Looks great, Tsu! Curiously though, why are there 2 names for the Erihpas/Hara? I saw from the physical description that they're different when it comes to size, so does that mean that these are actually two types of the same species?
Everything else seems clear to read, there's just that one thing I want to clarify.
Lonely Island - Love this. To clarify though, you said the frequency is 1-2, but then you also mentioned that there are younger members of the species.
As an extra bonus, maybe you could expand upon when exactly do they appear and how they react to humans? Like, if a sailor gets on their back, what would he see and what would happen? EDIT: Btw, creatures which are monstrous in size actually need to go through World Development. I reaally like this idea and I hope you're willing to WD it O:
Btw, we got a new subforum for development, so go ahead and post any replies/edits
here.
Again, thank you, Tsu. Really appreciate all of this!