[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 5.0

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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 5.0

Postby Aeridrius on May 8th, 2015, 1:32 pm

Aeridrius Skyglow

Race: Human - Vantha
Gender: Male.
Age: 18.
Birthday: 8, Winter, 497AV.
Birthplace: Avanthal

Appearance: Pale skin. Short, messy bright, blond hair that is spiky of nature. Wears half body robe that has a hood, that reaches down to the side of my knees and has sleeves extending to wrists (sleeves of robe look too big on me and hangs past my hands slightly if I straighten my arms). The robe is predominantly dark blue in colour, with the lining done in white and gold. The robe has the snowflake symbol of Morwen in white printed on the chest part of the robe. I wear tight fitting light pants and black shoes.

Character Concept

My character’s parents were struggling to have a child so they went to see the Morwen for her blessing. She told the parents that she would bless them if they would dedicate him to her as a servant from the time that he was 17 years old. The parents agreed and 9 months later he was born. At his birth, one of the most magnificent displays of Northern Lights ever seen appeared in the sky, his hair was blond and his skin pale (a sign that Morwen’s mark would forever be on the child). Because of this, he was named Aeridrius (Child of winter’s light) in Vani. The character has an interest in magic and would like to honour Morwen for his birth by becoming skilled in the elements of Water, Wind and Earth especially. He also has an interest in crafting and sculpting. He’s main mission in life is to become strong enough so he can fittingly serve Morwen in her endeavours.

Character History

After birth, he was raised in a stable, loving home and educated in Morwen’s ways from a very young age. He had weekly scheduled “guidance” meetings with Morwen as he grew up and (some speculate that this is part of why he excelled at school) he completed school with top grades, with his best subject being sculpting. Lived a fairly normal life until age 17, when he was escorted to Morwen’s Ice Palace, to be initiated by her as an official “Steward of Talvi” (Talvi means winter in Vani). She encouraged him to go attend the University of Zeltiva to go and learn more about Djed and how it can be manipulated. Upon completion of his undergraduate degree, he had to return to her to learn about the next phase of his journey. His story continues now where he just enrolled at university.

Language

Fluent Language: Vani, common.
Basic Language:.
Poor Language:
Practiced Languages: Common, Vani (when praying/sculpting at University)


Skills
Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Reimancy 20 20 Novice
Sculpting 20 20 Novice
Teaching 7 7 Novice
Writing 13 13 Novice


Lores

Lore of History of the University
Lore of Religion: Morwen

Possessions

1 Set of Clothing
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak or Coat
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Wood)
-Brush (Wood)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
100 Gold Mizas

Heirloom: Snowflake shaped pendant, made out of Icestone that Morwen gave him before he started his university journey.

Housing

Location: Where in Mizahar are you living?
Zeltiva

House: Flat, walking distance from university, roughly 20x20, includes a hearth, bunk, chest, chair, and table.

Ledger
Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM
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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 5.0

Postby Aeridrius on May 8th, 2015, 4:05 pm

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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 5.0

Postby Nathan Skinner on May 10th, 2015, 2:05 am

Character sheet is ready for review

Thanks!
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Postby Korba Winterflame on May 10th, 2015, 7:06 pm

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Postby Crosspatch on May 11th, 2015, 7:27 am

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Hello there!

Just placing a mention here that I have checked the CSs off up to here. If I have missed you please by all means drop me a little reminder and I'll get on it at the first possible moment. Also, as I have mentioned before, don't repost a review on here or put a note on your CS saying you have made the edits; send me a Private Message (PM) instead as I have requested in all my interventions - you can do this by clicking the little envelope under my name.

Thank you,

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Postby Moxie on May 12th, 2015, 7:02 am

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Moxie is ready for review, thanks! :D



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Postby Dare Novak on May 12th, 2015, 8:35 am

Dare Novak has been completed. Thanks in advance!
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Postby Kai' on May 12th, 2015, 11:08 am

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Ok, I think Dra'Syuri is ready for a review! :D

Although I am pretty sure I've made a lot of mistakes in regards to her history, but your feedback would be very much appreciated! And I am unsure as to whether I put in the Correct Wilderness Survival type, but again your feedback and any mistakes you could point out would be great!

Thank you so much! :D
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Postby Drifa on May 13th, 2015, 2:11 am

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[Character Sheets] Character Sheet Review 5.0

Postby Anita on May 13th, 2015, 3:51 am

Ready to rock, thanks for your help :)

http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic58582.html
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