Feirri (there is nothing here for now.)

[Feirri]

I will add this/fix it at a later date. Don't wait up.

[Feirri]

Fennec Fox

This is Feirri in her her Fox form.

[Tattoo]

Hello Feirri and Welcome to Mizahar,

I'm Tattoo, the Character Sheet Liaison, which means I'm the official 'helper' here in the CS forum. I noticed some things about your CS that need improvement. I know it can be a struggle wading through all the lore and getting your character in playable shape - starting with the CS. That's where I come in.

I noticed a few minor issues in your CS, nothing major. The first is your skills. Your skills total up to 70points. However, as a Kelvic, you get +10 Hunting and +50 points to do with as you please, for a total of 60 points. So please deduct 10 points from one of your non Hunting skills.

Also you have no languages designated. You are allowed up to 3 languages, one fluent, one conversational, one poor. As a Kelvic I recommend Common as fluent since that is their primary language.

You also need to pay for the Pet Bird you have. You can check the price list, if it's not there, we have a thread in the World Development forums.

Finally you need to include your heirloom and clothes in your equipment, even though you describe it within.

Oh and PS a waterskin is like a sack you carry water in

Everything else looks good. Please PM me when you've made the appropriate changes, and I'll remove this post. Thank you for the CS and I look forward to reading your posts. Welcome to Mizahar.