Lial

[Lial]

Lial Appearance Race: Kelvic Gender: Female Age: 3 Birthday: 40th Winter 509 Birthplace: Syliras Appearance in human form: Height: 5'7" Weight: 90lbs Hair: Steely black Eyes: Charcoal grey Even as a human, Lial is still distinguishable from real humans. Her ears are slightly more pointed than normal, her eyes are rounder, her legs are crooked, her nails are long and yellowed and she permanently has black around her eyes, making her appear permanently tired. She moves with a animalistic grace which is often enough to tell her apart from a human. Although she is only three, in her human form, this is equivalent to appearing in her mid twenties. Appearance in raccoon form: Height (to shoulder): 10 in Length (to hind): 38 in Weight: 14lb Fur: Steely grey Eyes: Charcoal grey In her raccoon form, she is impossible to tell apart from a normal raccoon. The same as in her human form, she is often scarred from injuries picked up in both forms. She has a long snout, whiskers, circular eyes and rounded ears. Her fur is grey, though she has black and white patches on her face, and her tail is ringed black. Character Concept Even in human form, Lial’s character has many elements of animal in it. Although her personality differs slightly depending on which form she is in, the two merge considerably. Whenever possible, she finds food from scavenging, and will often sleep for over ten hours a day. In human form, she is most comfortable fighting with a dagger. She is fairly solitary, and enjoys being by herself, but will still cope in a group of people. She much prepares the night, and is always somewhat grumpy during the daytime. She guards anything of hers closely, and will guard it from anyone. As a Kelvic, she is constantly searching for a bondmate, and has spent the last year and a half wandering and searching for one. Her understanding of the world in general is not large, and is limited to the few things she has seen in her life. However, she still considers herself to be of worth, as she is easily capable of looking after herself. Character History Lial has little recollection of her first few months, being so young, but knows she lived in Syliras. At around three months, she bonded with a young boy. In the months afterwards, he began to care for her less, until the bond between them broke. For the last year and a half, she has been travelling in search of a new bondmate. She found anyone she could to travel with, and has eventually reached Riverfall, where she hopes she will be able to find someone. (I know the history and personality aren’t very detailed – This is my first character on this site and I haven’t RPed much before, so these sections should grow with time.) Language Fluent Language: Common Basic Language: Tukant Skills Skill EXP Total Proficiency Unarmed combat 10 SP 10 Novice Weapon: Punching Dagger 15 SP 15 Novice Cooking 15 SP 15 Novice Hunting 10 RB 10 Novice Lores Lore of Riverfall Layout Useful for navigating the city. Lore of Riverfall Edible Plants Always useful for a spot of scavenging Possessions Starting: Simple Shirt Simple Pants Simple Undergarments Simple Coat Simple Boots 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack Comb (Bone) Brush (Bone) Soap Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth) 1 eating knife Flint & Steel Purchased: 2x Punching dagger Heirloom: A deep red wool cloak with a gold clasp. Her first bondmate gave it to her and she still treasures it to remember him. Housing Location: Where in Mizahar are you living? House: What does your house look like? (HELPFUL HINT, Please Remove - PM a storyteller to have a residence added. List of Residences: Kuahala Estates - Affordable private places with a great view. Nia’s Boarding House – Tiny all-female Boarding House Skyview Condos – Large upscale housing Northwind Suites – Housing frequented by Musicans Baywatch Apartments – Cliffside Cave Apartments with bay balconies Bluevein Apartments – Large Fallside Cave Apartments with waterfall balconies The Blue Gem – All Aquatic Species Living Area The Mist – Mage Dwellings, mostly underground. Atri’s Place – Traveler’s Inn that's clean and affordable. Cora Apartments – Midrange living for working class Windswept Condos- Private affordable condos with gorgeous gardens Overlook Apartments – Housing unites with very beautiful oceanviews. Suvan Suites – Posh upscale living The Pearl House– A Konti Bed and Breakfast with short and long term residents. Temporary Housing: The Kulkukan Tavern & Inn) Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 GM 100 GM 2x Punching dagger -4 GM 96 GM Thread List Spring 513 5th Spring - [Riverfall] The Land and Sea Gates 5th Spring - [Riverfall] The Citizenship, Housing, and Labor Aid Office 26th Spring - New to the City

[Magpie]

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Hi there! I'm Magpie, AS of Riverfall. I noticed some parts in your character sheet that don't quite fit with the lore of Mizahar. You'll have to correct them before you can receive any grades for your PC, and it would be much appreciated if you would stop posting in any threads until the below issues have been addressed. If you have any questions or concerns about anything I mention below, please don't hesitate to message me and we can work it out.

• Height/Weight: 90lbs at 5'7" is extremely thin. If this is what you're going for, that's fine, you just didn't mention thinness in your description so I wanted to point it out.
• Skills: Characters start out with 50 points, not including their racial bonus. It seems you've only accounted for 40 of them.
• Housing: You haven't filled out your housing! Please remove the references list and mention where you're staying. You can stay at any one of those places (provided you can afford it) or you can take the standard 20x20 cottage. This is necessary for us STs, particularly at the end of the season when it comes time to calculate living expenses.

After you've addressed these issues in your CS, please PM me, and I'll remove this intervention. Thank you in advance for your cooperation!
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