Star

[Star]

Star... Race: Ethaefal in the moonlight, Drykas in the sunlight Age: 2 years since she fell. She is technically 18 though. Birthday: Fell in spring of 512 AV In the sunlight... During the day, Star is 5 feet tall, with skin thats neither pale nor tan and black hair that goes about halfway down her chest. Her eyes are light blue and if you ever manage to look at her stomach, you will see a jagged scar near her side. This is from her past life's death and for reasons unknown to her, looking at it makes tears come to her eyes. This is why she tries to always wear things that cover this scar. In the moonlight... At night, Star grows to 5 foot 6 and her eyes change to a dark violet. Her skin pales and gains Leth's glow and the scars from her past life disappear. Her hair lengthens considerably, going down past her waist. Her horns curl around her head like a crown, the tips nearly touching each other. In either form, her eyes hold a deep sadness that seems to linger even when she smiles. Winter: Hair: Silver Horns: Violet Spring: Hair: Lavender gray Horns: White Summer: Hair: Black Horns: Light jade green Fall: Hair: Pale gold Horns: Goldish Character History In her past life, she was a Drykas living a happy, peaceful life with her twin brother, Nodin. They were very close and most of their childhood was spent together. When they were both sixteen, their parents were murdered. She and Nodin left where they lived to escape the bad memories and became wanderers, moving from city to city. She depended on Nodin to care and protect her and they grew even closer. Two years after the murders, while they were walking down a city street, a bold robber hiding in an alley stabbed her in the stomach. She collapsed to the ground as her infuriated brother grabbed the man by his throat and slammed his head against the wall, knocking him out. Nodin knelt down and pulled her body into his arms as she bled out, gently cradling her body carefully with tears running down his face. In only a minute or two, she was dead. All Star can remember is a few flashes of the moments before her death. The pain in her side, seeing her brother slam the thief's head into the wall, and the clearest memory of all, looking up at her brother's tear stained face as she died. She, of course, doesn't realize he is her brother nor that the man he slammed into a wall is a thief. Possessions 595 Gold Mizas A cotton dress a kind woman gave her. Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 GM 100 GM No Housing +500 GM 600 GM Living Expenses -5 GM 595 GM   Skills Skill EXP Total Proficiency Swimming 20 +1 21 Novice Cooking 5 5 Novice Brawling 15 15 Novice Singing 10 10 Novice Astrology 10 (RB) 10 Novice Observation +1 1 Novice Rhetoric +1 1 Novice Interrogation +1 1 Novice Begging +2 2 Novice Escape Artist +1 1 Novice   Lore Lore of Religion: Leth Lore of Drykas Culture Falling Has Leth Foresaken Me? The Basics of Sunberth Wren Wants His Cloak   Languages Fluent: Common Basic: Poor: Pavi (very little remembered from her past life) Threads Spring 512 AV 69th Day of Spring -Falling... Fall 512 AV 13th Day of Fall - Twinkle, twinkle, little Star! 33rd Day of Fall - Stomping Grounds Winter 513 AV 52nd day of Winter - Back to the Beginning 55th day of Winter - Damsel in Distress ...daughter of Leth...

[Claymore]

Liaison intervention

First of all: Welcome to Mizahar, I hope you'll enjoy your time here and RP to your delight. I'm Claymore and I'll be assisting you in creating a Character Sheet. I noticed a few mistakes and will help you to fix them .

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Possessions

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Ledger

 

Skills

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Lore

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