied his classifying it as a bear. But it looked every bit as powerful. He assumed it to be a Kelvic of some sort though, due to its slight degree of clothing.

Being bipedal, it fit that the loincloth would be able to remain in place during a shift. And if the thing was just purely animal, it wouldn't be wearing clothes at all. The collar was a puzzling item though. Why would it need one when in this larger animal form? Kelvic collars were put in pace when the victim was in its smallest form, so it had reason not to shift, for fear of crushing its own throat.

His relief stemmed primarily from his negated need to draw blood from the 'Falin' kid from the Temple. He did not like that he'd felt reluctance to exploit the kid. Whether or not he'd aided Vera should not be of any relevance. Inoadar had long established his philosophical rationales to ignore such concepts of debt and obligation. But he was smart enough not to lie to himself. He DID feel a debt to 'Falin', and he knew he'd be a fool to deny it. He would simply have to deal with that problem if it became necessary.

For now though, it could be set aside. He had a whole new target to gather Kelvic blood from. First though, he let the wolf kid know where he stood. "I know you helped Vera, kid. And I want you to know that all I was gonna do, in the end, was draw a little blood." He grinned coldly, "Next time, maybe. For now..." he turned to face the Jamoura, still believing it to be a Kelvic. "...I've got a much larger source."

He took a few steps in Bor's direction, bringing the blowgun back into ready position. He didn't really care whether Faolan saw the complete effects of Wildleash or not. It was not as though he expected ANY Kelvic to willingly subject themselves to such an ordeal. He put the smaller Kelvic out of his thoughts as he got within range of Bor.

He sneered as he brought the blowgun to his lips, "I don't know what kind of freak Kelvic you are fella, but your ass is mine now. You some kind of weird experiment? Someone try to figure out how to make an ugly bear even uglier?" He chuckled as he drew breath to fire. "Let 'em know they succeeded, when you get your fat ass back to the KRI."

He blew sharply, hearing the woody pop of the released air pressure as the dart flew free of the shaft. The bear-thing was close enough, and sitting so conveniently still, that he could hardly miss. Nor did he. "Gotcha." he gloated as he waited for the toxin to take effect in the onset of uncontrolled form shifting.

There was a sudden hollow in his stomach as nothing happened. Inoadar found himself motivated to reconsider the obvious strength of the figure before him. It was clearly not happy to have been stuck by the dart, though it was not attacking in response. It occurred to him that maybe it truly WAS some kind of experiment.

'Maybe it's actually stuck in some mid shift form...That would account for some resistance to that aspect of the toxin.' the poisoner said to himself. It seemed as if the ensuing 'passivity' was in place though, since it was not attacking. He thought perhaps the thing's skin was so thick it had partially defeated the dosage.

Inoadar scowled and felt to assure himself of the presence of his dagger. He quickly rifled through his inner pockets, finding an additional dose of Wildleash. He pulled his dagger and smeared the pasty substance on the blade. He was cautious enough to take a moment to sense within himself for his own pulse and extend his sensitivity to "feel" the flow of life force within himself. He thought it was prudent to have The Flux ready, just in case.

"Okay, ugly, let's do this the hard way..." he growled as he started toward the Jamoura again, his dagger in hand.

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Postby Faolan Lundgren on December 21st, 2014, 7:42 pm

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Faolan's eyes narrowed as he listened to the man explain what he was doing following him around in the woods. If all he wanted to do was draw blood why didn't he just ask? The young Kelvic pondered over that for a few moments as the man turned his attention to the odd figure that had been lurking in the background. Looking up at the figure as Vera's guardian began to talk to the other being he wondered what this other creature actually was. He didn't think he was a fellow Kelvic, as N-whatever his name was seemed to think.

Curiosity kept him where he was though. He wanted to find out just what this other animal was. He also wanted to see what N was actually going to do. Tilting his head to the side as he heard a popping sound he wondered what the man had just done to create such a noise. Watching the being that had been the target of the noise he wondered if N had actually done anything to harm him since he didn't react like he had been hit with anything. Unless of course N was a magic user and that popping sound was some sort of strange magic.

When N seemed to be just as confused as he was by the fact that nothing happened he felt a twinge of amusement. He could see the wheels in N's head spinning as he tried to put together a reason for why nothing was happening and coming up with a plan to get what he wanted anyway. Leaning against a nearby tree he waited to see what happen. When a dagger was produced and something applied to the blade he frowned a little bit. He knew that generally only poisons were applied to blades, and that dying via a poisonous wound was rather painful; or so he had heard from the stories that he had been told while on the road with the merchants.

As N started forward towards the beast that was a few yards away from them he pushed away from the tree. He wasn't sure if he should allow N to harm the other being. Then again how was this any different than when he hunted down his own prey? It appeared that N's prey had come to him, lucky for Faolan it seemed. Indecisive on whether he should interfere or not he lingered in the background clearly not wanting to take part in the attack, but unsure as to whether he should help the other animal or not.
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Postby Bor on December 22nd, 2014, 6:52 am

The two men in front of Bor had a small chat before the man closer to him turned to face him again. They had seen him after all, maybe his camouflage skill had gotten rusty. He hadn't used it in many years Bor thought. He started moving closer to him before he placed a walking stick to his lips. At least that what Bor thought it was. The man made some nasty comments about Bor, but he had used to being called all kinds of things. But the word ''Kelvic'' was surprise. Did this man think that he was a Kelvic? Bor knew that Kelvics were humans that were capable of shifting to an animal and back, but he had no idea why the man seemed to be on a hunt for one.

Suddenly there was small but sharp pain in his right shoulder. Bor looked at his shoulder and plucked out the source of the pain. It was a small dart, which looked even smaller in his massive hand. He flicked it away before turning to face the man, frowning at him. The man seemed confused for some reason, but Bor couldn't tell why. He couldn't be that stupid to think a small dart like that would do any serious harm to a Jamoura.

The man then took a knife out and started heading towards Bor. ''I wouldn't do that if I were you'' Bor said as he stood still. He seemed to ignore his warning and kept getting closer. He didn't want to hurt the man but at the same time he didn't want to get hurt either. ''I'm sorry for this'' Bor said with sad tone and took a massive swing with back of his meaty hand to knock out the man. The swing was a slow one though and his tensed muscles made it even slower.
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Postby Inoadar on December 26th, 2014, 2:57 am

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Inoadar's readied Flux didn't serve him as well as he'd expected. He was torn, at the key moment, to either direct it to his legs to dodge the swing, or to lunge with the blade to inflict the poison. As a result, he managed only to stand his ground and take the hit. It was possible that his new adversary would be surprised that he was not toppled by the impact. But it would be no surprise that his bell was soundly rung, leaving him reeling on a couple of stumbling steps as his eyes struggled to regain focus.

It looked as though he'd managed to hit the ape-man's arm with the blade though, as he fought to bring the two images of a slightly blood-streaked dagger into singular focus. Before he completely accomplished that though, he tasted blood, and thought he might have had the blade slammed against his own face by his target's swing.

The added fact that there was no onset of uncontrolled shape shifting by the gorilla seemed to support this conclusion. It simply didn't occur to him that he might have had a tooth loosened by the hit. He sneered and redirected the Flux to strengthen the muscle group that would allow a quick backpedal after another lunge with the blade.

"All right, you squash-faced petch! You want to do this the hard way, I'm game." he taunted, as he moved in a perimeter that he estimated would keep him out of his target's immediate reach. He assumed that once he hit the beast, the shifting would begin, so there would be no need beyond a single leap back to avoid a violent response. the poison would take over and he'd be able to stand and watch the creature succumb to its effects.

He lunged with the blade a second time.

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