Rewards and Treasure!
Experience Points +1 Drawing +3 Carpentry +3 Carving +1 Interrogation +1 Intimidation +2 Painting +1 Locksmithing +1 Masonry
Lores Uncontrolled Outburst in Front of the Crew Philip's Attempt to Help Jacques' Intuitiveness Jacques' Pep Talk Concept of Mutual Apologies James' Honesty James' Coldness
Miscellaneous None
Comments Minerva is such a feisty kid... her interactions with the NPCs are highly entertaining I have no idea how you manage to consistently maintain her conversational style, but I love it too This is some serious character development here, and I can say that I thoroughly enjoyed this one. Your writing is excellent as always, and it really shines in this story. It's gems like these that help me to enjoy grading. Also, kudos on integrating all that development and plot into work. It's smooth and doesn't jar the story, so good job on that. |