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Name: Leon Hanns Sex: Male Race: Human Age: 24 Birthday: 43th of Spring 490A.V. Birthplace: Syliras Housing:
Languages: Fluent = Common Basic = Vani Poor = Ancient Tongue
Occupation: General Merchant Religion: Xyna
Appearance :
Leon's appearance is quite plain ans simple. He stands around about the average height of a male Zeltivian human, and weights just below average. His hair is brown and shot, and is somewhat unkept dispute his numerous attempts to comb it. His eyes are also brown in colour. Leon like simple clothing, preferring a plain shirt and pants over a fancy or flamboyant suit. Leon has a belt around his waist that has several pouches that contain different items such as mizas, snacks and general items; the belt also holsters his short sword.
Concept :
Leon Hanns is an aspiring merchant that aims to be successful. He hopes one day to open his own store in a city to his wares, but for now must make to with his horse and wagon. Leon learnt everything about the trade from his father, and is forever refining and expanding his knowledge. Leon's main tool business is his tongue. Building trust is the best way for customers to purchase goods, or so he was taught.
Naturally Leon is outgoing and doesn't shy away from a friendly conversation. When he isn't working he indulges himself in a little tinkering. Leon had a fascination with knick-knacks, which lead a enjoy. Sometimes when he fiddles wit gadgets, or trying to make his own, he creates something useful. However, he fails to actually create something the majority of the time. Since Leon's knowledge is somewhat self taught, he still needs to refine his skill
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Name: Elodie Sex: Female Age: ??? (looks to be in her early 20's Race: Ghost (previously human) Birthday: ??? Birthplace: ??? Housing:An Old Ceremonial Dagger
Appearance :
A gentle face and body wrapped with a ghostly mist. Elodie is a ghost that takes on the appearance of a young woman in her early twenties. She has long brown hair that flows down past her back along with a fringe at the front. In her hair, she has a ribbon that has a brown and black pattern. Elodie has a pair of light brown eyes that have long eye lashes, and tend to have a soft gaze. Elodie is slightly shorter than Leon. She wears a sleeveless white dress with embroider on the chest as well a black fur trim on the bottom. Her exposed shoulders are covered by a black furry shawl, and she wears leather boots on her feet.
Concept :
Died before her time and emotionally bound to a dagger, Elodie is a ghost that haunts an Old Ceremonial Dagger as well as it's owner. She once laid dormant with the ornamental weapon, until one day a treasure hunter stumbled upon it in the Bronze Woods in Sylira. The treasure hunter saw value some value in the dagger. The treasure hunter sold the dagger at the Great Bazaar, and this is when Elodie slowly became active. The dagger was soon labeled as haunted when potential buyers felt unsettled holding the dagger, they often comment oh the unnatural coldness when they touch the metal. the merchant wanted to sell the dagger fast, as the dagger was ruining the reputation of his wares. As it so happened, that's when Leon stubble upon the dagger and was sold to him for a price he couldn't refuse. A day after the dagger's purchase, Elodie sprung out of the dagger.
Elodie has amnesia and isn't able to remember key information and events from her past life such as her age or how she died. When she strays to far from the dagger, she falls into state of panic and distress. Elodie isn't sure why she feels bounded to the dagger, Leon speculated that the dagger is what killed her. However, Elodie isn't too sure.
Elodie is a shy woman, vanishing to her dagger when she feels uncomfortable. She's quite curious about the world around her and will often examine Leon's wares and gadgets, sometimes accidentally causing trouble by touching something that she shouldn't.
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Leon has been in the trading business since he was six. Leon and his father ran a small stall in The Great Bazaar, selling general goods. Leon's father use to be a traveling merchant that originated from Zeltiva. After a couple of years he met Leon's mother, a metalsmith in syliras, and settled down in her city, Syliras. Leon soon became their son. Leon's mother specialized in making sword, and was quite skilled wielding one. When she had the chance to, she would would try to teach Leon how to hold a weapon. She wanted to prepare for the harsh world, but Leon seemed more focused with the market stall than he is in combat. Leon wasn't the best swordsmen Mizahar has ever seen, nor was he the worst. Leon's mother gave him a sword in hopes that he could practice with in during his spare time. The years went by and Leon has learnt a few things from his mother and father. However, something had happened when Leon turned sixteen. Leon's mother fell extremely ill. Leon didn't know what was wrong with her at the time, nor did his father. Leon's mother only suffered for a few days then passed within the same season, it was crushing for both Leon and his father. The two grieved over the loss for the rest of that season.
Leon's father thought it would be best to take the reins again and travel, this time taking Leon with him. Leon was very open to the idea, and help his father with the preparations. After saying their goodbyes, Leon and his father left the city and began traveling to the various cities throughout Syliras. Over the course of seven years, the twenty-three year old Leon had returned to the city Syliras. Leon had been to many cities and once to Avanthal, where he lived there for one year. The time Leon spent there he had learnt to speak the local language of Vani. The reason Leon returned to his home city is because his father thought it was time to retire from traveling, and it would be best for Leon to take over the business. Again, Leon welcomed the idea as his father was getting old and deserved to have a rest. Leon stayed with his father in Syliras before he began venturing again.
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1 Backpack which contains: 1 eating knife Flint & Steel 1 Waterskin 1 Set of Toiletries (comb, brush, razor, soap) Food for a week
Outdoors
1 large tent (4 person) large tarp 100 ft of rope flint & steel lantern, 2 torches bedroll blanket fishing tackle & hooks a compass a riding horse a full set of tack and a large set of saddlebags
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Upon reviewing your character sheet I have noticed a few things that need to be addressed before you continue to role-play here on Mizahar. Please tend to these issues at your earliest convenience.
Languages
Where and why did Leon learn the Ancient Tongue? It’s not a language that is widespread and could only be gained from some of the most learned scholars. They don’t share that knowledge readily.
Ledger
Your ledger must be itemized and contain the full listing of your expenses small or large. From the coin you start with to what you presently have. I do not see that here based on everything that your character possesses.
Heirloom
You do not possess an heirloom item. Are you sure you don’t want one?