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[The Patchwork Port] What Luck! (Jay Darkcrest)

Postby Karin on May 4th, 2016, 5:38 pm

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Karin had forgotten about clothes until Jay went to return to his own, leaving her averting her eyes until he was done. She thought about the language he'd used, what she assumed to be Fratava. But she didn't comment on it, instead listening to the lilt and rhythm of the brief snatch of words, trying to memorise them, remember them even. She didn't know what they meant. One day she would, though.

At Jay's suggestion of finding wood, the girl nodded. The surrounding landscape was littered with a multitude of twigs, driftwood, seaweed, even a half-hidden and eroded brick. Karin gathered the smaller branches in her arms, acknowledging the need for lighter fuel rather than heavy logs. Plus, she would have difficultly finding a log that wasn't at least a little damp still.

She looked over at Jay. He was building the fire up in an already formed pit, so she continued for a few chimes more before coming over with a bundle of dry sticks in each hand. The man seemed silent, and she hoped she hadn't offended him with asking about his Kelvic side. The fire making process seemed simple as she watched his method, and she started to build the smaller twigs into the pile forming.

By the time they'd finished, although unlit, the fire looked like it would last a good long while. Karin smiled and sat back on her heels, satisfied and glad. The silence didn't bother her, already used to solitude. She stood up suddenly, displacing sand as she reached over to grab her rucksack. Deep within the bowels she knew there was her flint and tinder, hardly used. Locating it, she drew it forth with a gesture and proceeded to strike it, holding it near the fire hoping that a spark would land.

She was unsuccessful and passed it over to Jay breaking the silence, "Would you mind?" Sitting back on her haunches again, she drew an abstract pattern in the sand, picking up a handful and feeling the individual grains in the palm of her hand. Food! The fish lay nearby, but the bread was closer and she tore off a piece before handing it to her companion.

The fire was crackling by now, freshly lit and bright even in the day's light. She gazed into the depths of it, and relaxed down onto the sand, lying down facing away from the fire. Unaware of embers, uncaring of the sand and debris tangling in her hair, the girl simply lay and gazed at the endless blue above, the sea of sky, so unattainable yet ever-present.

"What would you like, Jay?" It was an open-ended question, and she meant it to be so. Despite the camaraderie she felt with the man, in reality she had only known him for a short time. She had enjoyed that short time, but underneath it all, though she would never ask outright, she knew there was something he refused to speak about. Maybe a sense of wistfulness, or confusion.

She listened to the breeze and the surf, and to Jay if he spoke. A short branch lay nearby and she poked the fire cautiously. She busied herself with another branch, and looked at the fish. The fish looked back, with dead eyes and glistening scales. It was a task she didn't fully care about, but she knew how to do it, at least vaguely. Whatever wistfulness Jay held, Karin wanted to help him forget it, with a meal and whatever smile she could give. After all, that's what friends did, wasn't it?
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[The Patchwork Port] What Luck! (Jay Darkcrest)

Postby Jay Darkcrest on May 6th, 2016, 10:31 am

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Jay watched as Karin handled her flint and tinder. He liked that she tried starting the fire herself, only handing it to him when she wasn’t successful. Then he took it with a small nod and concentrated. He’d done it so many times before, but on some days it took a little coaxing. Eventually a spark jumped up and the wood caught fire. Bending down, Jay blew on it softly, taking care not to extinguish it, but rather feed it with a little more air.

Sitting back, he accepted the piece of bread with a grin and handed back her tools. “Thanks!” His stomach had just started to protest, so he took a big bite of the bread and chewed. For a while, his mouth was too full to utter words, so he picked up a few slender sticks he’d laid aside earlier. Some of them were forked and none were brittle yet, so they’d put the fish and maybe some bread on it later. First, the fire had to grow and get hotter though. Jay took another bite and stared into the flames that were slowly enveloping the wooden fort they’d built. Together.

Dusk was falling slowly, but surely, and against the darkening sky and sea, the dance of the flames was especially enthralling. Jay simply stared at it, oblivious to the red and orange reflected in his dark eyes, until Karin spoke up. Then he blinked and shook his head slightly, as if shaking off remnants of dreams. Still, he didn’t quite understand the meaning of her words. “Like?”

Whether she elaborated or not, Jay continued on his own after a while. Remembering something. “I like that you are here, Karin. This”, he gestured to the fire, the beach, the sea, “I haven’t done in a long time. My family is far away and we got separated. So this… I’ve missed it and it’s so good to do it again. Of course, it’s fun because you’re Svefra too, but it’s also fun because you’re you.” He laughed, somewhat apologetically, and ran a hand through his copper locks. “It’s not what you asked about, no? I just wanted to say it though.”

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[The Patchwork Port] What Luck! (Jay Darkcrest)

Postby Karin on June 14th, 2016, 4:08 pm

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Karin felt a sudden bliss, like a flurry of never-seen snowflakes inside her. We're friends, real friends. Despite the simplicity of the statement she uttered to herself, it was so full of meaning and significance that she stopped whatever she was doing and simply breathed- breathed in the air of the beach, the feelings surrounding them, and the presence of Jay, of being Svefra, the smoke of the fire, the smell of the salt.

"I wasn't really sure what I meant myself, but... I like your answer." The cool of night-time was starting to settle, but her feet, knees, and legs were warmed by the fire, so Karin was oblivious. She gathered herself, and gazed at the fish, lying there balefully. But, drawing her knife, she started to prepare the fish.

Soon enough, she'd done one for herself, and one for Jay, leaving the others for later if they wanted more. She leant over and reached for a stick, threading the fish as well as she could onto it before holding it over the fire. She gazed into the fire, feeling sleepy and settled, content with the world and its problems that just didn't seem relevant.

She spoke up, suddenly, as a thought suddenly needed to be spoken. "I like it too, Jay. This..." She gestured to the surroundings discreetly, before nodding and smiling at the man. "This is one of the most happiest days, I think. I didn't really know what I was asking before, but your reply has made me happy, and, well. I thought you should know that I enjoy being in your company, as you do mine."

Whether her face was flushed because of the proximity to the flames, or whether it was the slightest hint of blush was indiscernible, but she felt her heart flutter nervously at, what was- for her-, bold words. But she continued, "This just feels right, doesn't it?" She looked down, noticing the browning scales of the fish, the spitting hot flesh.

Glad to move, she grabbed the fish and gently blew on it for a long while, trying to cool it as it was too hot for her to eat. Her back ached from sitting up for a long while, and because she was feeling so free, she simply flopped down, her golden hair spreading across the sand, to look up at the salmon-coloured clouds in an indigo sky.
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Postby Jay Darkcrest on August 2nd, 2016, 8:45 am

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Jay grinned, a bit proud, mostly happy. He almost dropped the fish into the fire at her words, his arms suddenly felt weak and warmth surged all the way through his body into his fingertips. By Zulrav, he felt as if even his red curls stood on end! Had anyone ever prompted that feeling before? His family had given warmth and comfort freely and indiscriminately, but with Karin, it was more powerful. His parents, his sister and cousins had always been there. Karin had been a stranger at first, they’d gotten to know each other step by step. Their friendship hadn’t been a constant, but rather gotten more and more whenever they spent time with each other.

The Kelvic still wasn’t sure, but he thought that must’ve been part of the reason why he felt so strongly all of a sudden. First instinct was to run away, protect himself and hide that weakness, but he couldn’t and wouldn’t do that to Karin. They were here, for better or for worse. Anyway, despite the initial shock, it felt good. “That’s great. Aye, it feels right. I want to do more of it.”

Before long, his mouth began to water from the fish smell. Its color and texture told him it was cooked (although he would’ve eaten it raw too) and Jay removed the stick from the fire to let it cool down a little. Karin simply flopped back into the sand, her long hair falling in curls and mysterious patterns. Jay laughed, it looked so funny.

They ate the fish in content silence, with only the occasional remark thrown in, and Jay thought that was beautiful too. Many people knew how to talk, but few knew how to be silent too. Moreover, with some people silence felt uncomfortable, not with her though. Still, Jay had to fidget and move his limbs. Soon he was trying to tell a story his mother had often told when he’d been a child, the cackling fire and noise of the tide transported him back on a different ocean. At the same time, he never forgot where and who he was with. The evening only got better when he unpacked the bottle of doubtful dark liquid and they began passing it back and forth.


OOCSo I tried to create a nice fade out. Let me know if you want to post once more or if this is good to grade.

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[The Patchwork Port] What Luck! (Jay Darkcrest)

Postby Sayana on October 22nd, 2016, 2:05 pm

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Don't forget to edit/delete your grade request. If there's anything I may have missed, please PM me and I'll be happy to look into it.


 
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  • Land Navigation: 1
  • Observation: 5
  • Socialization: 5
  • Planning: 3
  • Interrogation: 3
  • Teaching: 1
  • Running: 1
  • Cosmetology: 1
  • Swimming: 3
  • Flirting: 2
  • Prayer: 1
  • Wilderness Survival: 1
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  • Jay: A 'pure' svefra
  • Planning a picnic
  • Jay: A kelvic svefra friend
  • Parties are about being together
  • Cosmetology: Creating a simple braid
  • Alvadas parties versus svefra parties
  • Kelvics: Sometimes far younger than they appear
  • Kelvics: Have little concern for nudity
  • Jay's kelvic form: Red marten
  • Swimming in the company of another
  • Prayer: Throwing a pebble into the sea in Laviku's name
  • Wilderness Survival: Gathering driftwood
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I was about to award you cooking for preparing the fish, however, earlier in the thread it was stated explicitly that "she definitely didn't know how to cook fish, having never even eaten it before".

Since Karin hadn't even eaten fish before, I don't think it's reasonable for her to have a lucky first shot at cooking fish since she wouldn't even know the proper consistency of a cooked fish.


 
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  • Acrobatics: 1
  • Endurance: 1
  • Socialization: 5
  • Philosophy: 1
  • Planning: 2
  • Teaching: 3
  • Interrogation: 1
  • Running: 1
  • Prayer: 1
  • Wilderness Survival: 2
  • Flirting: 1
  • Cooking: 1
Lores
  • Location: The Bizarre Bazaar
  • Acrobatics: Bracing against a sudden fall
  • Alvadas is like a person who changes mood
  • Planning a picnic
  • Alvads tend to have large celebrations in honor of Ionu
  • Socialization: Encouraging someone to open up
  • Karin: Alvad svefra friend
  • Socialization: Basic body language in kelvic form
  • Karin: Accepting of my kelvic side
  • Prayer: Throwing a pebble into the sea in Laviku's name
  • Wilderness Survival: Gathering driftwood
  • Wilderness Survival: Arranging wood for a fire
  • Wilderness Survival: Starting a fire using flint and tinder
  • Cooking: Basic cooking of a fish
  • Karin: Knows how to talk but also how to be silent
  • Location: Patchwork Port
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Just a couple of things to keep in mind. Jay only has a basic grasp at Common. He is fluent in Fratava and Weasel-tongue. There were a few times when it seemed like he wasn't speaking Common as well, but these were rare. Grammar would likely slip, occasionally one might struggle to think of a particular word, and overall speed of speaking/understanding would likely be slower (for example).

Additionally, Jay doesn't have any experience points in Swimming. He seemed to effortlessly swim in this thread as if he had been born into it. Yes, he may have grown up the lifestyle of a svefra, but since his Kelvic form is not naturally aquatic (although correct me if I'm wrong), he would still have to learn and gain swimming experience just like any other PC. As such, I didn't award any points for swimming since he wasn't playing at his level.

Comments: What a lovely and enjoyable thread. I especially liked how two relatively introverted characters were able to interact with a slowly growing friendship. The sea, the quiet, and everything svefra seems to draw them together and it was very well played.

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