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Vigilant's Lament

Postby Imass on March 11th, 2016, 11:20 pm

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Imass continued, "Good, now you understand how to run properly. Let the arms move the hips. Don't put in more work than necissary... knees up, let's go," Without waiting for a response he began running again.

Imass took several deep breaths (in-through-the-nose-out-through-the-mouth) and turned to make sure the pretty boy was following instructions. Surprisingly, he had gotten it down rather quickly.

Within a few moments they reached one of the many staircases that led up to the castle ramparts. Stopping at the base of the stairs, the Knight jogged in place until Alex arrived.

"Watch closely," Imass bellowed as he focused on controlling his breathing, "You are to scale this stairs exactly how I show you,"

Bending slightly at the knees, the Akalak kept his back perpendicular to the floor. He ran his feet in place for a bit then suddenly began to climb as if an explosion was set under his arse. The steps he took were very deliberate and thoughtful; he stepped on his insoles and always had one foot on step. His chin was pointed straight up. His hands -palm open- were held in front of his face, with his elbows still at a ninety degree angle. And that was only the part visible to Alex; he was using the kinetic energy of his hips to climb, pushing up and out to drive as much power forward as possible.

The scene looked like Sylir's indomitable will driving up the staircase, as if nothing could stop Imass. His technique made him look extremely strange to the untrained eye. The energy required to climb in such a fashion over twenty-five steep steps left the Knight breathing deep and a bead of sweat finally began to roll down his face.

"Your turn!" Imass yelled between breaths to the Squire below.
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Postby Alexander Faircroft on March 11th, 2016, 11:44 pm

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Alex followed behind Imass again as he continued his routine. A strange series of events had led to the circumstances unfolding before him. Still as Imass took off again Alex trailed behind only a tick or two but still enough to let Imass know that Alex was attempting to adapt what he’d been teaching him to fit with Alex’s own stealthy approach. As Imass jogged in place waiting for Alex to arrive something seemed off about what he was teaching him. As much as these were basic techniques they were also very unique variations on them. Alex assumed he’d better keep his own adaptations of them to himself. Just if nothing else to prevent Imass from tearing his head off. And given what he’d seen thus far, that was a highly likely possibility.

Alex arrived at the base of the stairs as Imass started to speak telling him to follow his motions completely up the stairs. He crouched down and then took off like a gale up the stairs. His feet barely touched the step before the next one fell on the next higher step, almost like he was sliding up the staircase like a hill. Alex took a moment to watch his arms swing and his legs touch the stonework. One…Two…Three…Four….Repeat…A pattern to his motions an arm swing into a breath into a roll of the hip and then a step. A simple four step procedure but one which looked like it would take a lot of time to master. Though as the knight stopped atop the stair case he doubled over breathing heavily, Alex half assumed this was due to the atrophy he’d suffered being in prison for that long. However he didn’t say a word.

Alex squared off with the staircase, taking a moment to think about his course of attack. Dropping into a much lower position than Imass had been in Alex shifted his feet and opening his palms flat raced up the stairs. His feet colliding with the stone work but surprisingly compared to the amount of noise Imass’ footsteps had made Alex’s were much lighter, almost like he was using his knowledge of how to walk silently in his armour to carry his weight better. Though his speed up the stairs wasn’t as fast as Imass’ own it was still speedy enough that when he reached the top he could feel a deep set strain take hold of his legs. He stopped and double over mirroring Imass in a panting motion a few deep breaths and he could already feel his clothes sticking to him, he was aching, burning and the pained bruises all over his body began to ache.


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Postby Imass on March 12th, 2016, 12:26 am

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Imass watched the Squire climb the stairs in failed mimicry. Almost caught up on his breath again, the Knight allowed Alex to reach the top without retort. He gave him roughly thirty seconds to recover all the while demonstrating the technique.

"No good! You are running up with no power, no force. You cannot hide from conflict. We are not going to leave until you get it somewhat right," Imass was not a good teacher so it became very frustrating for him to explain himself. The Knight could only show Alex what it was about, it was hard for him to use only words

Jogging back down the stairs casually, Imass started again this time even slower than before. He pounded the ground, stepping with his insoles, his knees remained under him. When he moved, he made his steps extremely dramatic.

"Do you see what I am doing? You arn't doing that at all," Half way up the staircase, he turned around and motioned silently for Alex to try again. Once again, the Squire did not do it right. Imass shot out both hand using the kinetic energy from his knees and hips. Locking his hands around the Squire's wrists, he imposed all his power, taking a flurry of chopped steps forward.

Since Faircroft was not executing the correct form, Imass sent the young man tumbling down a flight of stairs.

"Get up!!" Imass bellowed in frustration, "What on Mizahar are you doing!? Stand up!" Running down the stairs, Imass shoved Faircroft on the floor again as he tried to stand up, "The enemy as sent you down the stairs and you have been slain," He said coldly, "I expect you to stand up from a fall and get back into a martial stance within one tick of falling!!! Is that understood!?"

"I can't hear you! Sound off like you got a pair! Is that understood?!"

Imass took a moment to breathe, realizing that his teaching method was not as impeccable as his ego had thought. In a slightly calmer voice he said, "Do you see the problem with how you run up the stairs now?"
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Postby Alexander Faircroft on March 12th, 2016, 12:48 am

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Again, and a gain, they went over a simple motion of climbing stairs. Alex got the fact that Imass was trying to impart a technique for something onto him but since he couldn’t or wouldn’t say what it was perhaps he should have just stopped then and there. But no all he got was ridicule and being told wrong and wrong again and again with no full explanation of the fault. Perhaps that was what set his own patron to teaching in the odd manner he did. However what he didn’t expect was what happened next. When Imass grabbed a hold of his wrists he’d half expected him to show him the form but no he sent him tumbling backwards with a force.

For a half tick it felt like the world had crawled to a slow, and Alex couldn’t believe what had just happened. But no the ground was rushing up to meet him. Alex tucked his arms around his head and caught himself on his side as he tumbled down the stairs. Alex’s shoulder took the brunt of the impact, thankfully on the flat of one of the stairs before he twisted his body around to roll side long down instead of tumbling head over heels down them. Alex wheezed hard upon impact with the ground, hissing through his teeth as he did. Alex slammed his hand into the ground and pushed himself up, the pain quite literally everywhere on his body screaming at him as he did so. But right now he was under command. He pushed up only to feel a foot press into his back and flatten him against the ground again. Alex grit his teeth and pushed up again.

Endure it…Bear it…Control it. Alex after another tick and half of motion managed to stand back on hs feet as Imass asked him if he understood it.
“Yes Ser.” His s voice soft as usual but lined with an edge of anger. Louder? Alright then. “Yes! Ser!” Alex now spoke his soft voice fading into one that was powerful and hardened a voice like his father. Still laced with anger, he turned to stare Imass in the eye. Something akin to a bolt of lightning flashing in Alex’s own as he did so. “Yes. Ser.” His words controlled again softer, lighter back to usual, he’d managed if only just to contain the rage that seethed within him for that, uncalled for act.

Perhaps is you actually said what’s wrong and not just repeat the same motions over and over again I might be able to adjust it.
Alex wheezed again rolling his shoulder lightly at the point of impact, unsure as to whether he’d just bruise it hard or actually sprained it.


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Postby Imass on March 12th, 2016, 1:31 am

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"It is all about positioning your body correctly to the situation. I swear it on my Trials in the Campaign, if you do not follow these techniques on the front line you will die a bitter death,"

Imass walked up to Faircroft, "Drop your ass... Lower," He nudged the Squire's feet until they were perfect, "Put all the weight in the inside of your feet... Feel the tension on your hips? Good..." He pushed Alex's shoulders, "See, how you remain balanced. Now shift your weight on the balls of your feet," He pushed Alex again, but this time the Squire needed to backpedal to not fall, "See? No good... if you got pushed on a staircase or an incline with such terrible technique, that means getting slain,"

"In the heat of battle, your enemy will relentless pursuit your death, Squire," Imass suddenly yelled, spit flying into the young man's face, "But you will be better trained than your opponent! They may not respect you! But you will not fail! Because! I will not let you fail! Everyone in this city expects you to shoulder more than your necessary burden to achieve victory during combat,"

Imass jogged back to the staircase and waited for Alex to get into his stance at the bottom, "Now, I am going to apply resistance. You. Climb,"

Placing his hands on the squire's shoulders the Knight leaned on him with a tender amount of force. There were over twenty-five steps to the top. The ordeal was a workout for Imass as well; several beads of sweat rolled off his brow as he countered Alex's weight and power with his own. Each step Alex took, Imass stepped backwards. The Knight was an efficient one and used to opportunity to get a workout himself. He fully stretched out his leg muscles with each step and contracted them fully on each step. Before long, both of them were grunting. Tensing his arms and core, the Knight applied more and more resistance until the top.

Finally over, the Knight allowed Alex to rest --on his feet -- for five chimes, "Good job, Squire, you are learning. This technique is for pushing up inclines and hills... We have a lot of work ahead of us. Ready to continue?"
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Postby Alexander Faircroft on March 12th, 2016, 1:54 am

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It may have been a bit rough, but at the very least it was something. Some point of reference to work from rather than just a simple point of contention. Following Imass’ instruction Alex fell ino a form. And then was lectured, rather…unceremoniously. The words rolling over him like water over a mountainside. He took them in but he didn’t let them sink in. Alex knew full well though about shouldering more than was expected of him. Following Imass back was something that took a lot of effort from him to not just turn and sink into the shadows and then spend the next thirty or so days hiding out and about avoiding the man. Bust still Alex followed.

Feeling the weight of Imass push onto his shoulders Alex felt his legs push hard against the weight trying to stand tall. He was used to a fair amount of weight and carrying that around day after day after day. However this was different this was heavier, he could feel almost double his usual weight being forced down on him. Alex pushed, and pushed and pushed. Each time pressing against a larger and larger weight against him like Imass was intentionally trying to force him off of his feet and back down the steps again. In the end Alex gave up the attempt to stand tall and using his body crouched down pushed himself up the final few steps. He could feel everything in his body burning. Aching. Screaming at him to let it sit let it rest.

Thankfully he did only a brief respite though. Alex leered at Imass again after being asked if he was ready to continue. A rhetorical question. Whether or not Alex wanted to go or to fall over and collapse was out of the choices he’d been given. Groaning and exhaling heavily Alex stood back up tall and proud. Perhaps part of his father had rubbed off on him more than he’d like. The resilience to never stay down. He’d been beaten by ball, Kneed in the gut by a flux user, an arm broken and dislodged from its socket and still he stood. Still he rose again and again. This. This training, if nothing else. It. Would. Not. Beat. Him. He hissed through his teeth hearing his spine pop lightly before speaking in his soft tone. “Yes Ser. Ready to continue ser.”


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Postby Imass on March 12th, 2016, 3:12 am

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"Verily," There were Knights stationed along the wall patrolling, but they would leave the two alone.

Imass began to jog clock-wise along the Syliran Ramparts. Using the proper running technique for war, made the simple jog much more strenuous than normal jogging. The two of them bobbed up and down as they went. Imass was so out of shape, he began to feel the pain of exercise in his body. Mental toughness stuck with him though and he pushed through regardless. Taking deep breathes, he regulated his breathing and relaxed his mind. He could feel the muscles in his thighs, calves, and stomach begin to tingle. It was a good feeling. Up and down his arms went in conjunction with the alternating leg pattern.

The first right turn on the Rampart was coming up ahead as the crossed from the Bittern District to the Jordon, "There are... Roughly... Twelve turns... All the way around... The... City Ramparts," Imass huffed, as he was gaining his conditioning back still, "Each turn... Pivot as before... Then... Sprint ten yards... Then... Continue... To jog... Must... Use... The technique... or die..."

As soon as the sharp turn came, Imass planted his left foot on the ground and pivoted to the right with a heavy footfall. He turned his hips, dipped his shoulder, and with his left foot stepped so far forward he bent down far. That moment he felt a wincing pain in his leg.

"Huuh!!" Springing forward, the Knight sprinted as fast as he could, taking bounding steps. After 3 strides he slowed back down to the formal jog as before, "Hghh," The Knight felt his adrenaline pump in his head. It felt amazing.

Another right turn came up ahead, but he let Faircroft pass him so he could see how the Squire executed.
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Postby Alexander Faircroft on March 12th, 2016, 3:58 am

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Alex kept up with Imass, being so much younger and by proxy healthier he let the knight push ahead of him and trailed behind half out of respect half to watch his technique, the simple motions seemingly belying a great deal of training. As much as Alex wanted to push himself and feel that this was the truth, he couldn’t quite fool himself as such his body was in sheer pain, mostly from being pushed down a flight of stairs. If any other knight had seen that Alex had a feeling in his soul that Imass would have gotten a much stronger word than would have been normal. But no.

Listening to the Akalak speak between drawn out breaths like he himself was in pain was oddly satisfying to hear. To know that Imass was suffering just as much as he was made the things sit a lot better with Alex. Again must use the technique or die. By now Alex just knew that meant if he didn’t follow what Imass wanted he’d be liable to get damaged in some form or another. Alex followed behind Imass mimicking his technique as best he could, even though he felt like something of a moron doing as such.

When Alex eventually over took Imass though he couldn’t help but feel it was an intentional thing the Akalak allowed him to do. Alex pressed on though picking up speed. As much as his body burned there was a mental toughness to him that held him together that pushed him on and on. Alex wouldn’t be stopped by something as simple as basic training. No matter how he burned, how he hurt, how he ached, he wasn’t slowing nor was he letting it beat him. And as far as he cared for what Imass could throw at him next. He though three words.
Bring it on.


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Postby Imass on March 12th, 2016, 4:47 am

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The Knighted watched on as Alex turned the corner as he wanted. It was sloppy and not precise, however Imass would not say anything. The Squire was busting his arse and that was perfect for day one. The Akalak had already set the tone for training and it would only get tougher with due time.

Imass was determined to build himself back and give Alex the gift of being hard. Not saying a word the duo continued their exercise. Shortly after turn two, turn three came up -- another right turn. Imass pivoted and ducked his shoulder, but miss timed his breath. The thought came to his head after three strides at full speed. The blood was pumping hard now and it felt good.

Keeping the same pace the entire time, Imass and Faircroft ran roughly side by side for the remainder of the run. Each right turn they pivoted and sprinted out of the turn. Imass began to feel the burn and the pain, but he loved it. A smile came upon his face and he embraced the moment. The Knight would not stop no matter how tired he was.

Finally, reaching the northern edge of the Dyres District (just before the rampart turned east and south), the Akalak called for a halt.

Standing with his hands over his head the Knight looked up at the dark sky. There was silence between them as they caught their breath. Blood flowed through his body and sweat dripped from his face. They were putting in a lot of work.

"Ready?" Imass smiled. The morning exercise was far from over.
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Postby Alexander Faircroft on March 12th, 2016, 5:04 am

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The push was hard, and the work even harder however when Imass called for a stop Alex skidded to a stop. His boots sliding to a stop atop the ramparts as his hands slapped onto his knees. Feeling his weight pushing down on him. He drank deep his breaths holding onto just barely standing up now. The pain pushing through him, his heartbeat thrumming in his ears his eyes burned and his mind wanted to go back to sleep to just call it quits and let him rest.

However once short glance at the Akalak told him this perpetual torment wasn’t going to be ending for a while yet. Alex took the very brief pause to feel the heat radiating off of him. He felt like he’d been in a sauna. The sheer feeling of not quite accomplishment and a push of adrenaline in his system. He found himself being briefly dragged back to the events on the first of spring four years ago, the sheer volume of running he had to do that day to not die and try to save as many people as he could. And in the next instant he was back. His chest heaving as he looked out over the darkened waters just seeing the very first peak of light crest the horizon, the very first small plume of Syna’s light peak out over the water’s edge.

He smiled lightly and forced himself back into a full standing position just in time to hear Imass ask if he was ready for more. Again a false question he was going to be dragged whether he wanted to be or not. Sucking down one more deep breath to stifle the burning of his lungs and the heat in his arms he spoke his voice ragged but soft still.
“Yes Ser…” A small cough accompanied it. Only one part of him at this moment in time wasn’t hurting his upper back something he’d over many years rigorously trained to endure the firing of a hundred and thirty pound draw weight bow. “Just one question Ser if I may.” He spoke softly with a light rasp to his voice. “Till what bell are we training as such?”

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