Na'Leigh

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Na'Leigh

Postby Na'Leigh on January 24th, 2012, 6:47 pm

Na'Leigh



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Self:

Species: Human, Mixed (Inartan/Dryka)

Age: 16

Hair: Dark Red (most often found woven into a
tight straight braid down her
back, unashamedly
revealing her face)

Eyes: Pale Green

Complexion: Incredibly Pale despite her time spent outdoors.

Appearance: During an accident (furthur explained in her history) her face was
left riddled with faint scars. Wide rounded hips slip out of her
petite waist like a puffed skirt. In an attempt
to stunt the growth of her breasts she binds them tightly to her
body. Na'Leigh thinks little of what her body looks like and more
about what it can do. Finding pleasure in straining her body to its
limit she revels in the magnificence of agile fingers and
toes, flexibility, and strength. Women love to be near her,
finding her appearance soothing because it makes
them feel beautiful. Men however take her more seriously than
other women because of her appearance and though
they never kiss her face or gaze into her eyes she has
experienced a few fumbling encounters in dark corners of
alleyways. She is most often seen wearing plain white clothing
indoors to ward off the heat, adding a deep rich
layer of red lipstick during celebrations. Outside she dresses for
the weather wearing grey and white furs.

Height: 4'8

Sexual Orientation/Status: A virgin, she has had few sexual encounters.
The few she has experienced were exchanged in
curiosity or drunken revelry. Like most Inarta she
freely expresses her emotions and has been raised
to think of sex as a normal vocation or interest.


Habits: When concentrating or anxious Na'Leigh often chews her lips, this can
easily turn into biting as her distress increases. She has no musical
ability and though she enjoys the music of her people would not be
caught more than swaying to a lovely tune.

Piercings: Navel, Ears, Collarbones.

Greatest Fear: Death/ Watching someone Die.

Family:


Name: Neighla
Relation: Biological Mother
Appearance: Shockingly bright red hair and sharp gold eyes. Na'Leigh's mother
was a vivid tall beauty, cascading curly hair and body. She never
bore children with her husband but bore twins with her Drykas
lover, Na'Leigh and Na'Rish. When her mother died and the truth
was revealed Na'Rish left the mountains with Gavini.
Race: Human, Inarta
Personality/History: A warm mother, despite her advancing arthritis took
every chance to be with her children. She was an
enigmatic dancer with a great love of children. She grew
up with six siblings but by the time she was in her mid-
twenties most had died. An aggressive lover and
emotionally loud individual she passed these teachings on
to her children.

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Name: Givini Redsun
Relation: Biological Father
Appearance: Long brown hair and hazel eyes, he is much taller than Shinvi.
Race: Human, Dryka
Personality: Quiet and Decisive
History: Introduced to his children as their Uncle he was beloved by
everyone. Gunesh never treated him warmly but protected him
like family and would at times speak to him.

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Name: Shinvi, (Gunesh)
Relation: Father
Appearance: A braided red beard forms like a stalactite from his chin to his
belly button. His long hair held back in a long thick braid (a style
her sister adopted from childhood). He has wiry sturdy arms and
legs.
Race: Human, Inarta
Peronality/History: Shinvi was a man capable of enormous love and
uncontrollable fury. He ran his family strictly because of his love
for them and protected their honour to his death even when his
wife became pregnant with another mans children. Though most
Inarta have relatively low inhibitions and may take many lovers,
Gunesh forced a secret promise from Shinvi that we would only
take one mate and she in turn. Gunesh lost his mate within a
week of their mating dance and refuses to take another. Family is
more import than anything else to both Shinvi and Gunesh. Over
protective, moral, noble.

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Name: Na'Rish
Nickname: Ri or Rishie
Relation: Twin Sister
Appearance: Darker hair than her sister and with their biological fathers hazel
eyes she stood out among the Inarta. She inherited her mothers
height and beauty.
Race: Human, Mixed
Personality/ History: She is very mellow and though she speaks bluntly she
understands the war everyone fights inside and so speaks
the truth with compassion, a talent her sister envies.
Inseparable from her sister, until the truth was revealed.

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Name: Gunesh
Relation: Her fathers Eagle
Appearance: Slate blue head and primaries, Russet and Cream body.
Race: Wind Eagle
Personality/History: Gunesh is a family body, bonding with Shinvi when he lost his mate Genavive. He bonded with Shinvi on the agreement that Shinvi would choose only one love and would only tolerate being the one love of his wife. He treated Na'Leigh and Rishi as his own fledglings.

History:

Neighla was a fiercely independent glass blower who totted her ware all across the land. However, she was also a fierce lover and mother. Unable to have children with her husband she took out her frustration by bedding countless lovers in her travels. Though she loved him no less she desperately wanted children. Though she would never admit it to herself even more desperately she wanted the excitement of a new mans touch. Though her husband was a wonderful lover the excitement had dulled in their years of marriage. While on the last leg of her journey she traveled with Givini's family. Though she never loved him they complimented each other and soon were finding their way into each others beds every night. Introducing him as a friend to her husband Givini, a merchant and traveler, stayed in Wind Reach for a time but soon realized his love for Neighla would never be reciprocated. When he discovered she was pregnant he wanted to be close to his daughters, to tell them the truth. Neighla refused and insisted that he visit them under the precedent that he was their Uncle. He agreed, and would pay biyearly visits to his growing children.

When Gunesh found out Neighla had born Givini's children he flew into a rage and turned to kill Neighla. Diving between them Shinvi tried to stop Gunesh. In his fury Gunesh killed Shinvi for betraying his family by tolerating her betrayal. Rishi, feeling betrayed by her entire family fled Wind Reach and her past to live with Givini on the plains. Na'Leigh saved her mother from Gunesh's wrath. A year later her mother died, unable to take care of herself because of the advanced form of her arthritis. In her grief, Na'Leigh went to Gunesh. Despite Givini's biyearly visits so Wind Reach to visit her she ignored his attentions. Accepting Gunesh as her last form of family she fled to him. Still raging over the betrayal he left her face scarred as a reminder of her weakness. By saving her mother she had used the distraction of her fathers death to save a guilty woman, in Wind Reach an Eagle passed judgement and sentence in one, her evasion was a sign of disrespect for Gunesh, and weakness in the face of her emotions.

Since then she has striven to show to her people she is one of them. Unknown to her they already accept her. Liaisons between different humans is normal in their culture but she projects her own dissatisfaction of who she is onto them. When her father died she was given his hunting dog, an enormous brute, named Gully, that spent most of the day curled against the warm stone of the mountain when he wasn't helping her people hunt.

When her father was alive Na'Leigh had been apprenticed to a glass blower, when he died she left, putting all her effort in caring for her mother. When her mother passed away she went back to the glass blower but he had already replaced her with a very promising lad. Though she respected the lad his talent she fought for the apprenticeship, leaving sketches each day in front of the mans door. Though her sketching abilities were limited her ideas were vast. She would spend hours of each day at his doorstep, waiting and watching for the lad to make a mistake that she could correct. Though the glassblower pitied her for her loss he wasn't sure of her capability and refused her attempts.

One evening the lad made a terrible mistake, stumbling he dropped the chest of glass creations the glassblower was planning to sell that month at the market. Dismissing the boy for his carelessness he accepted Na'Leigh's offer not knowing that it was she who had tripped the boy.

While she loves glassblowing Na'Leigh's true passion is climbing. She loves the puzzle stretched out on either side of her the secrets and darkness they hold waiting for her to find them. Whenever she is not at her mentors side she is found out on the cliffs with the hunters with Gully. Though one of the youngest in the group she is competent on the cliffs and owns an impressive hunting dog, something Wind Reach can hardly pass up.

Location:

Born: Wind Reach
Resides: Wind Reach
Traveled: Only in the immediate area.

Occupation:

N/A

Education:

Glass blower apprentice.


Life Goal: To make a difference.
A difference remembered by more than just the people I met.
I want to be studied by the young in schools
and quoted by the great leaders of the future.
Last edited by Na'Leigh on February 11th, 2012, 3:33 am, edited 19 times in total.
Na'Leigh
Player
 
Posts: 27
Words: 23316
Joined roleplay: January 24th, 2012, 3:06 am
Race: Human, Mixed
Character sheet

Na'Leigh

Postby Na'Leigh on January 24th, 2012, 7:22 pm

Clothing:

Fur-lined gloves -----> Starter Kit
Katinu -----------------> Starter Kit
Fur-lined boots ------> Starter Kit
White Bryda ----------> Starter Kit
White Vinati ----------> Starter Kit

Weapons:

Hunting Knife --------------------------------------------> 5 sm
Glass Dagger (made by her mentor) ----------------> 4 gm

Animals:

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Father's Hunting Dog --------> Family Heirloom -------->

Climbing Gear:

Climbers Kit ---------------------------------------------> 80 gm
Dog Harness ----------------------------------------------> 5 gm


Other:


Water skin ----------------------------------------------> Starter Kit
Backpack -----------------------------------------------> Starter Kit
Set of toiletries (comb, brush, soap) --------------> Starter Kit
Food for a week ---------------------------------------> Starter Kit
Eating Knife --------------------------------------------> Starter Kit
Flint & Steel --------------------------------------------> Starter Kit

Accommodation:

~Since her parents died she has moved into the youth area of the city.

Money/Ledger:

600 Starting Coin
-500 For Accommodation
-80 Gm (Climbing Gear)
-5 Gm (Dog Harness)
-5 Sm (Hunting Knife)
-4 Gm (Glass Dagger)

=10 gm, 5 sm
Last edited by Na'Leigh on February 11th, 2012, 3:41 am, edited 10 times in total.
Na'Leigh
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Posts: 27
Words: 23316
Joined roleplay: January 24th, 2012, 3:06 am
Race: Human, Mixed
Character sheet

Na'Leigh

Postby Na'Leigh on January 24th, 2012, 9:14 pm

Skills:

+5 Hunting---------------------------->Novice
+30 Mountaineering------------------>Competent
+15 Glassworking--------------------->Novice
+5 Drawing---------------------------->Novice
+5 Wilderness Survival --------------->Novice
+5 Weapon (Bow) -------------------->Novice

Glassworking: http://www.mizahar.com/lore/Glassworking
Hunting: http://www.mizahar.com/lore/Hunting
Falconry: http://www.mizahar.com/lore/Falconry


Languages:

Fluent: Nari
Basic: Common
Poor: Pavi

Lore:

Wind Reach's local geography
Wind Eagle traditions
Last edited by Na'Leigh on February 11th, 2012, 3:35 am, edited 5 times in total.
Na'Leigh
Player
 
Posts: 27
Words: 23316
Joined roleplay: January 24th, 2012, 3:06 am
Race: Human, Mixed
Character sheet

Na'Leigh

Postby Na'Leigh on January 25th, 2012, 5:06 am

6th Winter 511AV--------> Runs into a bear while out hunting.

http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic16282.html

27th Winter 511AV ------> First day off, Spent climbing and Hunting with Gully

http://www.mizahar.com/forums/post139382.html#p139382

28th Winter 511AV ------> Second day off, Failed attempt at climbing "the Edge of the World", Met Sira, Met Tiaue'a.

http://www.mizahar.com/forums/post139439.html#p139439

40th Winter 511AV ------> Wind Eagle Killer Caught; Na'Leigh faces her worst fear

http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic17803.html

56th Winter 511AV -------> Glassblowing Apprenticeship

http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic17949.html
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Na'Leigh
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Posts: 27
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Joined roleplay: January 24th, 2012, 3:06 am
Race: Human, Mixed
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Na'Leigh

Postby Ghost on February 10th, 2012, 5:54 pm

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Liaison Intervention

Hello!

I’m Ghost, and I’m a Character Sheet Liaison. I’m here to help others with their Character Sheets and the Lore. I have found a few issues with your Character Sheet. Don’t worry. A lot of people make mistakes when they create their Character Sheet.

You state that your PC had an Inarta mother and a Drykas father. In that case her race isn‘t „Human, Inarta“, but „Human, Mixed“. As far as skillpoints go, such PCs fall under the standard human category and thus get a bonus of 15 points to a skill of their choice, for a total of 65 skill points.

You have described her family and the eagle in your CS. If you ever want to control her family members, you need to apply for them in the Help Desk. And you should talk to a DS of Wind Reach about the wind eagle.

You have a lore called „High Reach's local geography”. Do you mean “Wind Reach” by that? If this is the case, you should rename the lore to “Wind Reach’s geography”.

You should also keep a proper ledger. Below is a possible example:

Secret :
100 gold mizas (Starting Coin)
500 gold mizas (Shelter Cash In)
-5 SM (Cotton Blouse)
-2 SM (Cotton Pants)
-5 SM (Hunting Knife)
Total: 98 GM 7 SM


Send me a PM when you have editted your Character Sheet, and I’ll remove this intervention. Have fun in Mizahar and don’t hesitate to PM me if anything is still unclear or you have questions.

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