Sasha

[Sasha]

Sasha (Insert Banner Name Here If You'd Like) Insert Image Here (Host in our gallery, photobucket, etc) Basic Information Race: Kelvic (lion) Birthday & Age : aged 3 but looks 20 Gender: Female Physical Description As a lion, she is about 5 ft. long and weighs 140 lbs. She is tan with brown eyes. She is small and slender, built more for agility and grace and speed, not power. As a human, she has dirty blond hair and brown eyes. She is about 5'8" and weighs 130 lbs. She is tall but slender. Her eyes are split vertically and elongated teeth. In both forms, she is slender and sleek, graceful and fast. Character Concept faithful and loyal slave/companion; Loyal but feral; she likes to stalk even when she isn't hunting; she is very affectionate with her master and those he knows but no one else Character History Sasha was born to two Kelvics but was sold by her parents into slavery as a cub. She was then sold to her current master, whom she has served for all her life. Training (Skills, Arcana, Gnosis, Lore) Skills: Hunting 30/100 (20 pts from starting package and 10 pts from Racial Bonus); dancing 20/100 (20 pts from starting package); sewing 10/100 (10 pts from starting package) Lore: Lore- animal affinity; Lore- slave trade Languages: Common (fluent); Pavi (basic); Nari (poor) Equipment and Possessions Clothing; waterskin; backpack with toiletries, food for a week, eating knife, flint and steel; a necklace from her mother with also is used to keep her from shifting whenever she wants Ledger 700 gold-rimmed mizas (200 from starting package and 500 from no housing) Thread List

[Tattoo]

Hello Sasha and Welcome to Mizahar,

I'm Tattoo, the Character Sheet Liaison, which means I'm the official 'helper' here in the CS forum. I noticed some things about your CS that need improvement. I know it can be a struggle wading through all the lore and getting your character in playable shape - starting with the CS. That's where I come in.

I noticed only a couple minor issues, nothing big. The first is you have yourself starting with 700gm. Starting packages allow 100gm for starting +500gm for turning in housing for a total of 600gm

Also I don't see any languages in your CS. I recommend Common among them, since you can have up to three, and nearly all Kelvic know Common.

Everything else looks good. Please PM me when you've made the appropriate changes and I will remove this post. I look forward to reading your posts. Welcome to Mizahar