Completed [The Archery Ranges]Back to the basics(Kovac)

It's lunch time and Lavira decides to eat at the ranges. She never expected someone might let her shoot.

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The westernmost tip of Kalea, Wind Reach is home to an amazing group of people and their giant eagle mounts. [Lore]

[The Archery Ranges]Back to the basics(Kovac)

Postby Lavira on July 3rd, 2013, 5:09 pm

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Vira couldn't have said if it was luck or not; she just knew that she approached things in life with a certain level of precision and planning as opposed to spontaneity. Perhaps it had something more to do with her approach to the target with the bow than anything else. Or, it really was just pure luck. Nobody honestly anticipated the young woman to participate in any kind of bowmanship; even Vira acknowledged her disability and likeliness to be slim at best.

And yet, the proof was in the target across the range. The explanation came second. The young woman brought the bow back up, just touching the string with her draw hand as she examined the bow-arm for the persistant problem she was showing. Even dry-shot without draw as it was now, Vira could see what he spoke of as she replied, her elbow tilting out with her words. "Probably because I tended to request more Bendi in the aeries. I was offered an apprenticeship with Avora Meera before the accident with the fledgling, but I wasn't able to get back to her in time." Meera was one of the ranking members of those specializing in falconry around Wind Reach. She looked more for attention to detail and avian prowess when watching Yasi. Only a handful had stood out to her during Vira's Yasi years, and the now Chiet had been one of them.

"I like shooting, Kovac. Don't get me wrong, but it was the birds that drew my attention more than anything. I figured if I couldn't impress one of the Eagles enough, I would definitely join Meera as a falconer. She said she saw something in me that was missing in the others she had observed. I never did figure out what; I'm not really that imaginative all the time, though I'm trying to be more so now that there are hatchlings coming." Vira lowered the bow again and took up another arrow. Her thumb traced the smooth shaft and the index finger of the hand holding the bow straightened a feather in the fletching.

This was then nocked smoothly, Vira looking to the target across the range once more. "I've just had different priorities than some, here." Checking the nock, she raised and drew. This time took a little more effort than before as muscles unused to the strain of the bow began to be affected. It was seen in the tightness of her shoulders as string was drawn to cheek, the firm set of her jaw as she held it a breath longer, sighting down the arrow to the target in that off-kilter way.

"The bird is better than the bow, to me." Her lips barely moving before she loosed it once again. The arrow shot past the shaft of the bow, wobbling as it went. The concentration on her face as it all happened said it all even as the arrowehead thwocked into the targets white inner ring, this time a few ticks to the left. The red-head pursed her lips in disapproval this time, releasing her breath and lowering the bow in that measured way. "Movement on the left; I flinched." An arrow in the left-target having struck a second or so before hers had, causing the brief distraction that made her waver.

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[The Archery Ranges]Back to the basics(Kovac)

Postby Kovac on July 5th, 2013, 4:40 pm

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Lavira finally shed some light on what had happened to her. She was certainly a determined, motivated woman. Even as she had picked up his bow and set to learning how to shoot better, Kovac could see she had talents. Yet the girl had somehow found herself as a common Chiet. It seemed Lavira was in line to become an Avora under the tutelage of Meera. Tending to the raptors was a well respected vocation in Wind Reach, and to have that as a passion could have put Lavira on the track to prosperity. It appeared that fate twisted on the girl, and the very thing she loved turned and left her marred, unfit to be an Avora.

The fact that she still pursued the birds spoke a lot about Lavira, and Kovac admitted an admiration for her determination. Had he noticed her as a Yasi, and coaxed her to practice more archery, could she have avoided the incident, and now have the full use of both eyes? Probably not. Her heart was not with the bow, but the bird, as she confessed.

Nevertheless, the Avora noted the ease with which the girl handled his bow, idly chatting as she readied another arrow as if comfortably familiar with the weapon. Lavira kept her stance pretty much in line, remembering what he had advised, though there was a subtle quiver across the taut muscles bunched up along her shoulders. The arrow was released, a little off from the first couple. He saw the distraction from the next lane over.

Kovac stepped closer again, nodding his head. "Another thing to learn, Vira, is focus and concentration. Distractions will come." He stretched his hands over her shoulders, firmly rubbing the tight muscles with the pads of his fingers. "That is probably enough for now. You don't want to strain anything. But I would be happy to shoot with you anytime Vira. You have talent, I hate to see it go unused, even if its just for some recreation."
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[The Archery Ranges]Back to the basics(Kovac)

Postby Lavira on July 5th, 2013, 5:53 pm

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She could feel the tightness in her shoulders rising, specific muscles overextended somewhat from the differing use that came with bowmanship. Lifting and pulling and pushing and sweeping required different muscle-usage to get the tasks done. This was a whole different thing. Vira put on a good face, but her shoulders and back were hurting from the exertion.

His mention of distractions made her cheeks color in conjunction with the massage of his hands over her shoulders. Clearing her throat, she stepped away quickly and offered his bow back to him, averting her gaze in a vain attempt to hide the wave of shyness that had risen in her throat. "Thank you, Kovac; I wish it could be used for more than recreation, though. I've yet to meet an eagle that wanted a rider who would forever be favoring one side. I have the strength and ability to work with them, but..." she trailed off a little, returning her gaze to his. "But maybe one day will hatch that will see the truth in me that the others do not. It's not about the glory, afterall, being an Endal. It's about the honor and service that can be brought to Wind Reach. The eagle commands respect...and while that would be a powerful incentive for some, you can't simply get respect for being an Endal. It must be earned. That's all I want to show, that you needn't be perfect in body to fly and serve the people. You only need the heart and mind. The rest of it will come."

It was shortly after this that Vira realized her lunch was surely past over. She flinched and muttered a curse under her breath. "Thank you again for the advice, Kovac, I will take it to heart and try to find time to shoot more. You've been very helpful; I'm glad you took the time to help me." Without waiting further, she turned and headed off, giving a shrill whistle as she went, extending her sontav-adorned arm for Tulaj to land upon when he appeared. "Hope to see you around, Kovac! See you later." She waved over her shoulder and hurried at a quick trot back to the aeries from which she'd come.

OOCLet's end it here, if that's okay :)

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[The Archery Ranges]Back to the basics(Kovac)

Postby Auric on July 29th, 2013, 8:02 pm

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YAY FOR GRADES!
Lavira
Skills:
Weapon: Short Bow - 5
Rhetoric: 2
Observation: 2
Falconry: 1
Lore:
Kovac: Archery instructor
Archery: Basic Stance (Short Bow)
Archery: Dealing with a handicap

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Skills:
Teaching: 5
Observation: 4
Rhetoric: 2
Weapon: Short Bow - 1
Lore:
Lavira (Basic)
Lavira's Archery Stance
Tulaj: The Bratty Raptor

Additional Notes: Really great thread! I have to say -- I wasn't excited to grade a training thread, but you guys managed to make it a really interesting read! I liked the interaction between the two PCs and hope to see more of that in later threads. A couple notes on grading: Lavira, I gave you the point in falconry for the little interaction you had with Tulaj -- I thought it was interesting and a funny bit to their relationship, and demonstrated the care Lavira feels for her eagle. I thought it deserved at least a point. Kovac, I originally wasn't going to reward you any point in Short Bow, but you showed him correcting her stance, and a couple of mental notes he made after her first shot, I thought that deserved a point in Short Bow as well.

Again, if you guys have any problems or questions with my grade, or any request for lores I may have skipped over, please don't hesitate to message me.

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