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A city floating in the center of a lake, Ravok is a place of dark beauty, romance and culture. Behind it all though is the presence of Rhysol, God of Evil and Betrayal. The city is controlled by The Black Sun, a religious organization devoted to Rhysol. [Lore]

Goodbye, Bellboy. [open]

Postby Riel on July 5th, 2011, 4:55 am

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511 AV, Summer, Day 58.

Despite her initial distaste for the City, Riel could not resist the familiar, insistent drive to slake her curiosity. It was, literally, in her blood. It did not occur to her that a slave acting of her own volition, without an express command, was a punishable offense, just as it did not occur to a predator to feel guilt after a successful hunt. For her, it was an inescapable need. Only discretion and restraint had prevented reprimand in Zeltiva, just as they postponed discovery in Ravok.

At first, Riel had restricted her forays to the immediate vicinity of her Master’s residence, located precariously between the commerce and dock districts. She had grown intimately familiar with the building’s bellboy—a potted shrub, two feet in height and myrtle-colored. The plant had little trouble snaring cat tuft, thread, and other mundane debris in its needle leaves. Together, the garbage weaved an evolving tale of mystery, with actors that possessed neither names nor features, only hints.

As summer waxed, Riel lost interest in the bellboy. The heat amplified her restlessness, but she was not the only one affected; every evening her porcine Master would seek a bath house, determined to keep his odor controlled (with debatable success). Much to her delight, his schedule became predictable, and—when possible—she utilized the specific timeframes to extend her range of exploration.

On this particular evening, her Master had departed early; Riel could count four fingers to the sun’s position, which was two extra than usual. Doubt and caution were eclipsed by the temptation of intrigue. As soon as her Master's Ravasola had been navigated into a canal-proper, she fled the stagnant apartment. Her heart had not been so light, so quickly shouting with life, since Zeltiva.

As Riel was unable to afford her own Ravasola toll, the intricate system of alleyways and bridges proved difficult to navigate. She was forced to employ unconventional routes. Winding lanes, barely wide enough to accommodate her slight form, suddenly ended with imposing walls or canals. Several times, she had to backtrack. Only persistence delivered her to her destination: the commerce district.

Even subject to the stifling heat of evening, the commerce district crawled with humanity. Riel's senses were assaulted all at once; a sharp stench of fish and human permeated the air, interspersed by scents of herbs, leather, and fruit; shifting clothes, dyed primarily with rich gem hues, transformed the crowd into a veritable kaleidoscope; and the din of the market escalated and receded as easily as the tide. While bewitching, it was also overwhelming to the kelvic, who had little experience with such sizable crowds. She chose to remain separated from the district by a single canal, an anonymous figure neither necessary nor recognized in the heaving mechanism of bartering.

An opalescent glint caught her eye. At a stand bordering the canal, a woman was haggling over a modest packet of spices with a miserly merchant. By the furious gestures exchanged between the pair, Riel judged it was a heated argument. The thought dissipated as quickly as it formed; it wasn’t the woman that was captivating, but her garment. Crowning her brow was a row of iridescent shells, masterfully chipped into circles and embroidered into the hem of an undyed chiffon veil. Every time the woman bobbed her head, the shells jingled to life, heralding their origins in a stunning spectacle of color.

From the drudges of her memory, Riel recalled another foreigner. The previous autumn, a Svefra had visited the Evarsitus family to negotiate trade routes. Arrayed in rich silks and eccentric jewelry, the seafarer had been as exotic as the family’s Anhatep fresco, beguiling her from the start. Upon discovering her fervor for singing, he had taught her a refrain from a favored ballad. Although she had never been able to decipher the words, they remained branded in her mind.

Isnaur il tari,
Lanu sar Nutav.
Varnach vi ‘maeven?
Aelflach vi 'arnith?
Xari na sul magor,
Mae enarth vi larc Firel.
Sarnach na sul laun?
Sagirnach ene lain.


Riel murmured the refrain as she continued to comb the District for other discoveries, either mundane or eccentric. The melancholy tone was a contradiction to her subdued smile.

((OOC))The song is in Fratava. Though with Riel’s mispronunciations, it would be hard to tell. If any characters happen to reply that speak Fratava, PM me and I’ll send you a translation.
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Postby Nex Paciscor on July 6th, 2011, 8:13 am

Being in the city made Nex's skin crawl, but he needed to get some food, and he was too exhausted to hunt. The time in the busy city didn't do much for his want of alone time to his thoughts, but he could deal with that, he'd managed to deal with everything so far after all. Another deep breath brought the mixture of odors from the collection of people around him, a mixture of a sour musty odor, and some sickly sweet ones that caused his nose to wrinkle in disgust. Why did humans not keep themselves cleaner or at least scent themselves properly he wondered, and made a mental note to breath in through his mouth more so he wouldn't smell as much.

The city's commerce district was simply too busy though for him to really be able to look for a seller of the food he was hoping for, so he settled for skirting on the edges of the large crowds, peering over dirty shoulders where he could and keeping his eyes peeled for loaves of fresh enough bread, and dried meats. It wasn't going to be easy staying out in the wilderness for that long, with the company he kept without a little bit of food supplemented with means besides hunting. His eyes caught sight of a vendor with some dark brown, grainy bread arrayed before him, and tipping his shoulder, he pushed his way through the crowd, determined to get at least a couple of them.

" How much for the bread sir? " he asked, his smooth, unmarred right hand gesturing to some promising pieces in the middle of the table. The fat man looked at him with a bored expression, and without even looking at the bread barked, " 4 cm's a loaf kid. " Nex looked to him and then back at the bread, before looking back at the man a bit confused at why he hadn't taken the time to look. The giant of a man answered his questioning glare with a disgusting burp, and raising a grimy hand to scratch his belly. Being in this man's company longer than he had to was not something he wanted to do, and he was in no mood to argue this day so he simply produced eight copper mizas from the coin purse at his hip, and let them clatter on the wooden table while he grabbed up the bread and stowed it away in his pack. Hopefully Aello would find this to be a nice enough treat compared to the strictly meat diet they had been subsisting on, or at least he had been.

The crowed seemed to have instantly filled the gap behind him he soon realized though when he turned around to leave, and it was a even harder challenge getting out then it had been getting in. The press of bodies and their awful smells made the work even harder, and Nex was at the point of retching when he finally came out the other end of the crowd, falling to his knees to look out over the water, dry heaving but never actually throwing up. Man this city was disgusting

After Nex's little ordeal in the crowd he was none too keen on going back in to search for dried meats and settled for roaming the other, less settled parts of the district where the smells where less overpowering, and the bodies more scattered and more the way he liked it. He exhaled another deep sigh, as he continued down one narrow way, and caught another scent, a smell that reminded him distinctly of Alenias, yet somehow different. Could it actually be her, had she followed me into the city he mused to himself but somehow he knew it wasn't her by the subtle variations of the scent. First of all it wasn't as young as Alenias's scent was, and nor was it fresh like the outdoors tended to make her smell after a bath in a stream, it smelled more like it had a few human influences to it, along with the smell being in the city for a while tended to stain people with.

Still he found the scent curious, and sniffing the air he slowly made his way across a corner and turned it to see a woman walking away from him. " Greetings, come here to escape the crowds " he called out to her, and made his careful way to follow behind her to where she stood. Nex was never one much for subtlety, and his instincts told him to investigate this girl further, and his instincts which had served him well so far, was not something he ignored lightly.
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Postby Riel on July 7th, 2011, 3:12 am

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Come here to escape the crowd?

An unfamiliar, baritone voice startled Riel from her sport, causing a surge of panic to flare in her mind. Reason was consumed by fear, fueled further by the abnormality of the situation—as a slave, her station did not invite casual conversation. The few that deigned to address her fell into three categories: her Master, his acquaintances, and the Ebonstryfe. Other slaves were prudent enough to avoid public attention; civilians ignored servants both out of principle and habit. Run, her instincts clamored, fly. But, like any beast trained to withstand distress, she remained immobile, with only the flush in her cheeks betraying her anxiety.

Habit led her to compose herself. Meticulously, she relaxed her expression into neutrality, folded her hands over the grey pleats of her rough-spun dress, and averted her sable eyes. The demure, subservient posture was a profound contrast to her previous candor. It was also misleading. Behind a mask of complaisance, she prayed to Rhysol: make him leave. The plea did not result from a spontaneous, devout impulse—in fact, she barely grasped the complex concept of religion—but because she had witnessed her Master exhibit related acts of piety. Similarly, she doubted whether her appeal would meet with success, as her Master’s petitions had repeatedly proven ineffectual.

“Th—… I—…,” Riel stumbled through the words, a frown marring her lips. How was she supposed to answer the question? What if the stranger queried after Master Malizar? And what if he informed Master of her foray to the Commerce District? Trepidation tightened her chest, squeezing the breath from her lungs, as she realized her predicament. The decision wasn’t her right. She was a slave; if asked a question, she was required to supply an accurate answer. There was no alternative, and lying was unfathomable.

I was watching them,” the kelvic offered matter-of-factly, in her curious accent.

As she stood there, obediently awaiting the stranger's response, Riel could feel the heat radiating off his body and smell his sweat. It was peculiar; she was certain there was an abnormal element about the man—so familiar it was almost tangible—but she failed to identify it, the explanation eluding her like a dream just after waking. It made her increasingly uncomfortable. Briefly, her eyes flicked, in the disjointed motion typical of birds, to study his features and seek a clue. Other than his unusual eyes, he appeared… plain. Drab, even.
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Postby Nex Paciscor on July 8th, 2011, 3:20 am

A phantom breeze whisper across, and caught his light blue tunic in a cross breeze, the air making to large shirt billow with the change, but he didn't mind. Wearing such loose fitting clothing made it easier on him those few times he got the chance to stretch his legs, even though his breeches where a pain to get off. His thoughts drifted from his cloths though as they fell back onto the girl, now facing him, and acting in way that he knew all too well. His golden eyes seemed to flash for a brief moment before glazing over, his mind now on a distant memory, of his life in Lhavit, a life he cherished and hated.

The scene splayed out like it always did, a slight tan hue covering his vision like a silken screen, and his master standing before him, reprimanding him with a iron rod he had become so fond of. He had failed the man, he hadn't gotten the package to the right person, he'd slipped up and now he was paying for it with welts upon his back. The shame bit harder into him more than any rod could though, and tears fell from his eyes in tiny rivers, crisscrossing through his grime stained cheeks. He would do better the next time, he had to do better the next time, and he couldn't risk disappointing the man again. It made him feel so utterly worthless that he couldn't seem to do anything right, and here he was coming on the end of his first year, and still slipping up like a new born pup. He sickened himself.

His memory was disrupted by the woman’s words, but the feelings still remained a small tear beading in the corner of his left eye, and he blinked once to let it cascade down into his waiting index finger, him slyly flicking it away, and he only half hoped she hadn’t noticed the glimpse of weakness. A look into her eyes while not directly telling him anything, he sense the common situation they shared whether she knew it or not, and from her hesitating response, he suspected she was doing something she wasn't supposed to. Not that he would say anything, he knew what it was like to be in such a situation, and he also knew what he would like to happen on a encounter like this, but unfortunately for her, she intrigued him, and he didn't plan on leaving her alone just yet.

" It is entertaining I take it? " he asked her, though he really didn't care whether she found it amusing or not. The crowds here disgusted his more refined sensibilities that his master beat into him, and although he enjoyed the woods and didn’t mind the dirt, and mud there much now, he still didn't like large, stinky crowds like he found here. Especially after he found out the cities less than savory reputation in Zeltiva, when he was reading up on the gods and the city itself and learned much of Rhysol. The entire air about the city seemed vile to him, suffocating, and choking all life and spirit from it though he knew there was little he could do about that as only one kelvic amidst a sea of evil.

Slowly he would take his steps towards her, making little motion with his hands , and seeming harmless as he could as he moved to stand beside her, before turning his back slightly towards her, and looking out over the canal. " The water, it's very pretty " he paused, " You weren’t favoring a swim where you? " he stated as much as asked, tipping his shoulder backwards to square back off with her, and he ran a coarse hand through his short hair, his golden eyes, usually holding so much fire, softening as they came back upon her. There was an air of mutual respect between them he felt, and deep inside, he found it slightly comforting.
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Postby Riel on July 11th, 2011, 4:44 am

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Even with her eyes averted, Riel had a peculiar way of ‘seeing’. A slight tilt of her head served to extend her field of vision and, out of the corner of her sable eyes, she could observe her environment. It was a skill she had quickly grasped after her transfer to Ravok, at her new Master’s behest. In this almost invisible manner, she glimpsed the man’s tear. Her brow furrowed in bewilderment; it was bizarre that a human should display such emotions in public, made even more unusual by the lack of an explanation. Briefly, she wondered if he had been born with weak eyes. She had never cried, regardless of the situation. Did she have stronger eyes, or was it a difference in their bloodlines? Or perhaps it was the color of his eyes. She wondered.

It is entertaining, I take it?” He queried.

Yes, she thought, it was entertaining. To her, the commerce district was akin to an urban jungle. A mixture of extravagant and common humans mingled in the market, their outfits as varied as birds of paradise. Just there, opposite of a cobbler’s stand, an oil peddler lured customers with the intrigue of a domesticated lemur. Under the shade of a maroon-and-cream plaited canvas, a storyteller commanded the attention of a dirty gaggle of urchins. Indeed, so numerous were the spectacles, one need only spare the time to notice, combined with the inclination to appreciate. But it was apparent the stranger possessed a differing opinion, so she replied with a neutral, noncommittal answer, “It can be.

His next statement confounded her. The water, pretty? It was almost laughable, that the man would consider the canals more beguiling than the market. Underneath the dark, mirrored surface, she knew the water was corrupted by the city’s waste; Ravok had no alternative means for sewage. The stench alone was enough to deter sensible denizens from swimming, unless unfortunate events forced them into the canals, and the more extravagant Ravosalas were perfumed to ward against the smell. But, if the stranger had been ingesting the water, it would explain his weak eyes.

No, I was not considering a ‘swim’. The water is tainted. If you permit it, I would advise against drinking it, unless you boil it first.” Riel did not accompany the male to the canal’s edge, but rather preferred to remain immobile, rooted to the same position she’d been in since he hailed her. Neither did she exhibit any signs of relaxing, as she was still uncertain of his status and motivation. Yet, there was a method by which she could gain more insight, a sly tactic she had seen other slaves resort to.

I am told that Rhysol’s minions dwell within the lake’s depths.” It was a ludicrous comment, construed to serve a singular purpose: to test his knowledge, or whether he was disposed to superstition. It didn't occur to her that, confronted with such an elementary test, the vast majority of Rhysol's denizens would 'pass' and that any 'information' gleaned from the question would be altogether useless. So—in the end—it served very little purpose at all. If the statement invited him to consider her daft, however, it hardly mattered; it was commonplace to assume slaves as dim-witted. Perhaps the assumption would even encourage him to leave.
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Postby Nex Paciscor on July 14th, 2011, 4:23 am

Her words sounded measured to him, despite her initial stumble over the word play, and it kind of annoyed him. Reminded him of the small bad parts of his old life, the bad parts when he had to keep to certain codes of speech. Never at all in those times had he thought about speaking his mind, but even though she kind of irritated him, he didn't show it on his features, his eyes still warm and inviting, and his posture relaxed. This one didn't much deserve his scorn as of yet, just because she brought up a few sore memories.

A brief flash lit his eyes, and he fought hard to suppress a frown. She considered him incompetent or something if she thought he would even consider such a swim in the city of filth. " Good, stay away from the water mind you. As well even the most simple child would know to stay away from the water " he said, pausing between the sentences for a moment to gather his breath and think of words he was to speak. He was starting to wonder why this girl had such a tongue on her, but he supposed a master in Ravok doesn't know how to train a companion properly enough to watch what she got herself into, but he couldn't really blame her. While he usually watched his tongue around people, it didn't mean he hadn't got into plenty of mischief himself in his pup days, doing this and that.

She still wasn't as welcoming as Nex hoped she would be, but hoped with the announcement of her child's story would lighten up the mood, and make this whole little interaction go a lot smoother for the both of them. “ Whomever sold you such tales played a trick on you dear, no such minions exist beneath the waters " he said in a deep, strong voice, a stare leveled at her. He hoped that she didn't actually believe such tales but if she did, he wouldn't really try to convince her otherwise as people tended to be more set in their ways than not, and who would he be to challenge her claim any further.
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