The Nautica Street Wars, Part One [Flashback; Solo]

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A city floating in the center of a lake, Ravok is a place of dark beauty, romance and culture. Behind it all though is the presence of Rhysol, God of Evil and Betrayal. The city is controlled by The Black Sun, a religious organization devoted to Rhysol. [Lore]

The Nautica Street Wars, Part One [Flashback; Solo]

Postby Victor Lark on October 20th, 2011, 2:40 pm

Summer 10, 503

Step One: The Lead


“Yes, ma’am...”

That was all Jacob Nitrozian said. The mighty leader of their faction, triumphant against all odds and tactical to a fault, had been interrupted from the midst of battle by two sad, obedient words. Beside his comrades, Victor watched in disbelief as his captain departed beneath the shadowy threshold of his home with the chastising slap of a mean old maid on the back of his shoulder. The door clicked behind him; the lock turned. And that was that.

“It’s not fair,” Darian Lark said first, harrumphing. “My mom lets me come in at nightfall, and the sky’s not even dark yet.” He said more than he told: he was one of four that participated in the battle that afternoon, nearly half of the soldiers fighting. It would not be over until they were called in, or until someone won—that happened less often than any of them would admit.

Their father was a slaver, or rather the man who hired slavers and men to sell their catch, earning his blood money from behind a polished mahogany desk. Darian was the youngest, a scrawny and scar-riddled eight-year-old after Victor’s own heart, eager to prove himself tough no matter what it took. Unlike Victor, he had the advantage of his other brothers’ two-faced protection, the kind that dictated only they could lay a finger on him. His sister, Emille, was as dirty and angry as any of her brothers in that late afternoon. She was twelve and they said she had become a woman, but she always insisted she wasn’t and she wasn’t that pretty, anyway. She was taller than all of them, their resident oaf.

They were the lesser two of Vernon Lark’s offspring, but they had done well in their roles as the proud and valiant Syliran Knights. Even when Jacob made them march out in the open, easy prey to the sneaking rival team that called themselves ‘Stryfe, they still pummeled their brothers with surprising alacrity when they finally came out of hiding.

Victor had always thought it was stupid. Why did their team have to be the enemy? Why did they have to pretend to be anyone, anyhow? None of them would ever amount to the distant and terrifying men of the Ebonstryfe, much less become the shiny, plucky knights that called themselves Ravok’s enemy. Victor felt foolish calling himself either.

His eyes fell from where they had glanced at the sky to the final member of their team, a surprisingly intuitive seven-year-old who was not even a member of the Lark family. If Ander Benzina had siblings, the Lark boys did not know of them. His parents worked in cloths and furs, and there was always a crow weighing on one of his shoulders, bigger than his head. He did not talk much, but whenever he did, people quieted to listen. Victor liked that about him, and he liked his bird. Ander’s mouth was hanging when Victor looked at him, as if he meant to say something. Victor stared directly at his hazel-green eyes and bent his brow. Somehow, that always made them talk.

“Victor’s second-in-command,” Ander said, staring back at the other boy and sinking into himself a little. “Jacob said so. That means he’s the captain now.”

Victor’s expression did not change as he considered what that meant. He only looked away from Ander when Darian spoke again. “Yeah. You have to tell us how to do.”

“He already does that anyway,” Emille rumbled, docking her pudgy hands on her waistless waist.

“No, I don’t!” Victor retorted, “I just give him ideas, which is more than any of you can say!”

Darian was as unperturbed as ever by his sister and her objections. “Victor, I want to be in front of the party this time. Can I—”

“We’re not going to walk out onto Nautica like it’s some circus parade. That’s dumb.” His hands had risen from his sides, but only barely, full of strength in irritation. That seemed to silence them both for a few seconds, long enough for Victor to realize that his heart was beating too fast. His hands fell again and he glared pensively at the ground. Darian’s loose tongue was the first to interrupt him.

“Then what do we—”

“Shut up. I’m thinking.”
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Postby Victor Lark on October 24th, 2011, 6:24 pm

Step Two: The Crow


The other team had the clear upper hand. In all practicality, they should have been the tall, bare-faced Knights to Jacob’s misfit band.

Brothers to Darian and Emille, Vernon and Tristan were a force to be reckoned with when they stood together. Only ten months younger than his brother, Tristan had gotten creative on the piles of books he had bought with his father’s money; he was a good match for the eleven-year-old Vernon and his mounting superiority complex. Tristan came up with games that Vernon could win, and no matter how hard he fought, Darian usually came out the loser. Victor knew that it was his job to bend the rules just enough to frustrate them both, and maybe even give their little brother the win he craved.

The Warren boys, Roland and Lawrence, were technically Larks on their mother’s side. Once employed as a clerk to organize Victor’s grandfather’s many investments, their father had risen to the title of dock master for the Larks’ various shipments, due to his remarkable attention to detail. The boys took after their mother, however, who had been married to the muttering, inward man for political reasons and had a contrary flair for the dramatic. They embellished Tristan’s plans, yelled when they popped out of hiding, and annoyed Vernon just enough to keep him interested. Lawrence was three years younger than his ten-year-old brother, but the two acted more like one continuous person: one whimsical, impulsive, dimwitted person.

Another advantage of Team Vernon’s was its size: with Jacob gone, they had a fifth boy to Victor’s four (or three and a half). Hector Lark was six, the oldest of three siblings but the youngest of the children present, who had only recently been promoted from chaperoned play dates to the street wars. He was honest, eager to please, and impressionable. He was their weak link, Victor knew.

He turned back to his team with that eerily straight face which they had since learned to bear. In that narrow back alley, Darian was crossarmed and fidgeting, Emille maintained her frowning akimbo, and Ander looked at him in quiet expectance. Their young leader’s cold grey eyes fell instinctively on the bird.

“They’ll expect us out there soon,” he said, staring at the crow’s little black eyes. “Ander, send up your crow to fly over and find out where they’re hiding. Tell her to look for the little one special. Hector.”

The brown-haired boy pulled his hands together in front of him. “Isn’t... wouldn’t that be against the rules?”

“It’s not, yet. Maybe it will be after today.”

“But, Jacob—”

“Jacob’s not here, and we’re down a man. We deserve to use your pet, instead.”

Ander opened his mouth to speak, but he paused an instant too long. He was not telling the animal to do anything, so Victor took that for dissent.

“You said I was leader,” he asserted flatly. “Tell her to find Hector.”

Ander’s stuttering grimace turned into a rightful glare. “Okay,” he said. He hesitated before he added, “But she’s not my pet. She’s half a person and her name is Moebe.” Greeted only with contemptuous concession, he raised a little finger to scratch her head. She craned her neck downward to oblige him, he whispered something short to her, and then she spread her wings over his ducking body and flapped into the air. Victor might have watched her for too long, but he did not seem to have noticed his indiscretion when he looked down at them again.

“Darian,” he said, turning to the boy whose whole body lighted upon being called. “You’re the bait. Do I have to actually beat you up or can you scream like you mean it?”

His brow furrowed and he dropped his arms cautiously. “What?”

“Say I hit you. What would you sound like?”

“Wouldn’t sound like anything. I don’t scream like a—”

Suddenly Victor lunged at him with two fists. Darian flinched and cried out, lifting a leg up over his stomach and both arms over his face. In the same second, Victor stopped with a stomp, never having touched him. Emille laughed. Victor echoed a second later, turning to consider her for a few long moments.

“I’ve got to talk to you private,” he said. She nodded, and stepped sideward, apparently impressed by yet another of Darian’s embarrassments. As he moved to the far corner of the alley, he looked back at the two boys and said, “Ander, help him practice how to pretend like he’s getting beat-up. But not too loud.”
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Postby Victor Lark on November 1st, 2011, 12:45 am

Step Three: The Kiss


When he and Emille returned, the boys were not speaking to each other. Ander was leaning against the side of the alley, deliberately picking at the embroidery on his fashionable silk vest, while Darian was kicking rocks with his hands in his pockets. Victor might have found the words to scold them both, if the shuffle of feathers from above did not distract him. All four pairs of eyes lifted to watch Moebe arrive, descending to Ander’s outstretched arm. She landed there faithfully, kneaded his sleeve with her talons, and dropped to the ground. There she cast a great white light on the whole corridor, throwing arms before eyes, and reappeared a naked woman. Her long dark hair pooled at Ander’s feet as she crouched beside him, her beady eyes unabashed by the stares of the children around her. She began to whisper to her bondmate from behind a wall of fingers, but Victor interrupted her.

“Share it with the rest of us, Moebe. Say what you saw.”

The Kelvic’s hand lowered hesitantly. Her eyes flicked like insects from Victor to Ander to Victor again, and having confirmed some sort of consent, she obeyed. Her voice was raspy and strident, like she had lost it screaming, but it was loud enough that Victor could believe the accent was not unique to the moment. “One on the roof, three houses down, one on the second floor below. One in the alley—”

“The little one. Hector. Where is he?”

“I... there was a boy, in the bakery. By the window, sitting in the corner. Looked like a Lark, but did not seem to be hiding...”

Victor looked at Emille, his expression unchanging. She nodded through the bright flush that reddened her cheeks, happily escaping after him as he climbed the familiar path that the water spout took up the alley’s side wall. Using it and surrounding ledges, they moved like spiders to the second floor window. The other boys did not look up. The familiar route did not impress them, and they were too distracted by the shifting Kelvic to watch out of idle interest. Ander consoled the flustered bird while Darian eyed her with astonished regret, staying away from the younger boy for fear that he might be inspired to practice.

The second floor window to Jacob’s house was almost always open; they used it a lot to move between alleys while avoiding the disclosure of the street. Careful not to make a sound, they skirted through the quiet hall and climbed through the window on the other side. There was a practical wooden awning over the door beneath it, leaving the ground two short drops away. The familiar fall was a still shock to their young bones, but they used the wall to slow their descent and a side-roll to disperse the impact. Soon enough, they were slipping into the bakery’s back door, dodging giant ovens and pastry-themed temptations. Victor burst out of the humid back room first, shirking the baker and his apprentice before they could complain. They darted towards the front swiftly, and Emille’s fist was wrapped around Hector’s shirt before he had even scrambled to his feet.

She turned him round, lifted him off his feet, and kissed him on the mouth.

Hector yelled and kicked her in the knees. Wincing audibly, she dropped him to the tiled floor, but Victor snatched his wrist before he could run away. From across the room, the baker called irritably, “Oy, go play somewhere else, or I’ll throw the lot of you to the ovens.”

Emille gulped. Hector glared. “Let me go,” he insisted, tugging on his arm and wiping his mouth with his other sleeve.

It took a slap in the arm to inspire her to speak. “Come with us,” she demanded, uncertainty leaking into her otherwise hard tone.

Hector scoffed. “No!”

Emille glanced sideways at Victor, whose scrutinizing eyes had not left her face. He did not speak, instead gave her an adamant nod. “Do what Victor says,” she recited, according to their plan.

“Come with us,” Victor repeated instantly, pulling him away from the window.

Despite his size, the littlest Lark was strong. He resisted. “No!”

“But you have to...” Emille said, biting away the nervousness on her lip.

“No I—”

“You do,” Victor interrupted, clutching harshly on his wrist. “She kissed you. If a girl kisses you, you have to do what she says. Those are the rules. She kissed you, and she said you have to what I say, and I say come with us!”

Hector stopped struggling. He cowered beneath Victor’s scowling eyes, which mimicked the forceful look his mother gave when she was disobeyed and furious. Without his leaders to protect him and tell him otherwise, Hector nodded timidly. When Victor heaved him towards the back door again, he followed. Emille found her smirk again as she took up the rear, and they returned to the their team.
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Postby Victor Lark on November 7th, 2011, 6:51 am

Step Four: The Rest


“Why is he here?”

Darian folded his arms as he glared up at them, the trio that descended the wall where only a pair had gone up. Victor was waiting close beneath as Hector climbed off of it, and he seized the younger boy’s wrist as soon as it was free to him—as if he would have run off. Hector might have had the strength to resist easily, but he was bound by the rules of the game to comply. Emille stepped down warily after them as Victor hauled him to the center of the alley and answered, “He’s our prisoner.”

The four children had formed that same circle which arranged itself for most of their conversations; Victor shoved his cousin to the center of it. The boy tripped and staggered, but managed not to fall over. Still, Emille knocked the back of her wrist against Victor’s arm and ordered in a harsh whisper, “Be nice.”

Victor looked at her for a long moment, incredulous and annoyed. His brow furrowed to show his frustration, his desire to harass his younger cousin the way he had been harassed countless times in the past. But finally his expression softened, and when Victor regarded the boy again, there was a strained smile on his face.

He had to do what she said, after all.

“We need to bring them out of hiding first,” he explained, but they already knew. It was fun to march out and scream with surprise as the Ebonstryfe players burst out from the shadows, but that was no way to win. All you had to do was slap the enemy to ‘kill’ him, or put him out of play, and it was easier to get slapped when your opponent saw you before you saw him. A slap from an ally would bring you back to life, but none of them could ever get to each other in time to avoid the inevitable brawl that followed. Jacob’s team had won a few times out of sheer luck, but Victor’s would win with cleverness and strategy. He continued, “The way to do that is to make them think there’s a time-out, and the only way they’ll believe that is with your help, Hector.”

He had been looking over his teammates, each less inclined to all this planning than the last, and Hector was naturally the least enthusiastic. Despite his age, he stood straight and almost dignified, his little hands in fists at his sides. “And what makes you think I’ll do that?” He asked, but he already knew. His eyes flew to Emille, who gave the stubborn boy an apologetic smile. Victor hated her for it.

“Because,” Victor said, his tone bent by the grin on his mouth. “You get to beat up Darian.”

“What? No he doesn’t!” The slaver’s son rejoined, dropping his arms and stepping angrily forward.

Victor did not have to be nice to Darian. With a glare, he spat, “You couldn’t figure out how to fake it, so he’s gonna do it for real. Besides, he won’t get you for long. If it happens in the middle of the street, Tristan and Vernon’ll come running, and we can tag them and beat them up proper.”

That impressed the Darian more than he thought it would. Victor watched curiously as Darian’s face rose like there was a new light behind it. He was still looking at his leader, but he seemed to also be looking through him, seeing something that no one else could. “Beat ‘em up proper...” he repeated wistfully, and was won.

And Hector was happy to take out his frustrations within the bounds of the rules, and Emille was happy that her brother and captor were content, and Ander... Victor noticed a strange look on his face, but he could not tell what it was. He took a step closer to the Benzina boy. The crow on his shoulder squawked defensively. He stole a glance at her, and when he looked at her bondmate, he saw that his mouth was hanging in anticipation of a few words.

“Out with it,” Victor said, swinging his hand.

“I was thinking... well, we’d never done it before, and since we’ll come out of hiding to, you know, surprise them, we could...” He laughed, dismissing the idea before it was spoken. Still, he said, “we could hide in the water. And Moebe could fly over when all the boys were out, and then we could pop out and tag ‘em from behind.”

A wide smile spread on Victor’s lips, another from his mother’s collection, the kind that seemed to drip with satisfaction and approval. “Good idea,” he replied.

And where he had been begun with a sea of frowns, he was surrounded with mischievous grins and excited glances.
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Postby Victor Lark on November 13th, 2011, 5:09 am

Step Five: The Fight


With an exaggerated “Oouf!” Hector shoved his older cousin out of the bakery and onto the wide, quiet side lane of Nautica Street. Three figures that had been lurking beneath the far bridge slipped quietly beneath the water, like tinkling bells behind the sudden percussion of shouts.

Victor could see only the undulating glow of a street light from beneath the surface, as the sun had already descended behind the rooftops in her last stretch towards dusk. The world around him was dark and blue and brown, but more than that: it was cold. It ate at his every pore and rent needles through his eyes, made him feel stiff and sore. It seemed to hate him, the way it pushed him up and away from its depths as if it wanted little else than to be rid of him, forcing him to grip the slimy notches in the hard stone wall of the street so that he would not be discovered. He glanced at his teammates, but they were looking up at the sky, waiting for the signal. The muffled cries of breathing lungs collected on the air above.

Ander saw the shadow first. He lunged up, reaching and kicking, sending a flurry of itchy white bubbles around him. Victor followed, propelling himself against the wall; the momentum and adrenaline seemed to send him flying over the edge, gasping and spraying and sudden. Emille clambered out after them and sprinted head-first into the fray.

Darian had knocked Tristan to the ground, having slapped Hector dead at the sound of a Caw! and laughed his way from prey to predator. Disoriented by the sudden flurry of movement, the Warren brothers did not stand a chance. Ander, stripped down to his underwear to protect his valuable clothes, slapped Lawrence on his leg and proceeded to tackle him around the knees; Emille, her long dark hair wild and slick, got Roland hard on the back and pushed him into Hector, who had stepped meekly backward after he had done his duty.

Victor’s was Vernon. While the other boys were screaming their conquest, sometimes punctuated by one of Emille’s witty jabs, Victor was silent as he found his target and sprang for him. Before the other captain knew that his brother had fooled him, he had a bare-armed cousin wrapped around his neck and hanging against his back. Nearly half a foot shorter, Victor easily wrapped his legs around Vernon’s middle as he hit him in the chest, winning the battle without a single man down. But winning was only the beginning.

Victor had kept his pants, but forgone his shoes. That hardly made it hurt any less when he dug his heel into Vernon’s belly, inspiring a heavy grunt and a fierce growl. Vernon gripped the slippery arms that clung to him and bit down hard with his teeth, pulling a begrudging yelp out of his attacker. Prying the stunned limbs off of him, he crouched and fell and threw his burden beneath him. But Victor would not let go so easily. He clung to Vernon, kicking and kneeing whatever flesh had tangled between his legs. In return he received a hard punch on the side of his face: once, twice, thrice before he finally wriggled his way out. Never one to flee, Victor descended on his cousin instantly again, kicked him in the shoulder and pushed him onto his back. He tried to hold him down, but only managed to take hold of his shirt before Vernon tossed him off again, and so they tumbled and thrashed blindly at each other for too many chimes.

“Vernon!” Emille’s voice finally rang, “Victor!”

When they paused to look at her, Victor was, by some miracle, on top. His head was throbbing; an open wound beside his eye was dripping freely onto the street. Vernon’s lip was split and there was a bruise on his cheekbone. Victor loosed his fists and stood, stepping backward and away from the boy has he found his feet and wiped his mouth. They both looked warily at their teams.

Darian had more fresh bruises than could be counted, but he seemed to have made his peace with Tristan, who was helping his sister hold the Warren boys apart from Hector and his stiff cowardice. All of them held their eyes on their leaders; a few mouths hung open. The only blood drawn was on Victor’s end of the street, as his had been the only really heated fight. He glanced at Vernon again, whose scowl had not lifted despite (or perhaps because of) his defeat, and Victor realized that he too had his face twisted into an uncomfortable frown. He lifted his expression as his attention tipped toward the setting sun.

“It’s almost nightfall,” he said flatly. “We should get going.”

Emille nodded; Tristan hummed; Vernon scowled. Roland straightened himself and tugged at Lawrence’s skewed shirt. Ander reached towards the sky as his crow flapped down, and Darian laughed.

“We won!” The young boy shrieked, pointing triumphantly at his eldest brother.

Victor chuckled, then winced at the pain on his eye. He looked down at his hands, once white with effort and now flushed with relief. “We won.”
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Postby Verilian on December 21st, 2011, 10:22 pm

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