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The Wilderness of Cyphrus is an endless sea of tall grass that rolls just like the oceans themselves. Geysers kiss the sky with their steamy breath, and mysterious craters create microworlds all their own. But above all danger lives here in the tall grass in the form of fierce wild creatures; elegant serpents that swim through the land like whales through the ocean and fierce packs of glassbeaks that hunt in packs which are only kept at bay by fires. Traverse it carefully, with a guide if possible, for those that venture alone endanger themselves in countless ways.

Tell My Son

Postby Dravite on August 27th, 2015, 1:37 am

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59 Summer, 515 AV
8th Bell, Morning
The Sea of Grass


Bones was being particularly difficult this morning, even running her alongside Cree wasn’t enough to settle her. Dravite rode across the plain, keeping The Watch camp in sight as he worked both horses. There was a painful stinging sensation below his right hip where he had been bitten by the Zith. Dravite stopped to fold a wet cloth he had soaked in salt water, over the wound to hold in place under his leather pants and avoid rubbing. Disinfecting cloth in salt water was about as knowledgeable as the man got when it came to medicine and looking after open wounds.

By the time he had finished exercising the horses; Bones had her head down and was snorting at the grass. He led them both to the water in camp and waited for each to drink before untying the rope that tethered one horse to the other. He then led Bones out of camp and back into the tall grass where he stopped to try and get on the unbroken mare. Bones seemed too tired to protest and Dravite put his hands on her back, holding the rope attached to her halter. He jumped away from the ground to throw his weight over the animal’s back and lay there for a time to gauge her temperament.

The mare snorted again and stomped her foot. The horse lord didn’t exactly take this as open invitation, but slowly sat up on the mare’s back before patting her neck, “Good,” he spoke to her in Pavi, “easy.”

He felt the animal flinch beneath him and watched as her ears turned back slowly to listen. The muscles in the mare’s shoulders grew tense and Dravite slowly tightened his hands around the rope, shortening the reins. He clicked his tongue against the roof of his mouth just like he did while training her alongside his Strider, Cree. When that didn’t work, Dravite gave a light squeeze with his legs and clicked again, hoping to get the mare to walk forwards. “Come on,” he encouraged gently, “Good girl.”

The colour-splash mare stomped her foot again and this time swivelled her ears to lay them flat against her neck; this was never a good sign, Dravite knew enough about horses to know that was certain. “Bones?” He said lowly, hoping she wasn’t about to try anything sinister, “Trot on!” The man ordered and clicked again with his tongue, though this time he gave her a little nudge in the side just like he would for Cree, obviously forgetting for a split second which horse he was working with.

The force of the animal launching forward caused Dravite’s legs to tighten like a vice around the mare which did not seem to improve their friendship. Bones leapt forward and gave a powerful buck mid-jump that forced the man forwards, only to be stopped suddenly and tossed back again as her feet met the ground and she propelled herself skyward once more; throwing her weight around like a wild Strider that didn’t want to be ridden. Dravite roared at the mare and kicked her forward, hoping she might attempt to gallop away with him which would be the preferred choice to all this bucking.

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Tell My Son

Postby Dravite on August 27th, 2015, 10:40 pm

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White knuckled and red faced, the man held on for dear life. It had been a great many years since he had been forced to contend with a bucking horse and Bones was proving to be a real challenge and test of his skill. She bound three feet off the ground only to land and jump again as if her legs were tightly coiled springs, not yet tiring in their assault. When he pulled hard on the rope to try and trip her or throw the mare off balance, she would swing her heavy hind quarters around and lash out again like a wild bull. Dravite searched for a safe opportunity to bail but knew one ill planned step would land him in the firing line of a well-timed kick from the mare. Horses often lashed out but when they really meant to kick a person, they seldom missed.

The strength in his legs was waning and it took everything the man had to stay on. Each time the mare's hooves met the ground he would thump her in the sides in an attempt to drive her forwards until finally, it worked. Bones took off like a cat out of water and shot across the plain faster than Dravite was expecting. He leaned back slightly to try make it a more comfortable ride but just as he thought he was winning the battle, Bones put the brakes on and sent him flying overhead into the tall grass. The man landed with a thump, though the grass broke his fall, the only thing he heard was the laughter of The Watch members who had seen it all unfold and the fading drumming of his mare's footfalls and she bolted towards the horizon.

Dravite got to his feet quickly and made a move to go after the horse as he called out to Cree who was quick to react. The stallion was at his side in a few short ticks and as he buried his hands in the Strider's long, thick mane and threw a leg over the animal's back; they were off. Bones was quick but no horse could outrun a Drykas Strider in The Sea of Grass. They cut across the plain in record time, the tapered points of the tall grass whipped against Dravite's feet as they went. Cree made a deep, rumbling sound that evolved into a high-pitched squeal, as if to summon his runaway mare to stop. Bones threw her head up, delighted that she had been able to outsmart her rider and when Cree and Dravite finally pulled up alongside her, she trotted and slowed to a stop, giving Dravite the opportunity to reach out and grab the makeshift reins.

Caught up, he used all his strength to stop the mare before slipping from his Strider’s back to wave the end of the rope and spook Bones, causing the mare to dart away from the snake like object. He hissed and stepped after her, driving the horse into a lunge they had practiced previously. He would not reward her to her behaviour and gave her little time to rest, pushing the mare to run around, first to the left and then to the right, until she was tired and slowed. The horse lord approached her then, jumping back up onto the saddle of her back to kick and race her forwards again. The mare gave a half-hearted buck which caused her to falter and almost trip; only then was Dravite satisfied that he had proved to her that she could not beat him.

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Tell My Son

Postby Dravite on August 27th, 2015, 10:52 pm

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Soon he had the mare trotting nicely and had almost forgiven her for throwing him off. Cree galloped ahead back to camp while Dravite steered Bones away from the campsite, he didn't want the animal to think of camp as a reward; a place where he would stop and dismount. When he clicked his tongue against the roof of his mouth and nudged the mare she sped up, nodding her head as she went along, clearly tired. The horse lord got the animal to stop using the same Pavi command he would with Cree, before sliding from her back, "hopefully you won't make it so hard on yourself next time," he spoke gently, rubbing the mare's temple, "come on let's gets you some water."

Bones needed no encouragement to drink this time and stood over the trough, gulping down the water like a desert camel in a drought. Dravite washed his rope burned hands and ran a damp cloth over his upper body and face to cool off when Helena approached him, "that was an impressive show," she smiled, obviously teasing him for the fall he had taken.
"If you liked that, just wait and see what we do tomorrow morning," he laughed.
Helena chuckled, "how are you feeling? You look terrible."
"I'm fine, little hard work never hurt," the man might have reconsidered his answer is he could see himself as Helena saw him now, sweating, his eyes slightly sunken, and the usual sun-ravished skin now and off-white.
"Until you realise that we have to ride five bells east today."
Dravite looked up at the sun and pointed across the plain, "East," he smiled, "only five bells?"
"Will your horses be all right?"
The man nodded, "Cree is ready to go, and Bones will keep up; though my goat Moxie might struggle."
"Carry her," Helena shrugged.
"Will do, boss."
The woman smacked his shoulder playfully and went on her way, "cheeky."

Moxie was happily chewing on a big mouthful of grass when Dravite found her, jar in hand and ready to collect some milk for the morning. He knelt down beside the goat and got straight to work, squeezing her udders gently to fill the jar before ten chimes had passed, "long walk today, Moxie; hope you can keep up." He led the goat to the trough and she drank before returning to the lush patch of grass in the shade of a nearby tree.

The horse lord drank from the jar; he was used to the taste of goats milk after half a season of collecting it for breakfast and knew it would help fill him up for the day. Sparrow was just getting up when Dravite returned to his bedroll and offered her the last of the milk, "fresh," he smiled.
"Goat," his cousin cringed.
"Oh come on, it's not that bad; you spoiled little Zibri lover."
Sparrow laughed, "How did the training go?"
"Fantastic, no broken bones," he grinned.
"Good, last thing you need after the rib right?"
Dravite nodded.

Sparrow got up to go and wash her face and tend to her Strider, giving Dravite the chance to check on his Zith bite. The wound looked worse than it had the day before and all the flesh around the teeth marks was coloured and oozing with a strange smelling liquid. He growled and threw the cloth into the boiling pot before starting and fire and adding a lot more salt to the water, "just a few more days," he told himself, then he would be able to have his wife Pearl check the wound and help him clean it out properly.

The freshly serialised cloth was held against the bite mark, steam curling up and away from the still hot fabric. He squeezed yellow gunk from the open wound and cleaned it with the salt water, hoping it would see him through until The Watch was group were free to ride home to Endrykas.

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Tell My Son

Postby Pearl on October 9th, 2015, 2:28 am

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Experience
  • Riding Horse 3
  • Medicine 2
  • Land Navigation 2
  • Animal Husbandry 2
  • Body Building 1
  • Horsemanship 3
  • Intelligence 2
  • Endurance 3
  • Planning 1
  • Logic 2
  • Intimidation 1
  • Socialization 1
  • Rhetoric 1
  • Cooking 1


Lore
  • Medicine: Apply pressure to an open wound
  • Medicine: Don't rub an open wound
  • Horsemanship: Start slow when breaking a horse to ride
  • Horsemanship: Know the horse you are training
  • Intelligence: If a horse intends to kick you, it most certainly will
  • Horsemanship: Persistence pays off
  • No other horse is as fast as a Drykas Strider on the Sea of Grass
  • Horsemanship: The horse must understand who is in charge
  • Sparrow: Does not like goat milk
  • Medicine: Express pus from a wound to clean it
  • Medicine: A wound must be cleaned often


Poor Bones, she had a rough day of training. I like how she was able to have a partial win, but then Dravite was right back at it to show her who was boss. I enjoyed this thread, even if it was short, it was well written and a very pleasant read.

Thank you for allowing me to grade your thread. If you feel I have missed something, please do let me know.

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