Kirsten D Armstrong

[Kirsten D Armstrong]

Kirsten D Armstrong [center]Insert Image Here (Host in our gallery, photobucket, etc) Basic Information Race:Ghost Birthday & Age :before death: 484 AV, 23+4 years old Gender: Female Physical Description While Alive Kirsten was around 5' 4'' and had shoulder length hair. Her hair color was the same as her mothers. A rich red that had a natural wave to it, which she loved dearly about herself, Her eyes were a very light blue that twinkled beautifully as if a pair of sapphires that were under water. Her body seemed slightly frail and her face sunken in slightly from the lack of nutrition. Her hands are worn and Calloused from all the chores around the house and working the odd part time job. Character Concept while alive Kirsten was a very curious person, though one wouldn't guess it with how much time she spends at home helping her family. She always thought of her family foremost and put herself second in her books. For this reason she never explored her own desires and was thought to be very shy and not very outgoing. but now that she's no longer apart of the living, only time and her...nonlife experiences shall determine how she will react to things around her and how she will grow. Character History When Kirsten was 4 years old, her and a two other children ventured outside of the safety of the city walls. While they were venturing on their own, they came across a clearing where there was a flower bed, filled with plenty of different colors that Kirsten had never seen before. With the sun beaming down through the trees where these flowers lay, it felt like a slice of paradise had appeared in front of these children. A few years after Jonathan had been born, her younger brother. She wanted to let him in on this secret, this little slice of paradise they found amongst their world of hardship...however while they were playing there, what Kirsten had not realized is that a few wolves had been in the flower bed. The wolf feeling threaten by the sudden appearance of these children was startled and attached Jonathan, severely damaging the left side of his face. Luckily the town watch got there in time to save both of their lives, however the sight and grief of seeing her brother mulled by a wolf because she brought him outside of the safety of the walls scarred her. She vowed to never do anything that could possibly harm her family again and that is when she dedicated herself purely to her loved ones and left her personal desires behind. Known languages Common Training Materialization 10/RB+16/SB=26 Total Soulmist projection: 8/SB+0=8 total Possession: 26/SB+0=26 total Lore Witnessed a wolf attack Pain worse then death Equipment and Possessions All Possessions are no longer on Kirsten's now ghostly body. However you do see the cloths she wore before her death. A old Tattered dress, which is a light brown color with a few stains here and there. Patches of Different color fabric are stitched onto it where the dress must had been worn out. On her wrist is a bracelet made of string given to her by her youngest sister Janelle, who made it for her. Ledger 100 gm (starting coin) Thread List 491 AV Winter 69 So the Travels begin...?

[Tattoo]

Hello Kirsten and Welcome to Mizahar,

I'm Tattoo, the Character Sheet Liaison, which means I'm the official 'helper' here in the CS forum. I noticed some things about your CS that need improvement. I know it can be a struggle wading through all the lore and getting your character in playable shape - starting with the CS. That's where I come in.

The first thing I notice out of place is your lack of languages. You can have up to 3 starting languages, one Fluent, one Basic, and one Poor. I recommend Common, the most widely used language of Mizahar.

The second thing I noticed is no starting Lores. I recommend Lore of Dying and Lore of Witnessing a Wolf Attack.

Everything else looks great. Please make the appropriate changes to your CS and PM me, I'll remove this post. Thank you for the CS and I look forward to reading your posts. Welcome to Mizahar