Open Walking the Streets (Open)

[Jesslyn Skyglow]

OOCJust a reminder if the blue words are slanted they are Jesslyn's thoughts. Jesslyn smiled as she heard Avis eating. And the smile became even larger when she was offered to come to the Kelvics place. "I would love to. Just let me gather...." Jesslyn trailed off, "Actually I'm going to need your help in finding some of my items." "You wouldn't mind right?" Jesslyn quickly sped after saying she would need help. While her house was clean from paint.. it was far from not being a blizzard zone. Items laid everywhere and anywhere they pleased.

[Avis]

"Sure!" Avis smiled. She quickly washed out her bowl and put it where she had seen Jesslyn take it from before. She scurried about the table and shelves, looking for the items Jesslyn mentioned. While looking, she admired the paintings that were stacked in all sorts of peculiar places in funny positions.
One green and yellow one looked as soft as a new spring leaf, while a brown, red, and orange one looked as sharp as a bloody spear head. She especially admired the one that looked like the newest edition, one with smooth but rough blue swirls, with desaturated greys but also bold teals. It in itself was a contradiction, and Avis loved it for that.
Soon, she had found everything.
"Are you ready to go?"

[Jesslyn Skyglow]

"Actually... yes." Jesslyn smiled. Jesslyn finished pulling her boot up and stood. Jesslyn shuffled to the wall and searched for her walking stick. Once it was in her hand Jesslyn smiled and turned to her door. "Shall we go?"

[Avis]

"Yes! Let's." Avis trooped out the door with Jesslyn in her wake. She did another check to the small pocket that kept her precious coins - still there. She let out a breath.
Together they shuffled along the icy streets of Avanthal, and Avis clutched the long sleeves of her olive colored coat. The yellow and brown colored cobblestone looked lethal underneath a sheet of crystal clear ice. She kicked some snow out of their way and kept moving on, and soon they reached the market, bustling even though the freezing day should have kept most inside. The cloth tents dotted the walls.
"What do you need to buy?" Avis turned to Jesslyn.

[Jesslyn Skyglow]

Jesslyn rushed after the fast moving sparrow and was letting out small puffs of air when she realized that they had reached the market. Jesslyn gave a small smile and did a quick mental list of things she needed. 'Food, some new paints, umm.... oh some soap, and I think a new vase.' After thinking over anything else she would need and not coming up with anything Jesslyn repeated the list to Avis, "I need food, some new paints, soap, and a new vase." Jesslyn patted her pocket and thought over how much she had. "I should have enough to get the necessities but the wants might need to wait." Jesslyn smiled and nodded for Avis to lead the way, "Let's go get the soap and food first. Then look at... of pardon me! What do you need?"

[Avis]

Avis smiled.
" Pretty much the same stuff as you, minus the paints. We can look around after, if you want. Afterwards, you can have lunch with me if you want." She nodded and lead Jesslyn to the nearest booth that sold bread.
Avis eyes looked at the yellow, fluffy loaves hungrily and decided on a long loaf of french bread. She paid the woman behind the booth quietly and let Jesslyn buy hers.

[Jesslyn Skyglow]

Jesslyn haggled with the vendor and got her pricing down to 50cm for a single loaf of bread and then paused to look at Avis. Suddenly remembering that she had to get back home for Sylvia. "Oh my." Jesslyn handed back the loaf and turned around. "Avis, I would love to stay and such. But I need to meet a dear friend of mine." Jesslyn gave a small smile and turned to leave. Sylvia was more important to her than buying needless things. Jesslyn stopped and pulled out two gold coins and handed them to Avis, "Because I am leaving and wish to make this up. Your nest will stay in my house and I'll leave the window's open a little for you to get in." Jesslyn turned and started to walk away and at a brisk pace. She get's to see Sylvia again. OOCIf this thread had more of a main idea I would have loved to continue it but it was becoming a little meaninglessly long. I enjoyed it very much so and wish you to end it in the next reply. Sorry for the lare reply myself. i haven't been feeling it latley.

[Noblesse]

Avis :

Experience:

• Observation +1

Lores:

• Searching for Food in the Midst of Hunger

Notes:
Avis, your posts are too short and almost don't have any details in it, so unfortunately I almost don't have anything to award you. I also hope that you read the Player information first because things that are not supposed to exist in Avanthal keeps appearing in your sentences, such as individual houses and the gates thereof, and forests (there are some copses of trees, but nothing dense like forests). This would have been a better thread if only it contained some kind of an idea or plot for your writing partner to go with.

Jesslyn Skyglow :

Experience:

• Observation +1

Lores:

• Entertaining an Awkward Visitor at Your Home
• Sylvia Is More Important than Shopping

Notes:
Like your other thread, I could not give you much in this one. As you have said in your OOC note, you were not feeling it, and it very clearly shows in your writing. I gave you what I think might be useful to Jesslyn, though.

True nobility lies in being superior to your former self

If you have any questions or concerns regarding your grade, please send me a PM and we can figure it out. Heehee.