Jaai

[Jaai]

[Jaai]

[Jaai]

[Jaai]

[Jaai]

 

Housing

In the wilderness he camps in a tent, in a city he will pay for temporary housing. Current location: Wildlands

 

Possessions

+ 1 large 4 person tent + + Large Tarp +

-100 ft of rope
-flint & steel
-lantern
-2 torches
-bedroll, blanket
-fishing tackle & hooks
-1 waterskin
-backpack containing:

▪ 1 Set of Toiletries (comb, brush, razor, soap)

▪ Food for a week

▪ 1 eating knife +

-brown mixed blood horse for carrying things and riding named Lija
-Short sword (Minus 10 gm)
-Ear Dagger (Minus 5gm)
-Metal Flute (15gm)
-Total gm: 70gm


Garments:
-Undergarments
-Simple cotton grey shirt
-dark brown trousers
-Black jacket
-1 pair black riding boots

Hairloom

A collection of beads that he keeps strung into a bracelet, but never really wears.

 

Skills

 

Money

Starting Expenses: 100 – 30gm = 70gm

In-Game expenses/earnings:

 

Lores

Lore of survival in Ekytol Desert
Lore of rejection

[Kraken]

Hi there!

I'm Kraken, your friendly neighbourhood Character Sheet Liaison! I'm here to help make your experience on Mizahar go as smoothly as possible. Now, there are just a few quick points we need to sort out in order for your character to move forward. If you have any questions whatsoever, please don't hesitate to ask!

Lovely work on your character sheet, Jaai! I enjoyed the detail you went into with regards to your PC's appearance, concept, and history. Well done! I just have a few notes for you to address before continuing on.

• Race: The chaktawe are not a sub-race of humans. If your PC is half human, half chaktawe, he would be a "Mixed Blood." Please be sure to adjust your race from "Human, Mixed" to "Mixed Blood" in your profile.
• Age: If your PC was born in 494 AV, he would currently be 18 rather than 17.
• Appearance: I would recommend giving your PC all black eyes with the double lids, since he is half chaktawe and they usually retain this trait (according to the lore). If you need photo edits of his eyes, someone in the Aesthetics & Design forum would be happy to do them for you.
• Caste: You make references to "caste" in your CS, but the chaktawe don't use castes. If you could remove these references, that would be wonderful.
• Heirloom: Remember, a heirloom may only be a single item from the price list. A collection of beads will not work as an heirloom unless there is a bead kit in the price list (which, at the moment, there is not). If you could change to this to a single item, ex. a necklace, bracelet, or Prayer Beads (worth 50GM on the price list), that would be great.
• Lore: You seem to be missing your two lores! A lore is a specific fact or piece of knowledge about a certain subject. You can check the CS Templates for great suggestions.

Once you address these notes and make the proper changes, please send me a private message and I'll gladly remove this post.

Thanks, and happy writing!

Kraken