Foxy - Please review the Starting Guide; it has all the information you require. You post in this forum once you have a Character Sheet ready to go.
Aleir - Your sheet looks good, my only critique would be that your history doesn't talk about how your character became a Nuit. That's up to you if you want it in the history, but just something I noticed as your account has an Isur name while they're a Nuit with no mention of how they became one.
Kashia - Looks good to me.