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A city floating in the center of a lake, Ravok is a place of dark beauty, romance and culture. Behind it all though is the presence of Rhysol, God of Evil and Betrayal. The city is controlled by The Black Sun, a religious organization devoted to Rhysol. [Lore]

[Training] Tempered Tenacity

Postby Elias Caldera on March 19th, 2015, 3:34 am

49th Day of Spring, 506 AV


Boring TrainingIts so boring and uninspired that I actually feel obligated to apologize for this. Spare yourself the torment, turn back now and forget this thread ever existed :(

Another day, another bruise.

It was bright and early, only a few bells after sunrise and the lakeshore was yet relatively quiet. Insects prattled on in indignation as the young man trudged through grass and trees only to be interrupted every once in a while by an equally shrill and sometimes altogether alien bird call from somewhere up above. His head hurt –still hurt- from a tumble he had taken yesterday while practicing on a serene day just like this one, and the last thing Elias knew he needed was more practicing to help the pain, but yet here he was regardless. His uncle, in his infinite wisdom, had decided to depart Ravok a week or so prior, leaving his now initiated and agitated nephew to wallow in his new found excitement without any proper guidance or instructions. Left to his own devices, Elias’s attempts to simulate his uncle’s “training” style had ended in an equal amount aching disaster, but without any of the miniscule improvements the old man could draw out of his nephew to show for it. The only thing Caiden had managed not to completely disappoint with was the gear and tools he had left behind for Elias to use, so at least there was that to start with. Stifling another thunderous yawn, the young boy made his way over to the training posts the two of them had erected when all this had first began.

The post itself was nothing more than a log wrapped in rope and stuffed with straw, a poor substitute for a real person, even with the painted wash bucket plopped atop it to simulate a head. Glaring angrily at the poorly drawn smiley face staring coldly back at him, Elias once again convinced himself that for his purposes today, it would just have to do. He stood in front of it, making sure to widen his stance so that he didn’t swing himself out of balance, remembering one of the few maxims that his uncle had taught him… Lose your balance, lose your life. He grasped the hilt of the sword that hung at his waist and drew it forward, the sound of the steel sliding out of its scabbard ringing in his ears. He had become much more accustomed to having the additional weight at his side, but sometimes the weight of the weapon in his hands still surprised him every now and again. The shield on his other hand however, was quite common place by now. There was no buck or unexpected dip when he swung or held it upright, just the opposite in fact. He always knew where it would be and how he was going to get it to where he needed it a second later. Both the blade and the shield were just two halves of this puzzle he was still trying to decipher, but eventually, he knew would solve it.

Gripping the hilt and the handle, he held both out in front of him. Silently, he hefted the sword over his head and swung down. The blade dropped more out of its own weight than any force that Elias had put into the swing, being able to do little more than attempt to guide its path. As a result when the blade hit the post it did not sink in to the rope, but bounced off instead. The resulting shock of the impact prevented the young apprentice from bringing the sword back into position quickly. He repositioned himself back in front of the post and tried again, this time swinging from the opposite side. The result was largely the same. He went at the post for several more chimes, repeating the swing from either side. Sometimes the sword would find its mark, but the majority of the time it simply did not. The temperature was still relatively cool, however with his leathers on and the efforts of the morning already weighing on a pounding headache, beads of sweat were beginning to take form on his forehead and neck.

Maybe if I swing like this... he swung from a lower angle. No, no that's not right. Can’t seem to get the damn thing to do what I want. Elias switched up his attack, now instead of swinging it from overhead, he now attempted to thrust the blade forward in a stab. He drew back his arms, the sword now parallel to the ground. When he wasn’t striking with the sword, he attacked with the shield, driving its edge in hard in into all the place he knew he could do the most damage, or that he imagined his sword thrust had left exposed just as he intended to do now. He pushed his arms forward, aiming for the center of the post but he was unable to hold it steady enough and the blade dropped. The attack ended in his blade sliding against the side of the post, instead of the point embedding itself in the rope and straw. Instinctively, his shield arm moved to attack, but he stopped himself short. There was little point in the exercise unless it all worked as intended.

Frustrated, he grumbled something under his breath and pulled the sword back, irked at his own inability. Sometimes he genuinely surprised himself with how terrible he could be with a sword. At this point he had stepped out of his stance and begun swinging at the post furiously from the side, not really expecting to accomplish anything other than release his frustrations. Amazingly however, this time the swing connected; it even seemed half way decent! His ire was quickly replaced with excitement as he got back into place and attempted the swing again. He swung from the side, however the attack seemed to carry less strength, and the blades weight carried it downward. Elias let out a sigh and returned to his original position; sword out in front of him at chest level. By this point his arms, particularly his shoulders, had begun to burn under the weight of the sword. Not one to give up however, he rose the weapon above his head and attacked from above, as if to cleave a man’s head. This time the sword was compliant, and the resulting swing was successful. This kept him motivated, and he was able to push past the burn that his arms felt and continue to practice, though these mixed results were definitely not helping him like he had hoped. So focused was he however, that he didn’t even notice that he had drawn an audience until the man spoke.
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[Training] Tempered Tenacity

Postby Elias Caldera on March 19th, 2015, 3:36 am

“You’re still impressively awful.” The statement startled Elias out of his concentration, causing him to jump slightly and drop the sword. He turned to see who had spoken and saw a giant of a man standing to the side of him. He wore the plate armor that the boy had become accustomed to, and it shone brightly as it reflected Syna’s light. Caiden was always so much taller than Elias- taller than everyone really, and his size always had a way of making him feel all the smaller than he truly was. He wondered if that was the same for everyone else the other Caldera met. His mother kept reassuring him he would one day, but Elias was getting tired of waiting for the day his own growth spurt would kick in.

Sporting a thin, unkempt shadow of a beard he must have picked up on his travels, Caiden’s surly features currently bore a disapproving look at the dropped sword. “Yah well… shut up.” Muttered Elias bitterly. “Pick it up, and get in position.” Came a gruff response. Elias hesitated for a moment, deciding just how angry he was supposed to be at his terribly irresponsible teacher, but in the end the drive to learn and exceed saw him following the man’s instructions with childlike enthusiasm. “It’s like you’ve forgotten all the good sense I beat into you already. Shore up your stance.” Elias held the position as the mercenary took a few steps around him, taking stock of what he saw. He felt an impatient boot tapping into his right shin a moment later. Without a word between them, the boy corrected his stance until an agreeable grunt let him know it was better. “What did I tell you about balance? Bend your elbows, loosen up. Now, swing.” Elias took a second to prepare himself before lifting the sword. He could tell the difference immediately. When he swung, he was able to add more strength to it by pushing off his back foot, and with his body twisting as a result of the stance, the swords path seemed more effortless. The following shield strike the flowed in after the blade felt even better. The post let out a solid thunk-thunk when the attacks landed, this time hitting its intended target and sinking into the straw. “Better. Again.” His voice was stern, sterner that usual. Caiden always had a gruffness about the way he spoke, but with Elias there was always that noticeable room for something less critical and more playful. Today there was none of that, and the young apprentice to be couldn’t help but steal a quick glance at his uncle now circling him. He found only haggard and baggy eyes staring back at him. He quickly affixed his attention on the wooden man, eager to get away from the dreadful glare he had just fallen under. Something was wrong, that much was clear.

Once more he swung sword and shield, and once more the blade and blunted edge landed where Elias bid them strike. “There, now don’t forget it again.” The giant turned and stalked away, not even checking once to see if Elias was walking behind him. For a moment, the boy feared his uncle was leaving again, but before he could voice his disapproval, he noticed Caiden had already stopped not too far away. Elias cocked and eyebrow and followed a few steps behind, sword still in hand.

“Are you alright?” Elias finally asked. His uncle looked at him impassively for a tick, an obvious tremor of hesitation spreading through his gaze as he seemed to struggle with what to say once his demeanor softened to the question's genuine concern. In the end, he lied. “I’m fine, just tired. Let’s just focus on this.” He stepped to the side to allow Elias ample room to practice, or to conveniently escape his nephew’s uneasy line of sight. Frowning, Elias assumed the stance he was just taught and held the sword out in front as his shield locked itself into place nearby while he waited for further guidance. “The power behind the strike isn’t always enough, you need complete control over that blade. In the thick of the shyke, when it’s a real fight and lives are on the line, nothings ever clean and nothings ever easy. Sometimes you have to be ready to cut a man up or knock him down a second or third time before he finally gets the idea. So don’t just stop when you think you hit the target, make sure you’re always ready to follow through.” Elias nodded and listened with rapt attention as the swordsmen imparted his wisdom, “Let me show you.” At that the towering Caldera drew his own sword and fell into a similar position. Then in a swift movement, he swung the blade downward. His movement was graceful, and it seemed effortless to Elias, yet horrendously destructive at the same time. The tip of the blade stopped a few inches short of the ground, and in the span of a breath he turned the end of his swing into a new one, this time from the side. The movement was so fluid that to Elias it seemed as if it were not two separate attacks, but one. “One attack flows into another and into another.” He said solemnly before righting himself and putting away his blade. “Not until they're dead do you ever stop thinking about the next move you’re gonna make. Remember that.”
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[Training] Tempered Tenacity

Postby Elias Caldera on March 19th, 2015, 3:37 am

Elias focused one the warrior’s words as he prepared himself. Power and control… He breathed in deep as his feet slid into position; right foot back, shoulder width apart, sword held in one hand, shield on another. His shoulder muscles were already beginning to nag at him because of the weight, but Elias was determined to get at least one good swing in under Caiden’s direction. Control… he kept repeating to himself, Control... Maybe if he did this right, the man would finally smile for once.

His next movements were measured. His goal here was to keep his form rather than just swing the sword. He raised the weapon at an angle, the point of the blade pointing away from him. After a brief pause in order to brace his muscles, he swung down. This time he, at the protest of his muscles, didn’t just let the sword fall. Adding some resistance to the swing, he found that he could more easily control the speed and path of the sword. He turned his body along the path of swing, pivoting off his back foot until the blade rested a few inches above the ground. In his current position, he realized that he could actually maneuver into a second swing. Trying his best to mimic the begrudged mercenary, he took a step forward with his right foot while at the same time turning his wrist and slashing the sword upward. With a huff of exertion he completed the swing, his shoulder and arm muscles now quivering from the effort, but he didn’t stop.

The shield came next, bashing the invisible foe hard and cleanly as Elias twisted his body and blade into just the right way he needed it to. A third strike followed, and so did a forth, but by the firth, the weight of the sword plus was finally too much and Elias had to drop his arms. Despite his weariness, a smile adorned his face.

Elias looked over at Caiden, but the man wasn’t smiling. Grimacing now, Elias gritted his teeth in exasperation and shot an angered look at his uncle. It seemed the only thing to snap the man out of his stupor, because for a moment he looked surprised, then even abashed for a split tick. All Elias received for his good work however, was a curt nod. "Moving on."
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[Training] Tempered Tenacity

Postby Elias Caldera on March 19th, 2015, 3:39 am

“In.” The air flowed in. “Out.” And oh look, there is went… again. “In … Out” Each breath was a slow and tiring draw of his weapon. “Can we stop breathing now, I think I get it.”

“No.”

Elias was beginning to wonder how they had come to this. They had gone from sheer excitement to- “In” Elias drew back his blade. “Out.” These were all fast becoming restless sighs. “Breathe in.” Caiden said under his breath. “If you can’t bloody well breathe correctly, you’ll never move correctly.” He continued as he led his ward in a slow, exhaustively dull cadence. “Most men can’t pace themselves in the heat of things. They blow their load like a sailor on his first day of shore leave, and by the time their done screaming and flailing everything they have at the man trying to kill ‘em, their already dead on their feet. A tired man is a dead man, boy.” The pair thrust their blades together into empty air. The world was becoming a numbing tune of huffs, puffs and slashing steel at that point. “Don’t ever let yourself let go of the basics, Elias. It’s all too easy to forget, and even easier to get yourself stabbed because of it. Find your rhythm early and work with it, not against it.” Caiden said as he halted and stood up straight. With an almost appraising eye he studied his nephew while the boy continued. “Don’t over reach unless you’ve got your shield to cover you.” He added as he watched Elias maintain control of his blade while now maneuvering out with his shield. This continued on for a ridiculous amount of time, but as Elias realized, the less irritable he seemed in his boredom and impatience, the less severe Caiden seemed with this regiment of arduous torture. Eventually Elias even found himself moving faster and faster with each blow and sundering smack of his weapons, all the while maintaining the balance in his stance and in his lungs.

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“…and strike!” The pair stabbed into their straw practice dummies in synch with one another, piercing the straw deeplybefore ripping it out again and slamming into their targets with the shield. Elias's arm was beginning to feel like a lead weight. The ache was already making him want to quit and give up, pack it in and go home. It didn't help that the sweat was dripping into his eyes even though it was blessedly cool out. “Again!” Came the voice of his instructor. Elias didn’t dither, he simply struck as he had been doing for the last hour. His arms both felt like they had been paddled with boards, and the young man longed desperately for a parley. Caiden on the other, had yet to let up on his relentless assaults, and so neither would Elias, obviously, but the old man would grow weak soon, the boy was sure of it, there was no way he was giving up first.

The Ravokian struck the straw man and withdrew his blade, delivering again and again a fatal blow to his smiley faced foe as he mirrored his uncle. The repetition was strangely exhausting, his arm felt as if they could take no more until at last, with as many whispered blessings to Rhysol that the child knew, Caiden told him to stop. Elias stood their holding back the telling gasps as he struggled to keep his composure. His legs felt sore, his arms demolished, and his chest felt almost as if it were on fire with the amount of ins and bloody outs he had been doing. Yet he still found the last measure of strength in his arms to sheath his sword as Caiden did so with his own, all the while compulsively breathing as he had been instructed; In through his nose and out through his mouth. So it was when he drew himself up and stood at attention, exhausted, but ready to do as his uncle instructed.

The boy stood as tall as he could, his chest heaving sluggishly while the giant studied him. Then, for the first time since he arrived, a smile of a sort crept unto the lips of Caiden Caldera. A terrible, horrifying smile that Elias knew all too well the meaning behind. The monster drew his blade and began to stalk towards his beleaguered prey. His teeth with showing now, and the apprentice to be wanted nothing more than to hobble away at that moment, for he knew just what was coming next.
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[Training] Tempered Tenacity

Postby Elias Caldera on March 19th, 2015, 3:39 am

Elias was weakening already, but Caiden refused to let up. By now his arms felt like jelly, and the sword felt as if it weighed as much as the man trying to hack him to bits. His knees would buckle any moment now, he knew it, but he endured the pain with dogged determination. This had been his plot all along he realized too late; tire and batter his poor nephew until he could sweep in for an easy kill, or as the old bastard would no doubt call it, “a lesson.” Caiden made a heavy swing for his head and Elias whipped his blade around just barely in time to knock it aside. Sighing a breath of relief, his legs finally gave way and he fell to his knee. The inferno in his chest was overwhelming, as was the struggle to keep his arms and legs from simply falling off and limping away without him. With a heave, he wobbled back unto his feet just in time to avoid another heavy handed stroke.

He hadn’t forgotten to breathe, in and out, in and out, but by Rhysol was it growing more and more impossible not to choke on his own pinched breaths with each passing tick. With a groan, Elias stopped his retreat short of just flat out running away. He held his sword a bit lower than he should have, and his shield little less securely than he would have liked. He knew if there wasn’t such a delighted look of imminent victory on his uncle’s face, there would have instead been plastered a disgruntled air of disappointment with his student's failing stance. Elias adjusted himself as best he could and charged. He wanted one solid hit before he died, just one solid smack to teach the giant a lesson. He shoved the sword forward with all the force he could muster, only to find his hand immediately slapped away by a bemused swordsman. He knew he didn’t have the strength to readjust, so instead he attacked with his shield, whipping it out and around just as he was taught to do when in a situation this dire. Expected to do was more like it. The shield found nothing but empty air, surprising given the size of the thing he had been trying to hit it with, and disparaging given the fact Elias knew what was coming next. He braced himself for the impact that would surely see him floored and, if he was lucky, finally allowed to rest.

"You see, you went and got desperate and you let yourself forget."
There was a gentle, gnawing poke at his side from the tip of Caiden’s blade, and in all honesty, it would have bothered him less if the man had just struck him down. That way, he wouldn't have had to deal with the smugness of a victorious ass looming over him. A growl, then a sigh, then ultimately quiet compliance. He stepped in front of Caiden and drew back the sword, tightening his grip before engaging again. Caiden smashed his fist against the back of Elias's hand, almost forcing him to actually drop the blade. He rounded on the much bigger man and Again and again the two went at it, breathing and balance exemplified in the excruciating crucible of desperate combat.

They went on for Rhysol only knew how long, until Syna was dethroned by her midnight brother, and perhaps even longer still, but neither could stop themselves, nor did they want to, for Elias was sure both of them knew, it wouldn’t be long before some other dark deed or tour of duty would pull the two Caldera’s apart once again, and they would lose their chance to talk like they were now.
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[Training] Tempered Tenacity

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