Completed [Training Grounds]The Clash of Metal(Aventis)

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[Training Grounds]The Clash of Metal(Aventis)

Postby Sayana on January 27th, 2015, 11:47 pm

Your Grades Have Arrived


Vanessa Lawson

Skills:
Skill EXP
Socialization +5
Observation +3
Broadsword +3
Endurance +5
Acrobatics +1
Unarmed Combat +3
Rhetoric +1


Lores:
  • Aventis: Overconfident yet skilled squire
  • Aventis: Swift on his feet
  • Learn from your opponent
  • Spinning to get out of the way
  • Disarmed: No longer in possession of father's sword

Shield Points:
Shield Points Earned Reason
+4 Training

Total: +4 Shield Points

Injuries :
Bruise on right arm, cut on arm, small bruise on neck, and bleeding inner lip. These should heal after 4-5 days unless the cuts get infected.


Comments :
Great thread. It was fun seeing the combination of different fighting techniques such as broadsword vs unarmed combat, whether intentional by Vanessa or not. Some of your posts were on the short side. Keep striving for longer posts, but otherwise well done.


Aventis

Skills:
Skill EXP
Observation +4
Socialization +2
Rhetoric +2
Rapier +2
Acrobatics +4
Planning +3
Shortsword +1
Unarmed Combat +2
Brawling +1
Endurance +2


Lores:
  • Vanessa: Friend, or just for training?
  • Vanessa: Able to outsmart me
  • Disarming an Opponent: Grabbing their sword
  • A fight to be fought, not to be won
  • Butterflies in stomach
  • Vanessa: The Girl with Raven Black Hair

Shield Points:
Shield Points Earned Reason
+4 Training
-1 Conduct unbecoming of a knight: Taking the fight too seriously and trying to best and break her in any way he can

Total: +3 Shield Points

Injuries :
Small scrape/cut on jaw and bruise on lower ribs. Jaw should heal in a couple days and the bruise will take about 6 days to heal.


Comments :
Great thread and there was a lot of flexibility in the weapons/attacks used. I used the acrobatics skill to account for all his spins, jumps and dodges. And I used planning rather than tactics for planning out his combat maneuvers. I typically think of tactics for organizing large scale battles rather than personal techniques. Great job.


Don't forget to edit/delete your grade request in the grade request thread.

If you have any questions or concerns about your grade please feel free to send me a message.

Enjoy.
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