Closed Adrift (Shahar)

Desperate, Jalen escaped captivity and fled south across the Sea of Grass. His freedom is short-lived...

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The Wilderness of Cyphrus is an endless sea of tall grass that rolls just like the oceans themselves. Geysers kiss the sky with their steamy breath, and mysterious craters create microworlds all their own. But above all danger lives here in the tall grass in the form of fierce wild creatures; elegant serpents that swim through the land like whales through the ocean and fierce packs of glassbeaks that hunt in packs which are only kept at bay by fires. Traverse it carefully, with a guide if possible, for those that venture alone endanger themselves in countless ways.

Adrift (Shahar)

Postby Jalen on February 12th, 2015, 9:45 am

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"Fine, fine, I'm walking!" Wincing with every step he lurched along beside his captor-turned guide. The watchman shook his head in annoyance at the Chaktawe as they passed, but his attention quickly turned back to his fellows. Endrykas was a hive of activity, a maze of tents. With a pang of longing Jalen was reminded of the seasonal gatherings of the tribes. The people, the excitement, colored tents everywhere... he pointedly fixed his attention on the ground, keeping the rider in his peripheral vision so he knew where to go. He focused on the pain, brow furrowed, rather than his home. It would do no good to ache after a memory when he had present ailments to worry about.

The Drykas flagged down one of his fellows, a youth dressed in white. Their discussion was quick, but within the scope of it Jalen staggered. Exhaustion and pain were taking their toll. The Chaktawe managed to regain his balance. Sweat dripped from his face. It was so cold... A firm hand gripped his shoulder and he raised his gaze to the horseman. "Up, now." It took a moment, but the realization that he wanted Jalen to get on the horse dawned on him. Pride and fear fought with practicality. It was not unheard of for Chaktawe to ride horses, but he had never had the opportunity. The large animals had always made him nervous. Besides that, he was loathe to admit his weakness by crawling up on the creature.

But weak he was and wherever they were going he wasn't going to make it on foot. Reaching up he took the rider's hands and pushed off with his feet. Together they managed to swing Jalen up behind him. Teeth grit against the sudden shock of pain, he immediately wrapped an arm around the Drykas' midsection as the horse swayed briefly, adjusting to the new load. Jalen's eyes were focused on the back of the rider's head, he avoided looking down. God's, it had not looked so high from on the ground.

His grip tightened as the animal moved, taking them with speed to the center of the Opal district. The River Flower loomed large over the other tents in its vicinity. Swirling sigils covered its face, symbols Jalen did not recognize. Multicolored standards flapped gaily in the wind, making its presence even easier to see. It didn't take long for Jalen to make out that this tent was their destination as they angled toward it.

Was this where the Drykas' chief was? Or perhaps there were cages within, to hold onto prisoners like himself. The possibilities raced through his head. Perhaps, he mused, the white-clothed individuals pushing in and out were executioners. At least that way the pain would end, he thought with a grunt. His side was burning, and fresh blood was seeping through his already soaked shirt. The usually bronzed skin of his face was pale, yet hot to the touch. Feverish, yet he was freezing. He wanted to do nothing but sleep.

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Postby Colt on February 12th, 2015, 4:03 pm

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The man seemed on the brink of giving in to his exhaustion, which only fuelled Shahar’s haste to get to their destination. The both of them working together were able to haul him into the yvas, much to Akaidras’ chagrin, but the stallion tolerated it at his rider’s behest––for now.

Once Shahar was certain the Chaktawe was secure in his seat, he urged his strider into a lope––this was the Opal Clan, where speed was understood and accepted when the need was dire. And to what Shahar had seen, the need was certainly dire.

Tuka ran behind them, keeping to the trail Akaidras broke for them; none of the trio were comfortable in the closed-in passages of Endrykas, and she was the least accustomed to it of all. Her ears flattened nervously, and that did enough to warn of her mood that none of the passerby attempted to touch her.

Their informant had been helpful; it was not long at all before they found the main pathway, and less time after that that the white flag of the River Flower appears above its fellows. Shahar wove his way towards it, slowing to a brisk trot to stay out of the way of those already working outside, but the need help in his posture broadcasted his intentions widely and it was mere moments before a young red-haired woman dressed in the whites of her Clan darted towards them.

“What do you need?” she asked, signing confident and reassuring.

Him behind me, Shahar gestured worriedly, bringing Akaidras to a halt. Hurt gash side, can’t see, he’s exhausted.

Understood. “Let me see.”

Shahar slid from the yvas, and, unsure of the Chaktawe’s remaining strength, gripped the man at the elbow in case he needed it. Or in case he felt the need to run, but that desire seemed to no longer be in to forefront of his mind.

The woman stepped up to the horse to get a closer look at the wound, but the cloth pressed over it kept the gash hidden.

“Pavi or Common?” she asked, I him, need to communicate.

“Common,” Shahar rumbled.

The healer nodded and turned back to the Chaktawe. “Down,” she said in the Common tongue. “On the ground. Your feet if you can. Follow me.” She turned to Shahar and spoke in quiet Pavi. “If he cannot, you must carry him.”
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Postby Jalen on February 13th, 2015, 10:25 pm

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Jalen nearly toppled from the horse when Shahar dismounted. Only the rider's steady hand at his elbow kept him seated. Disoriented, he blinked blearily at the red-headed woman. It was so cold, why was it so cold? She examined him concern, mouth bent in a worried frown. After a quick question to the other Drykas her attention returned to the Chaktawe. His eyes were closed, and she had to pat his leg to get his attention. "Down," she said quickly. "On the ground. Your feet if you can. Follow me." Jalen nodded his understanding. Yes, it would be good to get off of this animal.

Straining, he managed to get one leg up over the yvas. From there he half slid, half fell to the ground. His legs buckled under the sudden weight. Light danced at the edge of his vision. A pained groan rumbled from his throat. Barely conscious, his legs twitched beneath him in his attempts to rise to his feet. It was obvious he wasn't going to be walking into the tent.

If the rider followed the healer's instruction and carried Jalen through the flap, his struggles would swiftly lapse into unconsciousness. Sweat matted his black hair to his face, his inner lids were half-closed, and despite the blood-loss his body felt warm to the touch. After a week in the wild, he didn't smell any better than he looked. The shirt would be difficult to remove with cutting it open, blood had dried within to stick the damp cotton to his skin. The wound, ugly and inflamed beneath the gore, angled sharply from a hand below his underarm toward his center. Deeper near the top, the glassbeak's claw had scraped his lower ribs but luckily hadn't breached any of the organs beneath.

The rest of his body had other hurts. Minor cuts and scrapes from the fight itself or the hardships of travel. The rest of his body was outfitted with a diverse assortment of scars. His back was crossed with whip-marks, but more strange were the multitude of bite and claw marks. The worst was a tapering triangle of tooth-marks along his left thigh--the marks began just above the knee and came together a finger's width below his hip. If the lashings weren't evidence enough, the raw flesh around his wrists and ankles told of years in slavery.

Jalen was out cold for the examination and any treatment that might follow. He was much happier in the bliss of ignorance than awake for the pain.

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Postby Colt on February 14th, 2015, 1:27 am

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The Chaktawe strained, hauling one leg over the stallion’s back and toppling to the ground. Shahar, already connected to the man’s elbow, went down as well in an attempt to catch him; he managed to wrap an arm around his shoulders, and by then the healer was already upon the two.

“Stay away from his wound,” she commanded. “Under his other arm. We need to get him inside.”

Shahar took the uninjured side of his body while she took the other, hands more gentle and practiced than the rough fingers of the hunter. Together they managed to get him off the ground and into the River Flower.

The healing tent was less full than usual, something that could likely be blamed on the Great Race that was surely taking place by now; most patients able enough to ride had made their way over, and a number of healers had chosen to watch the festivities as well, leaving plenty of space for the stranger to be laid out near the entrance. His skin was burning, and he had slipped into unconsciousness; a quick glance at his wound, and the the woman turned to bark at an idle healer.

“Hot water!” she demanded. “Cloth, knife and catgut!”

She turned back to her patient and began peeling at his clothing, trying to remove as much as she could without actually touching the clotted material.

Grunting, Shahar pulled out his own knife and offered it.

“Good enough for now.” The healer took his knife and cut clean through the Chaktawe’s shirt, parting it lengthwise and neatly exposing his chest.

Even beyond his immediate injury, the man had obviously suffered greatly. There were recent cuts and bruises, and under those were scars upon scars of repeated suffering. Shahar noted them but made no comment, and neither did the Opal woman.

In mere heartbeats, as if by magic, a bowl of steaming water, some folded cloth, a smaller knife and a coil of catgut and needles was set beside them, and the woman quickly began to dab at the cloth over the wound, soaking it gently with near-boiling water that pierced the scabbing blood and softened it enough to pull the rest of his shirt away without injuring him farther. Beneath it was the wide, gaping gash of whatever animal had rendered him to such a state, although beneath the infection Shahar could not tell what the perpetrator was.

“That’s enough help from you,” the healer said to him as she handed his knife back and reached for her own. “I need space for this. You need to leave now.”

Inclining his head in respectful gratitude, Shahar stepped away from where the Chaktawe lay, spared a final glance to the healer and quietly made his way outside.

Akaidras and Tuka had wandered to the far side of the area in front of the River Flower, where they were in aggressive posturing contest with the young groom that was trying to tend to them. Before it could escalate into any real altercation, Shahar placed himself in the middle of the conflict with peace, be calm written in his body. While neither the groom nor the animals became particularly calm, they did at least shift focus from each other to Shahar.

“Are these yours?” asked the groom, irritated.

Yes, mine, thank you, I’ll take care of them.

The groom let out a huff somewhere between annoyance and relief, leaving the clanless hunter to his cat and Strider.

Shahar settled down to wait, fussing over Akaidras and Tuka to ease their discomfort; none of them liked being this far inside Endrykas, but there was little choice––the Chaktawe was alone, and with no one else interested in the task it looked like the responsibility for his care had fallen to Shahar.

Time wore on as it often did, and Shahar continued to wait as people moved in and out of the pavilion on different business. The shadows had shifted slightly by the time an apprentice emerged, heading unmistakably for the trio.

Coming to me, what news? Shahar asked, skipping the greeting altogether.

“He’s alive,” the boy said. “She wants to talk to you inside.”

Rising, Shahar signaled for the strider and cat to be comfortable, wait just a bit longer, and followed the boy back into the River Flower.

The woman and Chaktawe had not moved from where they had set down, although the Chaktawe didn’t seem nearly as… dying as he had before. His wound was obscured beneath a layer of bandages, somewhat bulging to suggest the presence of a poultice of some kind. The healer looked up when he entered and gestured for him to sit down.

Shahar sat.

“He will live,” she told him. “The wound was deep, but he is strong and the infection was not too old to treat.” Safety, but, “He has a high fever, and he will need rest. He should remain here until his temperature drops.”

How long?

“A day, maybe two or three. After that, we cannot keep him.”

Understood.

“Where do you live?”

North-side outskirts.

“Is he of your family?”

Shahar hesitated; what was the proper response? I… will take care of him.

She nodded. “We will send word when it is time. As for payment…”

Shahar reacted with respectful confidence; he did not know how much the River Flower would ask for, but he was certain he would have enough––his mizas were plentiful.

When the price was given and the money exchanged, Shahar was shooed unceremoniously out of the River Flower; there were still others to treat, and injured riders from the Great Race were beginning to appear. He returned to Akaidras and set off for home, mind turning over the plans that would have to be changed, the items he would have to get to make space for this newcomer and the explaining he had ahead of him. The new person at the hearth had sprung from nowhere, and it would take time to adjust; all he could hope for was that the Chaktawe could adapt to them as well.

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oocI have no idea what medical attention of that degree would cost, so feel free to take however much you think is appropriate.
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Adrift (Shahar)

Postby Khida on February 25th, 2015, 1:11 pm


Jalen


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Endurance +4
Land Navigation +1
Medicine +2
Observation +3
Riding +2
Wilderness Survival +1
  • Cyphrus fauna: glassbeaks
  • Drykas: the horse-clans of Cyphrus
  • Endrykas location: the River Flower
  • Endurance: fixating on a goal to keep going
  • Medicine: pressure to stop bleeding
  • Navigation: orienting on the sun
  • Pavi: involves gestures as well as words
  • Riding: staying on a yvas behind another
  • Shahar Dawnwhisper: a Drykas of few words
  • Survival: paying attention to one's surroundings


Injury and healing: One three-lined gash extending down and outward from the ribs, deepest at the top. Glassbeaks can run 60 mph, which makes for quite a kick; it would have gone to the bone. Ongoing care will include keeping it poulticed for at least an additional day after his release, and bandaged until it is well along in healing, perhaps a week. To my understanding, this will have been a multi-layered suture, with absorbable catgut internally but persistent cotton or linen surface stitches. Those will need to be removed in about 14 days. He will tend to fatigue easily for a week or more. After a month, the skin will be reasonably sturdy, but still twice as fragile as undamaged skin. Provided nothing untoward happens, and he does some physical therapy to re-tone the healed muscle, Jalen will recover well but with distinct scars and a tendency to stiffness in the area.

Shahar Dawnwhisper


Skill Points
Animal Husbandry +2
Intimidation +1
Negotiation +1
Riding +2
Socialization +1
Tracking +2
  • Animal Husbandry: rewarding behaviors with praise
  • Intimidation: a show of force
  • Jalen: scarred by past travails
  • Jalen: a spirited Chaktawe
  • Riding: supporting a second rider
  • Riding: the Wind Gait
  • Tracking: the nuances of human footprints


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I found the lack of interaction between Shahar and Jalen throughout this thread interesting and fairly unique -- they each spent more time in their own heads, thinking and weighing and planning, than they did engaging with the other. I was just thinking last week about the general tendency of PCs to be very forthcoming with information to other PCs, so this is a timely contrast!

I think the awards here should be pretty self-evident, but if you have any questions, please do let me know.

As far as medical care and cost goes: I gather from Jalen's posts that his state owed more to deprivation than the injury itself. I will presume the injury was attended by a first-marked Healer to clear the infection (otherwise, he would still be there) and that all things considered, Jalen needed intensive care for the day he was at River Flower. Looking over some approved business plans, that might run about 8 gm, coincidentally the daily base pay for a doctor. The wound sounds like something that could've been treated with the krolar poultice on the price list; I'm also going to presume an extra three doses were sold to Shahar for ongoing care, with some markup due to Endrykas currently being on the far side from Sylira. Call it 10 gm total cost. Or rather, 10 gm 'gift in appreciation for services rendered'.

Also, Shahar, please edit your request to show this thread has been graded.
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