Ember Watergrove

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Ember Watergrove

Postby Ember Watergrove on August 12th, 2012, 10:27 pm

Ember Watergrove


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Basic Information

Race: Drykas
Birthday & Age : Season of Summer, Day 8, 496 AV (16 years old)
Gender: Female

Languages


Pavi: Fluent
Shiber: Basic
Char: Poor


Physical Description
Ember is 5'4'', and weighs about 120 lbs. She is tan and has bright blue-ish green eyes. Her hair is dark blonde and hangs in a simple braid to her breast. Ember likes to wear a light outfit of her clan's colors, and normally wears no shoes. Ember also normally wears her trusty long bow and her quiver on her back, in case any predators come about and try to eat her.

Character Concept
Personality: Ember is a very curious Drykan. She wants to know so many things about the world that she lives in, and often wanders off to explore Endrykas or goes to talk to other Drykans in order to gain more knowledge. She is also very keen; she is very quick-witted and sometimes even has a keen sarcasm.
Merits: Ember is curious, and also likes to have fun sometimes. She likes questioning things, from 'What's for breakfast?' to 'Why do I have to marry?'.
Flaws: Ember's curiosity gets her into a lot of trouble, and her idea of 'fun' sometimes consists of getting herself killed. Her questioning also annoys a lot of people who are impatient and rude.
Interests/Likes: Ember likes having questions and gaining answers. She also likes being useful, so she wants to train in whatever skill she wants to. Ember also likes hunting, and loves hunting with her bow and arrow.
Goals: Even though she is 16, Ember doesn't think she's ready to marry yet. She wants to wait until the right one comes, whoever he may be. She also wants to become the strongest archer in her clan, the Sapphire Clan.

Character History
Ember was raised by the Sapphire Clan of the Drykas people, but that doesn't mean she is one. Nobody knows where she came from: all they know is that, one day, a warrior discovered Ember as a little baby girl in the Sea of Grass. Of course, nobody in the clan tells Ember, for they know that it would break her heart if she discovered that she is not of Drykas blood, despite the people being so open to outsiders and foreigners.

Training (Skills, Arcana, Gnosis, Lore)
Skills:
Hunting (10)
Long Bow (30)
Horsemanship (10)
Riding (10) (racial bonus)
Lores:
Lore- Geography - Endrykas

Equipment and Possessions
Equipment:
1 Set of Clothing (cloak/coat & footwear included)
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
1 Set of Toiletries (comb, brush, razor, soap)
Food for a week or 1 bottle of embalming fluid (for Nuits)
1 eating knife
Flint & Steel
1 Bow and 1 Quiver of 10 arrows
Family Heirloom: None

Ledger
Starting - +100 GM
No house - +500 GM

Thread List
Summer of 512 A.V.
Exploring (day 91)
Autumn of 512 A.V.
A Crash Landing (day 13)
Last edited by Ember Watergrove on September 13th, 2012, 9:25 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Ember Watergrove

Postby Siren on August 18th, 2012, 8:50 am

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Hey there!

I'm Siren, the local and completely harmless Character Sheet Liaison. In order to help you get the most out of your experience on Mizahar, I have taken a look at at your Character Sheet to make sure that everything is up to par!

Unfortunately, there are a few changes that have to be made before we can move forward! Please see the tabs below for details on these issues.

 
Skills
Out of your 60 Available skill points (50 SP + 10 RB) you have only used 50!

 
Lores
I noticed that your Starting Lores are very off. Lores are specific bits of information that your PC can know over a variety of topics. You cannot expand upon this knowledge. If you could, then odds are you have a skill, not a lore. Starting players can have up to 2 Starting Lores.

Instead of "Exploration" try "Geography: Wind Reach" or "Geography: Avanthal" etc...


Once the above has been addressed, feel free to send me a private message, let me know you've fixed what I've pointed out and I will remove the intervention!

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