K goes to the bronze woods to be alone and relax... But as always... Your never alone in these woods. Oh boy.
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Stretching northward along the coastline of the Suvan Sea, the Cobalt Mountains are the home of the Bronze Wood, numerous ruins, and creatures both strange and fantastical.
Lores • | Lore Earned • | Akilia the Kelvic Wolf • | Being An Ass • | Hots For Akilia • | The Kelvic Bond (Basic)
Nice work, there was an extra post in the thread that wasn't necessary. Watch out for them when you post, as I've had it happen to me a few times as well.
Lores • | Lore Earned • | Kisetukai the Perverted Squire • | Only Jerks Hit Girls • | Bondmate: Kisetukai
Note: Great job writing, but repeating dialogue rather unnecessary. Try and cut down on that, I can see you give a lot of effort into improving all ready. Good writing so far, keep it up!
Lores • | Lore Earned • | Kise and Akilia Are A Couple
Note: Given it was a cameo post I didn't see anything Kouri could use for lore, so if you have an idea pm me and we can figure something out. Loved the end with the flowers, a creative way to end the thread.
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Reading this thread had me even more curious on how Kelvic Bonds work, at first I thought it a bit rushed until I came close to the end. Reading this thread I definitely found it a creative fun read as both Kise and Akilia let down their walls. Good work you two, and Kouri your post was well written and definitely made the end more intriguing. Well done the three of you.
Question marks to be made? Exclamations to declare? Feel free to send me a pm and we can tend to any concerns you have.
