Bloodfight // In which Sama'el spends a night in the rain and danger comes calling.
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The Wilderness of Cyphrus is an endless sea of tall grass that rolls just like the oceans themselves. Geysers kiss the sky with their steamy breath, and mysterious craters create microworlds all their own. But above all danger lives here in the tall grass in the form of fierce wild creatures; elegant serpents that swim through the land like whales through the ocean and fierce packs of glassbeaks that hunt in packs which are only kept at bay by fires. Traverse it carefully, with a guide if possible, for those that venture alone endanger themselves in countless ways.
Sammy, if you do come back, PM me and I'll give you your grade for this.
This was pretty good, Blood. I was hoping your lil' mudblood would come back, he does have such potential, and you proved it with this piece. It was odd seeing him go from a clawing, murderous animal to forming a tentative, tense relationship with "Sammers". I also loved the concept of "mage creatures", that was very creative. Just be careful to capitalize the first letters of the words in dialogue, you missed that a lot.
Like I said before, I enjoyed this. Hope I see more from you and Sammy!
