Thread Grading!KavalaXP/Skills: Hostessing- 4, Interrogation- 1, Observation- 2, Planning- 3, Socializing- 3
Lore: Needing some down time, sensing something unsaid, happiness cleanses sadness, helping someone find a place
Item/ Consequences: N/A
Additional Notes: A interesting little thread, it seemed like Kavala was really in her element in it, with all of those many people. I think she is certainly a group oriented person. I could not imagine how she would get by without lots of people to interact with, and help. Perhaps that is why her healing gnosis is such a good fit.
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RaihaXP/Skills: Herbalism- 1, Socialization- 2
Lore: A relationship of four, uncertainty and second thoughts
Item/ Consequences: N/A
Additional Notes: I always find it interesting to read of Raiha, especially when I get to see into her head like I did here, voicing her internal conversation, and concerns. A really nice touch, which makes it better for the reader, even if no one else IC knows of it.
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Denen BrokensongXP/Skills: Observation- 2
Lore: Being happy for another, A natural fear
Item/ Consequences: N/A
Additional Notes: Denen is certainly a quiet back of the scene individual. I wonder if there is any time were he shows his voice a bit more, and is more vibrant. I suppose fear does tend to make someone try to appear as unnoticeable as possible. I did like that you played to his fear well, many people have such weaknesses, but then do not role play them properly when they encounter them, while you did do well.
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Sama'el SunsingerXP/Skills: Persuasion- 1
Lore: Feelings growing to fruition, asking a favor of a "sister", seize the day by the balls, hoping for a better future
Item/ Consequences: N/A
Additional Notes: I find a bit entertaining, seeing all the work Sama'el goes through, trying to rebuild his family. I have seen a few of your other threads, and it seems like I always come in on big tragedy, or big happy occasions. Thankfully this was one of the good times. I hope he will be successful in his task of rebuilding his pavilion.
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Ronan SunsingerXP/Skills: Observation- 2, Socailization- 1
Lore: The warmth of friendship, something more to Kavala
Item/ Consequences: N/A
Additional Notes: This thread seemed pretty busy, with lots of interlocking story-lines. I did find it a bit funny, that at the same time Kavala was wondering on the Akontak, you were wondering on her. Though I think you are both right, in that there is more to them than first is obvious.
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Leto SunsingerXP/Skills: Horsemanship- 2, Planning- 1
Lore: Life: Finding a place
Item/ Consequences: N/A
Additional Notes: Unfortunately Leto came into the thread a bit late, so did not get to see much time in it. I wish the thread could have gone on a bit more, so I could see how things ended up. Perhaps sometime in the future, I will get to see were this storyline goes. Though I did find Leto's bit interesting.
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