Savior

[Sama'el Sunsinger]

"The Sapphire Clan has always guarded the Drykas mysteries," he said, and it was true; it was known. Sapphire for magic, Opal for healing, Topaz for law, Amethyst for animals, Emerald for hunting, Ruby for crafts, and Diamond, Daithi's own clan, for war. "You will surely be a great warrior in time." He certainly hoped so. Sama'el had traveled farther than most of his people, both against his will and for a purpose. Cyphrus was dangerous, but so was everywhere else. The Drykas would all need to be strong and united to maintain their lifestyle, their culture. "Well, you are safely home now. Perhaps someday we can spar or something. I'll need all your clan to keep me in shape." Then he grinned. Though fierce at his duty, he was a joyful young man at heart, and in the safety of Endrykas, his smiles were common and contagious.

[Daithi]

Daithi listened to Sama'el's answer as the man listed the duty of each clan and reassured Daithi that he would become a good member of his clan oneday. He said back to Sama'el, :Many thanks for the kind words." He knew that the whole culture and ways of their people depended on the balance of the tasks that were handed to each clan. He also knew that a step toward meeting his dream of becoming a great warrior and more would mean many hardships as that day had help, that and working for the time as a hunter would mold him.

As Sama'el let it be known that they were home indeed and safe, and that perhaps they could spar Daithi said, I cannot thank you enough though you were but doing your job, thanks. Someday I would like to take you up on that sparring idea." He said it with a smile and made his way his clansmen and those that he worked with as to show off his fresh and now not so fresh, rank smelling trophy.

[Sama'el Sunsinger]

END

[Jackalope]

Results!

Sama'el :

Experience
+1 Shortbow
+2 Reimancy
+1 Acrobatics
+1 Scimitar
+1 Observation
+1 Webbing

Lore
Zith: Better when Crispy
Daithi: Not a Healer
The Clans Have Their Roles

Injury: Shallow claw mark in back, but since the thread is quite old at this point, no worries.

Notes: Enjoyed your use of Reimancy quite a bit, I was able to visualize it quite well. I'd like to see a bit more explaination of how exactly you were correcting his riding, rather than just saying you did it before I award teaching XP. I didn't award riding XP because I feel like a master rider would need to do a little more to improve, but feel free to let me know if you think otherwise!

Daithi :

Experience
+2 Shortbow
+2 Observation
+1 Riding

Lore
Sama'el: Member of the Watch
Collecting Battle Trophies
The Clans Have Their Roles

Notes: I'd like to see a little more struggling to hit consitantly. A novice wielder of a weapon with a bunch of Zith is probably going to have a few problems. Still, good writing, keep it up! One additional note, unless you used your eating knife to cut off the head, I don't think you have a knife. Just something to pay attention to.

Sorry this thread took so long to get graded! I enjoyed this action thread. Looking forward to more threads from you guys. If you want to discuss any of my notes or grading, please PM me. You're my first graded thread, so be gentle.