[Note by Astator] Shena

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Shena

Postby Shena on December 29th, 2015, 12:46 pm

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Race: Ethaefal (Syna)
Gender: Female
Height: 6'0"
Weight: 135 lbs
Eye Color: Smoky blue
Hair Color: Pale Brown (Winter)
Horn Color: Dark Green (Winter)
Skin: Opalescent
Race: Vantha
Gender: Female
Height: 5'4"
Weight: 108lbs
Eye Color: Vivid Dark Blue
Hair Color: Black with Blue-tinted aurora highlights
Skin: Pale white, Single Toned
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Biography
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Name: Shena (named after Syna)
Age: 15yrs old
Birthday: 1st day of Spring 500AV
Faceclaim: Alison Gingerich

Fluent: Common
Basic: Vani
Poor: Nari

Job Location: The Shooting Star Inn
Profession: Groomer/Masseuse
Pay: (WIP)

Location: Lhavit
Housing: The Shooting Star Inn
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Marks/Injuries/Gnosis
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-In her Vantha form, she has a blue aurora-like shimmer to her black hair.

-In her Vantha form, on her stomach, there is a small scar from when she was pulled naked from the ice, it having cut her.

-Dark Blue Iris







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Description
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Syna's own daughter some say. Leth's own, some whisper. They couldn't be further from the truth, nor does Shena claim such a statement as truth. However the similarities do make people wonder. By day, Shena can be seen about town, glorious, opalescent in color, and full of life. At night she is darkened, pale like the moon, black hair like the night with the blue of the auroras in her hair. In both forms, Shena is beautiful to behold. Her physical ability as Ethaefal transcends that of mere mortals, allowing her to handle amounts of pain, fatigue, or tiring far beyond that normal to someone of her size and shape. As Ethaefal, even her senses and physical self are so much more better.

Strong yet simple, humble some say, but only in her Ethaefal form does she hold true glory of the goddess Syna. As Ethaefal in her wondrous glamour, she stands tall; perfect in form, well endowed, long legged and gorgeous; skin bearing a marblesce radiance of the very sun itself and she herself like Syna, is filled with joy and revelation. In her Vantha form, Shena is has skin like the glow of the moon, like an alabaster or porcelain, and seemingly just as delicate and beautiful in material; yet like Leth, she is a being filled with spontaneity, determination, and dark love. Perhaps it is divine cruelty that she came to Mizahar; a being of twilight it seems. Perhaps it is grace that sent her, but she likes to think Syna and Leth chose her to come for a reason and that she was never abandoned by them.

Ethaefal Appearance per Season:
Winter colors: Hair - pale brown; Horns - forest green
Fall colors: Hair - deep auburns and reds; Horns - reds, golds
Spring colors: Hair - shades of blonde; Horns - spring green and lilac
Summer colors: Hair - any of the above hues, but touched by gold; Horns - white, peach


History
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500AV: The first day of spring was coming to a close, the hour of twilight was drawing near when Wind Eagles and their riders spotted a glow in the water below them in a frozen over lake not far from Mt. Skyinarta. A quick descent found a woman of considerable beauty trapped beneath broken ice. Either by her descent from the heavens or by her thrashing, the ice had been mostly broken, but now she was stuck, fighting with the last bit of air she had for the surface. With the help of the Inarta and the sharp beaks of the Wind Eagles, they opened up the ice and were able to rescue the radiant beauty. Brilliant light like the sun encapsulated her upon exiting the water, it having traversed into the realm of Leth, leaving the place where the tall Ethaefal was, a much smaller freezing human with skin like the moon. Image
501AV: Being largely discovered by the culture of the Inarta as she started to explore outside of her new family, and being without official name, she was given the name Shena, after the glory which she represented, Syna. Slowly she began to pick up the beginnings of the foreign language Nari, hearing them speak it continuously around her.
511AV: Still somewhat untrained, and far from bonding with the complex culture of the Inarta or even able to speak their language even still after nearly a decade, she decided finally to strive off in search of her own future and life. With much sadness, the Inarta brought her to Lhavit where she strove as a servant, having no real skill other than service.
512AV: The Djed storm hit Lhavit and hit hard. However thankfully she was indoors behind the specially forged glass crafted in Lhavit that spared them in some regards. The after effects were horrible and she did what she could to comfort others. In doing so, she found her calling. Shena began to learn the ins and outs of cosmetics, massage, and just making the people of Lhavit feel better about themselves, either through comfort or relaxation.
515AV: After much practice and patience, Shena left her servant job to work for herself. Needing a place to stay, she has struck a deal the winter of 515AV for room and board in exchange for her services for guests who request wish for above quality services in the The Shooting Star Inn.


Character Concept/Personality
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Shena represents the sides of Mizahar, both the light and the dark. Mizahar is a land ripped apart, from the land humans trespass upon to the domain of the gods. Yet Shena more accurately represents the harmony of both the light and dark rather than being at war within herself. Some say she represents Syna and Leth in unison. She is both gleeful, joyous, and everything that Syna is, but at the same time, she can be dark, destructive, and has a desire to be deeply devoted in everything she does. While this is true, it is not the whole story of who she is. Shena is the piece of the puzzle that unites all of Mizahar. She is filled to the brim of joy, yet melancholy, peaceful, yet at unrest. She can be confused and yet have wisdom centuries old. Some say she is passionate, and others describe her as being reserved. More accurately described, Shena is the life and death of Mizahar. Only time will tell what mold she fits into, just like everything else in the world.
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Shena

Postby Shena on December 29th, 2015, 1:22 pm

Skills:

Skill Total EXP Proficiency
Cosmetology 15 15SP Novice
Leadership 10 10RB Novice
Massage 30 30SP Competent
Philtering 5 5SP Novice


Lores:
 
Location
-Location: Lhavit- Mountain of Zintia (Starting)
 
Social
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Magic
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Thought
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Physical
-Massage: Knowing how to get out tension (Starting)
 
Religion
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Items:

 
Starting Ledger
Ledger

Purchase Qt. Cost Total
Starting - 100 Ki 100 Ki
Home Exchange - 500Ki 600 Ki
Plain Blue Dress 1 (Starting) -
Plain Undergarments 1 (Starting) -
Plain Cowl 1 (Starting) -
Plain Cloak 1 (Starting) -
Plain Shoes 1 (Starting) -
Waterskin 1 (Starting) -
Flint & Steel 1 (Starting) -
Backpack 1 (Starting) -
Comb (Wood) 1 (Starting) -
Brush (Bone) 1 (Starting) -
Soap 1 (Starting) -
Razor 1 (Starting) -
Eating Knife 1 (Starting) -
MONEY TOTAL - - 600Ki


Heirloom - A maple wooden box containing various pieces of filigree and decoration, given to Shena by the Inarta people as a parting gift. Having been adorned with various headdresses and weaved feathers in her hair since arriving, doing so had given her a desire for making unique designs of these to tie into her hair. This parting box contains many an elaborately designed headdress, complete with small pieces of bits and bobs of various shapes, sizes, and quality that can be taken away or added to the single piece of jewelry. The total value of this item is roughly 40Ki and can be mixed and matched to make some wonderfully unique headdresses with the same beautiful frame.
 
Winter 515AV
Ledger

Purchase Qt. Cost
Furniture
Bed, Average 1 10Ki
Chair, Average 6 4Ki 2Tk
Chamber Pot 1 2Tk
Couch, Average 2 6Ki
Dresser, Average 1 2Ki
End Table, Average 1 3Tk
Hearth, Average 1 3Ki
Hutch, Average 1 2Ki
Table, Average 1 1Ki
Wash Basin, Average 1 2Ki
TOTAL - 30Ki 7Tk
Clothing
Belt 1 2Tk
Cape, Half 1 1Ki
Corset 1 3Tk
Wool, Mohair Winter Dress 3 36Ki
Silk Undergarments 4 10Ki
High Boots 1 5Tk
TOTAL - 48Ki
Cosmetic/Grooming Items
Cosmetic Brush 1 2Tk
Face Pastes 10oz 1Ki
Face Powder 10oz 1Ki
Kohl 10oz 1Ki
Lip Pomade 10oz 1Ki
Powder-Puff 1 2Tk
Rouge 10oz 1Ki
Toothpowder 16oz 1Ki 2Tk
Toothbrush 1 3Ki
Hair Color 1 1Ki
Pomade 10oz 1Ki
Wig Powder 1 5Tk
Hair Kit 1 25Ki
Toilette Kit 1 25Ki
Cologne 10oz 1Ki
Scented Water 2oz 1Ki
TOTAL - 63Ki 1Tk
Cooking
Basin 2-Quart 1 2Tk
Bowl 5" 8OZ 6 6Jk
Cistern, 3 Gallon 1 1Ki 5Tk
Cooking Pot 2-gallon 2 1Ki
Cup 8OZ 6 3Tk
Dish 7" 10 3Tk
Jar 3 3Tk
Pitcher, Gallon 1 7Tk
Dinner Forks 12 1Tk 2Jk
Bread Knife 6 6Jk
Spread Knife 1 1Jk
Steak Knife 6 1Ki 2Tk
Casserole Spoon 1 3Jk
Soup Spoon 6 6Jk
Soap 1lbs 5Tk
TOTAL - 6Ki 3Tk 4Jk
Living Expenses - 197Ki 1Tk 4Jk
Food Expenses - Paid in Services
SPENT TOTAL - -345Ki 2Tk 8Jk
MONEY TOTAL - 254Ki 7Tk 2Jk
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Postby Astator on January 2nd, 2016, 10:27 pm

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Hello there! I am Astator one of the local CS Liaisons, I have found a few mistakes in your character sheet that need to be corrected. Before you can continue roleplaying. Don't worry, they will take but a few minutes to fix.

  • Unless you are a Foresaken Ethaefal meaning you have scorned the gods for your fall (which according to your history and concept you do not) your colors do not work for a Syna Ethaefal. Here is the quote from the lore regarding colors as an Ethaefal:

    Syna's Ethaefal glimmer shades of rosy gold or copper when they shift in the sunlight, and their irises are a molten amber, dusky blue, citrine or green.
    Winter colors: Hair - pale brown; Horns - forest green
    Fall colors: Hair - deep auburns and reds; Horns - reds, golds
    Spring colors: Hair - shades of blonde; Horns - spring green and lilac
    Summer colors: Hair - any of the above hues, but touched by gold; Horns - white, peach

    Please note that those colors do not change every year, so please pick a set and list them all.
  • Colors of a Vantha's eyes are not black, they are usually a vivid color ranging from blues to purples to reds. As a Vantha Ethaefal however, you do not get the lovely perk of color changing eyes like mood rings.
  • The Apparent Age is not necessary, and if you insist on this please give an age, however as a Vantha you placed 19 there, so that would be the rough age appearance of your character as an Ethaefal.
  • The Language of the Inarta is Nari, yet how did she come about this?
  • As a Vantha seeming, I would recommend selecting Vani as a Basic language.
  • Your heirloom can only be one item. It cannot be a wooden box full of items. Sorry, please make this fix.
  • As a note: Your living expenses do not include the rent of your character's room at the Shooting Star Inn.

Once you have corrected the above mentioned, please click the envelope to the left and send me a message. I will come along and reverify.

Thank you,
Astator
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