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9th – People from all over Endrykas go out in search of natural stores of fruits, vegetables and nuts which will continue until stockpiles for winter are full.

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Not found on any map, Endrykas is a large migrating tent city wherein the horseclans of Cyphrus gather to trade and exchange information. [Lore]

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Postby Lian Windrunner on October 7th, 2015, 4:22 am

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Lian worked diligently on the wolf hide Dravite had called him over to help with. He had very little idea of what to do, so he watched to see what Dravite did. His friend seemed to be more skilled in such matters than he was. When Dravite started at the belly, so did he. It was similar to the lesson he'd had a while back on field dressing a deer. If he was working on a deer, he would feel along the rib cage until he found a spot that ended in a V shape at the end of the rib cage. That was the sternum, the base of the chest just above where it meets the belly. On a deer, that was just below where the stag's forelegs were if Lian remembered correctly. He didn't know if it would be in the same place on a wolf or not, so Lian rubbed his fingers along the rib cage, feeling for the place that ended in a V shape.

It took him a while, but he finally found it, and it was in roughly the same spot. Lian wondered briefly if the sternum was in the same place on all animals. Then he placed his knife at the correct spot, and pressed the tip into the dead wolf's flesh. He remembered that he had to make shallow cuts to avoid cutting into the wall of muscle that holds the animal's guts inside. Cutting through that would be to cut into the organs, and taint the meat. He remembered being told that he would feel a difference between the hide wall, and the muscle that holds the animal's guts inside if he inserted his fingers into the slit made by the first cut.

Unfortunately when he tried to make that cut, he cut too deeply. Blood, and pieces of the organ he had pierced welled out of the slit, coating the fur in dark, sticky blood. Lian scowled. He had thought he had been careful. What had he done wrong? Lian glanced at his friend as he worked, noticing that the knife he used wasn't as sharp as Lian's knife was. Could that be the problem? Perhaps in the future, he should keep two knives. One for skinning his prey, and one for killing it.

Lian decided to try again. Cutting into the organs might taint the meat, but he was more interested in the hide than the meat for now. With luck, the blood could be washed off once the skin had been removed from the carcass. This time, Lian eased the tip of the knife into the carcass as slowly as he could. After making the smallest of cuts, he inserted his finger into it, and found that he could indeed feel a difference between the hide wall and the muscle holding the wolf's guts inside. The blood that had been released made it more difficult to feel what he was looking for because it made everything slick, and wet. But he could still feel the difference.

Lian worked slowly, cutting from the sternum towards the crotch. He cut too deep on more than one occasion, but by the time he had finished making the first cut, he thought he was getting a better feel of how shallow the cut had to be. At least, he thought he was. Lian turned to see how his friend was progressing, and watched as Dravite drew his knife along the inside of each leg before trying to cut the pelt away from the carcass with short, sharp cuts. He did the best he could to follow his friend's lead, but he had no real idea of what he was doing. Since his knife was sharper than it should be, his cuts were often too deep. And sometimes the flesh tore as he tried to cut the pelt off.

But eventually, his efforts paid off. His pelt wasn't in good shape when he had removed it from the carcass, but it was his first attempt at working on a pelt unaided. He wasn't expecting much in the way of success. Lian turned to watch Dravite again. His friend rubbed salt into his pelt, and Lian remembered helping Dravite do the same thing with the skin of the grass bear they had killed together last season. So Lian began rubbing salt into this pelt now. He wasn't sure of how much to use, so he went easy on the salt. Using too much might damage the pelt in some way, ruining any chance he had of getting a pelt he could actually use out of his efforts.

When Amunet came over and confronted Dravite, berating him for insulting her strider, he couldn't help but watch with bemusement. The woman he was starting to see as a friend was very spirited as she stood up for her strider. Lian knew that if someone insulted his own strider, he would likely do the same. But Lian didn't know the full story here, and he knew it. Dravite wasn't the type of person to insult someone's strider without cause. Perhaps Amunet's strider had done something that she was unaware of? Or perhaps there was simply some kind of misunderstanding? Could Amunet have taken something Dravite had said as an insult when no such insult had been intended?

Lian didn't know what to think, as he watched his friend and ankal hold back his anger. Amunet left, and Dravite left soon afterwards. Lian watched him leave, then returned to his own work. He continued rubbing salt into the pelt for a while, until he decided that he had used enough. It was a complete guess on his part, but it was the best he could do. He had used far less salt on this pelt than he had on the bear's, which only made sense since the bear's pelt had been far larger than the wolf's.

By now, his hands were covered in blood. Lian wanted to get himself cleaned up quickly. Even if he wanted to stay and help with the efforts to find more food, he couldn't do so until his hands were clean. So he picked up his wolf, and carried it back towards the city..
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Postby Ruari Darkwind on October 8th, 2015, 8:06 am

"I leave the ones at the top and the bottom, the ground, for Caiyha," Ruari said to Lian, moments before they had left their position to attend the animals and take part in the wolves. She meant it, too; these things were gifts that she wished to not take from anything else.

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When Akasja had finished with the tending to the horse, through which Ruari watched with interest and a fine edge of protectiveness for the strider, she offered the woman a thin smile that was more welcoming than she had presented herself before. What Ruari had seen was a foreigner that took care, one that didn't seem interested in taking the horses or somehow harming the Drykas, and for that Ruari was grateful.

But as with any other stranger, Ruari wasn't yet certain of her motives.

Her attention was then diverted; the redhead that Ruari had found irritating was now waving a quiet attitude around at a Watchguard. Ruari's head cocked, genuinely confused and put off at the situation. She didn't admire it, not in the least, but that could have been due to lack of knowing the cause of the woman's outburst.

She sat back on her haunches and blatantly stared, her expression both bemused and astounded, and when she listened closer and read harder, she looked to what she assumed was the strider in question and thought the horse looked distinctly unruffled by the situation. A smile edged the curve of Ruari's mouth as she stood up and offered gratitude to the dark-eyed stranger in the form of signs now that the work had been done and the doctor had reclaimed her belongings, departing as well once her husband had gone.

Ruari thought, in the last moments of catching sight of them, that there had been a little fawn tailing after the children, before she herself turned away and went off to continue foraging. She offered a silent invitation to Lian to continue foraging with her, if he didn't also want to take the pelt to Endrykas at the moment, before heading out.

Ruari didn't want to miss out on snacking on a few plums.
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Postby Akasja on October 13th, 2015, 5:15 am

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After Pearl had collected her tools, Akasja waved a short goodbye to her and thanked her in Common. She would see the doctor again in short order. It was not long after Pearl had taken off that Akasja's gaze followed everyone else's to the short argument unfolding between another bright-haired young woman and a somewhat older Drykas, the man Dravite. He, Akasja recalled, was Pearl's husband. The family dynamics among these horse people were still quite complicated to Akasja, although she was not unused to one person having multiple partners where she came from. Akasja watched Dravite's mild reaction and puzzled at the ire that the red-haired woman had cast towards him. Akasja could not understand a thing the two said to each other, but Dravite seemed to resent this woman getting mad at him. Whatever the source of this quarrel, it was quickly over, and Akasja looked away once she felt there would be no physical attack from either person.

As Ruari began to rise, Akasja looked back towards her and noticed a soft smile on her face. Akasja almost feared this kindness to be a fluke when the Drykas woman unmistakably signed her thanks. Akasja's expression lightened. She offered a slow nod and gentle smirk as she signed thanks in return. Her efforts had not been wasted.

Akasja gave a wave of acknowledgement to the Drykas who owned the mare. He and his horse would need a little time to heal, but they would most likely be fine in a few days. Akasja turned to walk back to her own horse, ready to lead her on to a safe place for foraging. The Desertbred was still where Akasja had dismounted from her, grazing pleasantly in the sun. Not knowing exactly where to head from here, Akasja decided to keep the remaining groups in her line of sight and scour the landscape for berry bushes or trees bearing fruit.
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Postby Naiya on December 11th, 2015, 6:22 pm


Here's what the Fox says


Name:Amunet
XP Award:
  • Observation +4
  • Foraging +1
  • Botany +1
  • Socialization +4
  • Rhetoric +1

Lore:
  • Amunet: Getting old for marriage
  • Amunet: Doesn't listen to her elders
  • Foraging: Never take all from one location
  • Botany: Recognizing Wild Turnip
  • Botany: Differentiating carrot and parsnip
  • Botany: Wild Pumpkin
  • Camile: A bothersome hunter
  • Leia: Not graceful
  • Dravite: A typical, button-pushing Ankal.

Notes: I'm so glad you picked up this event and got it going. I did notice right off the bat that you had some simple typos, grammatical errors, and redundancies in a lot of your posts, try and give things a read over for those before posting. It will really help to boost your writing to the next level. Your punctuation was a little confusing in some places as well, but it didn't stop Amunet from showing her colors and really making the thread fun to read.

Name:Dravite
XP Award:
  • Bodybuilding +3
  • Cleaning +1
  • Endurance +2
  • Flirting +2
  • Leadership +4
  • Childcare +3
  • Running +2
  • Subterfuge +2
  • Wilderness Survival +3
  • Webbing +3
  • Rhetoric +2
  • Weapon: Spear +1
  • Intimidation +2
  • Tanning +1
Lore:
  • Beware of stranger danger!
  • Leadership: Set the tone of an excursion
  • Wilderness Survival: Safety comes from being ready
  • Webbing: Tears in the web are dangerous
  • Observation: Reading body language

Award One common Wolf Pelt, One professional wolf pelt. Meat from one average sized wolf. A bite wound on Dravite's left elbow, which will heal well if monitored. Very faint scars will linger after the wounds heal.
Notes: As always, Drav, it was a pleasure to follow along the story you wove. We really got to see the protective and slightly haughty nature of your PC. Not to mention one of my favorite lines from Dravite so far “When he looked at Belkaia he didn’t see an invalid, he saw a warrior, a huntress, a survivor; his queen.” I did notice a couple of errors in your writing. Simple things we all do like... actually I can't recall the ones I noticed and I can't find them. I believe that it is just mistyped endings, like “though” instead of “thought”. Great job though, and I appreciate the mindfulness you had for the length of this thread.

Name:Pearl
XP Award:
  • Animal Husbandry +1
  • Observation +4
  • Childcare +2
  • Flirting +2
  • Socialization +4
  • Stealth +1
  • Land Navigation +1
  • Bodybuilding +1
  • Leadership +2
  • Medicine +3
  • Cleaning +3
  • Rhetoric +3
  • Herbalism +1
  • Teaching +2
  • Intelligence +1
  • Horsemanship +1
Lore:
  • Land Navigation: Look for landmarks
  • Akasja: A Riverflower aid and skilled herbalist
  • Amunet: A fellow from the Riverflower
  • Amunet: An insolent nuisence of a child
  • Men of the Watch are tough as nails
  • Medicine: Differentiating wounds that will need stitches
  • Medicine: Uses of calendula ointment
  • Medicine: Estimating healing times
  • Medicine: Checking circulation
  • Herbalism: Uses of Tumeric Powder

Notes: I love your interactions with Bel, they are the cutest wives. Of course, Pearl and Dravite never fail to be adorable, but the addition of the first wife is a great skill to put into use. Pearl is such an interesting character, I love the opportunity to see her interact with the Drykas at large.

Name:Ruari
XP Award:
  • Foraging +3
  • Observation +4
  • Socialization +2
  • Medicine +1
  • Cleaning +1
  • Horsemanship +1
  • Animal Husbandry +2
  • Medicine +1
Lore:
  • Foraging: Take one, leave one
  • Foraging: Drykas are not the only foragers, be mindful
  • Darkwinds: Not a social pavilion
  • Lian: A familiar face
  • Medicine: Cleaning a wound

Notes: I live the imagery you invoke in your writing, but it seems like you mention a lot of actions without describing them, and unless you do describe them, I can't award skill points. Try and be aware of that in future threads! I hate seeing what you're going for and not being able to give it.

Name:Lian
XP Award:
  • Botany +1
  • Observation +3
  • Foraging +2
  • Socialization +2
  • Logic +1
  • Wilderness Survival +2
  • Tanning +1
  • Logic +1
  • Cleaning +1
Lore:
  • Botany: Berries are easy to find and good to eat
  • Foreigners are not welcomed by the Drykas
  • The Watch: Will not allow a danger to exist in the city

Award One poor quality wolf pelt, one poor quality wolf carcass (should you choose to keep it).
Notes: There was a lot said in some of your posts, but nothing was done, because of that I sometimes had trouble awarding skills. That said, when you did explore the actual doing of things, you did so brilliantly, with great consideration to the level of skill Lian has. Really great job, and I love your attention to detail.

Name:Akasja
XP Award:
  • Horsemanship +1
  • Tracking +1
  • Land Navigation +1
  • Riding +2
  • Observation +4
  • Sewing +1
  • Socialization +4
  • Investigation +1
  • Medicine +2
  • Herbalism +2
  • Foraging +1
Lore:
  • Sewing: Threading a needle
  • Herbalism: Herbs are safer diluted in oil
  • Medicine: Helping hands are just as good as healing ones

Notes: I really enjoyed how fluidly you slipped into the thread, it'll be great to see your writing in the future.

General Note: I loved seeing everyone come together for this event! I hope I fulfilled your expectations for the grade. If you have questions or disagree with the grade I have given you, please feel free to shoot me a PM about it. I'm not perfect, and with such a large thread I know that I may have missed some of the more subtle things you might have been going for. That said, I did try my best to find and award everything I could.
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