A Painful Brown Haired Memory (Vyxenne)

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A city floating in the center of a lake, Ravok is a place of dark beauty, romance and culture. Behind it all though is the presence of Rhysol, God of Evil and Betrayal. The city is controlled by The Black Sun, a religious organization devoted to Rhysol. [Lore]

A Painful Brown Haired Memory (Vyxenne)

Postby Irriari on July 19th, 2011, 1:03 am

A Painful Brown Haired Memory
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OCCSevrai is Irriari's slave who was brutally murdered years before she came to Ravok. If this doesn't work for you, tell me and we can do something different.
Irriari saw her across the dock as she stood in the streets and nearly leaped skyward. It was her! Sevrai had some how made it! The delusions she had held onto for too long were truth and her beautiful love and slave was no longer the massacred corpse she remembered. Somehow, she had made. Some way, Sevrai had found her. Irriari's feet hit the pavement and she sprinted towards the girl, her breath heavy as tears pricked at her eyes. The images of the loss, and her regret had overwhelmed her for too many nights. For years she had sat alone, reflecting on the memories of the brown haired girl who had been her life. Pebbles flew into the canals as she tripped over a slight indent in the street and fell forward. Instinctively, her wings extended to their full length, and flapped twice in the brisk morning air. While it didn't stop the fall, it lessened her impact greatly, and Irriari's knees and palms were only slightly torn when she hit the earth.

She ignored the minor inconvenience and pain in shins in order to get to Sevrai faster. She had to. Irriari rounded the final corner of the bridge, at a slightly slower gait than before and finally saw Sevrai again. Only it wasn't Sevrai. The girl, who didn't seem to have spotted her yet, had lighter hair, and paler skin. The build of her body was slighter, but she still was classically beautiful as Sevrai had been. Irriaris hope was dashed again, for the final time, and her illusion of happiness had been torn apart for the last time. Her whole body ached by she stepped forward and screamed, loudly in zithanese before shoving the girl.

“Petching bitch!”

The violence didn't fix the pain, but it numbed the agony long enough for Irriari to compose herself. She growled at the girl, and the guttural sound reverberated up her throat into the stale air of the streets. She was still vulnerable and weak. The realization hit her then, as she stared at the human in front of her. But this one would pay for what she was.
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A Painful Brown Haired Memory (Vyxenne)

Postby Vyxenne on July 19th, 2011, 5:26 pm

Vyx heard loud screaching, and suddenly she was on the ground. "What was that for? WHAT DID I DO TO YOU!?" She screamed at whatever pushed her. She resisted the urge to change into a fox and bite whatever creature just pushed her over.

She finally looked up at the thing, and saw it was a Zith. Female, and quite pretty. But she was still angry. Really angry. You couldn't just push people around like that. Vyx had never talked to a Zith before, so she didn't understand what this one's problem was. She got up.

"I don't know why you think you could just shove me over like that, but I didn't do anything so I think you should just go back to your bat-cave or whatever you live in and leave me alone." She knew she probably just insulted the Zith, but she didn't care. She got ready to shapeshift at any moment in case the Zith attacked.
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Postby Irriari on July 19th, 2011, 11:37 pm

OOCIf you do shift, I would consider how any Ravokian slave traders might see that. You might not just see Irr chasing you.

The girl seemed to be shocked and angry. How proper. More fodder for her rage. Didn't the human see that she was nothing, and that she was no one? She would never be as good as Sevrai. None of them could ever replace her- but they could pay for the pain. Fierce was like a human, wasn't he? Hadn't he been manipulative, deceptive and fake, just as they were? Yes. Each thought, each echo of the pain that had torn her open night after night affirmed the anger she held towards the girl standing in front of her.

When the girl stood up, Irriari laughed. Humans didn't know when to stay down. Maybe they just enjoyed falling. This one would certainly have to learn to.

“My bat cave? Should I take you with me? You know, in some 'bat caves' my race would eat pretty girls like you. They would watch you scream and struggle. Me? I'd just watch you run and then, when I caught you.... Well, who knows?”

Irriari smiled, though she knew it would probably look twisted to the girl. Irriari pushed her again, lightly enough to leave the girl standing, but she would probably stumble.

“You won't do anything human. I could chase you across this city until you were spent. You aren't like her. She would have fought. She would have been brave.”

Whether her assessment of the girl was right or wrong- Irriari didn't care. The pain, the rage and the adrenaline were a potent high, and one she didn't care to stop anytime soon.

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Here is the thread where Irriari found Sevrai, and why she is so mad. It's only one post, but it may help explain some things. I hope this post doesn't scare you away. She's simply hurt and angry.
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Postby Vyxenne on July 20th, 2011, 1:55 am

She remembered the slave traders in the city, and decided against shifting. But she was still mad, and if this Zith wanted her to run, she was going to stay put. The Zith thought she was human too. Haha.

"Look, I don't know who this 'she' that you're talking about is, and I would fight, if I had a weapon. I'm not good at unarmed. And," She took a step closer to the Zith, and started speaking quietly. "I'm going to stay right here. Go ahead and kill me. You aren't the first person to threaten my life." She took a step back. She wasn't mad anymore.

"Besides, it's not like anyone would miss me or anything. I'm not going to beg for my life, either. I have no need to. Now, who are you talking about anyway? I would like to know who I'm being killed for." She spoke coolly, quietly. She knew how to handle situations like this. Now why was it that she was always running into dangerous creatures like this?
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Postby Irriari on July 20th, 2011, 4:59 am

Something about the girl and her responses struck a cord in Irriari's heart. Sevrai had never told Irriari where she was from. No matter how the zith prodded, or how angry she got, her slave had refused to speak about her past or her family. Finally, Irriari had given up, and simply remained happy that she had found the girl in the sea of grass, against all odds. This one, whoever she was, had the same vulnerability, but she seemed colder in her responses and less broken down than Sevrai had been.

“You won't fight me? How sad.”

She grabbed the girls wrist and tightened her hand on it, laughing. It wouldn't harm the girl too badly.

“She was my slave in my colony. She was everything. You look like she did. Sadly, I was mistaken. But I want you to pay for it, anyways.”

Irriari knew that it wasn't right, but finally her anger had culminated into a grief that needed something physical to be quenched. No. Today a whore house wouldn't dampen the pain. It was disappointing that the girl wouldn't run. Irriari's claws curled into her wrist slightly until she felt a small bead of blood welling up on the girls arm. This time she held onto the girls arm, gauging her reaction as the drop fell onto the street of Ravok.
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Postby Vyxenne on July 20th, 2011, 5:26 am

She knew exactly how to handle the situation. She kept silent, and just looked into the Zith's eyes. She wouldn't get the best of her, not yet. And Vyxenne either didn't feel the pain or she ignored it, eithe way, she had a cold expression. She knew to confuse the Zith, but she wasn't going to escape. She knew that escape would be helpless, like it was days before. She could only hope to use speech to escape.

"I look like a slave...wonderful. I am most likely going to end up as one, seeing I'm Kelvic in Ravok. Bad combination, no? And I had nothing to do with killing your slave, nor was it my intention to look like her. And if you want to kill me so badly, get along with it, I don't have all day."

Vyxenne flashed a smile, showing off her canine teeth. "And please, the Dhani I confronted a few days ago was more threatening then you. I'm not afraid of you, and I'm not afraid of death. Your feeble attempts to scare me aren't working. So please, make up your mind. Kill me, or not?" She spoke coldly, to match her expression. She wasn't scared of the predators anymore. Vyx didn't see anything to be afraid of.
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Postby Irriari on July 20th, 2011, 10:54 pm

It wasn't wonderful. No one should ever look like Sevrai, because no one could ever be like her. The girl, with all her bravado didn't seem to understand how close Irriari was to the killing edge. Through no fault of her own, the pretty brown haired human would suffer, because the pain she felt had never been dealt with. Knowing who murdered Sevrai, and not being able to kill him... that hurt more than the sharpest knife. And now this human was taunting her.

“I don't know what a Kelvic is, and I don't care.”

Irriari snarled and grabbed the girls hair, close to the scalp and pulled it down towards the earth.

“You won't tell me what to do, or I swear to Rhysol, you will know the meaning of pain. I can poison you in an instant and have you so weak you wouldn't be able to move.”

Irriari knew it was wrong, but she wanted to see the girl in pain, if only for a moment. Maybe that would help the pain that threatened to consume her. She pulled harder, aiming to force the girls neck down at an odd angle. Irriari glared down at the girl, and tried to ignore the similarities to the one she had found that day in the sea of grass. She couldn't. While controlling the small girl in front of her was a drug, Irriari didn't have the heart to keep going. She released the the clump of hair none too gently, savoring the last amount of contact. How long had it been since she had felt the touch of another? Now, in Ravok, she had to torture innocent bystanders to simply be ok with herself.

“If I ever see you again....”

Irriari stopped, and trailed off into words that were half zithanese, half common. She would do what? Kill her? Capture her? Drug her? She sighed and stared down at the girl.

“Just leave.”

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Postby Vyxenne on July 21st, 2011, 5:03 pm

Vyxenne tried to keep herself from yelping in pain, because getting hair pulled hurts. Terribly. It didn't help that the Zith pushed her neck at a weird angle, either. When the Zith let go, she rubbed that part of her head.

"I was just enjoying the company. But if I have to leave, then I will. But I'm not so sure if I should. What if you come chasing after me?"

She didn't know what the Zith would do if she saw her again, and she didn't want to know. She also didn't know if the Zith was planning to chase Vyx down. Vyx didn't want to get chased down, especially not by a Zith. But if she had the choice of leaving or staying in the Zith's presence, she didn't know which she would choose.

She went over the pros and cons of staying there. If she stood there, then the Zith might leave. Or the Zith would do something weird. The Zith could kill her, or poison her, or capture her and sell her into slavery. If she left, then the Zith would probably leave her alone, but Vyx was too proud and thought that if she left she would be showing the Zith that she won. So she stayed put.
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Postby Irriari on July 23rd, 2011, 12:02 am

Irriari's hands shook as she tried to control the emotions that were building within her chest. Didn't this girl know how long it had been since she had been able to indulge in anything feral, and how difficult it was to control her impulses in the city? Ravok was filled with humans that were ripe for slaughter and slavery, and easy to take from the streets for that very purpose.

The girls short yelps of pain made her smile, and she chuckled as the girl rubbed the spot on her head that was undoubtedly sore.

“What if I come chasing after you? Well, I'll probably capture you and do what ever I desire with you.”

Irriari paused and considered her words.

“To me, you're a game. Few of my race would bother to give you the warning I just did. Few humans would ignore that warning. Haven't you heard stories of my race? You would be so easy to enslave. You might fight for awhile, but I could easily keep you in check. I would break you.”

She wanted to grab the girl again, and be able to revel in the emotion that came with causing another pain, but her self control was already teetering on the edge so she decided against it.

“Do you stay here because you want me to capture you, or are you deluded into thinking that I won't?”
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Postby Verilian on June 25th, 2013, 8:07 pm

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