Shane

[Shane]

Name: Shane
Race: Ghost
Gender: male
Age: appears to be a child of eleven years: 524 years old
Birthday: doesn't remember: Winter/11BV
Birthplace: doesn't remember that either: Alahea

Appearance: Most of the time Shane isn't visible, he drifts through the world without interacting with it for the most part, however certain events or people draw his attention. When this happens he shows up standing in crowds, watching what is going on, and when that happens Shane appears to be a frail albino human.
Whenever he materializes his appearance is accompanied by the eerie sound of a music box, slowly playing as if it were winding down to the end and slightly out of tune.

Character Concept:
Shane doesn't remember where he comes from or how he came into the world. All he knows is that he has been around a long time, and has seen a lot of events in his days as a ghost. From what he does remember is that he had been their for the Valterrian, the cataclysm that killed nearly everyone. After so long though, his memory has gotten away from him, and he is trying desperately trying to make new memories to fill the growing emptiness he is feeling.

Character History
Shane has been around since the Valterrian as a wandering ghost, however he has had very little interaction with history as it had follows. Much like any normal citizen, he tended to mind his own business, only getting in affairs that directly concerned him or people he liked or hated. As he hasn't been developing or using his abilities very much during this time, he is not as strong as a ghost his age should be, but if events catch his attention, he may try to intervene and grow strong.
While not evil or good, he makes his decisions based on whom he finds likable, and he has been known to hold a grudge by people whom he had haunted.

Language
as he is a ghost, he can communicate with any one he chooses

Skills
Skill 1 Materialization 5 + 10 race bonus
Skill 2 Possession 25
Skill 3 Soulmist projection 5
Sp 1 intelligence 5
Sp 2 Archaeology 5
sp 3 impersonation 5

Lore of remembering: Shane slowly regaining memory he lost from experiences.
Lore of Envy: Shane's growing rage at the mortal world

Possessions

The only possessions that he has are the ethereal clothes he was wearing, and these simple trousers and shirt are tattered and worn. He also has the possessions of whomever he possesses as long as they are under his influence. he also has a music box in his hand that appears to of come with him into the after life.

heirloom: Out of tune ethereal music box

[Paragon]

Hi there.

Your CS is looking good, but there are just a few things I need you to change before beginning play:

• Though Shane doesn't remember his birthday, you still need to specify a date (as in a particular numbered day.)
  
• Tidy up your skills a little, specify which are Starting Package, Racial Bonus, and XP. At the moment the list is wholly confusing.
  
• Where is Shane residing? Even though he's a ghost I'd still like to see a "housing" section, even if it's not in the conventional sense.

PM me when you're done and I'll remove this. Feel free to PM any questions regarding this intervention or your character sheet too. Thanks.