[Note by Crosspatch] Kefira Snow--Finished

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Kefira Snow--Finished

Postby Kefira Snow on May 14th, 2015, 1:25 pm

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What a beautiful mess


Name: Kefira Snow
Race: Snow Leopard Kelvic
Age: 3
Birthplace: Avanthal
Birthday: 7 Summer 511

one part angel


Sleek blonde hair, burning blue eyes, tanned skin, red lips; in a nutshell, that's Kefira. She's of average height and built curvy with muscling where she ought to have it. Her hair begins golden brown and lightens to a very light blonde at the tips. Her eyes mimic those of the cat she is, with pupils that dilate far more than the average human's ever could. She wears her hair past her shoulders and almost always wears it down. She walks gracefully and fluidly, as well as extremely lightly, a tribute to her leopard self.

As a cat, she is on the small end, weighing about 55 pounds and only about 30 inches long excluding her 31 inch tail. Her fur is extremely thick and very white, with dark grey rosettes all over her body. Her underbelly is white without any rosettes. Her spots remain, albeit faded while in her human form on her back but do not show up anywhere else, they are easily mistaken for tattoos.

In both forms, she retains her sole ear piercing, a small silver stud through the cartilage on the top of her ear.

one part devil


impatient: Kefira knows what she wants and she knows when she wants it: immediately! She hates to wait and is prone to fidgeting, playing with her hair, or nailbiting when she is forced to do so for short periods of time. When forced to be patient and wait for some event, she is often grumpy. She hates being told to wait and her least favorite saying of all time is "patience is a virtue, hastiness is a vice." If there's a faster way to do something or get somewhere, Kefira will find it.

impulsive: To go right along with her impatience, Kefira rarely thinks things through before she says them or does them. She doesn't like to be told "no" and will often do something she isn't supposed to simply because she isn't supposed to. She is also deeply curious which means that whenever something catches her attention, she tends to investigate it without forethought or planning ahead.

playful: some might mistake her as childish, which is simply not true. She is emotionally mature, she just tends to see the brighter side of things, making her playful and goofy at times. She knows when to be serious, she just prefer to make light of some things. She absolutely detests being forced to be serious all the time.

quick: while she is quick physically, this is more a reference to her ability to pick up on things. She is sharp-witted and intelligent and full of curiosity. All of those things lend to her the ability to learn and pick up on things well. She is deeply interested in learning and expanding her skill set.

persistent: once an idea grabs hold of her, she will stop at nothing to achieve it. As with before, she hates being told no and will go to any lengths to accomplish something. She will work at a skill until she has mastered it, devoting extensive amounts of time to becoming better and better.

feisty: when her back is up, Kefira doesn't back down. She will get into a fight with her fist as fast as she will with her words. She also tends to be rather sassy in her every day interactions as well as somewhat flirty when the mood strikes her.

one part a wreck

Birth: Born in Avanthal in the Summer
Youth: Kefira was widely ignored during her youth. Her mother was alone raising her and she spent most of her time working in order to provide for her young daughter. Kefira never knew her father. As times got harder, her mother began to realize that she could not provide for her rapidly growing daughter. One night, about three months after Kefira was born, her mother sold her to a travelling slaver and that was the last Kefira ever saw of her. The slaver was kind to her, for the most part, and sold her almost immediately upon entering Riverfall. Her new owner was a human woman married to an Akalak who took pity on her. Instead of treating her as a slave, the woman treated her as a ward.

Adolescence: as she aged, Kefira began to weary of the town of Riverfall. Much was expected of her and very little of it was entertaining. The Akalaks were, by and large, extremely serious people. Coupled with the idea of being nothing but a broodmare (the oversimplification of a young mind) to an Akalak man, Kefira expected little of her future. Eventually, she approached the female owner and told her of her desire to leave.

Adulthood: she spent several seasons traveling and found it dangerous and thrilling. She left with a group of humans who were setting out for Syliras and explore much of the land. She settled briefly in Syliras before realizing that city life was not for her. Missing her family, she began the return voyage to Riverfall. On her way, however, she stopped in Kenash and found a city that delighted and entertained her. She's been there ever since.

 
Languages
Fluent: Common
Basic: Pavi
Poor: Vani
 
Skills
Skill Exp Proficiency
Hunting 19 Novice
Dancing 5 Novice
Brawling 5 Novice
Riding 26 Competent
Flirting 5 Novice
 
Lore
Lore of Riverfall Layout
Lore of Akalak Culture
 
Posessions
1 Set of Clothing (Colorful)
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak or Coat
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Bone)
-Brush (Bone)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
Heirloom: double bladed dagger given to her by her Akalak “father”
 
Housing
Location: Kenash
House:
1 large tent (4 person)
large tarp
100 ft of rope
flint & steel
lantern
2 torches
bedroll
blanket
fishing tackle & hooks
a compass
a riding horse
a full set of tack
large set of saddlebags
 
Ledger
Purchase Cost Total
Starting Package +100 100
Imperial Watcher Puppy -50 50
 
Companions
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Dapples the Leopardbred Horse
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Marbles the Imperial Watcher puppy

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Kefira Snow--Finished

Postby Crosspatch on May 20th, 2015, 5:31 pm

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Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

  • The Character Sheet title must contain your Character’s name and nothing else.
  • Please link your CS to your profile. This can be done through the user control panel.
  • As a note, the font you have decided to use on your CS is difficult to read - you may wish to consider changing it for something more legible.
  • While I can understand your character knowing Vani the language of the Vantha and those native to Avanthal, how did your PC come across learning Pavi the language of the Drykas?
  • It is required that you clearly state which skills are Starter Package (SP) skills and which are Racial Bonus (RB).
  • Please specify the riding animal your character is familiar with, i.e. "Riding: Horse".
  • Please choose a cloak or coat. You cannot have both.
  • Even if with a caravan, wandering and travelling the land without any points in Wilderness Survival is strongly discouraged. Please take this into consideration.

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


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