Emreald wavereader

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Emreald wavereader

Postby Emreald on January 31st, 2012, 1:23 am

Emrealed


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Basic Information

Race:Svefra, human
Birthday & Age : 17 Date unsure
Gender:Female

Languages


Language 1:Fratava
Language 2: commen
Language 3: None


Physical Description
Bond hair mid waist that has shells intertwined, Deep blue eyes that looks like you are looking into the deep depths of the ocean., and lightly tan skin. Emreald is about 5'7 and has a deep presence. She does not really have what people like to call a hour glass.She has a whale tattoo on her left hip. It is black out lined and has red as well. Her normal clothing exists of shirts that flow with her body and skirts. She likes to where blue and green clothing mostly. But on festivals she wheres colorful things that make her stand out.

Character Concept
Emreald wants to be a great captain of a boat like her mother and father where. She does not normally take things.
Character History
Emreald Left her pod so she could make her own and live freely and happily like her parents where before they joined a pod. She thought that if she made her own pod then she could find love.
Training (Skills, Arcana, Gnosis, Lore)
Fishing: 20/100
Cutlass: 20/100
singing: 10/100
Sailing: 10/100 (race bonus)
whale song lore
Dolphin swimming lore

Equipment and Possessions
1 Set of Clothing (cloak/coat & footwear included)
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
1 Set of Toiletries (comb, brush, razor, soap)
Food for a week
1 eating knife
Flint & Steel
A emerald neackless(Family heirloom)
A small casinor and its equipment as housing.
Ledger
100 mizas
Thread List

Alures of the Sea (Open)
Last edited by Emreald on March 6th, 2012, 8:11 pm, edited 4 times in total.
Emreald
The lone sea bearer
 
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Location: Close to the sea
Race: Human, Svefra
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Emreald wavereader

Postby Ghost on February 16th, 2012, 5:36 pm

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Liaison Intervention

Hello!

I’m Ghost, and I’m a Character Sheet Liaison. I’m here to help others with their Character Sheets and the Lore. I have found a few mistakes in your Character Sheet. Don’t worry. A lot of people make mistakes when they create their Character Sheet.

You have a „fishing lore“. Fishing is not a lore, it’s a skill (that you’ve already picked anyway). Please check this page for an explanation as to what a lore is.

„Sea animal lore“ doesn’t work either. It’s too general. A good lore would be about how to catch a certain sea animal or about the traits of a certain sea animal for example.

Please pick new lores.

Under „Possessions“ you have „Food for a week or 1 bottle of embalming fluid (for Nuits)“. You can remove the part about the embalming fluid.

It would also be great if you could explain why she was kicked out of her pod.

Send me a PM when you have editted your Character Sheet, and I’ll remove this intervention. Have fun in Mizahar and don’t hesitate to PM me if anything is still unclear or you have questions.

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