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A city floating in the center of a lake, Ravok is a place of dark beauty, romance and culture. Behind it all though is the presence of Rhysol, God of Evil and Betrayal. The city is controlled by The Black Sun, a religious organization devoted to Rhysol. [Lore]

[Training] The Only Way Forward

Postby Elias Caldera on June 2nd, 2015, 10:39 pm

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31st Day of Winter, 508 AV

Elias was resolved to decipher the secrets behind the bow, because much to his increasing annoyance, those secrets still completely eluded him. It was frustrating, and like the battle with his mount, it held him hostage in a position of inadequacy. That fact on its own was intolerable enough, yet made even worse still by the prospect of his fellow petitioners and instructors seeing, or even acknowledging him as such. Velen in particular desired of him a greater level of proficiency when it came to the bow and arrow, but she wasn’t the only one who had such high expectation. With several weapons to master in his time as a petitioner, demands came at him from every angle, and when they were not met, recruits were often introduced to the whip and fist until they realized that the beatings would continue until both moral and skill improved.

At times it felt like all he'd be doing for the rest of his life was training with these accursed weapons. The sword, the shield, the bow, and his hands. They considered all of them weapons requisite of a proper warrior and the Caldera couldn’t exactly blame them for that, a well-rounded soldier was a soldier who survived, but it didn’t mean he’d have to enjoy it.

The prospect flexed his bicep and then stretched out his arms and shoulders before grabbing an arrow from his quiver. He focused intently on the target which sat down the range. It was circular with alternating rings of color to denote the various scoring zones. The lovely red center had tantalized him from the start, but he'd had difficulty just managing to make contact with the largest and outermost white ring. Not even a bit of luck had smiled upon him to allow for that fated perfect shot. He'd pray that he was able to change that fortune today, and try as he could to apply his instructors’ lessons to his archery. Combined with his own experiences, he felt like he might just have the slightest, tiniest chance.

The arrow was rough in his grasp; the petitioners weren't offered the highest quality of gear, which he always balked against whenever he got a chance, but it was good enough to serve its purpose he supposed. He needed to be able to hit a target routinely, and for now, that was it. Elias stood at the firing line preparing himself mentally for his upcoming shot. All he needed to do was replicate the form he’d been shown. Looking down at his feet, Elias confirmed that neither of his feet were further up than the next. This would act as his base for his archery. It was simple, but it afforded no wiggle room, either. If he leaned too far forward or too far backwards it would throw off his shot entirely. If he were on uneven ground, he wouldn't stand a chance.

With his stance fully set and planted, he could now focus his attention entirely on the target which awaited him. Or at least he should have been able to do such. Velen had stressed to him the importance of having a constant and fluid drawback motion. If he trained himself in the usage of a bow over and over by repeating the same technique again and again he would be better off for it. Even if he were tired, injured, or just lost in the heat of battle, the training would stick in his muscles, they would remember, and he'd be able to fight without thinking. A useful trick he had come to understand applied for every weapon, his favorite long sword included.

With the arrow ready, Elias brought the bow up, drawing the string back slowly. When his sights were level the ravokian finished pulling. All in all it was a somewhat fluid motion, even though it had a glaring error. His elbow stuck out to the side, which was a reoccurring problem for the proud Caldera lately. This flaw not only added a fair amount of unneeded stress to his arm, but it also threw off his aim to the right. A straight, compact drawback would keep him on target, but the mistake he was making pulled the bow to the right, which only exacerbated the issues he was fighting through.

Still, Elias pushed on to try and settle his gaze on that target, that circular shaped beast which had evaded him and his every shot for so long. Lining up his target, Elias released the arrow, careful not to let the string scrape his face again on the way by. He'd only needed that lesson once.

The bow launched the arrow forth on a trajectory which was set by his form long before he'd even released the string. The projectile forcefully sliced through the air, but Elias could tell from the start that he had missed again. The tip of the arrow impacted with the ground first, after that, he stopped caring where it bounced and skittered to afterwards.

A fantastic start.
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[Training] The Only Way Forward

Postby Elias Caldera on June 2nd, 2015, 10:39 pm

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Elias gritted his teeth as he tried to understand what he was doing wrong. Everything had felt so right about what he'd done. He was confident that shot was going to hit, and yet there he was, lamenting another miss. It seemed as if nothing was ever changing. It was beyond pathetic and infuriating beyond reason. If he couldn't fire from his feet, how was he ever expected to fire from horseback or in the middle of a pitched fight? Angrily, he quickly procured another arrow and went through his process in his mind. Were his feet correctly placed? Yes. Arrow facing the right way? Sure. Was he drawing back correctly? If you counted the fact that he threw out his elbow like he was trying to take someone’s eye out, or the truth that he simply pulled back too far for what his bow was designed, everything seemed fine.

Wasting energy, that's all he ever seemed to accomplish.

Elias took that arrow, notched it, and violently pulled back on the string. He aimed a bit higher this time and let go, sending the projectile screaming forward again, and again it failed to strike true. Instead it spiraled through the air until it met the stone wall behind the targets, clanking harmlessly off the hard rock. The arrow reflected off the surface, bouncing backward towards Elias before hitting the ground and rolling back to where the previous shot had hit.

The thing was mocking him now, he just knew it!

The prospect slowly lowered his bow, though he kept his hand up near where he'd released it. It was humiliating, or it would have been if anyone was even paying him any notice. The rest of the Ebonstryfe initiates around him were focused on their own training, not the failures of another worthless prospect. Brown eyes drifted down to the bow, a frown spreading across his lips. A scowl grew in its place, contorting his face as he stared at the inanimate object, gripping it tightly as he struggle to find the source of his failures.

"This is your fault." He declared to the bow, sighing in defeat as he did so.

Elias paused a moment to try and figure out just what he was doing wrong. Despite all his best efforts, nothing he did managed to change anything. Perhaps if he were firing into a mass of enemies he might actually have some sort of shot at actually hitting something. For now it seemed he would have to settle on showing the ground just who was in charge.

Taking an arrow from his quiver, Elias tried to recall what his betters had corrected for him. "My feet are placed correctly," he muttered as he scuffed them against the cobblestone ground. He was supposed to set his feet, which he was confident he had been doing right. From there he was supposed to pull back the string and take aim in one smooth motion, which he was also sure he'd been doing as it was meant. "So what am I doing wrong?"
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[Training] The Only Way Forward

Postby Elias Caldera on June 2nd, 2015, 10:39 pm

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Turning his attention to the others making use of the range, Elias watched as initiates and soldiers alike practiced to hone their skills with a wide range of ranged weapons. It was a rather curious thing, he noticed as he observed each individual taking their shots, but it was clear that no one had exactly the same form, as each delivered with their own little twists or adjustments to general base techniques. Shot after shot was taken, but Elias found himself focusing more on those where were having continued success. There were some who were placing arrow after arrow in the center of the target and those were the ones who Elias were concerned with.

One man in particular was of extra interest to the prospect. He wore the light armor of a more mobile sort that Elias was less familiar with than the average stock of soldier he was usually accustomed to seeing. Likely a man from the emberstone fortress on the mainland, he would have patrolled the outskirts of the outpost and fort in order to limit the danger to those who sought to traverse there. He heard tale of how men out there on the lakeshore were renowned for their ability to ride and survive in any environment. Their talent with ranged weaponry went a long way towards strengthening the latter he imagined, and by the tight placement of arrows it was clear that he was no slouch at his chosen profession. It was almost intimidating, and it made Elias not want to ask him for his help. Instead, it seemed like it would be a much better idea to watch him practice and try and absorb his talents from afar.

It was quickly apparent that the man didn't use the stance which Deklin had shown Elias, so the prospect would have to ignore that much. His feet were so that one was in front of the other, but only by half a foot's length. When the man was ready to fire, he brought his weapon up, just as Elias had, but that's where the similarities ended. In one swift motion he brought the string back while breathing in. His elbow remained tucked against his side and his thumb caressed his cheek as he sat at the ready. A tick passed and then he released while exhaling simultaneously. His arrow streaked through the air and embedded itself in the midst of his other shots.

It was an amazing thing to watch someone so skilled in his task. Every shot was flawless and it reminded him of the man who had first tried to initiate Elias into the art. It wasn't lost on the Caldera that there was no pressure in their current situation, but the consistency was still nothing to ignore. The question Elias faced now was how could he even begin to replicate that feat?

With his bow in his left hand and an arrow grasped firmly in his right, Elias went about getting his feet set properly. He slid them until they were just slightly more than shoulder width apart. Instead of them being even, however, Elias chose to shift forward a bit by placing his left foot just ahead of his right. It was his stance after all, and it was his with which to discover what he needed. Next, he brought the arrow to the bow, the increasingly familiar tension of a drawn bowstring making itself known throughout his arm. The strain and sting were good, he decided. After his arm was back in position, Elias caught himself making his usual error; his arm was jutting out to the side. He corrected by bringing his limb close in against his body, though much to his chagrin, the dream of a fluid shot was completely gone at this point. He inhaled, then exhaled, and finally let the arrow free.

Previous misses had left Elias dejected, but this was different. As the arrow clanked against the ground in front of the target, a fresh wave of quiet determination bubbled forth. He'd missed short this time, but it was on target none the less. Shot after shot had been pulled to the side, but this one was right down the line. Maybe he could find some hope in this after all. Or maybe he could just hit a target for once. Elias would find that miracle just as acceptable.
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[Training] The Only Way Forward

Postby Elias Caldera on June 2nd, 2015, 10:40 pm

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Elias repeated the motion several more times as he tried to figure out just what he needed to do, but shot after shot seemed to go awry. Too short, too high, just left, just right. Every time that he corrected one mistake, it seemed like he created another to take its place. It was frustrating, but he supposed it was all part of growing and learning how to properly do anything. He didn't learn to swing a blade like he did now in one try. He didn't learn how to ride a horse or kill an armored knight in just the right way without constant repetition. Caiden had helped him with the former, but it was the dark order that had drilled into his head the love for –at least the idea- of the other.

So what! He shouldn’t let it eat at him so much that he'd never struck true with this petching bow. He would, soon… One day. Before he died, Elias swore on all he held dear he would hit that damnable target with an arrow!

He took a deep breath as he came out of his trance, still looking at the target as he reached over and plucked one of the arrows from his quiver, carefully fitting it onto the bow. As he did, he changed his stance, remembering as best he could the things he had taught himself and what others had tried to teach him. Feet shoulder width apart. Lead your shot with your front foot pointing towards your target. Back foot angled for balance and support. Back straight, chest out. Elias followed these instructions as if his whip wielding instructor were right next to him, screaming the words into his ear himself. With the arrow already placed, he brought up the bow and pulled back the string, aiming once more at the target. Keep both eyes open.

Elias once again looked down the shaft of his arrow, seeing the target on the far side and, in that moment, attempted to envision where he wanted the arrow to land. The target was the enemy, A syliran who defied Rhysol, spat on the glory of Ravok, and had made some rather rude remarks about Elias’s skill with a bow. He would die! He had to!

It was several paces away, about mid-range of what his short bow could reach, yet it was a fine foe for Elias who needed this next shot to work, if only for the sake of his sanity. He took a deep breath, trying to calm his mind, and on the exhale he released. His arm had wavered once again on the moment of release, however it was not as severe as the last time. His arrow flew into the air streaking past some of the closer targets until it made contact. The jump in his arm had caused it to veer off to the left, yet this time he had managed to land it within the outer circle of the target. Unfortunately, it had been the wrong target...

He had hit the wrong bloody target!

Before the madness took him, Elias consoled himself that the shot had been a major improvement compared to the rest of the day, and he reached down once again for another arrow.
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[Training] The Only Way Forward

Postby Elias Caldera on June 2nd, 2015, 10:40 pm

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Elias paced back and forth in front of the firing line as he took long, deep breaths to try and keep his temperament cool. There were eleven and twelve year old children succeeding at something a full grown teenager couldn't even begin to do. At least they hadn't mocked him to his face, though he wondered if at least some of the laughter and giggling he heard wasn't placed his way.

There were over a dozen arrows littering the ground in front of his target, and not a single one sticking from it. He couldn’t even bring himself to look at the one that had hit the mark, but had gone so far off kilter it had struck someone else’s target instead. Eye contact with the person who had been using the thing in question was also downright inconceivable. Elias just kept his head down while he mentally made count of his ammo. He only had a couple arrows left, which meant he was either sinking one of the little bastards into that circle soon, or he was exhausting the rest of the arrows and then burning the whole place down. Those were clearly the only options he had.

One of the projectiles rested in his hand and Elias was almost scared to let it escape from his hold. It was likely to meet the same fate as the rest of them; lonely and broken on the ground, failing to fulfill the only purpose for existing it had. Oh gods, is this arrow me if I don’t make it? He shook the worry thought from his head almost as quickly as it had arrived.

He was here for only one reason, so he'd finish it up and call it good. No more dilly dallying with doubt and despair. He took the arrow and placed it gingerly against the bowstring, notching it in place. The string was wound tight, though he'd have it looked at after all the training he'd been doing. It felt like it had the right amount of give though, so he pulled back a few inches as he brought the bow level with the target. He took a moment to align his sight with the center of said target and then continued with his draw. He remembered to keep his elbow in against his body, despite how unnatural it it was felt with his current stance. One of the inherent problems with the usually way he aligned his body when shooting was how much of yourself was perpendicular to the target. If almost invited the elbow issue he'd been having and limited the range of motion if you had the proper form.

With the string fully drawn, Elias made sure he was still on target, at least as far as he could tell, and released the arrow. The string thrummed back to its original position, and by doing so propelled the sharp projectile along its path.

Thud.

The dull sound registered with Elias's senses, if a bit slowly. He'd been used to the sound of wood meeting stone and literally nothing else. It was loud, annoying, and it grated at Elias's nerves each time he was forced to listen to it. But this… This was different. There was an arrow in the target!

Sure, it was barely in. It caught the outermost edge of the outermost ring on the very bottom of the target. If he'd been an inch lower it would have dove under the hay and slid across the ground, but none of that mattered. He had hit it!

Elias looked around, raising his bow above his head, a quieted shout of exaltation stuck in his throat as he waited for someone to praise or congratulate him. No one cared of course, and not a soul paid him any mind, but it didn't matter. Elias knew what he'd done. After wasting dozens upon dozens of arrows and straining his arm and shoulder again and again, he'd finally made contact. Next step was hitting twice in a row, but he wasn't going to test his luck. Someone or something had smiled upon him, and he wasn't going to ruin this moment. With a grin on his lips, Elias Caldera, master of the bow, moved down to go and collect his arrows and call it a day.
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[Training] The Only Way Forward

Postby Bartholomew on June 23rd, 2015, 4:51 pm

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Truth be told… I wanted to see him fail for a last time and try to burn the place down.

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