Karsh

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Karsh

Postby Karsh on January 8th, 2012, 5:47 am

Karsh

Basic Information

Race:Jamoura
Birthday: 23rd Spring, 302 AV
Gender: Male

Languages

Language 1: Jamouran (Fluent)
Language 2: Common (Basic)
Language 3: Vantha (Poor)

Physical Description
At about 575 pounds and 7' 10", Karsh is about average height for a Jamoura. He has shaggy dark brown fur that hangs off his body and makes him seem larger than he is. His eyes are mostly brown with green flecks mixed in them.

Character Concept
Karsh is the type of character who, upon finding a fifty dollar bill on the street , would go house to house asking people if it was theirs. He is trusting to the point of naivete, and has an insatiable thirst for knowledge he is always trying to sate. Always happy and amazingly thick-skinned, it is next to impossible to hurt Karsh's feelings, as he always thinks the best of people.

Character History
Growing up in the Spires, Karsh was a fairly normal Jamoura. He had a decent number of friends, he had no traumatizing experience, no sudden message from the gods. He was, and is, largely a normal person trying to learn more and enjoy life in this dangerous and violent day and age.

 
Skills
10/100 Wilderness Survival (Racial bonus)
30/100 Shielding
10/100 Investigation
10/100 Brawling
 
Equipment
1 large tent (4 person
Large tarp
100 ft of rope
Flint & steel
Lantern
2 torches
Bedroll&Blanket
Fishing tackle & hooks
Saddlebags
[tab=Lores,#008000,White]
Finding things in a Library
Being Disappointed


Ledger
300 Gm(100 starting+cashed in horse)
-15 Gm (Ox)
285 GM

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Karsh

Postby Shepherd on February 5th, 2012, 1:46 pm

Shepherd's Moderator Intervention

Hello new adventurer!

Welcome to Mizahar! My name is Shepherd, and I am here to assist you in completing your Character Sheet in a manner that is respectful to the Lore and overall theme of Mizahar. I have found a few areas of confusion and error, and I'm here to work with you to set things straight.


Things Needing Fixed
 
Age
I noticed your Jamoura was born in the year 302 AV. This would make him approximately 109 years old. According to the Lore, Jamoura live 10 times longer than a human would, thereby making him equivalent to a 10 year old child.
Jamoura age both mentally and physically at very slow rate. At 100 years of age, they are developmentally equivalent to a 10 year old human. At 500 years of age, they could be compared to a 50 year old human.



 
Lores
I noticed that you had no starting Lores. Lores are representations of what your Character knows and learns. Starting out, you are allowed to have 2 Lores. It's not mandatory, but it is recommended. I would recommend the following:

Lore of Daily Life in the Spires
Lore of Shrugging Off Insults


 
Minor Notes
These things do not need to be changed, but I would recommend you looking into some adjustments.

I noticed that you have Brawling as a skill. While this is fine, I feel it goes somewhat against the nature of Jamoura. They simply do not seem the violent type. However, it can also be used in self defense, which is why I'm noting it here in the Minor Notes section.

I also noticed you have Shielding as well. Again, this is perfectly fine, but I would like to see in the background info some information as to how he learned it and became so proficient at it. Magic is rare in Mizahar, but not so rare as to not exist.

Finally, I see you have an Ox listed as your mount. I would highly recommend adjusting your skills just a tad to include Riding: Ox. Without it, your character has no idea as to what he'd be doing atop it.


Please make the changes I've noted above, and send me a Private Message. Upon receiving your message, and reviewing your changes, I will remove the Intervention. Thank you for coming to Mizahar, and I hope you enjoy writing here.

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