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Stretching northward along the coastline of the Suvan Sea, the Cobalt Mountains are the home of the Bronze Wood, numerous ruins, and creatures both strange and fantastical.

Big Problems, Little Squire (Archailist)

Postby Katelyn Marks on March 2nd, 2015, 3:56 pm

Blood roared in her ears and her heart pounded painfully in her chest as the bandit scrabbled at her throat, trying to get a good grip and close off her windpipe. She scratched and clawed at his face, trying to dig her nails into his eyes, rip an ear off, or somehow break his nose. His weight pressed her into the cold snow, pinning her legs while she tried to kick. He was far too heavy for her, and even though she was a strong woman, she couldn't get him off. When he suddenly reared back with a horrifying wail, Katelyn tried desperately to wiggle out from underneath him.

Then he was gone, and she crawled fearfully through the snow until she managed to get her knees beneath her and look around. Narrick had the injured man by the throat, and the man was going limp, falling into unconsciousness driven on by the agony of his wound. Even as she watched, he slumped in the Squire's arms, color leaving his face and blood slowly saturating his side.

"Thank you," she gushed, voice rough with fearful adrenaline and thick with emotion.

Her body was trembling so hard that it was hard to stand, but she found her footing on the slick ground and rose unsteadily with some effort. When Archailist's voice suddenly boomed through the trees, Katelyn jumped and looked around. She couldn't see him, but could hear their enemies firing arrows into the trees. The redhead hoped he would get away, but suspected he would. Spurred forward by fear, she snapped her dagger up from the snow and jammed it back into its sheath, then motioned at Narrick.

"Come on! Do as he says!" she growled before turning back the way they'd come and fleeing straight through the tangled brush.

Limbs tore at her clothes, snagged her hair, and scraped her face, but her focus was so intent on the task of running away that she couldn't make herself care. When she broke through the trees, she stuck her fingers between her teeth and let out a short, piercing whistle. The sudden sharp sound startled some nearby birds and they screeched frantically before fleeing in a hurried flurry of wings. In response to her cue, she heard a nearby whinny and the drumming of hooves approaching. Sebastian broke through the trees, head high and ears perked. When he saw his rider, he veered toward her and slid to a clumsy stop in front of her, gouging the earth and snow with his shod hooves.

Narrick's horse soon followed, trotting after the other horse instinctively, not wanting to be left behind. She wasted no time in climbing into the saddle, clumsy from adrenaline, and yanked her pony around to face their escape route. When Narrick was in the saddle, she kicked her horse into a gallop and hung on tight as he launched into the wild gait. They tore back down the way they'd come earlier, running alongside the stream and spraying snow in their wake. Katelyn didn't dare look back. She hadn't seen the bandits' horses, but knew they were somewhere nearby. If they were following, Kat wanted to put as much distance between them as possible.

Sebastian began to flag before Narrick's larger mount did, and she reluctantly slowed their pace for fear of injuring the little gelding. They cantered alongside the stream for several ticks before finally reining the horses in and allowing them to cool themselves at a quick walk. Katelyn glanced over her shoulder, but didn't see anyone. The trees were silent behind them as well--no thundering hooves in hot pursuit of shouting voices.

"Do you think they're following us?" she asked the Squire in a low voice, too afraid to speak above a moderate whisper.

OOCHope this is okay!
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Big Problems, Little Squire (Archailist)

Postby Archailist on March 16th, 2015, 5:24 pm

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oocSorry this took so long!
At least, from where he was, it sounded as though Katelyn and Narick would be safe. He could hear the heavy hoofbeats of their retreat just beyond the trees. So could the rest of the men - there wasn't much point in chasing after them though, since the chance of reaching Katelyn and Narick before reaching Stormhold or Mithryn was low. It wouldn't stop them from pushing as deep as possible as they could on foot after the fleeing pair, firing off arrow after blind arrow in the hopes of catching them on their way out. If there was any better time for the squirrel to make his own escape, now was it. Of course he still had an arrow aimed straight for his head; at a much closer distance than Katelyn and Narick, with a sure arm and a pair of eyes on its target.. but better one than five.

He lurched right. The human turned left easily and launched the arrow, striking the Pycon hard in the leg while reaching back and easily preparing a second. Arch could only call himself lucky that the thick metal head didn't slice straight through the middle and pin him in place - instead it cut off the edge, digging half an inch or so deep into the point between his body and knee with a gaping wound left behind. He pushed on and tucked both legs against his chest to keep rolling right, over and over as another arrow struck just behind and cut into his back with another wound, deeper this time and nearly an inch deep. Shyking shyke. Good thing Pycons didn't bleed.

Eventually, he felt the comparative warmth and comfort of a thick tree against his side and the squirrel ducked behind it as fast as possible. Behind, he could hear calls from the other men. He couldn't outrun them, but hopefully he could hide from them and escape in the trees. If his leg would hold up.. as it was there was barely any clay keeping the thing attached to the rest of his body. 'Hanging by a thread' would actually be pretty appropriate. "Petching shyking Hai.." He knew what needed to be done, but damn.. he didn't want to do it. Nobody ever wanted to do it, human or Pycon. There wasn't any time to waste though. Soon they'd group back together and they'd find him again.

Archailist set his jaw and gripped the clay around the open wound. Just touching it stung, hard. What came next was much worse - he squeezed down as tight as possible over the wound, trying to physically spread the clay from parts of his thigh out to thicken the bond before it snapped. It wasn't natural of course - normally, one would eat plenty of clay and wait for the clay to replace itself. He didn't have time for that. He wasn't a surgeon or a healer but he could at least try and fix something together with whatever he could come up with.

After several long strokes up and down the length of his leg to try and spread the balance as much as possible, he turned back towards the tree and dug his claws into the bark as hard as he could. The leg burned with every movement but he pulled that up as well, setting it against the lower edges of bark more as a fall-back in case his grip faltered than anything to push weight onto. This is going to be so damn sore in the morning. Less sore than his nexus would be if it had an arrow through it. Another piece of bark, another push up. Again, again, again. At merely five inches tall, it'd take a very long time to reach anywhere close to where a normal human could reach.. especially injured as he was. If he got anywhere close to the height of a human though, he'd be safe.. he'd be able to jump straight over onto their shoulders and defend himself with a solid punch to the side of the head. Hopefully.

It must have taken close to a whole bell to get to the top.. but when he finally made it, all evidence of the men and their little camp was pretty much demolished, barring a few pieces of forgotten equipment and whatever they'd made out of the surroundings. Whether they'd disappeared in fear or they'd gone off after Katelyn and Narick.. well, that he wouldn't know until he got back to Syliras, unfortunately.. but that only gave him all the more reason to push forwards and begin the long and winding path all the way back through the woods, back to the castle. They'd pressed pretty deep, though. On horseback, which he no longer had. Shyke. Hopefully, if he pushed the rest of the day into traveling and found some tree to hide in overnight, he'd make it back by the next day.. without too much worry..
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Big Problems, Little Squire (Archailist)

Postby Katelyn Marks on March 25th, 2015, 2:44 pm

The two of them waited for several long chimes, listening to the trees around them. Birds sang and squirrel chattered angrily in the trees. As the branches bobbed overhead with their chasing and frolicking, Katelyn found herself worrying for Archailist. The little Pycon might have been a bastard, but he'd helped save her life. She had respect both of the Squires who'd followed her. At the same time she also blamed them for endangering her life, but beggars couldn't be choosers. In the end Kate was just glad she was alive, and that the danger seemed to be behind them--and not following, for that matter.

"I'm going to go back and look for him," Narrick finally said as the silence stretched on. "You should go home."

The redhead was quite for a moment, and found that his suggestion didn't make her angry. The idea of curling up in her bed and sleeping for the rest of the day and through the night was appealing. Still, the Pycon's situation worried her. She peered into the trees behind them, back the way they had fled from. The young man could see the uncertainty twisting her features, and urged his horse closer, where he placed a hand on her shoulder. She looked at him reluctantly, frowning deeply.

"He'll be fine. He's Knighthood material. He's in his element out here. I'm sure he's just up in the trees somewhere, trying to get back. I'm going to go fetch him and give him a ride."

It was a simple argument, but a compelling one. Sebastian snorted quietly, filling the air with a white cloud of his breath, and she absently patted his neck.

"Alright," Katelyn finally relented. "But please thank him for me, will you? And thank you too," she said, voice heavy with sincerity and laced with emotion.

Now that they were safe and out of the fight, she could feel the fear she had felt turning into the kind of relief that brought tears. She had no doubt that she'd be crying herself to sleep tonight. A shuddering breath escaped her, and she absently rubbed her neck where the bandit had tried to suffocate her. The skin was tender, and she could feel a bruise forming.

"You're welcome," Narrick accepted. "Now go home," he urged. "Please."

Katelyn nodded and backed her old gelding away from the Squire and his long-legged mount. She spun her horse with a tug of the reins and glanced behind her as he trotted away at the urging of her heels. Narrick held up a hand in goodbye, and she smiled slightly despite all of the overwhelming emotions she was feeling. Before they were out of sight, she waved to him behind her, then turned her gaze back to the trail ahead. She would follow the stream until it met with the Avitar, then back to the road and onward to home. All the way, her worries followed her and she hoped that the little Pycon was alright.

OOCThought it was a good place to stop instead of writing out their travel back, which would be pretty anticlimactic.
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Postby Archailist on April 4th, 2015, 7:44 pm

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Arch was settling in for a long journey back to Syliras. Sure, he'd spent a lot of time in the Bronze Woods.. but that didn't mean that he could always work out the way back out again. Sure, if push came to shove, he could try and find the Cobalt Mountains range and use them as a guide to get back.. but he wasn't a wilderness survival expert. He'd have to stick to the tops of the trees.. and watch out for anything that might mistake him for real prey. If he was lucky, it might be three days or more before he made it back.. and then, of course, there was the fact that he didn't even have any clay supplies with him. It wasn't like he could just go out hunting for some either; blasted humans could just shoot down a rabbit or pick off some berries and avoid starvation.

Not to mention what would happen if he ever saw those men again. They could still be out there; heck, they could go out and steal another cow tonight. As soon as I get back, I'm telling everyone about this.. if he got out in time, that was. Three days would be more than enough time to make an easy escape back up the length of the Kabrin Road to Zeltiva or Riverfall... or they could already have disappeared back into the Wildlands.

For now, as safe as he could be inside the crook of a few thick branches, the squirrel tucked himself into a ball and struggled to conform to the shape as best as his body could manage; partially simply out of fear of the men returning and miraculously finding him, partially out of boredom. He'd have to start the trek in the next morning. Through the thick filter of the branches, Arch was unable to tell how long had passed before he heard the all-too-familiar shouts of Narrick passing by below in his search.. but the Pycon was about half-way through attempting to replicate the bark-like texture into his body with absolutely no possibility of success. The jagged outlines looked completely unnatural.

In a flash, he was up and down the length of the tree trunk and leaping off onto the back of the horse, right behind the fellow squire's hip. "Shut up! You want them to petching hear us?!" He didn't give Narick any time for questions, there was only one 'them' he could be talking about and the more time they spent in the forest, the more uneasy the squirrel became, funnily enough. "Let's just get the petch out of hear, fast as you can go." Apparently the 'fastest' was a slightly-rushed trot.. but they were moving, at least. They'd make it back to the castle by the end of the day, warn the knights of what they'd seen on their time out.. then hopefully grab some soup and clay respectively to wash all of this down. Oh, and of course they'd never let an incident like this happen again.

Next time they found Katelyn wandering around the woods, they were going to shoot her in the leg and drag her back to the castle.
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Big Problems, Little Squire (Archailist)

Postby Orin Fenix on April 6th, 2015, 1:06 am

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Katelyn Marks
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Horseback Riding 5
Tracking 2
Land Navigation 2
Observation 5
Horsemanship 3
Stealth 2
Socialization 5
Intimidation 2
Interrogation 1
Rhetoric 1
Tactics 1
Endurance 2
Unarmed Combat 2
Running 1

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  • Tracking: Cow Hooves
  • Tracking: Horse Hooves
  • Tracking: Determining There Were Multiple Horses
  • Stealth: Harder on Horseback
  • Intimidation: Using a Dagger
  • Archailist: Pycon Squire
  • Pycon: Small Clay Shape-changers
  • Squires have no real authority
  • Archailist: He's Alright for a Bastard
  • Unarmed Combat: Nail Gouge
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Whoa. I mean. I liked your other threads. But this was something else. The plotting, the characterization and the challenges and how Katelyn either overcame them or gave them her best shot were incredible. I loved the detail and well, frankly, pretty much everything. Very nice job.

 
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Skill XP
Climbing 3
Running 1
Endurance 3
Socialization 1
Land Navigation 3
Interrogation 2
Investigation 1
Intimidation 2
Negotiation 3
Rhetoric 2
Persuasion 2
Tactics 3
Leadership 5
Unarmed Combat: Pyken 1
Medicine 1

Lores
  • Interrogation: Asking Basic Questions
  • Narick: Skilled Bowman and a Good Friend
  • Interrogation: Asking Questions First
  • Negotiation: Diffusing a Tense Situation
  • Katelyn: Impulsive Human
  • Leadership: Leading Others Into Battle
  • Leadership: Shouted Encouragement
  • Tactics: Tactical Retreat

Shield Points
8 Assisting a citizen


Extras :
I just want to start by saying that I absolutely loved this thread. I haven't seen very many threads with better characterization or better plotting in a while. Considering how difficult I find it to write combat I couldn't tell you how happy I was to see how natural it seemed to come to you. I give this thread a huge stamp of approval. Now, normally I would tell you that Archailist has a wound for five days but since this happened all the way back in Fall I'm not too worried about it.

Don't forget to edit or delete your grade request in the grade request thread.

If you have any questions or concerns about your grade please feel free to send me a message.
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