[Issues found by Gossamer] C'Arya Tomva

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C'Arya Tomva

Postby C'Arya Tomva on January 15th, 2013, 1:07 am


C'Arya Tomva


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Physical Description


Human:
Name: C'Arya Tomva
Race: Kelvic
Age: 2
Birthday: 510 av
Height: 5'6"
Skin: slightly tanned white
Eye color: deep green, pupil vertical
Hair: red
Misc: Sometimes Shifts into a tiger
Details: She has the appearance and mental state of a 20 year old women, even though she is only two, a Kelvic trait. Her Shifting is painless, unlike Shifting with magic, which causes pain. She has a tattoo of a tiger on her shoulder and a small scar on her leg from when she was attacked in the wild. Her hair seems to glow in the sunlight.

Tiger:
Length: 11 ft
Weight: 660 lbs
Fur Color: Orange with black stripes
Eye color: Deep green, pupil vertical

Character Concept

Arya has a very confident personality. She tends to be bold and fearless, almost to the point of being rude, but also has a more sweet side, once you get to know her. She loves to hear stories in every place she visits and usually doesn't stay in one place for too long. She is unbonded, is very lonely, but is used to it.She has a basic sense of ethics, mostly adopted from stories she has heard. She has decided to hunt down murderers, and thieves that steal for no reason. She fears nothing, except for the Myrians, who she has had run-ins with in the past. She shifts into a tiger, which is handy when push comes to shove. She worships no specific god, but still has scraps of faith. She chooses to eat in human for when in a town, and as a tiger the rest of the time. She doesn't drink wine or any other such drink. She has a low tolerance for alcohol. She can swim, but doesn't really care for water.

Bond Status: Un-bonded


Possessions

1 Set of Clothing
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak/coat
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Metal)
-Brush (Metal)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
-Quarter Staff
Heirloom: A polished Boar's tusk dagger
100 Gold Mizas
Quest:
1 Hooded Lantern
1 Tent 4 person
5 Torches
1 Water Pack
1 Fishing Kit
1 Winter Blanket Wool
4 lbs each of Almonds and Walnuts
5 lbs of Dried Tomatos and Mushrooms
10 lbs of Wheat
1 Fish Knife
1 Game Knife
1 Pan 8oz
1 Cooking Pot gallon
1lbs Ginger
8oz Cumin
4pt Honey
1 lbs Salt
4 lbs Elderberries

Housing:
None, house sold for money.



Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM
Housing +500 GM 600 GM



Skills, Lores, Languages



Skills:

Skill Point Value Where Proficiency
Hunting 27/100 (racial)(+17) Competent
Camouflage 13/100 (starting Pkg.)(+3) Novice
Dance 11/100 (starting Pkg.)(+6) Novice
Cooking 26/100 (starting Pkg.)(+11) Competent
Herbalism 15/100 (starting Pkg.)(+5) Novice
Tracking 14/100 (starting Pkg.)(+4) Novice
Seduction 26/100 (starting Pkg.)(+21) Competent
Forgery 28/100 (+28) Competent
Unarmed (Wing Chun) 27/100 (training)(+15) Competent
Wilderness Survival 26/100 or 100/100 100/100 when Tiger Competent/Master


Lore:

Lore of the huntress.
Lore of the ambush.
Sunberth Lore.
How to heal basic wounds.
How to track.
How to seduce men (all races).
How to seduce women (all races).

Practiced Languages:
Common
-En Weise Ono Elma
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C'Arya Tomva
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C'Arya Tomva

Postby Gossamer on January 23rd, 2013, 8:37 pm

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You may just have to scrap this entire CS and start over. You failed to follow most of the rules for Character Creation, plus you assigned yourself a whole ton of XP that's not really valid nor accounted for. You may only start with 50 skill points plus your racial bonus. You may only start with two lores. I have no idea how you came to know how to seduce all women and all men of all races, but that kinda left me thinking your a pre-teen and probably shouldn't even be on this site.

Please get a clue or get off the site. No one is going to let you play anywhere with the posts you are making in all sorts of forums and the CS you have crafted.
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