Aarithren Whitewake

[Aarithren Whitewake]

Aarithren Whitewake Physical Information Race:Svefra Height: 6"1' weight: 178 Hair:Long,Dark Brown Eyes:Blue Skin:Bronze Tan Birthday & Age:Spring 76, 489 AV (Age: 22) Gender:Male Character Concept Personality - Aarithren is a very freelance sort of Svefra. He disowns many traditions due to his apathetic attitude. Secretly, he is proud of his Svefra Origins, but only because he loves the sea so strongly. He lives for the simplicity of life, drinking often and wooing women of all races. He will help those in need for a price, unless they find themselves in dire need. Despite his almost anti social personality and reputation as a low life, he has a conscious. Ethics - Survival is every man, woman, and child's right. Survival, is all that is needed. Likes - Women, Seafaring, Alcohol, swordplay. Dislikes - He bares no ill will towards any race. Languages: Fratava-fluent Common-basic Char-poor Lores Svefra Lifestyle Piracy Character History Pre-Creation - Aarithren grew up with his respective pod for 14 years, though he was an odd child. When expected to do his chores around the ship, he would be lost, and found hiding away, playing with his deceased pirate father's cutlass and other sorts of weaponry that he may have stolen, or made. It was not long before the boy, now 10 and dreaming of an exciting pirate life, began to see how much thievery he could get away with. He found himself adept at the skill, making his own secret lifestyle. Being so young and naive, he had eventually been caught, and through much disappointment, arguments, and other dramas, Aarithren disowned his small pod and fled on a very small rowboat. He took refuge in Sylaris for the rest of his young life, where he stole and did minor jobs for questionably legal individuals until he was around the age of 17. By that age, he had built himself his own one man ship. He set sail back into the Suvan Sea, and has been surviving since. Now and then he will make trips back to Sylaris, but he has long given up his lifestyle as a thief, as he does not fancy the idea of capital punishment. Instead he will sell what sea life he can spare, and whatever else he has and does not want. He still owns his father's Cutlass. and is never seen without them. So he is rumored to be a skillful swordsman. Post Creation - In progress. Starting Package Earned Skill/Points: Weapon: Cutlass- 10 Fishing- 8 Swimming- 8 unarmed combat- 7 Negotiation- 7 Ship building/repair- 10 Sailing- 10 (Racial Bonus) Equipment/Possessions Clothing: His typical outfit, worn day after day since he washes daily consists of: -White silk shirt -Dark over coat -Dark pants loose at the ankles -White headband Weapons: -A long silver cutlass, The handle being wrapped in leather for grip while the blade is engraved with his father's pirate oath. (Heriloom) Home: -His ship (Casinor class) Small and fast, hand made by himself alone. It bares green sails, giving it the name, The Jaded Drifter. Ledger Map -10gm Fishing kit -10gm Scabbard -4gm Whip -1gm Grapple pole -15gm Knife(wrist) -1gm =41gm Available gm- 59gm

[Tattoo]

Hello Aarithren and Welcome to Mizahar,

I'm Tattoo, the Character Sheet Liaison, which means I'm the official 'helper' here in the CS forum. I noticed some things about your CS that need improvement. I know it can be a struggle wading through all the lore and getting your character in playable shape - starting with the CS. That's where I come in.

The first issue I see is in your skills. Swordplay needs to be changed to Weapon: Cutlass since that is your sword of choice. Also you can't dual wield weapons unless you have 30 skill points in the weapon(s) you are using.

You are only allowed one heirloom item, not 3.

You also are lacking your starting languages. You are allowed up to 3 languages, one Fluent, one Basic, and one Poor. I recommend Fratava, the language of Svefra, and Common, the most widely used language in Mizahar.

Finally, you are missing your starting Lores. I would recommend Lore of Svefra Life Style and Lore of Syliras Geography (Basic).

Everything else looks great. Please make the appropriate changes to your CS and PM me, I'll remove this post. Thank you for the CS and I look forward to reading your posts. Welcome to Mizahar